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PART 9

Samrat cover his face with both the hands after feeling the presence of somone behind.

"yehy to bol raha tha kab sy, samrat ki baat many hy nae chahiye"

Mayank said making a tense face

Samrat looked beneath towards mayank, who gave him a helpless look

Samrat nodded n lookes behind, standing their was the old man he met a day before

"tum phir aa gae" he said angrily "mana kia tha na the way u have choosen is not right, it only have dissappointments nothing else. Its better to keep urself away from all this otherwise when u will find the truth it would b too late.

Samrat who was not giving attention to what he is saying replied "ok sir, will never come again pomice, this was the last time, now can I leave???"

"ok m saying the same, leave all this" old man replied

Samrat nodded n was going to move forward towards the stairs when old man stops him

"jahan sy ae ho wahy sy wapis jao gy"

Samrat looked behind n then said making innocent face"come on sir kitna time lagy ga yahan sy wapis jany mein, stairs sy few seconds mein will out of the house"

Old man raised his eyebrow having suspicious feeling but then allowed him to follow.

Samrat coming down the stairs was observing the house very carefully. It was really a symbol of antique museum, having a strange feeling around that u belong to some old century but the thing gained his attention was picture of a lady holding a box in her hand n having a mischief smile on her face.the box was really eye-catching. Samrat was continuosly looking at the pic, n their was something attracting him towards the pic, her smile or the box she is holding. He was completely lost in the pic when a voice came

"this is the door" old man said angrily

"oh thnx " samrat said looking still towards the pic.

"have seen this box somewhere but where???" samrat thought moving out where mayank was waiting for him

"hello" mayank said " bola tha na mat kar ye bat nae to sunta hy kya kisi ki"

Mayank the pic has some connection with the clue but what n y m thinking so I don't know"

"oh shit how can I forget" samrat said moving back leaving mayank surprised

He knocked the door again, n again old man opened it but seeing him again make an annoyed face.

"sorry sir mery watch gir gae shaid yahan" samrat said "its really special for me can i'.."

"ok"

He allowed him to enter again

Samrat tried to pretend that he is searching his watch but his gaze was on the paper that can b half seen from th back of the pic. He finally take out the paper put it in his pocket n left the home silently.

"mein aenda tery sath kahen nae jaon ga seriously" mayank said angrily

"oh hello to to oper bhi nae aya, mein hy akela gaya tha na to tujhy kya prob hy???"

"baher khary ho k tension to mujhy ho rahy thy. U know the man, for a minute I thought ab to tery lash hy baher ae gy"

"mein itny jaldi tera peecha nae choron ga so forget this" he said

At home

"guys got this" samrat said taking out the paper n explaining them everything happened "n u know what nupur the box was the same have seen in the museum the day v both went out. Wo wala jo tujhy mayank sy as marriage gift chahiye tha"

Nupur gave him an angry look

"to ny mera bary mein kuch kaha???" mayank asked him

Samrat n nupur shared a gaze n replied instantly "nae"

"thnx god mayank ny nae suna, sun leta mein is samrat ko nae chorty" nupur thought looking towards samrat angrily

N samrat smiled seeing her reaction

Samrat take out the letter n start reading it

clue for the oblivious

"the last sign, the last hintt, the last try n then the whole thing in front. One is just a step back form his destiny just another way to pass. The lastpart is hidden beneath the box, do desipher the map n find whatever u always wanted to"

"oh no" they all four said in union

"it means hamein museum sy ye box lana hy???" gunjun said

"no ways" mayank said " ab tak jo kia was fine, now to replace any thing that is public property is illegal n v r not going to do anything against the rules"

"yup but hum isy legal way mein krein gy na" samrat said

"agree" nupur replied "will place it back after our task will done that's it"

Mayank n gunjun looked towards each other confused and then towards sanu that were already agreed to steal the box from museum.

Mayur let the plzce n samrat was going to leave when gunjun called him

"r u ignoring me???"

samrat replied without looking towards her "no"

"ok ice cream khany chalo gy mery sath???"

"nae m not in mood"

"n r u in mood to tell me what happened???"

"gunjun plz koi problem nae hy y u r not getting me???" samrat almost shouted

"mein btaon kya problem hy, that u know I love u n wanna know ur answer, n u r trying to avoid me"

"just come on chashmish its not like that"

"ok I agree its not like that but instead wanna know ur reply"

"gunjun mujhy kaam hy" he was about to leave when she holds her hand an ask

"samrat asa kyun kar rahy ho???dekho now have told u about my feelings too now u only have to reply.will do whatever u want. I want to spend my life with u , I want u with me forever, I wanted to b gunjun samrat instead of gunjun bhushan .I want ur name with mine's"

"I don't know my own name mein tumhy apna naam kesy dn chashmish, samrat apny bary mein kuch nae janta, I don't wanna b a part of my own life to mein tumhy apny life ka part kesy bna lon chashmish, there's only darkness nothing else"

He replied letting all his tears flow down

Gunjun put her hands gently on his shoulder. She knew that he is hurt he never seen him crying like this before n somewhere she knew that may b she is the reason of those tears. but was unbearable for her to see him like this.no he cant. the person spreading happiness everywhere, has so a dry life to live. she can read the sadness in his eyes that was alwys hidden behind his mischief behaviour, that she was unable to see before, but the truth was these tears were much more painful for her. she wipped them away, n hugged him tight ensuring that she will b with him forever if not as a lover than as a bestest friend atleast. samrat too tighten the grip of his arms around him, wanted to releif himself from the pain he wasn feeling

will conitnue soooooooon sorry if it is short
this is mine n sana's new ff on sajan
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Edited by chilluppp - 14 years ago
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Res.. Give me sum tym 2 read 😆 And may be me 1st ?!

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omGG !!!
Dis one was sOoo freakin interesting maann !!!!
Like awesome !!!!
Sam huggeddd Gunjan so tightly !!! 😍
luvD the way u ended it... ''Not as a lover than as a bestest friend atleast'' luvD dat line a loT !!! 😳
Plx cont. sOooon...
Will be waitin...
Edited by kajen14 - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kajen14

Res.. Give me sum tym 2 read 😆 And may be me 1st ?!

no probs dear
take ur time
n not may b u r first
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wow lovely part!
sajan were awesome.👏
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the part was really gud.......thnk god sam came out safe.....
n nupur also loves mayu.....gr8!
do cont soon!
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Originally posted by: chilluppp

no probs dear
take ur time
n not may b u r first


Yeahh !!! 😆 😉

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