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Posted: 14 years ago
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come on guys write some more OS For SR
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Originally posted by: ahussain12

come on guys write some more OS For SR

I understand I will update tonight, just working on it for now
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Part 6

Hmmm that was good Sid ..Ah! I can survive this....He opens his fridge looking for some milk 4 his coffee but he doesn't find any..so he walks into the staff room to check if there is any..

In the staff room, Ridhima is working on some files, and rest of the crew are gosipping. Dr modi is soooooooooo hott, he is fit ..I hope he is single, his lips are soo kissable..Ridhima who is listening to this conversation feels a sting of jelousy but has to hide it .Sid is really handsome and any women can fall for him, wonder if he has family meanwhile, he swings open the door the staff are stunned 2 find the young doc there..Ridhima is busy staring at him..Sid looks towards ridhima but then quickly looks away ...

Sid :sorry guies ..just wondering if u had any milk just wanted to make some coffee 4 miself...

Rids ( in her mind) : coffee sid ki favourite drink..( mini flash back of the instance when sid started drinking cappacino to impress Rids)

Rids: yes Dr Modi there is some in the fridge ..lemme get it for u

Sid( in a cold voice ): thanku Dr ridhima its very kind of u but don't bother I shall help myself

Rids is quite disappointed

Sid gets the milk and walk off, he is in his cabin checking cases..when the alarm on his phone rings ..1:30pm didn't realise how time went .I should go and get the file from Ridhima and then go on break. So he goes looking for ridhima..

She was in quite room working on a file..

He walks in they have brief eye lock but his feelings are pretty cold and blunt were as she has a light smile popping up , he looks away and then looks back

Sid: Sorry to disturb you, just wondering if u have got the case from morning sorted ..

Rids: yes ..here it is

Sid extends his hand to receive the file, when their fingers brush past each other..She felt a sudden shiver tingle across her body,he quickly withdraws his hand..

Sid ( without making eye contact): thanku

Sid was about to open the door to exit when Rids spoke

Rids: Sid
Rids: Sid
Sid in his mind 'I have longed to hear that years ago but not anymore,tum ajj kisi aur ki kuch hoo'u may be Dr Ridhima Malik or whateva, he comes out of his thoughts.Sid turns his body halfway giving the gesture that he is listening

Rids( continues ): how are you ?

Sid : very well thanku

Rids: sid kya hum

Sid cuts her half way through

Sid: I am here on a temporary mission, I will be done in less than a month so just bare with me until then.Jab thank hum yaha hai lets keep it strictly professional.past is past ..I have moved on hope u 2 have 'hmmm..I am only Dr modi 2 u nothing more than that..( sid has a hurt look on his face )..I hope u and '.hmm u are doing well 2.

Rids : but

Sid : there are just 2 many its and buts between, lets not get there..Sids phone rings it was another alarm..hmm'Anyway I have got to go, got to be somewhere..see you later..

Saying this Sid shuts the door leaving Rids speechless.

Rids:hmm kya karu Sid shayad Sid ki zindagi mie aj koyi aur hai..he said he has moved on ..Rids to goes to put her files away so that she could head off for her lunch..

Meanwhile, Sid is trying to call his driver in order to bring his car, finally the call gets through the driver responds saying the car is still in the garage and is unavailable till tomorrow morning.Sid heads towards the lift thinking he will get a cab to reach Rahul's school.On the lift he meets Tam who is also heading off for her break.

Tam: hey! Sid ..kaha ja rehe ho ?

Sid: kuch nahi lunch hai so bahar jana tha

Meanwhile they get out of the lift..Rids sees them walking out of the lift, rids straight behind him ,since he is to busy in his convo he doesn't turn around to realise she is there.Rids is heading towards cafeteria which is close to reception..sid-tam's convo is quite audible and Rids can now hear everything as she is straight behind them.

Tam: koyi zaroor appointment hai

Sid: ha kuch essa he hai

Tam: lekin tum javoge kaise tumhari gadi tho karab thin a

Sid: kuch nahi taxi ley loonga

Tam: y waste time looking for taxi, here take my car keys '

Sid..hey ! thanku that's very thoughtful of u ..lekin is ki koyi zarrorat nahi hai

Tam: esse kaise nahi hai ..lelo at least humari dosti ke karan

Sid: acha thik hai I will accept it..btw tumhara office kaha hai ,muje keys bhi tho lotana hai

Tam: kuch nahi shayam ko milenge thoo thab de dena

Sid: cools! Vaise tum kaha ja rehi ho

Tam: cafeteria , khana khane

Sid: rite ..hum vaha bhi pahunch gaye..acha mai chalta hu 'see you in the evening

Sid walks past the receptionthen thinks to thank Tamana again.He turns around to look for Tammy but also finds Rids behind her 'seeing rids is gazing @ her stops him stops him but tam interrupts

Tam: kya hai ?

