FF Pyar ka ehsaas maan & geet thread 5

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jyotesna

@JYOTESNA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#491

nice update.......but my fav are sad and crying😭 it was a great twist in their life.....waiting for the next twist hope to see it soon.......ur twists and turns r just making me cry pls this time make a good twist pls pls pls

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wajiha-1

@wajiha-1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#492

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 hey muskan you made me cry........ lovely writrten part dear and the vm is gud waiting for next twist muskan.........

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Aleena

@cute-aly

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#493

hi muskan

what is this yaar

from part 123 to 126 itneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee emotinal. yaar ab to lagta he k maneet k saath hame bhi kuch arse tak anti depression leni pare gi.

you are such a ese twist deti ho k kafi dino tak hum sub bhi twist hi karte rahte haan.

in part 123

geet - dard mujhe ho raha hain aur aansoo aapke nikal rahehain??
maan - geet u trust me na...
geet - bilkul nahi (her words were indifferent)
maan - please geet for once say that u trust me...
geet - aaj ke baad kabhi nahi...& starts laughing
mazak kar rahi hoon...off course I trust u...

u r turning away as if u have commited a crime..she said

maan - if she comes to know..then she will hate me
I don't want to lose her..main uske bina nahi jee saktha
maan hugged daadi & stood rooted to see geet at the door step...
she stared at him in disbelieve...

Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

Koi rahe na jab apna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage
Jag suna suna

Hai to yeh kyun hota hai
Jab yeh dil rota hai
Roye sisak sisak ki hawayein
Jag suna lage

part 124 finally family dinner

maan - geet tumne mangalsuthra nahi pehna..
geet - mujhe nahi phena
maan took the sindoor & put it on..please geet mujh se rootho mat na..
she has'nt spoken to him a word about the baby since yesterday..her silence was scaring him

they drove down to the dinner venue..geet was really scared & clutching her saree ..

this was the first time in a family gathering they have walked in togather
with maan embracing her..his right hand around her back resting on her right shoulder softly
the last time he walked in front & she just followed him..
but today it was different..it seemed he was so incharge of her...like he owned her..like
he was proud of her..like she meant the world to him..like he never bothered others
looking at them..she was so lost in his arms..she actually forgot where they were heading to
maan could feel that she was comfartable..

daadi - ur looking very prity geet..
she smiled & looked down..daadi moved her hair back..and said..are beta..gale main
kuch nahi paina..geet - ji woo..
maan - maina mana kar diya tha..I love her naive look..
daadi maa smiled..geet blushed..
maan - waise bhi is ke gale ke liya meri bhahen hain na..
daadi patted their cheeks & said bless u both..
kisi ke nazar na laaghe tumhe..
dev - finally bro u have come out with bhabhi..warna tho..she used to always
feel concious answering every ones questions about where u were..
maan looked at geet..aab ise kanhi akela chodhna ka irrada nahi hain mera..
& his hands where firmer on her shoulder..

part 125

ranbhir introduced - yeh maan bhaiya aur geet bhabhi..
smriti & kavya looked at geet...she looked at them..
their eyes were filled with fury & disbelieve..geet eyes pleeded guilty
ranbhir - bhabhi has done her MBA from ur college..u might be knowing her
smriti looked at geet in anger and said - NO I don't know her at all
she looked away & said..there are so many in our college ..its not necessary
that we know each one of them...she turned &...pretended to meet other guests
pooja wispered to geet - tum kal unse mil ne waali thi na kya huwa
geet looked at maan..her eyes were mosit...

maan calls pooja & plans to talk to smriti & kavya
maan meets up with them & explains that..she did'nt tell any one about their wedding
because they were waiting for her to finish her studies..otherwise it would have given
her too much of a media attention..he adds..it was him who requested her not to
tell any one..she wanted to tell them but he had taken a promise from her ..thats why she did'nt
he winked to pooja..she looked away..(sahi ja rahe ho jiju). ..its all my mistake
if u want I will hold my ears & says sorry...
smriti & kavya - nahi nahi jiju..we understand
pooja - jiju..inhe bhi pata liya..
smriti & kavya came out looking for geet

maan called on her phone..she did'nt answere the call..
he rushed to the house...he shouted geet geeeeeet...
he went into the room..
maan - why did u leave from their
geet - I am fed up...with all this
maan moves closer geet I have spoken to smriti & kavya..
geet intrupts.. i am fed with u
she turns & leaves..maan notices she had her suitcase with her..
maan - geet tum kanha ja rahe hoo...
geet - I need break from all this...
geet - I said i need a break from all this...mainly from u...
maan - main tumhare bina nahi rah paavoonga
geet - why is it always about u
maan - tum mujh se alagh to nahi ho..
geet - aab lagtha hain ki shayad hoon..yah..phir aacha hain ki alag rahoon
maan - tum nahi rah pavooghi
geet - nahi rah pavoonghi to aajoovnghi
maan hugs her from back & says..why are u hurting u self
geet - i don't want to stay & hurt u..
maan - u can never hurt me..
geet - but u can...

