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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow amn this is the sheru i want tos ee again....full of jealousy and not anyoneletting come between him and jassi and unable to bear the same....wow those days
this is damn interesting pls continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo...Jealousy!! &nb sp; 😆 😆 😆 Sorry, but I can't sing that enough! 😉 Great continuation Aishu! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey i am also reading it..Any way gr8 job 👏 👏

Plz continue...I like adi character funny one good.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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brilliant 😊
loved every bit.. oh god, How much I miss the old Armaan Tiger suri 😭 .. at least ur posts bring him back to us 😃 thanks
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Job Well Done, Ashu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good plot, imagination, dialogues--------. Keep it up.

We want to read more.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Its awesome Aishah!!!

I love it!! PLz continue soon!!

Hera 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG thanks u guyz!!! 😳 -lolz the mods might not be too happy about me continuing here though coz they shifted it to the fanfics section! 😉 ..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow aishu wonderful
this aadi guy is so funny thankfully he is not like creepy and droopy
continue dear i wud keep lookin for it when u update and i always read ur posts
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it's truly awesome aishah!!!!👏👏 luv u for this!!!! kaassh...kaasshh...TnD itne creative hote.....!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Im continuing..lets see.. im not really sure where im going😉..

GM Canteen:

Jassi seems to be lost in her own thoughts as Aadi and Nandu go on about seemingly pointless things..

Nandu:'Ae jassi tujhe kya hua hain?-itni chup chaap kyun ho?..'

Aadi:'My dear bro i know exactly what her problem is..madam ko apne Armaan Sir ki yaad sathaa rahi hain..right jas?..'.again Aadi chuckles in his familiar way and Nandu joins in to..

Jassi:'Aadi main tumse baath hi nahin karna chaathi!..tum Armaan se behes kyun kar rahe the!?..tum tho bohath baathen karthe the ke main GM ki madath karna chaatha hoon..lekin tum..tum tho pehle din hi shuru hogaye..'

Jassi turns her face frustratedly,Aadi is rather taken aback and soon enough an awkward silence takes over..

Nandu feels he should break the silence...

Nandu:'Tum logon ko patha hain ke meri mulaqaat kis se hui aaj?..' Noone bothers answering as both Aadi and Jassi are sulking!..'Ok math poocho par main phir bhi bathonga..PARI!!!..my life..hai..my love..'

'Pari??..ab yeh Pari kaun hain?..'..Aadi looks confused..'And by the way tumne mujhse kabhi is Pari ka zikar nahin kiya!!..'

Nandu:'Aadi..tum usse door hi rehna bas..'

'WHAT??!..Nandu Ji I cant make any promises like that..hmmm i think ab mujhe bhi is pari se milna hoga..'..he seems to be enjoying nandus tadap at his teasing words..

Nandu:'Dekho Aadi-tum mere bhai ho-par love ke maamle mein main sab kuch bhool jaatha hoon-so bach ke rehna ok!!..'

Jassi cant help but burst into laughter at this mini fight-especially since its over Ms Rangebaal-Pari herself!..

'Wah-maine kabhi nahin soccha tha ke ek aisa din bhi aayega jab do log Pari keliye larenge..'

They all start laughing and all three feel light and happy at the much needed release of tension!..

Aadi:'Jassi..hmmm..im sorry..look main tho aisa hi hoon..i didnt mean to offend you or armaan..i even apologised!..tumme patha hain jassi ke nandu ke baad sirf ek tumhi ho jo mujhe apna sa lagtha hain..and i dont want to lose your friendship..'

Jassi feels moved at his words-shes shocked to see that the very humourous Aadi can be so sentimental too..she quickly accepts his apology and they both share a hug-of course nandu soon joins them too!..

Meanwhile in a lonely office in GM-Armaan sits all alone-he squeezes his tennis ball with all his might-confused thoughts race through his mind and a sense of anger runs through his body..he wont let anyone come close to Jassi-his Jassi..

The next day:

The trio make their way happily into teh GM entrance as they walk sharing many jokes..they seem to be totally oblivious to Armaan and Raj standing at a distance watching them closely..

Raj:'Wah-what a group!..God mere kya hoga..im too handsome to end up on the streets-aur mera yeh chehra-yeh tho sirf modelling keliye hain bheek maangne keliye nahin..'

'SHUT UP RAJ!..tum bhi na-kuch bhi bakthe rehthe ho!..'

'Armaan-mere pyaare buddhu se bhai-tum shayad bhool rahe ho ke Jassi hummein barbaad karna chaathi hain-dekho mujhe lagtha hain ke tumme ek holiday ki zaroorat hain kyun ke tumhaara dimaag tho kahin ko chukaa hain!!..'

Armaan:'Raj..mujhe jassi par poora bharosa hai-woh aisa kuch nahin karegi jisse Gulmohar ki haar ho..aisa kuch nahin karegi..'..Raj sighs at Armaan almost as if to say he is a lost case and they both make their way to the office too..

On their way in they're both surprised to see Jassi,nandu and aadi standing face to face with them..

Jassi:'Hmmm..im sorry that we came into your office like this Mr Suri-but i think ke ab hummein apne business plan ko discuss karna chahiye..'

Armaan cant help but keep staring at Jassi-its been such a long time since he actually had looked at her properly-all the time he had been desperately trying to avoid her eyes-but now he was almost like a prisoner under her spell..Jassi notices the intense look and feels her cheeks burning as her heart skips a beat..

'Ahem ahem..'..Aadi breaks the stare with his typical loud way..he takes jassi by surprise as once again he puts his arms around her shoulder-but knowing he wont back off she relents helplessly..

Aadi:'I think we should all drop the formalities!-i mean come on guys!-we have to work together-so please no 'sirs','madams',or 'mr and ms'..dekho armaan-look at me and jas we are totally at ease with eachother-thats how you should be too!!..'

Armaan clenches his fist as he cant bear to see Aadi so close to jassi!..he looks towards the ground and Raj notices his friends plight and again sighs shaking his head rejectedly..

Nandu:'Haan yaad aaya..kal ek bohath bari party hain-mujhe lagtha hain ke hum sab ko vahaan jaana chahiye-all the top business financiers will be there-shayad koi hummein bhi miljaye!..'

Aadi:'WOW!!-A PARTY!!-what a cool idea-thats settled then-hum sab is party mein jayenge-and jassi your my date!..'

Jassi is too shocked to say anything and resigns herself to the fact that she'll have to go for GMs sake-and for Aadis happiness too..

Ab kya hoga aage?..😉

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