Sid : kuch nahi bus thanku

Tam: tum bhi na Sid, shyam ko milte hai

Sid waves back'Rids who was listening 2 their convo and watching all this drumstick ..she wonder who this girl with sid is and how come they have such a high comfort level'.Rids goes into the cafeteria and is busy munching her food her mind is also pre-occupied with thoughts when she get joined by a friend, Rithu

Rithu: tum tikh ho

Rids: ha bus

Rithu: are u sure

Rids: ha

Rithu: anyway meet my friend Tammana( saying this she pulls tam from behind ), we have known each other 4 a while aj socha tumhe bhi introduce karwalo..

Rids:hey! Tammana nice meeting u

This was the girl sid was talking 2, shayad esse he kuch patha chele

The girls finish their lunch and share more info about each other

Meanwhile, Sid goes to pick up Rahul, who introduces his dad to all his friends especially Simran.Sid is in a hurry so he asks Rahul to leave with him quickly so that he can get back to work..

Rahul who has been dropped home is quite happy

Rahul: dadi pata hai ajj mere sare dost mere papa se mile voh bahut kush hai

Rahul's grandparents are quite happy to see this..

Ridima saw less of Sid in the afternoon he was in the ward twice but it was a quick visit and he left. It was 4:30pm and his shift was coming to end. Tam will be waiting for me. So in a hurry sid grabs his bag and jacket and runs into the lift, he presses on a button and glances up to find Ridhima ..He looks away and There is an awkward silenced again but this time Ridhima makes up her mind to speak but by the time she opens her mouth the doors to the lift opens and Sid walks away. He finds tam on the reception and they walk to the parking. They are followed by Ridhima who is also walking to her car 'Rids gets in to the car and stares @ them..kahi yeh sid ki wife thoo nahi hai ..yah yeh log koyi relationship..well but yeh log thoo itne close bhi nahi hai ki mai esa keh saku..hmmm..y do I care anyway aur vaise bhi no matter how much I care muje nahi lagtha ki Sid will ever care..

Sid and Tam are outside the car

Sid: mai drive karu ?

Tam : sure lekin tumhe rasta tho nahi pata

Sid: bus tum batha dena,

Tam: acha on the way meri beti ko bhi pick karma hai

Sid: oo tumhari beti bhi hai cool..acha lets goo

Tam: sure

Tam gives Sid directions to her house and tells her, they pick her daughter up on the way ,she also invites him to her house for coffee..Finally they reach, he house is set on a very quite senic back drop, sid enjoys the view and walks into the house

Tam: sid come in

Sid :acha tum ne abhi takh bataya nahi ki tumhara pati voh kyat ha uska name..aniketh kya kar reha hai

Tam: andhar avo tumhe kudh pata chelega

Sid enters the house , Tam switches on the lights,Sid is shocked to see Aniketh's picture hung to the wall with a garland on

Tam: tum beythoo main abhi change karke ayi, Tina beta ap bhi change kar lo..

Tina: okay mummy

Sid: mai bhi na, tum se mila lekin tumhari beti se bath nahi ki

Tam: its okay je bhar ke bath kar lena after she changes

Tina and Tam quickly changes and head downstairs to see sid, who is strolling around.

Tam: coffee ya tea ?

Sid: coffee

Tam goes into the kitchen makes some coffee meanwhile sid speaks to tina

Tina and sid clicks well.Sid is really good with kids..

After some time tam comes out with coffee,acha bahar baiten she says

Sid: sure

Tam: aur suna 7 saal thoo kya kar rehe theee

Sid: bus long story

Tam: tho sunao long story I am ready

Sid narrates the entire events that happened, he tells Tam that he is divorced but he lies to her that he divorced his wife because they were just not made for each other and how after divorce he studied in the Caribbean, England and worked in the best hospitals around the world like and also did some volunteering in Afghanistan and Africa aur abh London mie great oldmand street hospital mie kam karta hu. Pehle Zindagi samalna chata that lekin zindagi samalthe samalthe zindagi se hi door ho gaya ( tam quite didn't understand his statement but what he meant was dreaming of a good life with Ridhimma his life took him away from life itself )..aj sirf mai aur mera kame

Tam : rite ! tho abe samji how sid became Dr Sidhant , well seems like he is been trained in the best and the worst which has made him the best'

