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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 4

Them 3 have a casual talk when sanjeev's 4yr old son makes entry he dashes into sid's lap and plays with him..they 2 spend few cute moments together .So then how was ur trip 2 india asks Sanjeev

SID explains the entire trails of events.tumhe atelast ridhima se bath karni chahiye thii says apna

Sid : bath karke kya kartha vaise bhi voh aj kisi aur ki..jo sakham main apne andhar dha diye unhe taza nahi karma chahta

Sapna: sid I think u should move on in ur life 2 ..get married settle down, have a kid

Sid : hmm kid..I have Rahul

Sapna: but u need some one thought ..apkhir kab thank esse bhagh the rehoge

Sid: patha nahi kab thak'I don't think ki muje ab fir se pyar ho sakta hai..aur jaha tak rahi shadhi ki bath ..pya ke bagair kya shadi ..ek bar voh galti kar chukka hu fir se karnana nahi chahta'

Sapna: hmm I guess u should take some chances in life..

Sid: aur nahi I had enough and it has taken me a long time 2 get over things to fight those pains therefore I can't risk again

Sapna: btw Neeta called

Sid: that girl is mad, she wants me to meet her dad

Sapna: she loves u budu

Sid: nah she doesn't love me, she is obsessed with me a kind of obsession jo uske age ke kisi ko bhi ho jata hai ..

Sanjeev: fir bhi yarr , usse consider karne mie kya harz hai, she is pretty ..aur doc bh hai

Sid: yeh tum log bhi maa ki tarah ka shadi .love laga rakha hai maine kaha na I DON'T WANNA take more chances, rite now I only wanna concentrate on my son amd my career..

Sanjeev: jaise tumhari marzi hum kuch nahi karenge

Sid: yarr tum log tho bura mane gaye..i know u guies only want good 4 me, but kya karu I cannot nurse another broken heart, zindagi mie jab jine ke koyi reasons nahi rehe theee tab god ne muje Rahul diya ..abh bus usse dekhna hai ..love, shadhi I am 2 old for it .

Sapna : we understand yarrr( smiles)

Sid: listen maa called. She wants me 2 come there..even I was thinking I should go been a while'I heard ki vaha pe local hospital mie head of paediatrics ki vacancy it's a temporary post so I was thinking y not take few months off and work there'I would get some leave to do volunteering

Sanjeev: good idea..spend some time wid ur family especially rahul may then kya pata u neva know shayad fir se zindagi chal pade

Sid : fine lets give it a go I speak 2 phil tomorrow itself..btw don't feel bad about me rejecting neeta ..kya karu pyar ke esse basic ussol mujse zayda acha kaun samaj saktha hai

Rest of the evening passed , days passed few weeks latter Sid got his leave application approved ..he called his mum and informed her about his coming..everyone was happy so was rahul..Meanwhile Ridhima had taken up her new post in shimla and was quite enjoying her work

The day had arrived for sid to leave for India.He wasn't excited at all apart from meeting Rahul there was nothing else for him to look forward to.Plus the thought of India had always bought bad memories into his head.Sid's filght landed in Delhi his connecting flight to delhi was soon, he boarded the flight and scanned through his appointment letter for his temporary job.Fine I have good few days before I start with my new job.

On the other side Ridhima to was fitting well in Shimla she was happy because she was close to her Anjali dee and her little niece. One day Rids went to pick her niece's Simran, from school, as she wanted to come home for the weekend.Her niece stays in the school boarding through out the week and heads home only for some weekends and other holidays, just like other kids in the school.Simran usually narrates the enitre events that happens in her school to Rids,on this particular afternoon Simran keeps talking about her newly found friend Rahul who apparently is well behaved and a star of the class..

Sid finally arrives in Shimla at the airport, he is received by his family.Sid is quite happy to see his Rahul , his mum and dad..They make their way hope..Few days passes away and it's the night before he joins his new job at St Mary's hospital Shimla.Sid has put Rahul to bed and is off to his room to read through some books.His mum and dad enters

Mum : beta me and ur dad wanted to speak to you about something

Sid : yh mum go on I am listening

Dad: hmm well sid kab thank tum is tarah akele rehoge apni zindagi mie

Sid: akela kaha hu app, maa aur Rahul thoo hai

Mum: par fir bhi u need some one, Ridima ke badhe ''.

Sid stares at her , his mum stops speaking.Sid was hearing her name after a long tim

Sid: mum and dad please, lets not talk about it,Marriage, love is not for me and that's been proved ..and if u still wana talk about this please don't because I don't wanna this is one of the reasons y I don't like coming india because u would bring this age old topic.I know its been 6yrs , I have fought with my emotions 4 a long time

And please I don't wanna try anything new.Also I have got Rahul in my life I don't think any women will accept him, he will just be treated as another burded so please I only want to concentrate on him and my career

Mum: U are a very successful doctor now, so career is sorted but not ur life

Sid: life who meri kaha rehi '(with disappointment )

Mum: theek hai jaise tumhari marzi

Saying this his mum walks off

His dad walks to him and lays his hand on his shoulders

Dad: beta I am talking from experience life is too long and u always need a partner 2 spend life with.

