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Posted: 14 years ago
hi muskan u ended at starting point of blast. really im so eager 2 read next part. Thanks 4 pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey!...Muski...!!!!😉

1 word to say...BRILLANT...!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

wonderful update...!!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Muski u stop at that point.....!!!!!😲 Y?...!!!😕
just waiting 4 her Friends reactions...lol....😆😆😆😆😆😆
Waiting 4 next shot...!!!!😃😃😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii muskan.... 😊
i've been a silent reader of ur ff for so long.. great ff 👏 .... good imagination and narration...
i just love ur work..🤗
eagerly waiting for ur next update...
love Anna.. ❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago

wanted to run away..maan realized geet getting restless..he looked at her
smriti kavya & pooja where standing next to ranbhir looking taking to ranbhir's mom
ranbhir called smriti..


part 125

smriti turned & smiled..kavya & pooja also turned..
soon their smile faded..into a frown..looking at geet dressed in red saree
sindoor & maan holding her ..
ranbhir introduced - yeh maan bhaiya aur geet bhabhi..
smriti & kavya looked at geet...she looked at them..
their eyes were filled with fury & disbelieve..geet eyes pleeded guilty
ranbhir - bhabhi has done her MBA from ur college..u might be knowing her
smriti looked at geet in anger and said - NO I don't know her at all
she looked away & said..there are so many in our college ..its not necessary
that we know each one of them...she turned &...pretended to meet other guests
pooja wispered to geet - tum kal unse mil ne waali thi na kya huwa
geet looked at maan..her eyes were mosit...
maan realized why she was apprehensive about coming to the dinner
maan told pooja..that she was not well..thats why she could'nt meet them
pooja - jiju..yeh loog bhaut gusse main hain
smriti pulled pooja..tu chal rahi hain kya..tera kya kaam hain yanha
geet - u carry on..othewise they will get angry with u too..


geet weeped and went into one of the rooms...maan followed in
maan put his hand around geet..she snapped her shoulder..
all this year u never attended a single party with me..why today?
why did u have to put ur hand around me...
they are the only friends I had ..now they too hate me...
maan still put his hand around her..she snapped shoulder again


geet - jab deehko aapni man marazi karthe hoo..maine kaha tha mujhe yanha nahi aana
maan hugged her & said tum ek bar to kehthi tumhe kyun nahi aana tha
geet - use se kya farak padtha
aap phir bhi wohi karthe ho jo aap ko aacha lagtha hain
kisi ki dil ki aap ko kya fikar
maan - mujhe kisi ke dil se kya lena dena...(geet looks at him in shock)
mujhe to sirf tumhari fikar hain..sirf tumhare dil ke..jo ki mera pass hain
geet - don't try to fool me with ur talks now...I have lost my only friends because of u
she pulls out his embrace & walks out..

maan calls pooja & plans to talk to smriti & kavya
maan meets up with them & explains that..she did'nt tell any one about their wedding
because they were waiting for her to finish her studies..otherwise it would have given
her too much of a media attention..he adds..it was him who requested her not to
tell any one..she wanted to tell them but he had taken a promise from her ..thats why she did'nt
he winked to pooja..she looked away..(sahi ja rahe ho jiju)...its all my mistake
if u want I will hold my ears & says sorry...
smriti & kavya - nahi nahi jiju..we understand
pooja - jiju..inhe bhi pata liya..
smriti & kavya came out looking for geet...but she was not around..
they went back to maan & said looks like geet had left..
maan called on her phone..she did'nt answere the call..
he rushed to the house...he shouted geet geeeeeet...
he went into the room..
maan - why did u leave from their
geet - I am fed up...with all this
maan moves closer geet I have spoken to smriti & kavya..
geet intrupts.. i am fed with u
she turns & leaves..maan notices she had her suitcase with her..
maan - geet tum kanha ja rahe hoo...
geet - I need break from all this...
maan eyes filled up & heart missed a beat
geet - I am going to shimla..wo krishna's principal wanted me to see the play
maan - I will take u
geet - I said i need a break from all this...mainly from u...
maan - main tumhare bina nahi rah paavoonga
geet - why is it always about u
maan - tum mujh se alagh to nahi ho..
geet - aab lagtha hain ki shayad hoon..yah..phir aacha hain ki alag rahoon
maan - tum nahi rah pavooghi
geet - nahi rah pavoonghi to aajoovnghi
maan hugs her from back & says..why are u hurting u self
geet - i don't want to stay & hurt u..
maan - u can never hurt me..
geet - but u can...
his phone rings ..geet smirked...
maan answeres the call & says...don't u ever call on this number...and cuts the call(shouts really loud) sasha was shocked & hurt...when maan turns back ..she was gone...

precap
geet in shimla

as promised yet another update...thanxs a lot for all the responses...finally my geet is reacting...all this twist was about getting that one wrong reaction..that could actually be justified😉 hamesha maan hi galthi karega kya...geet ka kya!!! big thanxs to priya for making this pick with sindoor...she made like 10 pics..I kept saying..sindoor bada hain..then chota hai then..finnally...thanxs priya aka loveangle_4ever ...THANXS PRIYA👏👏
all this delay in smriti & kavya knowing the truth was...because I wanted maan to manavofy them for Geet..so he did...but geet is still angry....about every thing!!!
plaese do comment..
love muskan my new FF ~madhoshi~
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome di loved it 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowwwww dat was awesummm!!!!
realli loved it
cnt wait for this new twist
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Posted: 14 years ago
pls do a something dont want her to lose the baby again and i love the update i cant wait next one when smriti know who she realy is geet thankssssss
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderfull.. haayee geet ko rookoo... kuch understanding paida kroo.. MAAN is incomplete widout Geet so as GEET..
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG! geet leaving? WHY? pooor maan! :((
don't goo geet! :(( MAAN NEEDS YOU!
updt sooon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow nice update.. geet off to shimla.. thts really bad... cant wait for the next twist.. do continue soon

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