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amazing update dear sorry for the late comment n thanks for the pm
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hiiiiiiii sara m really really sorry fro late reply phew finally read da update hehehe anyways loveeeee da update dear thnxxxxx god sammy sahi salamat bahar aagaya from dat old man house n yayyy he got da clue also woohoo he rocks n den omggg nups loves mayu woww awesomee n den sajan scene awwwwwwwwww finally we got da senti sammy so emotional der scene n der hug hayeeeeeeee jst loveee sajan do continue soon
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sorry for the late comment!
i loved the update
so gunji confessed her love
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Originally posted by: roopsie

6 pages of comments and no update😭 update fast

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Loved all the parts.........................its so good story.......pls pm me when u update..........
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PART 10
Mayank n nupur entered the room seeing samrat leaving the room wiping his tears n gunjun sitting on her knees with teary eyes. both share a confused glance.

Nupur kept a hand on her shoulder "don't cry gunjun, I don't know what happened but ur tear will make him upset"

Gunjun hugged her tight sharing her sorrow n then wiped her tears not for her own sake but for him as she don't want to be a reason of his tears anymore.

Samrat entered the room wiping his face with towel n saw them sitting on the dinning table quite. He joined them n silent was there for more than five minutes.

Samrat wanted them to overlook what happened few minutes ago

Gunjun want him to forget that n start behaving like the sammy he loves

While mayank n nupur wants them both to clarify their prolem.

But may b these thoughts make them more conscious when samrat break the silence.

I was more than two years old when I got to know that samrat a boy always surrounded by a lot of people is alone in this world. I was a part of an orphanage, sitting on one corner seeing people playing smilling but I cant I don't know y. I always wanted to sleep on my mom's lap, wanted her to sing for me but instead of playing with all other boys I used to thought y me??? Y God done this with me. Only wanna see my parents once just once. But they r nowhere n they will not come. But still there was a feeling that will meet them once, will ask them y they left me. I hated my presence in this world, who m i??? want the answer of this question but got a complete silence in return. I even don't know y they left me, y m a part of this world when my parents not want me, was I result of a mistake, then y m suffering???

One day nanny, oppointed for us, ask me to run away from this place. Was six at that time, there were coming someone involved in smuggling children. So I left the place. Now in front of me was a great city n I was standing their bare footed with empty hands. That night I spend on a footpath. Next morning I saw a burger shop n then I come to know that m really hungry. I went their n silently picked one of it n was going to run when the salesman watched me. He start running behind me was running in full spead crossing all the cars. My feet were bleeding n my heart was aching badly. I don't know was running because I was hungry or because wanted to save myself from the man following me. Atlast was unbearable for me to run n was caught by the man. I saw him with teary eyes I handed over the burger to him honestly. He threw it away on the road with anger n start beating me badly. I didn't said anything because was aware that have done wrong n I deserve this all. But suddenly a woman came n hold his arm saving me. I hide myself behind the lady. She was really decent, simple lady. He took me with her n prepare a handmade tonic to cure my ailments. I have completely seen a mother's love in her behaviour. I asked her "do u know my parents. Have u meet them. They send u for me???"

She smiled on my question n replied "yeah ur mother send me for u, from now onward u will b my son"

The lady was married but have no children. She treated me like her own child for more than 3 years n those years was just like m living in heaven. But one day I enterd her room n the scene was terrifying, his husband killed her with the knife. Have seen all this in front of my eyes. but before can adjust the situation police arrive their n arrested me for killing her. Have begged in front of them that I have not done anything, while I will snatch my own world, my heaven. But noone believed me n her husband proved me wrong. After that I spend one year in jail, after coming out I killed her husband n left the city forever. I was unable to forgive the person who have tried to write my fate, who again engulfed me in darkness, I cant bear it that he will live happily.i cant I really cant.

He said breaking the vase on front wall with full anger, leaving other three in shock

"N then I lived happily ever after" he said with a sweet smile seeing their expression n left the place. Nupur followed him

Gunjun seeing him leaving let her tears to come out that she was holding

"mayank he will not b with me??? Y in all this he is punishing me"

"gunjun m not saying that u r wrong, but try to understand him too, give him time"

Nupur joined him, sitting beside him on stairs

"tumhy lagta hy mein galat kar raha hn but truth I m doing nothing, everything is happening on its own"

"yehy to samrat u don know whats going on, usy accept kar lo"

"I can spend my whole life waiting for him" gunjun said wiping her tears

"u don't have t wait that much" myank consoled her "I know he will propose u soon"

By listening this he left the place.

"par nupur I don't want her to b a part of my dark life" samrat said " I do love her so that don't want to spoil her life"

"samrat do think n do whatever u want I trust u, ur decission will b satisfactory for me for everyone" nupur left the place leaving him their alone

"what if she wanted to live dark life??? thought gunjun with tears standing behind listening everything

Gunjun was sitting alone when samrat entered the home

"samrat mujhy tum sy kuch kehna hy"

Samrat hold her hand tightly

"y u wanna spoil ur own life??? m not meant for , u deservs the best"

"who told u that u r not best??? Do ask me who u r for me. N I don't care what I deserve, I want what I have desired"

"chashmish y u don't get that, u r making the decission difficult for me"

"ok just leave all this, come have dinner"

"nops m not in mood"

He was going to leave when gunjun called him

"samrat we both will ever live like friends, atleast don't end the only relationship established in between us plz"

"gunjun v r friends, best friends, n will ever live don't think like this"

"samrat u don't want to start a new relationship its ok" gunjun replied "mery lie ye buhut hy that atleast u think about me i wil wait for ur three words forever. now come n stop giving sad expression, it doesn't suits u"

Gunjun was gonna move when he hold her hand from behind bend on her knees

"I love u chashmish" he said with wetty eyes

Gunjun gave him a strange glance

"i love u chashmish, I always tried to hide it not from u but from my ownself. I have lost everything in my life, whoever came in my life left me alone, I don't want this to hppen with both of us, I don't have the courage to loose u, I cant afford this chashmish I cant afford this"

Gunjun wiped his tears "samrat don't b afraid of the day u will loose me but do live those days on its fullest in which v r together. U cant snatch the happiness of today because of a lame feeling. N trust me will end that fear of urs, like the way u end all fears of mine"

They hugged them tightly n then my update ends

Edited by chilluppp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
m first??
yeehhh
*edited*

sabse pehle to saru

jhapppiiiiii muah muah muah
tujhe pata hai aaj subha i was watching that scene of bhavu's entry to mjht (see my first sigg in my sigg dabba)
b mela mood sad sad ho gaya tha
but now i am allllll well😃
sachi mein kyunki mujhe meri one of the favourite ff's ki update jo mil gayi hai:)

😳
yaar i am really in love with this story pata hai
itna mast concept upar se u write soo well

dil karta hai bas padhti jaun n padhti jaun
muahhhhh
n jaldi update karna is baar k??


Edited by dolly18 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey dear u finaly updt.i luv 2day updt.rcking updt yaar.haye mai toh faint ho ri hun.
plz plz plz plz jldi cnt krna i jus cant w8.
muahh muah realy nice updt yaar .
luv u
vritika

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