Sid: vaise meri ex-wife( those words come out very slowly,meri x) ka usme hath hai yeh sabb vahi se shuru huva hai( although Ridhima betrayed Sid, he still had respect for her in certain areas) it was her who taught me to get over you, shayad pyar ka matlab bhi ussi se sikha thaaaa'isiliye tumhe main obsession mane kar bhool paya thaa..varna tumhare jane ke bad main bhi ek 'majnoo' ban jatha ..u know when we see people suffering from greater pains in life, greater as in greater than our pains we forget our pains and learn to move ahead aur isi safar mai bahut kuch seekh jathe hai ..both good and bad stuff( he says the last lines with a bit of a pain)

Tam: bahut yar karthe the na tum usse se

Sid : chodo tamma yeh sab purani bathein hai aur mera pyar karna ya na karna iss sernario mie mayine nahi rekhtha '

Tam :bhool paye ho usse?

Sid: pehle pehle bahut mushkil hoti thiii fir kame meri zindagi bane gayi aur tabhi se shayad bhool gaya hoo..aur vaise bhi ajj voh MRS whatever else bane gayi hogi aur mera koyi haqt nahi banta kisi aur ki biwi par..voh mera past hai aur kisi aur ka present .hmmm( on a sad note looks away)'lagtha hai mere naseeb main esse hi ladkiyan likhi hai jo mujse pyar nahi karna chahti..lol

Tam : acha tum ne fir se kisi relationship ke bare mie socha

Sid: hmmm nahi kabhi waqt he nahi mila uar fir kabhi sochna bhi nahi chaha..mai aur meri tanhayi kafi hai..

Tam: yeh bathao ..tum London mie kam karte ho thoo yahan kaise

Sid: yaha temporary ho ek mahine ke liye fir chala javunga..kuch adhoore kame poore karne hai..anyway bahut hua mere bare mie tum bathao ..sorry if u don't mind me asking u ..aniketh umm voh photo

Tam understands and reponds

T: aniketh, ki death ho gayi 3 sal pehle Canada mie ,uske badh mie aur tina yaha aya gaye, yeh jaga achi hai zakamo ko bhulane ke liye..

Sid: shayad'kya tume dosari shadhi ke bare mie nahi soocha ?

Tam : well nahi aje meri zindagi mie tina hai aur I have to look after her , uska future that's all I have in mind

Sid: fair enough

Tam: vaise tum kaha rehthe ho

Sid: apne papa mummy ke sath vo log bhi retirement ked a yaha settle ho gaye .unka ghar yaha se 20mins ki doori par hai..filhal vaha rook reha hu..lekin mai ne apne rehne ke liye hospital ke pas he ek ghar kareedh liya hai , I should be moving in there soon..

Tam: okay..coool

They talk about many other things and the evening just passes away

Sid: oh! No 6:30 ho chukka hai maa intezar kar rehi hogi ..muje jana hai

Sid thank tam for her hospitality and the quick catch up then bids good bye and sets off home in a cab.Later that night Sid spends some good time with his son and sets him away to sleep.He then sits on his chair and thinks about the events that occurred , including meeting ridhima and tam.He then opens a med book 2 distract himself..

Edited by abhinickiluv - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow......fantastic update :) Please more SR convo 😆😆

Great going dear.................keep it up👍🏼

I can't wait for your next update😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I love the jealousy part of Riddhima! finaly something we dnt gt to see very often in the serial!

EDIT: oh did i say very often well the word is never!
Edited by Dsntmatter - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
fantastic dear gr8 job👏update. do continue ASAP. i m eagerly waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
Fantastic updates!🤗
Loved every single one of them.. plz continue soon and can you plz PM me when you update? Would really appreciate it..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Stef,😊
Absolutely Emotional & Amazing.👏👏👏
Siddhima's Convo & Just Like DMG,They Never Listen to Each Other & Assume a Lot of Things.
Riddhima Really She Can't Say It But She is Incomplete Without Her Cute Doctor.
Feels Sad for Tammanna Hubby Aniket.
Hope to See More Sddhima Now & Your Story Progression Too.
Your Writing Skills Are Just Amazing.👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: romiosugar

wow......fantastic update :) Please more SR convo 😆😆

Great going dear.................keep it up👍🏼

I can't wait for your next update😍

thanks love
lol I am having issues , my hindi ain't that great soo thats y SR convo's are a bit short ...thanks love
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dsntmatter

I love the jealousy part of Riddhima! finaly something we dnt gt to see very often in the serial!

EDIT: oh did i say very often well the word is never!

lol yes we don't get 2 see much of much of such things but my ff will offer plenty of such oppertunities

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