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Blaaaaaaah

@-Bleeeh-

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Hi,

This was really amazing....Really really amazing!

I loved it!

AR moment were soooo cute <3

And I've started liking Sid a bit now ;)

And thanks to Rahul....AR can now enjoy :D

Thanks for the PM!

Update today please?

Love ya

Shatakshi :)

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roshni mittal

@-wild-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

wowwwwwwwwwwww that so awsome dear such a lovely part .

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zoya-ammy

@zoya-ammy

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

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congratulations dear &update
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huhahaha ab morning me kya hoga
"wake up sid'

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zoya-ammy

@zoya-ammy

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

who is going to caught themrrrrrred handead

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here-i-am

@here-i-am

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

congrats for new thread

loved the update

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Oishi

@Oishi23

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

congoo for the new thread

very nice update

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Blaaaaaaah

@-Bleeeh-

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Do we get an update today?

Please please please say yeesss !! :)

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Anokhee

@Anokhee

Navigator

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Hey Rachna....

I'm finally here to comment...

Sorry, had been busy all day long and was too sleepy yesterday...

Okay, here goes....

In the beginning, the trek et all seemed a little dragged or rather, it would have been more fun if there was more detail. I mean, it was somewhere in between and Sid was obviously VERY irritating...

Thank God he knows now. At least the pretending is over and the khullam khulla romance should be on for the rest of the trip. I cant wait for Armaan to get back to Sid

And Rahul is an ADORABLE friend. I loved his gesture for Armaan.

And coming to the last part of the romance, needless to say, I loved it! But I was just little confused on the way they were sitting on the floor. You could have been a little more clearer there. I actually read it thrice because I didnt understand it that well...

You see, I love the little details when I'm reading romance☺️

And also, the fact that Armaan made her walk in her sleep and not carry her. That was so realistic. Everyone makes him carry her all the time...

Poor guys spinal cord!😆

And I cant wait to see everyone's reaction to see them together cuddled up in bed in the morning. I assume Anjali might have an issue about it. But lets see...

Excited for the update in a few hours!

Anokhee!😊

Edited by Anokhee - 14 years ago

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z.e.p.h.y.r

@z.e.p.h.y.r

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Hello ppl.. Hope everyone's had a good day.. 😊

mine wasnt that great.. I just got back home and am dead tired.. 🤢

I havent even started writing.. Plus have other things to do. So i will update only if i write a decent enough part that i feel like putting up.. thanks to all those who were so so sweet to tell me that they liked my last update and also to all who were honest enough to point out the flaws.. i was myself not happy with the part, as i already mentioned yesterday. So please give me a little time, so i can write more and give you guys a better update.

For people who dont want to read the Ramayan that i have written above, "Update very late in the night today.. or tomorrow.. not sure" :) lol!