Sid: I know dad but I have bad experience

Dad; move on beta ..aindagi mie bad experiences kea ne ka matalab yeh nahi hai kit tumhari zindagi rukh jathi hai ,u get over them and continue with life. Tum ne shadhi ki lekin who tumhara faisla tha tumne na muje aur na he tumhari maa ko inform karma samja aur jab crisis aya thoo thabhi use akele dothe rehe..give it a good thought ..u r still young ..jaha tak rahi rahul ki bath we will find a girl who suits both u and rahul so down't worry about that

Sid:hmmm

Dad: its ur first day tomorrow I won't keep u long..have a gd nyt but do think about what I said

Sid: gd nyt dad..

Next day morning sid is ready it's a Monday morning, mum I will drop Rahul at school. Sid is dressed in a smartly tailored blue suit which shows off his well built body ..he postions his tie and calls for Rahul..Both Rahul and Sid ge into the car as driver steers off..

Sid: Rahul do u want me to pick u up in the evening

R: yesss dad, as u r back I don't wanna stay in the boarding ..I wanna stay with u also I can introduce my friends 2 u

Sid: okay beta as u wish, I only finish at 5 but I will take my break around the time as u finish so that I can pick u up..

R: that's gd dad, but dad don't bother doing that on daily basis ur son understands u, I just want 2 u 2 meet mi frnds 2dai so that they can also see how cool my dady is

Sid : okies son..hi5 on that

The car reaches at the school, sid says good bye 2 his son and is on his way to his hospital, when suddenly his car breaks down in the road.

Sid is now waiting on the road 4 a lift ..dam it is ghadi ko bhi aj he karab hina tha he says to himself '

Luckily after few minutes a car passes by he waves and it stops past him: The door opens and a familiar figure comes out ..

Right guies after this will come the much awaited si& rids encounter after years
Edited by abhinickiluv - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
WOW.....beautiful FF :)) I loved every bit of it and am eagerly waiting for your update!!!

I am sure you will not disappoint us!! so I am hoping that good and happy days are on the way....... 😍

Keep it up!!!


Edit: i just noticed there are more parts in pg 2 and 3, so will be commenting back again 😳
Edited by romiosugar - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
Finally finished reading all the parts......and wow, part 4 is awesome as well and cannot wait for your next update!!! Finally, Siddhima are meeting 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
Stef,😃
Absolutely Fablicious.
I Read All the Parts & Enjoyed Them.
Btw Is Rahul a Adopted Child?😲I Did'nt Got Any Clue here.
Anyways,
Looking In Anticipation For Siddhima's Encounter After 6 Years.
It's Riddhima's Niece Naa (Simran) Who Has Got God Along with Rahul.You Have Mistakenly Mentioned Sid's Niece I Think.Just Re-Check It.
Update Soon & I Love This FF......
Well Nice Thinking Stef From You That Siddhima will Meet alone coz If Rahul & Simran will be There,Perhaps Siddhima will Misunderstood themselves & Think That Both Rahul & Simran are each Other's Children Respectively.
At Some Point Of Time,You are Gonna Bring This As I Can Get From My Sixth Sense.
Just Lovely FF.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
i read al the part plz continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Man! Finally the face off! cnt wait! btw i like the whole Rahul Simran thing u have started! Please update soon I wanna read all the reactions (Sid and Ridz).
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Posted: 14 years ago
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errr guies my last update was bit messed up I am trying to get some pictures 2 get along...so just wait till tonight and things will be sorted

Edited by abhinickiluv - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice update wud love to read wht happens next! btw my favourite part in this update ws when Riddhima rest her head against the door after seeing Sid, tht scene ws so beautifully expressed!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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come on plz continue with the OS
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 5

Sid: tammana ! tum

Tam: Tum! Tum yaha kaise

Sid: hmm meri bath chodo tum yaha kaise

Tam: well ! mai abe yaha settled hum ..tum batao ?

Sid: well abhi muje ek lift chahiye

Tam: rite get in.where are u off 2

Sid : well basically I am off to st mary's hospital vaha a raj mera pehla din hai..aur delho meri ghadi karab ho gayi and I hate to be late

Tam: St mary's hospital ? konse ward mie ? lol tum kafi badal chuke ho ' u hate to be late' main jis sid ko janti ti who kabhi essa nahi thaa..btw kafi smart lag rehe ho

Sid: children's ward mie..I am the new consultant there

Tam: oo! Cool mie bhi vahi kam karthi hu..I am the Cardiologist there

Sid: cool! ( sid was looking out of the window) this place is dam pretty

Tam: loo tumhe itne salo ke badh mili hu aur tum ho ki iss jagah ki tariff karne mie lage..btwnaye ho ? ithne saal kaha the ? shadhi vadhi kee ki nahi ? omg! Mai bhi na kitne sawal karne lagi ..loo hospital bhi aa gaya

Sid: thanku so much I am meant to take charge in less than 10mins'sorry I am in a rush'ek kame karthe hai aajj kame ke bad milthe hai..what time do u finish ?

