Dead Emotions An AR FF Chap2- Pg11 8th Novem 2010 - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Me 2! I need of it..nahi toh mein mar jaungi 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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^^ chup..!!! 😆 kar doongi kal pakka.!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow total diff concept. can't wait for more. update soon and pm me plz. btw i wonder why have u called this ff dead emotions? hmm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hii Guys...!

M sorry i cudnt update coz of my exams nd studies..!! This one is really gonna be a short part as i dunt hve time to write long ones..! and i m updating coz of two torcherers😆😆 i guess they knw who its.. !! lol..! Ok so now here is the part its short and so plz bear..! and i wont be updating until my exams..!!

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Edited by ..NiyaPari.. - 14 years ago
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Chapter-2 : Entry Into The Bhoot Mansion

Ridzi: Muskaan Soch le agar tujhe dar lag raha hai to we still have time we can go back..!

Muskaan: Chup Darpok.!

Ridzi: Mein darpok nahi hoon.. Ok to chalo andar chalte hai hum log ok.?

Muskaan- Thts like my darpok Ridzi LOL..!

Ridzi: Chale ya phir yahiin baat karte rahe,,?

Muskaan: Haan Chal BTW yeh neeche tere pair ke neeche kya hai...?

Ridzi: Aaaaaaa...

Muskaan: Kuch nahi hai itne mein hi dar gayi Miss Darpok

Ridzi: Mein tujhe chodne waali nahi hoon u stupid..!! *and runs behind muskaan*

Muskaan: Pakad ke to dikha mujhe..!!

Ridzi: Accha ab dekh Miss Riddhima Gupta ka kamal..!

Muskaan: hahah bas baatein karna jaanti hai tu.!

Ridzi: Aur tu rukh tu to aaj gayi

Muskaan- Ridzi Rukh hum baad mein ladte hai pehle just look at the door Ewww Itna ganda.. It will take ages to even clean this door..!

Ridzi: Eww itna ganda hai *Acchoo*

Muskaan: Lol yahaan bhi Achhoo Lol...!

Ridzi: Muski Chup har waqt mazaak theek nahi hota and andar chal ke dekhte hai hum log ke andar ka condition kya hai..!!

Muskaan: Ok.! Chalo first u..!

Ridzi: *Murmers* Kehti hai ke dar nahi lagta par duniya ki sabse badi darpok hai Miss Muskaan Chadda isliye to mujhe bhej diya pehle

Muskaan: Tune kuch kaha kya..?

Ridzi: tere hote hue mein boloon meri itni himat nopes.!

Muskaan: Are wah tu to bahut samajhdar hai yaar.......

Ridzi: uff iska bak bak pata nahi kab khatam hoga..!

Are yaar yahaan itna dust hai lemme open the door and have a look ke andar aur kitni safai karni padegi.. Arghh Safai I hate it the most.. Thats the most horrible thing..! and Safai se accha kachde mein betho.. Lemme open the door now..

Swissss...... Swisssss....

Oh God Yeh Hawa bhi Y the hell did it start blowing thts the only thing left now..! All the Dust are now... here and there uff we have to get inside b4 it starts raining..!

Ridzi: Muskaan get inside fast *And Pushes the door*

Muskaan and Ridzi stare at the house with their mouth open...!

Ridzi: Muskaan Hum log i mean hum log....

Muski: I knw hum log sahi pate par to aaye hai na...?

Ridzi: I knw itna bada ghar..?

Muski: I knw lagta tp yeh kisi filmstar ka ghar hai yaar..!

Ridzi: BTW tune rent kitna diya hai..?

Muski: 2000..

Ridzi: Chal to phir hum galat pate par aaye hai lets turn back to aunt's house..!

Muski: Oye rukh tu yahiin rukh i will go around the house and find agar koi ho to lemme verify k..?

Ridzi: Haan ok par jaldi aaja..!

Muski: Haan pakka jaldi aa jaongi..!

Ridzi: Ok..!

Yeh to chali gayi ab mein darwaze par kyun khadi hoon lemme go around the house ek baar and have a look yeh ghar hamara nahi hai par i can hve a look once..! Yeh Ghar kitna accha hai par yeh pata nahi haan darwaaze se to bhoot bunglow lag raha tha par ab andar se i guess ke yeh ek world's best ghar lag raha hai wow jo bhi yahaan rehta hoga they r really lucky ke itne bade ghar mein rehte honge and mein to aise ghar ke baare mein sirf sapne mein soch sakti hoon..Yhaan 5 kamre hai and har kamre mein jaise kuch raaz chupa ho and jaise kuch kehna cha raha ho..!

Voice:Exactly Koi to hai jo uske jaise sochta hai..!

Ridzi: Excuse-Me..

Voice: Oh Hi. I m Rahul.. Well is Bunglow ke owner ka best friend..!

Ridzi: Ohk Hi.. I m Riddhima.. Riddhimz Gupta.. Well hum log koi flat dekhne aaye the par i guess meri friend galat pate par le aayi hume..!

Rahul: Oh tumhari dost woh jagdalo curly baloon waali to nahi..?

Ridzi: To aap muskaan se mil chuke..? I m soo sorry i hope ke she didnt start a fight with u..!

Rahul: Lol Haan almost..!

Ridzi: Lol and BTW aap kiski baat kar rahe the..? ke koi..?

Rahul: Woh is bunglow mein jo rehta tha uski soch..?

Ridzi: Oh.. Woh ab kahaan hai..?

Rahul: Woh...

Muskaan: Oye Tu yahaan hai mein bahaar itni der dhoond rahi thi..!!

Rahul: OMG Koi bachao mujhe is chudail se..!

Ridzi: Muskaan tu chod na ise.! anyways is this the bunglow..!

Muskaan: Haan stupid we are in the right place..!

Rahul: Ok so u guys can live here and ya i forgot to tell mein bhi yahiin rehta hoon u have 5 rooms i live here downstairs in the room 1 and Guys plz kabhi bhi bhool kar bhi aakhri room mein mat chale jaana..!

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Edited by ..NiyaPari.. - 14 years ago
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Special Messages

Oops sorry no msgs for this time gotta upd the other one too..!
And anyways this one is dedicated to CB, SmartyPants 🤣 , Pari, Di, LoDu..!❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome..
wow so dorona part........lol..
bhootni kya mast upd thi...
loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
wowww... a bhootiya ff 🤣 amazing
keep pmming mee
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
awesome loved it well done good on ya !!!!😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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woowww amazing update...

its getting more n more excited...

cant wait for the next ud...

update soon..

thnx for the pm........

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