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coolgirl319

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1061

hey!

First of all congrats on completing 150 pages...

Secondly...that was such a well....great part!

it was just brilliantly written...the conflict was so aptly described....i could just picture it....

waiting for armaan to get back...want to see the desperation between the two...lets see which level they move upto now!😉

continue soon...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1062

congo 4 completing 150 pages dear🥳.....

update ke aaj koi chances hain?????

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z.e.p.h.y.r

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1063

Link to TWOS #3 : https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1517774&PID=35250358�

See ya there!!😃

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ssh57

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1064

You may be wondering when commented on all the parts in the first thread why I'm not doing so now. The rason is I can't find words for it. The storyline moving so smoothly and at the right pace too. It hasn't become stagnant anywhere. Moreover this ff is notjust about Ar. You've protrayed the feelings of each pair so beautifully according to each character. Their Mahabaleshwar trip was too good. I cried on Raunuk's loss. The whole incident was so touchingly narrated. Everyhing was very realistic except Riddhima coming to his house in the middle of the night on her own when her parents were away at Shimla.I think she would have rather phoned him and called him back. Another thing was her coming home and cooking. For a novice it would take a lot of time to collect the ingredients and cook. How did she manage to escape from Sanjeevani for so long? Of course this is just fiction, but since it's so realistic I thought these incidents were a little amiss. But what is most astonishing is how you manage to write such long parts, with such a meaningful storyline in a day or two. I've quite a few wonderful stories on this forum but none posted so often. And to top it you've even replied to each and everyone who hass commented on each part. That's what I call committment. Kudos to you for that.

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z.e.p.h.y.r

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1065

Originally posted by: ssh57
You may be wondering when commented on all the parts in the first thread why I'm not doing so now. The rason is I can't find words for it. The storyline moving so smoothly and at the right pace too. It hasn't become stagnant anywhere. Moreover this ff is notjust about Ar. You've protrayed the feelings of each pair so beautifully according to each character. Their Mahabaleshwar trip was too good. I cried on Raunuk's loss. The whole incident was so touchingly narrated. Everyhing was very realistic except Riddhima coming to his house in the middle of the night on her own when her parents were away at Shimla.I think she would have rather phoned him and called him back. Another thing was her coming home and cooking. For a novice it would take a lot of time to collect the ingredients and cook. How did she manage to escape from Sanjeevani for so long? Of course this is just fiction, but since it's so realistic I thought these incidents were a little amiss. But what is most astonishing is how you manage to write such long parts, with such a meaningful storyline in a day or two. I've quite a few wonderful stories on this forum but none posted so often. And to top it you've even replied to each and everyone who hass commented on each part. That's what I call committment. Kudos to you for that.

that's ok. i wouldnt expect you to comment on each and every part.. thanks for your sweet words though..

and yeah of course it is fiction.. but just to defend Riddhima's cooking, poor girl had been making efforts to learn from her mom.. mentioned in passing in the previous parts.. and the reason she chose her home instead of his was so she has all the ingredients.. it feels silly to answer to this but anyway.. lol!! 😆 and about her going to his place and not calling him.. well she's impulsive, done it before and was embarrassed to say that she wanted to be with him! lol!!😆

well i used to reply to everyone.. but now i really dont get time.. so i've stopped that system.. commitment falling short due to lack of time.. lol!! 😛😳

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ssh57

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1066

Originally posted by: zephyrr

that's ok. i wouldnt expect you to comment on each and every part.. thanks for your sweet words though..

and yeah of course it is fiction.. but just to defend Riddhima's cooking, poor girl had been making efforts to learn from her mom.. mentioned in passing in the previous parts.. and the reason she chose her home instead of his was so she has all the ingredients.. it feels silly to answer to this but anyway.. lol!! 😆 and about her going to his place and not calling him.. well she's impulsive, done it before and was embarrassed to say that she wanted to be with him! lol!!😆

well i used to reply to everyone.. but now i really dont get time.. so i've stopped that system.. commitment falling short due to lack of time.. lol!! 😛😳

Thanks a lot for taking time to clear my doubts. Appreciate it.