FF Maneet: Tere mast mast do nain pt37 LAST pg 94 - Page 61

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rsroopali thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update
bt didnt get d precap wts wrong between shaan &khanak
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice going.....
me sad.....FF getting over
will b waiting for ur nxt FF :)
update soon!

love
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww...that was superb update.....really loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 37:

Maan - fine i have to wait 3 months more and mke a sad face...

Geet kiss him on his cheek..

Maan- bas?

Geet- haa aur kya? What did you expect me to do?

Suddenly ridzy called Geet...

Geet- hi ridzi.. you kno..

Ridzi- Sorry but I have to say something speciel to you.. It is about Khanak...

Geet- What happend to her?

Ridzi- You know when Khanak was not feeling good then she come to me for a check up... And I'm sorry to say Geet that .... Khanak can never become a mother...

Geet got shock ... What was she hearing? Khanak can't become a mother? But how? I mean how can it be like that?

Ridzi - I don't know.. But after that accident...

Geet- Please ridzi don't talk about the accident at all.. You know na how much i hate talking about it..

Geet throws her mobile on the wall and Maan comes running in..

Maan - What happend? And why are your phone ... ehm.. like peaces?

Geet- Maan.. Do you know what ridzi said? She said that my sister can't become a mother...

Maan- I know..

Geet - You know? YOU know? YOU KNOW? and started to yell

Maan- Why are you screaming... That's why I don't wanted to tell you

Geet- OMg Maan... Why didn't you... No baby for Khanak... Does she know about it?

Maan- She told us about that!

Geet- She told you both?

Geet started to have pain and Maan called the doctor... Doc says that she need to be in the hospital...

Ridzi- Well we have to operate her.. The baby is coming...

Maan- But it's only the 7th month?

Ridzi- Actually baby can come early also..

Ridzi rushed in and all was waiting outside..

Anahita - Well see Mahi your sibling are coming

Mahi - Anahita i can see that.. i'm not blind...

Both girls started to argue with each other...

Maan and Armaan started to laugh... Khanak tried to stop them...

Shaan - Bro if they are like this now how will they be when they are teenager

Armaan - Like you.. You always started to fight with me since we were young..

Shaan - But i don't have any kid now.. so... he stopped right there and Khanak eyes was teary...

Shaan consoles her and Maan feels bad for them both..

After some hours ridzi comes out...

Ridzi - congrats man you have a surprise in there..

Maan - suprise..?

Maan rushes in and sees Geet with two babys...

Maan - OMG... twins? Geet are you sure? twins?

Geet- aha... and looked at them..

Geet- They look like you ... right?

Maan - I must say that one look like me...

Geet- it's not that one it is a girl...

Maan- Two girls? Wow what did I say? MSK will have girls this time...

Geet- Oh babaji have listen to me also.. This one is a boy and that one is a girl...

Maan hold the baby girl and looked at Geet...

Geet- What? and smiled

Maan- I was thinking that your babaji have given us twins.. So should we not give one to Khanak and Shaan?

Geet looks at him...

Maan- If you want.. then .. otherwise ... no..

Geet- Are you dumb or something? Why didn't you come with this ida today?

Maan- you agreed?

Geet- ofcourse... I don't mind.. ofcourse I know that she will be in safe hand...

Maan- We can ask them to chose who they want..

Geet looked at her both baby

Geet- I don't mind who they take.. I know that both will be safe with her..

Shaan and all comes in the room and look at the babys..

Shaan - surprise Geet .. I didn't know that two.. omg .. she are so cute na..

Geet- U can take one..

Maan sits down and says - Me and Geet have think alot.. And we have decide that Shaan and Khanak will get a child from us..

Geet- aur khanak you will not refuse at all..

Khanak - How can I ? I mean that this is your

Geet- Who cares? I also want you to know how it feels to be a mother..

Khanak looked at shaan...

Khanak - Are you sure?

Geet - hmm... ya i'm 1000% sure...you can take what ever you want.. The girl or the boy your choice...

Shaan and Khanak - girl! both looked at each other then on Maan and Geet...

Khanak- I always wanted a baby girl..

Shaan - Me also..

Geet is glad that they took the baby as she wanted a son but she didn't wanted to tell them that..

Khanak - thinks * Geet I know that you wanted a boy this time and I know tht shaan wanted a girl but girls are also cute *

Armaan comes inside and look at Shaan..

shaan - See I have also one daughter now.. And if your daughter start fighting with her then you will know..

All started to laugh ....

They all have name cermony and Mahi sits with Maan and Anahita sits with Armaan.. Both girls give each other angry looks... Mahi looks at her brother then on her sister.. she gives them both kisses on the cheek and runs back to Maan..

Anahita gets jelousy and are going to do same thing but Armaan stoped her....

Armaan - No.. You are sitting here! I have seen enough of you both girls now.. Promise daddy that you wont go to Mahi ... promise :d

Anahita - Paar papa.. ok.. I promise...

Panditji starts with the name cermony...

Pandit - This boy's name should start with G....

Geet looks on Maan

Geet- Gurmeet..

Everybody started to clap..

Pandit - this girls name should start with Z

Shaan looked at Khanak and was getting confused...

Khanak - Well If it is ok for Geet then I would like to name her Zooni...

Geet got impressed with her name choice..

Khanak hugs Geet and both started to hug each other thighter...

And here this story will end.....

I hope you guys had a nice time with this FF.. I mean this is my first FF i have done 37 parts for it... I never manage to do so many part to any of my FF...

I would like to thanks all people who have read it... I hope I can manage to do a blast again with my new FF.. '

If you liked it really much I maybe will come up with a season 2 of Tere mast mast do nain
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was awesome....really loved it
it is the end....great one it is and do keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ending
loved your ff so much
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww baby gurmeet be adorable
that was really nice of geet
to give her sister her baby
loved ur ff pm me if u write any more
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice awesome happy ending
bt plzzzzzzz do cm back with season 2
and will miss d pms by u
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Posted: 14 years ago
yaar loved da update superb
awhh maaneet givin der kid 2 der sis nd bro awhhh
love maaneet sooo much
plz do continu!!!!:):):)
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update , lookin forward for the new season soon

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