Tam : I finish at 5

Sid : cool ..wait for me at the reception at 5 I finish 5 2 we can catch up then

Thanku so much 4 the lift

Tam: no problem sid ..lemme go and park the car cya in the evening

Sid: see ya

Sid goes to the reception and informs the lady about his purpose, the lady makes relevant phone calls and asks him to take a seat while someone is coming to get him..

Meanwhile, in children's ward Ridhima walks out of the staff room with the lab coat on, she along with other docs make her way to the conference room where they were to meet the new consultant'The doctors and nurses were gossiping,

Lady: maine suna hai ki yeh naya boss, is very young he is only 26

Another doctor (lizzie ): no way ithna yound aur ithna qualified..

Reeta (another doc) aarently he has studied in best universities around the world and was working London before coming here..na jane yah kyun aya hai

Nurse: whatever it is he is young..I hope he is hot and single not a nerd..

Rids smiles at the conversation..

Another nurse : he is only for a month fir chala jayega'abhi phone aya that ki who neeche reception mie a gaya hai Max use lene neeche gaya hai ..

Max walks to Sid ..Hi Dr Max u can call me Max..

Sid : nice to meet u I am Dr Modi ..U can call me Siddhant..

Sid is lead into the corridors leading to the lift, he looks around,checking out the unfamiliar layout,the strange faces and the different uniforms.Acouple of days and I will be a part of this 2, last time when I worked in an Indian hospital I was an intern this time a head of the team, the consultant, the one they'd all look to..

This is what I have worked for and so many years of hard work just seem to have paid off 😊

Max and Sid make conversations as they make their way to the conference room.Max shows him around, he leads him to the conference room where everyone is waiting to meet their new head'.

Sid walks in 'a tall and lean,blue 'suited , his jacket opens to reveal a perfectly laundered linen shirt beneath it .His features were sculped, his hair crisp and black as jet'

A NURSE IN A LOW VOICE, HE IS SOO HOT!!

Ridhima looks up Sid!, she is completely shocked, their eyes meet and they exchange glances at each other for few minutes.

Sid 2 is shocked but gets control over himself. This is one day I have worked hard for all these years of isolation was get over this women and I indeed have, so let me be a strong man..

Ridhima who is in a shock has a trail of memories floating in her mind'

Sid comes our of his thoughts

Sid: morning ! team I am Dr Sidhant Modi and I am your new boss for the time being, hope u guies will enjoy working with me ..Max introduces everyone name by name and when it comes to Ridhima, he says she is the second in our department so in ur absence she is the one in charge

Sid tries to smile but fails , he says a hi in a very low voice ans skips to the next person..

( I said in my intro that sid wears glasses but its not there in the picture please ignore that, I just wanted to show the expressions )

Right after the intro and the mini meeting Sid is shown his cabin and he is left there on his own .

He closes the door and breathes a sign of relief , he takes his jacket off, puts his glasses on the table and rubs his forehead'

Argggg! U r an idiot , it can't be her,he told himself-and anyway she's married ..mannnnnn.arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!

Man!! What's this Ridhimma is my new collegue'.rite! dude get ur flipping head right she is ur college nothing else, you have always been a very professional doc so lets get that back..hmm breath in breath out ..its all fine if I get through today I will get through everyday ..

On the other hand Ridhima had her own thought process going:

All her colleagues walked out of the room so did she, she went into the coffee room, which thankfully was empty she closed the door and rested her head against the door..Her heart was still wasn't listening, it was thrashing away in her chest, threatening to choke her.She dragged in much 'needed lungful of air ,popped herself back on her feet and prayed for much needed self-control.She calmed herself claimed her stethoscope and headed out. she closed her eyes briefly and when she opened them he was walking from the other end with Max. He was very composed, quite cold as if her presence didn't make a difference to her'.Max stopped seeing ridhima

Max: hey! Dr Ridhima, Dr modi is on ward rounds I was wondering if you could show him around

Dr Ridhima: yh sure she tries 2 smile

Max walks away leaving Sid and rids together'

The both feel awkward unable to get the right words..sid speaks

Sid: err..umm right whats my first case

Rids: follow me and I will take you..

It takes them 3 hours to finish ward rounds, they both were concentrating on their patients so there was nothing much talking going on..However, the last case was something different

Sid: y hasn't been this kid refered 4 surgery yet ?( he asks in a stern voice)

Rids : we just are waiting 2 hear from the pathologist and then the case should be transferred.

Sid : okay how long has it been since u have been waiting

Rids: few days
Sid: few days as in? how many accurately ?

Rids: 3days

Sid: thanku, u know what if u wait any longer u r aware that this kid can even loose his life ..Dr Ridhima I want this case to be sorted by lunch today

Rids : But Sid

Sid : Dr Modi (in a very stern voice)

Rids: sorry doctor Modi..( in a disappointed tone ) I will fix this case by today..

Sid : thankyou

Saying this he walks away from the ward heading towards his cabin'Rids is left staring at Sid until he vanishes from her vision..

next part comin soon
Edited by abhinickiluv - 14 years ago

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