Colourful birds Maneet FF Pg 40 Climax - Page 16

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Posted: 14 years ago
heyyy dear,
nice part
thanks for PM.
continue soon



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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Dear,
First thank u so much for the pm n pls join me in u r baddies list
2nd nice update.. geet luvs maan.. wish he sees her soon.. but when it's maan know about the girl that she is geet n when there love story start I m waiting for that pls cont soon it's weekend start hoep u update 2, 3 part in this weekend pls update soon can't wait due to the precap👍🏼
love u😳😳😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey amazing part dear keep continue and thanx for pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey...that was so really nice...

i loved it...keep writing...👏👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
awsuMM!!!

atleast geet said it!!

update sooN!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Colourful birds Part 11


Rishi asks in his mind:What did you say Geet?
Geet:I wanted to confess my love to Maan directly.Then i thought you are a good friend..you can help me.You can help me to get rid of my tensions.Only you can help me.Right Rishi?Who else is that good to help me?
Rishi controls his paon.
G:I doubted whether Maan loves me or not.When you said only i got relief.
Rishi does'nt know what to say.
G:Do you know one thing?My first meeting with Maan was not when you guys visited us for the first time.
R:Then?
G:I had gone to the bus stop once to see my friend.But my friend did'nt come.But i saw the guy who stepped out of the bus.I kept looking at him.But because of the mist i could not see his face clearly for long.Later when i saw Maan at home i got excited.Because i person i saw at the bus stop was Mann.Later i saw Mann many times in the park.I had a hope that Maan loves me.You know why?
Rishi raises his eyebrows and looks at Geet.
G:Every morning when Maan goes for jogging he keeps beautiful flowers in the park.He knows that i come to the park regularly to buy flowers.He knows that flowers are my life.I believe..that is why he keeps flowers in the park.I used to take those flowers everyday.Today i could not.Because today my only intention was to confess my love.
Rishi is shocked.
He thinks:So the flowers Maan kept for his misty girl were taken by Geet thinking that the flowers are for her?
Rishi can't say anything more to Geet as he has become completely weak.

Geet goes back home happily.
Arohi:How was your meeting with Rishi?
G:I gave the bouquest to Rishi.I told him that it's my heart.I requested him to give to Maan on my behalf.
Riddhima and Arohi are shocked.
A:Mann?Then why did you meet Rishi?
G:I'm shy to talk to Maan.Rishi is my good friend.Only he can make things go smooth.

The next morning..
Geet is waiting at the park for Maan.Maan comes.They both smile.
Geet does'nt know how to start.
M:That bouquet was good.
She smiles.
M:Yesterday Rishi slept with that bouquet.He has'nt woken up till now.He must be dreaming.
G:What?
M:Since you called him to the park to talk Rishi has been in a dream world.Not in this world at all.
G:What are you saying?
M:He is very happy that his route is clear now.To hear 'i love you' from the girl one loves is the greatest happiness.Rishi is feeling it now.He loves you madly Geet.
Geet is shocked.
She thinks:The person i trusted has cheated me.Rishi is not a friend.He cheated me.
Geet is shattered.

Geet goes to the boys' house.Her eyes are burning with anger.
Maan:What's the matter Geet?
G:I want to see Rishi.Where is he?
Armaan grins:Don't be in a hurry sis.
G:I'm in a hurry.I want to see him immediately.
M:Rishi has gone out.
G:Where did he go?
M:No idea.He did'nt say anything.
G:Lie.You all know where Rishi is.
Arjun:No,we don't know.
G:I did'nt ask you.I asked Maan.Why do you talk in between?
They feel strange about Geet's way of talking.
She points her finger towards Armaan:And you Armaan...you don't bother about when i want to meet Rishi.What is your problem if i'm in a hurry to meet Rishi?
Armaan is stunned.
Geet goes away.
Arjun:Did you notice Geet's face expression?Very different.
M:Yes.I also felt so.
Arj:When the boyfriend is not near,all girls get angry.That's all.
Arm:But this is something different.

Rishi is walking aimlessly on the road.
His mobile rings.He attends the call.
"Hello Mr.Rishi".
Rishi is shocked.
"You did'nt recognise me.Right?"
Rishi's lips shiver:Geet!
G:Yes.So you can recognise my voice.
Rishi is dull.
G:You are intelligent.I did'nt know that before.I regret for that.
R:I can't understand..
G:Why is it so?If you can't understand what i said that's a wonder.
Her tone changes.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey jasmine wow its amazing yaar love the way GEET is fighting for her love maza aayega pls update soon yaar tum bhi CV ki tarah tadpati rehti ho thnks for PM.
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohh lord !!!geet mad at rishi..maan thinks geet likes rishi..is rishi clear tht maan likes geet ???????uff confusion ....btw thanks fr the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
loveee the update.
Continue soon.
thanxx for the pm.




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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update...luved da way geet spoke to rishi.. waiting for more.. do continue soon

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