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Posted: 14 years ago

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Dedicated to sana n sanju

M dedicating the worst one to u both

PART 3
"mill gaya" nupur said with excitement in her voice

"kya mill gaya???"

"cross"

She said poining towards the stone plate having some engravement on it

It was a stone plate looks like of a grave with some words written on it n on the corner was a cross indicating clearly that they atleast found their clue.

Ellie Morgan

1665

But before they proceed further a scream distract their attention

"ye to gunjun ki awaz thy na" nupur said with a concern in her voice

Both looked towards each other n move towards the place from where they were expecting the voice

Gunjan was standing nearby. Tears were coming out of her eyes n her facial expresions was telling that she is in a state of fear.

"kya hua gunjun"

Nupur asked immediately approaching there. Gunjun hugged her tight started crying more. Both mayank n nupur were waiting for her reply as her condition was increasing the curiosity. She pointed towards the backside where samrat was sitting observing something hesitantly.

"a dead body???" nupur said with terror in her voice

"nops" samrat who was busy observing it said looking towards nupur "it's a mummy, infact a really pld one n I found this bracelet"

He said handing it to mayank who was trying to absorb what happened in the last few minutes. He take the bracelet n was shocked seeing the words on it

"Ellie Morgan"

Samrat who was shocked seeing his reaction ask suddenly chuckling "tum to asy bol rahy ho jesy tum isy janty ho"

"nae samrat wo" nupur said n explain her everything happened before

"means the grave u have seen was of same lady but then y she is here??? Far away from the place" gunjun was going to say something but samrat interept in between

"it means k hamary ilawa bhi koi hy jo is sub k bary mein janta hy"

All three of them looked towards mayank waiting for him to say anything, who was still busy noticing the bracelet. It was in a really good condition n no one can say that its more than three centuries ago, featuring a circle with its center marked with a dot n the name was written with diamonds forming a chain.

"hamary ilawa koi hy ya nae" mayank said "ye to main nae janta. Lekin agar koi hy to waqai us ny hamara kaam asan kar dia hy"

"matlab" all three of them ask in union

"matlab ye everything is in front of our eyes v only have to use our brains"

"Matlab hamara kaam to khatm" nupur whispered

N both samrat n nupur shared a mischief smile.

"bus kar na mayank" samrat said with irritation in his tone "pichly aik ghanty sy is bracelet ko dekh raha hy, ye nae badly ga"

"badly ga " mayank replied still his focus on the bracelet that he was holding in his hand from the time he got it "ye mujhy kab sy kuch keh raha hy, but mujhy is ki language samajh nae aa rahy"

"or hamein aj tak tery language samajh nae ae" samrat said started moving towards his hammock hanging nearby "yar yahan pehly probs kam thy jo ab is larky ko bardasht karna par raha hy???"

He continued looking towards the sky which was no where all covered with leaves "yahan to suraj bhi nae dikhta"

Mayank looked towards gunjun who was standing next to samrat listening his complains

"gunjun do u know the ancient egyptian symbol of sun???"

"yes is circle with a dot. Lekin tum'." But before she complete her sentence, she get mayank's point

"mayank u have done it " she said with excitement

"what problem solved???" nupur n samrat said in union with confused expressions

"yup it means jahan sunlight ho gy that will be our first destination, as the symbol in the center of the bracelet is the same used in that armlet "

Gunjun said with excitement in her voice

"wait a minute" nupur said moving towards both of the scholars "this clue was hidden from 1665 almost n these r" she said pointing towards the trees around covering the sky completely " trees, growing species how is it possible that place where sunlight wass falling in 1665 is same now"

"nupur" maynk said " ancient mysteries r always protected by some hidden powers around, if u would find this clue three thousands centuries away even then it would b confined"

He continued "choro ye batein pehly btao mery sath kn chaly ga???"

"mery to shoulders buhut pain kar rahein hein, m really tired yar" samrat said trying to look exausted

"or mery" nupur said " ankhein buhut dukh rahy hein or sar mein bhi dard hy"

Gunjun who was giggling seeing sudden change in their attitude in last few seconds n then said

"mein chaly jaty hn tumhay sath, mera koi body part nae pain kar raha"

"sorry" mayank said "mujhy pochna hy tum sy chahiye tha. Or tum samrat basket ball khelty hue shoulders pain nae kar rahy thy??? N miss nupur maya pari k char editions parhty hue to koi problem nae hue???"

Samrt n nupur give an innocent look knowing that mayank n gunjun caught their lame excuses

Mayank n gunjun left the place

"kya soch rahy ho???" gunjun asked mayank who was in a deep thought

Mayank looked towards him n replied with a smile

"un dono k bary mein, seedhi tarha koi baat nae karty kher choro"

"mayank where will v search the place having sunlight???"

"jahan tak mujhy lagta hy wo us grave k pass hy kahein ho gy"

N start moving farward. They searched the whole place again n near the grave they saw an arrow that they didn't noticed before indicating the south direction. So they choose the same direction n find a narrow beam of light coming making its way from the leaves of the tree, falling on a top of a box which was half embeded in the soil. They look toward the box with enthusiasm. Mayank bend down on his knees, dig the soil around it n release the box completely.

It was a small box with a mysterious picture of an animal, may b an ancient one. Mayank handed it to gunjun, who was standing nearby noticing every act of mayank carefully. She take the box from his hand and untied the ribbon on it, which was in a really weird condition n then open the box.there was a wooden piece with few letters engraved in it. She looked towards mayank

"a code of seven words, 4529589"

Mayank see the code mentioned in it n then both gave unexplained expressions.

That's it But yar after this update I really do not have the courage to read ur comments

Edited by chilluppp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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indeed very thoughtful update
i must say u r very birlliant imaginar
i liked it alot
the way story is heading
n the mystery is comming
close to open
i loved every bit of it
saNu were very funny
n majan were awesome
as usal
i loved the way nupur got the point
that

"this clue was hidden from 1665 almost n these r" she said pointing towards the trees around covering the sky completely " trees, growing species how is it possible that place where sunlight wass falling in 1665 is same now"

excatly my point was too
i mean i thought the same thing
but as usal mayank answer was right though
so hats of off to u mam
all in all
will love to read more
n stop saying
it is not heading good
its a brilliant n outstanding update dear👏👏👏

lov uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
muhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Sanu.😳

Edited by sana_sajan - 14 years ago

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