No Road Towards You MN FF(Epilogue:Pg145|06.07.11)

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#891

fabulous update

the way u portrayed their feelings n the dance was superbly done jaee

mind blowing work

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daniella

@daniella05

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#892

awesome update!!
loved it..

waiting 4 the next part..

thanks 4 the pm

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#893

i love this song .. this melody just stirs in my ears ... beautiful it is and it had been so long since i heard this song and now coming across it after a long time was a sheer treat!! ..

next the descriptions .. excellent pearl .. u have improved SO MUCH!! .. like it was a visual experience for me .. LITERALLY!! .. loved nupur's dress .. 😳 .. i could see she looked GORGEOUS! ! . . 😍 😛
and the dance and the kiss and nupur's plea .. *sighsss* .. it all just took my heart away ... wonderful pearl .. please continue soon!! .. ..

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#894

hey dear

this was such a sweet n after a long time a smooth update...with so many hopes. steps 2wards new beginig...lovly part..thy u defined the strt there emtion...his gift..his apperance...her beauti...her wait...everthng was amazing

blessd thy r life is giving thm second chance...

n the song ahh lovly perfect

waitng for next part

PS...im in love with ur signatures...GOD bless u always with HIS n his love ..

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#895

beautifully written

lovely song

thanks for the pm

continue soon😊

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-sam-

@-sam-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#896

Hey Jaee 🤗
That was so lovely and so beautiful... :)
I mean, how do you store songs in your brain, I mean how do you know which to use at exact moment...
The song suited the moment perfectly...
And I loved the fact that both are taking the step... thats the best thing
It reminded me of my AC Mayur... simply...

Wonderfully described!
Take care :)

Love,
Sam :)

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#897

Lovely update jaee

SimPly amazing

Loved t

Cont soon

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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#898

Reserved...

Beautiful update Jaee... Everything was described so elegantly...

Nupur's appearance.. i could actually Imagine her dress, and her hair... it was like she was standing in front of me.. Very very well described..

I loved the idea of the masks... Although I was a bit dissapointed, when Nupur removed the mask.. I thought he would find her with the mask... Oh well what came after that over shadowed everything...

It was just amazing...I'm speechless.. Very well written... Just simply awesome...

About the song, I also have the same thing.. I have this song thats perfect for my ff but I can't use it yet..

'But is was simply amzing.. Loved each part of it and the song was awesome...

I'm still dreaming...😍 Awesome...

-Laiba

Edited by princez_94 - 14 years ago