Kismat- A Fan-fic--UPD p. 35 May 19th - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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fabulous part
wot has this chipko done now and if it is a bad thing i am coming to kill him
cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: hot_girl_2525

fabulous part
wot has this chipko done now and if it is a bad thing i am coming to kill him
cont soon

just wait n watch...you will find out...😉

I will probably continue tonight or tomorrow

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Posted: 19 years ago
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tht was amazing!!!..plzzz continue!!!..i need to noe who this prithiv is and wht he has done to kripa!!...plzz cont!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was amazing!!/.....plz plz pzl cont.....i also wanna know whats the whole story with prithvi!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwww so gooooood
plz cont sooon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Angad spends the rest of his day seeing other patients, though his mind is elsewhere. Kripa. Her eyes. There was so much suppressed pain in them. For an unexplainable reason, he felt his heart getting heavy at the thought.
"why" he asked himself. "why do I feel so bad? She's just another patient that I'm treating. I'm used to this kind of thing. Then why do I feel like I should be there with her right now, comforting her"
He brushed the thought away, and tried to concentrate on his work. The clock finally struck 7 and Angad happily sighed. It was time to go meet Kripa. But why was he so excited?
"It's the first case that I get to work on by myself" he said to himself. "It's very important that I don't mess up."
With that, he started walking towards the psyche ward. In Rm. 306, Kripa had changed out of her hospital gown and was wearing this a simple black top and a pair of jeans.


here's a pic of the top she's wearing:

of course, it's not see-thru okay?



Even in this casual attire, she looked very pretty. The only thing that was getting in the way of her being absolutely gorgeous was the dullness in the face and lack-luster eyes. She was just about to open the door to step out when Angad knocked.
"Oh, wow, HEY" he said, a bit surprised. "you look..nice" To that she gave a small smile. It had been months since someone had complimented her.
"ready?" he said, offering his hand. Kripa quickly snapped out of her thoughts and looked at Angad's outstretched hand. She didn't know why but she felt like grabbing the hand tightly and never letting go. However, Kripa reluctantly brought her hand up and placed it in Angad's, and then nodded.
They got some coffee and settled on the couches in the main hall.
"so, Kripa…"Angad began.
"here he goes, now he's going to ask about my condition.." Kripa thought uneasily.
"Yo, Krips?" Angad snapped his fingers.
Kripa looked up with an ashtonished face. No one called her Krips. No one but....
---Another flaskback----
We see Kripa in a recording studio, singing away. She's recording the songs for her new remix album. After she's done, she comes out into the lounge area where Prithvi Bose, her manager and the love of her life and Mishty, her best friend are waiting for her.
"awesome job Krips" says Prithvi. "truly amazing, babe" and kisses her on the cheek.
"thanks, jaan" says a happy Kripa. Mishty and Kripa hug.
"so what's the plan for tonight, guys" asks Mishty, eyeing Prithvi. " I mean, are we going out anywhere?"
"well, uh, Kripa and I were going out for dinner tonight" Prithvi said slowly. He knew Mishty would get jealous, but he had no other option. The company needed Kripa and he would go to any lengths to keep her.
"oh" Mishty said flatly. "well, have fun, I'll go now" and she leaves. Uneasily, Prithvi watched her go.
"prithviiii" Kripa whined in a child-like manner. He turned his attention back to Kripa.
"kya hua" he said
"chalo naa, dinner ka reservation hai…late ho jayenge" she said.
"ok" said P.
They go to a lavish restaurant and are having an nice dinner when the camera flashes forward.
Angad is now staring at Kripa, concerned. "Kripa, you okay?"
"huh? What?" Kripa snaps out of her trance. "ya, im fine"
Angad could see that she's clearly not okay, but decided he shouldn't push her. So they talked for a little while. The comfort level which they both shared really surprised them. Before long, they were both laughing and talking like old friends. One thing that bothered Angad though, was that whenever he tried to know about her past, Kripa always changed the subject.
"sooner or later, I will know what made you this way Kripa" he thought to himself. "it's only a matter of time"


Preview- Angad-Kripa form a friendship.

Edited by yeh_ada_143 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it is just too good ..................totally aweeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
IT WAS TOO GOOD!! PLZZ CONT!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
this is the most beautiful and different story I have heard and if you don't continue faster I will pester you with giving you pms please continue fast and as you said this is a mini fanfic you will have to make it a huge one as this story is too interesting and I am getting fond of it minite by minite I am not joking I am serious you must continue and if you don't I will really trouble,harasse and do all sorts of things I can think of I know you have copied the hosipital thing from the film Kyunki starring Kareena Kapoor Salmaan Khanand Rimi Sen as I have seen the film anyways continue as fast as you can or you know what
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: pink sky

this is the most beautiful and different story I have heard and if you don't continue faster I will pester you with giving you pms please continue fast and as you said this is a mini fanfic you will have to make it a huge one as this story is too interesting and I am getting fond of it minite by minite I am not joking I am serious you must continue and if you don't I will really trouble,harasse and do all sorts of things I can think of I know you have copied the hosipital thing from the film Kyunki starring Kareena Kapoor Salmaan Khanand Rimi Sen as I have seen the film anyways continue as fast as you can or you know what

i just replied to your PM..i will continue when i come back from college...I haven't see Kyuni Ki yet...but I don't think my fan fic is going to be like that..😕 but ya, ill continue asap

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