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Posted: 15 years ago
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Picture Perfect !! It was a lovely Os Mehak!! Pls continue it , i Hate sad ending .. Plzzzzzzzzzzzz and do Pm Me..

Natasha <3
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Posted: 15 years ago
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This was PERFECT I really hope they show this in the actual show!! :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thank u so much guys..🤗

ok this is the continuation to my post OS on pg 5..

PART 2..

Nupur didn't even looked at mayank the whole day in college..she attended all her lectures and spent rest of the time in library.she had now stopped keeping any expectations and anyone..not even maynak...she had decided now to just do what she was instructed..she was losing the energy to question.

Mayank was happy that finally nupur had understood his point, he was happy to see nupur concentrating so much on her work, even she had been so actively answering in the class..

Again at home nupur was very quiet and just studying..

Although mayank was very happy with nupur in the clg but he couldn't understand at home..

He again tried to talk but nupur had just turned into a robot, following instructions without using her mind...

Mayank thought that she is angry on something very serious..he decided to talk..whether nupur wanted or not..

Nupur was about to sleep but then she decided to take a bath first...she changed into her night suit of silk...her shirt with strap slevees..she stood in front of the mirror and started brushing her hair...when mayank hugged her from back..her pulse increased.......

He held her her waist strongly by his hand....his grip was very strong...nupur closed her eyes...he placed his chin in her shoulder and gently carressed his finger down her arm...nupur closed her eyes even more firmly....mayank gently kissed her shoulder..

M..i love u nupur..

NUPUR IMMEDIATELY OPENED HER EYES....EVERYTHING CAME IN FRONT OF HER...

how mayank was standing still when she fell down in the clg...how he turned his face away..that strange look in his eyes...his words of hiding their marriage....his cold look at her tears...IS THIS HOW HE LOVES?

M..naraz ho mujh se?..

His voice brought her back to the present...where she was so close to may that she could listen his heart beat..but unfortunately they were CLOSE JUST PHYSICALLY!

N..nahi..main kaun hoti hon tum se naraz hone wali?...

Mayank smiled and kissed her neck...

M..ufff itna ghusa?..

This time he again brushed his fingers down to her hand and held it tightly...

N..mujhe main ghusa karne k himmat nahi bachi hai...

Mayank now held her from both his arms....
He said in a naughty mischievous voice

M.. tu meri nupur ne ghusa karna chor diya hai?..

nupur spoke in an almost dead voice..

N..haan...

THIS TIME MAYANK OPENED HIS EYES...

He looked at nupur through the mirror..she was standing rock still..with a strange lonliness in her eyes...SHE WAS REALLY HURT AT SOMETHING...

Mayank turned her tears him..and cupped his face in hands..

M..kia baat hai nupur..batao tu sahi..

nupur closed her eyes and let her tears flow down..

N...kia bataon?...mujhe khud nahi pata..

M..nupur aise kaise chale ga..ik bar batao tu sahi kia ho gaya tumhe?..

Nupur sollowed the lump in her throat...and looked in his eyes..

N..mayank mujhe nai pata tum mujhe se kia chate ho..mujhe bus itna pata hai k teen salo main mujhe sab se ziyada takleef is baat se hoti thi main appni phechan chupati thi...aur ab bhi...

Mayank was amazed..

M..nupur wo sab tumhari achai k liye hai...main be chupane k liye tu nahi keh raha..bus clg main..

N..mujhe nahi pata hai maynk...

This time her voice was shaking due to her tears...

N..mujhe nahi kuch samjhna...mian ne kaha tha na k jo kaho gey kar lon gi...tu kar rahi hon na!!..ku baar baar mujh se pochtey ho..ku sawwal karte ho jab sab tumahri marzi se ho raha hai?...aur kia chate ho mujh se..

She was peaking in such a helpless voice...MAYANK WANTED TO WIPE HER TEAS BUT SHE MOVED AWAY...

M...nupur dekho tum over react..

N..OVER REACT??...tum...

she wanted to answer but it seemed as if all the words freezed..She wiped of all he tears..

N..i am sorry mayank..aj meri wajha se tumhara sara romantic mood kharab ho gaya...main koshish karon gi k ainda na ho aisa..ab main so jaon ya tum..

M,...NUPUR PLEASE!!...

mayank couldn't believe that nupur was treating him like this..he left the room and and nupur fell on her bed..

Mayank sitting in the lounge...thinking over the problem...

He just wanted to hide the relation bcz he didn't wanted people to question him and nupur, he dint wanted anything to go against their relation or anyone to ask them that why was she left behind in studies...BUT WHY WAS HE THINKING LIKE THAT?..was he ashamed that his wife was away for three yeas...NO!!...he stood up..no he was not ashamed...he trusted nupur..loved her..NO!...he can never be ashamed of her...but just bcz of an unknown fear he was doing all this...he rememberd nupur how she was proud of her name being joined with him and he himself snatched her identity..

Next morning, both of them got ready...

N..main ja rahi hon mayank..

M..ik miniute nupur...

She tuned and mayank came and stood behind her and made her wear the MUNGLSUTRA..

Nupur touced it and looked behind at mayank...he was smiling and then he put the sindor on nupur's forhead...

M..tum ye sab bhol rahi thi..

Nupur's eyes had a lot of questions..

N..mayank ye..

M..dekho nupur, mujhe nahi pata tha k tumhe ye sab itna hurt kare ga...mian sach main hamara rishta sirf tumhari acahi k liye chopana chata tha..lekin mujhe raat ko ehass hua k tumhain logon se nahi sirf muhj se dar lagta hai k main tumhain chor don ga..is liye tum mujhe se koi behs, koi baat naih karna chati...hai na?

N..mayank main..

M..nupur tumare sath jo bhi hua hia mian us dard ka shiyed andaaza bhi nahi laga sakta, is liye main rishat chupane ko kaha...i was being so insensitive...lekin ab mujh pta chal gay hai k khushi kismain ha...

Nupur was staring at her smiling..

M..tu chaley Mrs Sharma...

Nu[ur smiled and hugged ...

N..i promise mayank.. main tumhain clg main bilkul tang nahi karon gi...bus dobara mujhe aisey mat dekhna jaisa main koi ajnabi hon.,..main mar jao gi mayank...

Mayank held her tightly...

M....i am sorry nupur..mujhe such main ehsas nahi tha..i am sorry....

They broke from the hug, and both of them went to the college AS A MARRIED COUPLE!...

Edited by -Mehak - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
Ok, Mehak...............i loved this OS............... u captured things so well........

Mayank isnt wrong in what he is doing........... but ofcos he failed to realise that Nupur may not be so strong............

if it turns this way i dnt mind..............
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
res😳
aur mujhe pm chaiye

edit:

awesome mehak👏👏👏

loved how u put forth mayank & nupur's pov

really touching


Edited by Shivani1arti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
Its Perfect Mehak😳😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
it was so touching part
loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
aww ... that was awesome!! i really felt nice reading it .. the pain and the realization was superb ... really want something like that to happen ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
that was a lovely ending dear................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
Hey mehak,
I really want to see sumthing so meaningful and sensible.
Mayank may not b wrong but then he needs to understand her feelings and emotions too. U captured it so well.
I hope CVs read ur OS and use ur brain bcoz i m sure that they dont have one.
Keep writing more n more n more n .......
Prachi

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