Pyaar Hum Ko Bhi Hai
Pyaar Tum Ko Bhi Hai
To Yeh Kya Silsile Ho Gaye
Bewafa Hum Nahin
Bewafa Tum Nahin
To Kyon Itne Gile Ho Gaye
Chalte Chalte Kaise Yeh Faasle Ho Gaye
Kya Pata Kahan Hum Chale
Pyaar Hum Ko Bhi Hai
Pyaar Tum Ko Bhi Hai
To Yeh Kya Silsile Ho Gaye
Bewafa Hum Nahin
Bewafa Tum Nahin
To Kyon Itne Gile Ho Gaye
Chalte Chalte Kaise Yeh Faasle Ho Gaye
Kya Pata Kahan Hum Chale

big thanxs to priya for making this pick with sindoor...she made like 10 pics..I kept saying..sindoor bada hain..then chota hai then..finnally...thanxs priya aka loveangle_4ever ...THANXS PRIYA

part 126

kaisa yeh pyaar he thanxs to the missmanal123 for creating that VM

Tere bina zindagi se koyi, shikwa, to nahi, shikwa nahi, shikwa nahi, shikwa nahi
Tere bina zindagi bhi lekin, zindagi, to nahi, zindagi nahi, zindagi nahi, zindagi nahi
Tere bina zindagi se koyi, shikwa, to nahi ( geet)

Chaaha hai tujhko chaahoonga har dam
Marke bhi dil se ya pyaar na hoga kam
Teri yaad jo aati hai mere aansoo behte hain
Apna to milan hoga pal pal ye kehte hain
Kya ye zindagaani hai bas teri kahaani hai
Bas teri kahaani hai ye jo zindagaani hai

Chaaha hai tujhko chaahoonga har dam
Marke bhi dil se ya pyaar na hoga kam (maan)

yaar dekho mera kya haal kar diya he tumhare updates ne.

ab mujh se aur comments nahi hote need some break. so

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zubi123

@zubi123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#494

nice updated and i feel bad for maan ,plz mke geet to comeback and understand his feelings that wht he has done is for her only ( whn geet said "kun expectations jagaee dil me " so i want to say that agar woh unse kuch expect karti hai maan se to kehti kyun nhi ke woh kya chahti hai,kbhi kabhi baat karne se baat banjati hai.(hope u understand wht i wnt to say and one mre twists i can't resists it b'coz whn ever u make twist it is die hearted for me coz i can't seee maan and geet breakup and all. i love maneet forever so, jo bhi twist hai jldi jldi endup kardo plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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nisha

@nisha_bh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#495

muskan yaar.....i'm really confused....

wen i read d previous part,i thought its good 4 geet 2 hav a break 4m maan....so dat he could realize wat she's going thru....

but in dis part,u make me cry sooooo much 4 maan😭😭😭😭

now i'm feeling very bad......

after all,its maan,n v cant see him suffer like dis....

dard to hame hi hoti hai na.....😭

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Vijaylakshmi Singh

@Lakshmi86

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#496

Hi Muskaan,

Lovely update!

I am really feeling good that Geet have taken some decision against Maan.

This should really work out,

Being apart can make Geet realise that Maan did everything for her well being!

hai na!

Ab ek aur twist!😲

Love

Lakshmi

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Antares

@Antares

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#497

Amazingly written! That was so sad........awaiting your next twist.....lolz....do update soon.

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Sara

@charmed ones

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#498

Muski...U broke ma Heart...!!!😭😭😭😭😭😭

Both of them in Pain...!!!!!😭😭😭😭

Thanks 4 emotional update...!!!!

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hermoini

@hermoini

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#499

i always wanted Geet 2 make Maan realize she cnnt be taken fr granted.....luvd ur parts ...but another twist han...is the feutus still der ..

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bluedreamz953

@bluedreamz953

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#500

OMG...Like how Geet's finally saying something but this is only tearing them apart...I think it's high time you end this ff as it is only making me sad,to the extent that I'm indifferent...I really love your other ff,Madhoshi,not to mean that don't like this one..just that I think you should update that one more often..it seems more interesting....Anyways thanks for the fast updates and please update soon..love you,Di

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