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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Kool_Naina

Hi Noor🤗
how was ur exam dear????

soooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy for late reply😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

For Parts 7-11
all parts awesome,fantastic dear👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Loved dem soooooooooooooooooooo much❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Loved Maaneet moments❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
thank God Dadi didn't hear anything😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
eagerly w8ng for next part
plssssssssss cont soon

Luv
Naina🤗

hey naina and thanx for a lamba comment
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Posted: 14 years ago

he kissed her on the cheek and was moving to her lips when the light went out
geet got away from maan and took out the candle from her bag and lightened it
she placed the candle an the dressing table and looked behind to find maan just inches away from
her

Together Forever
Part 12

he took one step towards her and geet took two steps back hitting the dressing table. she could not take in the proximity of their closeness and moved away from him
she had her back to maan
she was walking towards the bed to somehow get away from maan so she could control her feelings
but maan held her wrist to stop her from going away, going away from her feelings but the truth was that he also could not control his feelings
he wanted to be close to her, to touch her, to feel her
he wanted to make geet his own
he wanted to remove all the traces of that man who had cheated on geet, who had decieved her
he wanted her to forget all those things and just keep him, maan, in her thoughts in her heart

maan moved close to geet and held her from behind
geet could feel his body against hers
his touch made her fly in clouds
she was breathing fast
maan moved in close to her
he moved her wet hair from her back to her left shoulder
this sent jolts of current through her spine
maan moved his lips to her right shoulder and brushed them against it moving up to her neck
he made geet tilt her head so he could get more access
geet wanted to stop but could not
some unknown desire was taking over them
maan turned geet around to face him
she was looking down shying
he lifted her chin to so that she would see him into his eyes
what geet saw in them was love, care and loadz of love
love she wasn't even worthy for only because of her hideous past
even now when she had told maan about her past she wanted to keep him away from it, to keep away from all the sorrows and hardships she had gone through because she didn't wanted maan to suffer along with her
but she wanted to be with him
she wanted a new beginning in her life and maan was that beginning
he had been her pillar of support all those times when she needed it
she trusted him more than she trusted herself
the last time she trusted a man and handed herself to him was her biggest mistake
but trusting this man standing infront of her was something else
maan snaked his one hand around heet's waist and other to her neck
he bent his head down to her coller bone and brushed his lips against it moving back and forth
he made his way up to her jaw bone kissing her neck
geet feeling his lips against her skin was enjoying it
she closed her eyes and wraped her arms around maan in anticipation
maan kissed her eyelids and then picked her up in his arms
geet opened her eyes as she felt off of the ground
both were looking into each others eyes
maan made his way to the bed and laid geet down and wanted to leave before he could loose all the self control he had
he turned around but geet had held his wrist and this made him fall on her
his whole body weight was resting on her
maan could feel her curves under him
geet took her hand to maan's face and caressed it
this was the first time when geet was doing this
maan supported himself on his elbow on her one side so that nothing happens to the baby
their eyes locked into each other
maan moved his lips to hers and kissed them
he was kissing those pink lucious lips of hers
geet responding him back
thier kiss wasn't that fierce but was full of passion
maan was really gentle
geet gave him access and his tongue was doing its magic
thier eyes still locked to each other not moving away for even a second and kissing with full passion
maan took his hand to her leg under her kurta and started to move up her thigh
he strocked her thigh and moved above
maan saw something in her eyes and removed his hand
he moved his lips away kissed her forehead and sat besides her
geet also sat up straight
maan took her hands in his and turned towards her

maan: geet mujhay jana hay
geet i need to go
geet looked at her with questioning eyes
maan placed his hand on her cheek
maan: may wo nahi kar sakta jis k leay tum tyaar na ho
i can't do something for which you are not ready
geet looked at him that how understanding he was
he could not resist and hugged him tight
maan returned the hug and nestled his head in her shoulder
they straightened up and maan kissed her forehead and turned to leave
geet: aap please yahi rukk jaiyay na
please stay here na
geet blurted out as soon as she realized she blushed and looked down
when she looked up she didn't find maan there
she tucked herself in her bed turning the other way disappointed
then she felt a warm arm around her waist
she smiled and turned to see maan lying next to her
geet snuggled in maan's chest and closed her eyes and fell asleep
maan kissed on top of her head and rested his head on hers and closed his eyes


ahem ahem how was it??? 😳😉
please do comment and and tell how was my almost second try
and thankyou for the previous ones they really motivate me to write
eagerly waiting for your replys 😃

love
Noor

my new FF Life, Love and Story
link to part 13
Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved it
such a romantic
cant wait for da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was a so very beautiful!!!😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
thnks noor 4 sndng me a pm............ i hv saved all ur parts............. nd i love ur new ff..... hope in fuure they mannet's felling vl grw more 4 echothr....... do rply😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
romanticcc part.
Continue soonnnn.
Thanxx for the pm.




Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it beautifully written 😳 👍🏼 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: krati5

thnks noor 4 sndng me a pm............ i hv saved all ur parts............. nd i love ur new ff..... hope in fuure they mannet's felling vl grw more 4 echothr....... do rply😊

ur welcome dear
thankyou glad you are liking it 😃
and maan and geet have started exploring their feelings for one another and will soon grow even more
and thanyou for the comment 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

awesome update

loved it
such a romantic
cant wait for da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

thanx for liking it
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jazzerette

it was a so very beautiful!!!😍

thanx 😳

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