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Tasnim

@C_O_O_L

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

awww......thts sooooooooo cute!!

hope 1 day this comes true.....😍

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Jessie

@jes_jade

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

OMG!!!!!That's so awesome & sweet!!👏
Yaar tere muh mein bahut saari chocolates......
Kash ye sab sach ho jaaye....😍😍😍

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

thank u so much guys...🤗..

OK this is a MAYUR OS on the currnet scenario

MAYANK:..whats my fault..?
NUPUR.. i dont believe u are still wondering about it!..

Nupur came out of the class with black color on her face and her eyes had tears..although she didn't mind all that bcz rohan and ash were just having fun and they didn't mean any offense but even then she didn't liked being made a laughing stock in front of the whole class...nupur was moving through the corridor, when she saw mayank...suddenly a feeling a of satisfaction filled her heart..

N..maya...

M...ummm...tum bahir kai kar rahi ho?..where is ur class?

Nupur was shocked...mayank didn't even let her pronounce his name and he cut her between and started behaving like a professor, she looked around but no one was there...she looked with longing eyes at mayank, but she found the same stubborness..
Nupur left...

The whole day mayank didn't see nupur again in the college...At off time he looked here and there but then rohan told him that nupur had left..

Mayank entered his home and opened the door with his key and entered when he saw nupur sitting on the sofa and applying some antiseptic to her feet...

M..nupur!..ye kia hua?..

Nupur raised her head and again concentrated on her antiseptic

N..kuch nahi..wo subha gir gayi thi na..tu chot lag gayi hai...

M..lekin subha tu nahi thi..

Nupur looked up towards him and her eyes had tears..

N..subha bhi thi mayank...lekin tum ne dekha hi nahi...

Mayank got embarrased...

M..nupur..wo...clg tha na...

He put forward his hand..

M..lao main kar deta hon..

N..nahi main ne kar liya hai...

Nupur stood up..

N..tum khana khao gey?..

M..nahi nupur, tumhe chot lagi hai tum..

N..plz mayank...khana khao gey ya nahi?

Nupur wasn't looking at mayank and mayank couldn't understand that why was she behaving like this...

M..nahi...

N..tu jab khana hoga tu mujhe bula lena..main laga don gi...

Nupur went inside the room and ...mayank again couldn't understand anything..

he entered the room and nupur was studying with all her books spread beside her...

He came inside quietly , changed his clothes, he was expecting nupur to say something but she was silently reading her books...mayank came outside..

He himself ate his lunch and then started some work of his clg....almost in the evening, mayank again entered the room with a cup of tea...

M..nupur ye tumhare liye chai...

Nupur looked upwards at him..She took the cup and her voice was plain and cold..

N..thank you..

Mayank sat beside her..

M..wo main ne khana kha liya hai..tum parh rahi thi is liye main ne tumhe disturb nahi kiya..

Nupur again looked at him, he was smiling but nupur just didnt wanted to talk to him, so she again started reading...

Mayank wasn't able to figure nupur...if she was angry then why wasn't she fighting...she was answering to his each and every question but she wasn't behaving normally..

M...kiya parh rahi ho?..

N..economics....world recession...

M..oh..thora mushkil topic hai..main help kar don..

N...nahi..main khud parh rahi hon....nahi samjh aye ga tu main poch lon gi..

Such cold replies were shocking mayank...

He stood up..

M..ok..thek hai,tum parho..main bahir chalta hon...

Mayank went outside and nupur again had tiny tears in her eyes.. this time she didn't cried...

At almost dinner time nupur came out of the room and mayank was watching tv..he became very happy to see her..

M.. topic cover ho gaya...

N..haan...dinner main kia khao gey..

M..kuch bhi...

N..mujhe dish batao main bana deti hon...

Maynak stood up...

M..ummm...rajma chawal..

N..ok..

she was about to turn when mayank said..

M..tumhe tu bilkul psnd nahi hai..tu aj kaise maan gayi..

N..tum hi ne tu kaha k clg main student aur ghr main tumhari biwi hon, tu wohi sab kar rahi hon..ta ke tumhe mujhe se koi shikayat na ho...

She went in the kitchen and mayank was standing dumfounded...he wasn't able to understand what was she trying to say..

M..dekho nupur mera wo mtlb nahi tha..mian bus..

N..mayank plz...mujh main koi safai sune ki himmat nahi hai...bus ab jo bhi mujhe se karwana hoga mujhe bata dena..main kar don gi...

Mayank again tried to talk to her but again and again he got cold replies...the dinner was in silence...Nupur was about to sleep when she asked mayank who was standing by the cupboard..

N..mayank main so jaon..koi kaam tu nahi hia?..

Mayank was shocked..

M..nupur ye kia bol rahi ho...tum..

N..mayank kaam hai ya nahi...

Mayank was totally lost...this type of behaviour wasn't familair to him..

M..nahi...

Nupur after listening this went to sleep and mayank wasn't able to understand that what happened?..was she angry?..was he sad?..what??..

Next morning both of them were getting ready...

N..main chalti hon,taxi late milti hai..

M..nupur .. wo main soch raha tha k tum gari pe chali jao...mai taxi main..

Nupur turned towards him..

N..nahi...clg ka profesor taxi main jaye acha nahi lgata...

Nupur headed towards the door..

M..will u plz tell me what is my fault?

Nupur turned and this time she had tears flowing..

N..I dont believe u are still wondering..

After saying this she left and mayank was standing there questioning hi,...WHAT HAD HE DONE?..

that is the problem, sometimes people with the highest intellegence fail to understand the simplest emotions...the emotion that somebody is NOT THAT STRONG AS SHE APPEARS TO BE...

(PART 2 on PG 8)

Edited by -Mehak - 14 years ago

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Shivangi Singh

@shivangi278

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

AWESOME os mehak👏....loved it,

you have wonderfully described nupur's pain,

i am feeling so bad for her😭

these lines are so true for mayank -

that is the problem, sometimes poeple with the highest intellegence fail to understand the simplest emotions...the emotion that somebody is NOT THAT STRONG AS SHE APPEARS TO BE..

Edited by shivangi278 - 14 years ago

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Beet

@Beet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Gosh, Mehak it is wonderful!

So well written! The amount that Nupur is hurt, you caotured it so well with your words! And how Mayank is still confused as to what he has done.

Very well written Mehak! Loved it <3<3

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Jaee Dev Rathore

@JaeeDevRathore

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

okay, that was brilliant ... i just wish this happens in the show ... totally not getting what are they upto ... it was wonderful, could easily understand what you tried to convey through it .... the pain was written all over it ... you are just amazing ....

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#37

God... Mehak.. that was so damn beautifully written.. do write a sequel for this.. asap

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Jessie

@jes_jade

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Wonderful Mehak!!....Beautifully written!!👏👏
The pain was clearly expressed in this one shot.....
Want this to happen in the show..

sometimes poeple with the highest intellegence fail to understand the simplest emotions...the emotion that somebody is NOT THAT STRONG AS SHE APPEARS TO BE...
Well said...👏👍🏼

You truly are an amazing writer...

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496867

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#39

👏 u r just too good mehak

this was awesomely written⭐️

u rock🤗

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#40

i cant tolerate mayu's behaviour nowadays..so am not commenting on any of the posts.... coming to the os...nupur's pain is unbearable yaar....poor girl.........hope MR.Marank sharma..the so called professor will understand her someday..............awesome os dear...............u brought tears to my eyes thru nupur's pain.............................

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