FF:manneet *HEARTBEATS-2* LAST part page 53 - Page 36

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Posted: 14 years ago
that was so good
finally maan ne sab sach bata diya i hope geet give a good lesson to sameera now
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
really awesome update....great really loved it.. passion all time high....why did u made geet so stupid...😆
really loving it...keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
i am tellin u this dev needs a kambal beatin😡 if i ever get my hand on him ,nobody will be able 2 save him😈 this sameera needs 2 b taught a lesson for lyin she is going to hell for sure i want geet 2 b strong and trust maan and beat the crap out of sameera at every step of her evil plan geet is young and thus perhaps doent uderstand the depth of her feelins for her hubby but she needs knw that foundation of any relationship is trust and maan shouldnt hide anything frm her why maan couldnt tell geet that sameera was her ex gf well geet is frm UK and even she had a bf b4 she met maan so she will undestand that once maan was with her he never looked at anhybody else
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Posted: 14 years ago
I couldn't stop laughing my head off while reading your fan fiction... I love Geet's confusion towards Maan... hope everything comes out clears for Geet.

Please continue soon...
PS: Please do pm me whenever you update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
HI Dear🤗

update was awesome,fantastic 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 n soooooooooooooooooooo romantic 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
Loved it ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
atlast the misunderstanding is clear now😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
now Geet Sameera ko nahi chodne wali😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
eagerly w8ng for next part
plsssssss cont soon

Luv u
Naina🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dreaminvincible

i am tellin u this dev needs a kambal beatin😡 if i ever get my hand on him ,nobody will be able 2 save him😈 this sameera needs 2 b taught a lesson for lyin she is going to hell for sure i want geet 2 b strong and trust maan and beat the crap out of sameera at every step of her evil plan geet is young and thus perhaps doent uderstand the depth of her feelins for her hubby but she needs knw that foundation of any relationship is trust and maan shouldnt hide anything frm her why maan couldnt tell geet that sameera was her ex gf well geet is frm UK and even she had a bf b4 she met maan so she will undestand that once maan was with her he never looked at anhybody else


its typical geet… she is angry bcs she kinda suggested she is his wife….. so obiously she will think they having affire…. so u know… all those teenage mind..
xxx + she dosnt trust maan… a Rich.. handsome business man like him … why would he fall in love with her
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Posted: 14 years ago
Any chance of an update? 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha_MSK

Any chance of an update? 😃


i am trying my best lol.. typing fast hehe
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Posted: 14 years ago

LAST PART




Next day...
Geet walks in with piles of papers...one after another throughs it on maans lap!
Geet: ap bolo!
Maan: well I have spoken to all of them... Twomoro... Apology letter! And I found that video of your!
Geet: have you edit me out!
Maan: yes...
Geet sits on maans lap.. With her hot cholate...
Geet: I will kill that bitch!
Maan receives a tex... It's Sammera... Geet snatches it....
Maan: just don't tex anything rude... She probably will show it to the media!
Geet: well let's see!!!... Where is the video?
Maan gives her the laptop... She downloads it in her phone and sends it to her saying... GOOD LUCK....

Geet smiles evilly.... While maan lost in his laptop again....

Geet: god I hate her... I wish I could murder her...
Maan: hmm... Yes! Lost in his work!
Geet: are you listening to me?
Maan: yes!
Geet shuts his laptop....
Maan annoyed....
Maan: geet! I didn't save those work!
Geet: good na! You can do it again!
Maan: geet!
Geet: maan!
Maan: ka he?
Geet: you still haven't taken me to our honeymoon!
Maan: where do you want to go?
Geet: somewhere quit! Nice... Beach! Jungle!
Maan: hmm....
Geet: but before that I want to met that idiot Sammera.... To slap her tight!
Maan: umm... That would be in a news.... And headline.... Mrs geet maan sing Khurana slapping Sammera!
Geet: good na! She deserves it....
Maan laughs...: Do you want to face the media as Mrs maan sing Khurana?
Geet: umm... No!
Maan: why?
Geet: just don't want to! I don't like media flowing me! Idk... It will be like you! I know everything about you... Before you even decide anything!
Maan: that's good for me! I will know what to do!
Geet: umm! No! I like my privacy!
Maan: from me?
Geet: umm... She smiles naughtily... Nibbling on his lips...
Maan: hmm..... I like this breakfast....
Geet: it will be rare!
Maan: na... I want this everyday....
Geet puts her hand round his neck... Kissing him passionately.....

Bothe arrives at the office... Press everywhere....

Sammera wanted to talk to maan... Alone.... But geet walks in the conference room flowed by maan... And adi...Locking the door behind....
Sammera: I wanted to talk to you alone....
Before she could even take a breath... Geet slapped her tight!
Sam: you beach!
She slaps her again...
Maan and Adi stood behind her watching in amuse!
Maan: I think that's enough.... She hugs her from the back to stope her....
Maan: Adi... Start.....

Sam just looked at geet in shock in maans arm.... Conferring..... Maan made her promise not to shout....

Geet: why have you made me promise not to shout? I want to kill that beach!
Maan: geet... Please... Let her swere!.. You are Mrs maan sing Khurana...

Sam: what?
Geet: that's right... Now do you seriously want me to kick your ass... BCs I am in real angry mood at the moment!
Sam: you...
Geet: oh yea!!!! You li....
Maan: geet!
Geet: ugh... I can't believe you dated her...
Maan looked other way... Felling extremely low!
Sam: don't you want to here what els have we done?
Geet slaps her again...
Geet: no! Because he only allowed to sleep with me.... And I know he didn't.... Because if he did he wouldn't be alive right now... And I wouldn't be here to slap you.... Maybe you would have been in a hunted graveyard with my husband!
Maan coughed... Seeing how possessive she is... First time ever....
Sam couldn't say another word....
Geet: anything els you wanted to say... Other then my husband with you in a bed?
Sam could have killed her alive....
Sam: how dare you talk to me like this?
Geet: oh maan... By the way... She is not married!
Maan: what?
Geet: aha... She lied to you!
Maan: why?
Geet: to blackmail!... Last time I let you go easily... But this time bad luck!
Sam: what do you mean?
Geet: media outside... Waiting for you!
Sam: what?
Geet: maan... Lets go....

As they walked out.... Media started to ask question...

Media: Mr maan sing Khurana... Are you taking any serious action against Sammera?

Media: we hard...
Geet looks at them all...

Geet: no... We have no plan to take any serious action against her... As I think that video have done enough damage to her carrier and life!

Media: may we ask who are you...

Geet looked at maan... Lovingly.... "Mrs Geet Maan Sing Khurana"

Maan was shocked... Just this morning she decided not to tell anyone... And now....

Media: just shocked.....!!!!!!

Maan: yes... This is my geet.... Looking in to her deep eyes.... Seref maan ki geet.....

Geet: ha... Seref maan ki geet....

Maan holds her close and kisses her lips in front of the whole world.... Showing the love....

Geet: now ... You are just my husband... Only my....
Maan: and those three words?
Geet takes his hand and places over her chest....

"can you here those heartbeats? It only beats for you...." she smiled...

Maan picks her up... Kissing her lips.... "my heart only belongs to you..."

"this is our heartbeats..."


Ok... Sorry... I am ending this... At last geet realized her love... Sorry for quick end... And unexpected.... Just couldn't think of any further story line.... You.... Geet just realized her heartbeats.... Only belongs to maan... And maan to her.... :D...

I may start another one... Instead of this....
Xxx



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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
😭
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 how could u end this ff..........i am really hurt.......dont know i feel really bad yaar....anyways loved the last part.

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