Dead Emotions An AR FF Chap2- Pg11 8th Novem 2010 - Page 9

soooooooo sweeeeeeet message to ur friend awwwwwwww

Awesome update
loved it
can't wait for da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

awesome part bt y so small n late..............neways thnx fr d pm n cont soon

My Little author ,

Firstly apologizing for being haddi as u stopped updating the FF in my absence & also for late response cholly*kan-pakering* u know m shoo alsi 🤣

This is surely my favorite FF out of all u make..even others do,but this surely takes best place & the first

I'm sure I won't be able to do justice to u r FF with my comments but I'll try my best to it !! Coming to FF – well I appreciate ridzi & muski for moving in the house with heavy heart 🤣 teasing each other 🤣 I really love these kind of nokjhok's (similar to wot we do 🤣 the unique nature of u r creativity is they way u portrait the bubbly'ness' of ridzi & muski..I'm sure none of the writer here can do that ! I personally love the way u write u r FF ! ….ridzi & muski are kind of friends that laughs when they fall then you trip each other again & the interaction between them is just hilarious … I can imagine it going between me & u 🤣That was very well written Grace . I am loving each and every character in this ghost full story of yours, Rahul especially He seems such a sweetheart ! & the conversation between rahul , ridzi & muski ahh !! best part of this chapter . I loved it when he said "jhaddaloo & curly balloon wali" ghosh u r too much niya🤣 n calling her churail 🤣… I love the u r own light hearted scenes of naughtiness !!!! adorable & teasing nature of muski & naughty twinkle is her eyes when she said ridzi luk down ..there something haha !! n stups ridzi really got scared 🤣 ..This FF makes me always feel & realize that's its going on in real life nothing as just a fanatic ..Hats off to u r writing style very clear with lots of emotions. & The way you structured sentences……. I love the bonding between ridzi & muski ..n please now enough of ridzi & muski WANT GHOST !!! u know wot u added VOICE at the time of rahul's entry which made me think about that ghost for 2 long minutes & then I was scattered it wasn't ghost but u r writing skill 🤣 jis tarah se entry mari rahul ki , wait*running behind u * . U know I'm talking much about ridzi & muski friendship becoz its more captivating..I liked the way you planned out everything. & u don't test my patience ..I WANT GHOST MATLAB GHOST ..n that too bery bery soon8twisting muh*& yeah even waiting for love to blossom between rahul & muski ..n ghosh he is already living in bhoot bunglow in 1st room aahh !! bechara

ON THE WHOLE A SPECTACULAR CHAPTER . I ENJOYED READING IT. I SERIOUSLY HAD SMILE THROUGHT

Waiting for the next *hugs*

N thankuu shoo much for sucha beautiful dedication

hey pari this is also an interesting ff yaar

Hey Pari..

Loved your FF.. I really wanna know who is the ghost is.. 😉..

Pls add me to your PM list .. Update soon...

Originally posted by: shonagudia

Hey Pari..

Loved your FF.. I really wanna know who is the ghost is.. 😉..

Pls add me to your PM list .. Update soon...