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Water

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Posted: 14 years ago

#301

Please update 😳😳😳

Cannot wait any longer.

Please

Update

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maansi007

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Posted: 14 years ago

#302

hey i just came a cross with ur ff n i just luved it could u plzzz add me to ur pm list nd update soon

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Jiwan

@Jiwan08

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Posted: 14 years ago

#303

Your FF is sooo good and very different. I love the plot and can't wait to find out more about Maan's past. Also loving the increasing closeness between Maan and Geet.

I'm sending you a buddy request, please add me to your PM list.

Jiwan

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Shreya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1
amazing part
the last line were maan says shes mine was the best i really liked the way u are potraying maaneets relationship.

awww thanks!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Nanthini9
loved the update! maan is awesome!

thankyouuu!

Originally posted by: sweet coco
thanks a bunch shreya!!! love the end and how he says "she's mine"...so cute!! Love maan!!! Thanks a bunch babe...looking forward to the next part desperately...i hope you update quickly!!!!!

thanks!!!! i tried to updated throughout the week, but i couldnt get through a good enough part to post 😔 but i think i finally have something somewhat worthy of being posted now lol 😆

Shreya

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Shreya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#305

Originally posted by: -shamima-
Woop way to go maan she is yours and ergh dr Rahul what a guy I hope next time maan punches him lool anywho great update and continue soon 😊

haha thanks!!

Originally posted by: pushpi
Ahhhh wow!!That was fantastic....short but so full of impact. I hope your future updates are longer and just as awesome :-D

Cant wait to read more...

Pushpi

thanks!!!!! yep, imma try to make some longer updates, but i can't really promise anything 😔

Originally posted by: shona2010
awesome update
i totally loved the last line maan said
thanks for the pm

you're welcome! and thankyouuu!!!!!

Originally posted by: liv2laugh
Maan to Rahul "She is MINE MINE MINE" (like the sea gulls in Finding Nemo 😉) - Ah terretorial aren't we 😉

Awesome update 👏 👏 👏

Hey I do not know your name. Is it Shreya? 😃

I love how you brought out Geet's first day at work and all the frustrations that go along with it. 😃

Loved how Maan sensed her discomfort and rose to the occasion. 😃.....Ahh prince charming to the rescue.

Can't wait to read more.
Jhan

haha thanks so much Jhan!!! glad you like it!!!!

lol yes, maan is a bit territorial 😛

ooh and yepp, im Shreya

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Shreya

@shrezzj

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Posted: 14 years ago

#306

Originally posted by: shalini_s
'She's mine'... amazing.. waiting for more..

thankyouuu!!

Originally posted by: bluedreamz953
OMG!!!!!
Protective MSK...Hayye!
Loved it when he said,''She's mine!''
There were so mant strong emotions trapped in those 2 words.
Thanks a lot yaar
Please update soon

awww thanks so much!!

Originally posted by: Innocent02
aaww.......such a lovely update.
All the best for ur midterm exams 😉

thanks!! now that my midterms are almost over, i'd rather not think about how i did on them lol 😆

Originally posted by: aarmanshilpa
Hey,

I started reading your FF today. It is amazing. So different from others.😃

The character name Arjun - did you get inspired from Kitani Mohabbat Hai?

N Vicky is related to the car accident that Arjun was in right? Since Vicky was not driving - is it Dev who was driving? First I thought it was Maan who was driving when the accident happened? but if Maan was driving Vicky would not tell Maan to drop Geet off to hospital...

Anyways....loved it.

Please update soon.

Love

Rachana

thanks rachna!! i glad you like it!!

hmm....you know what, maybe i was inspired by KMH..i just chose a random name, but then again im a fan of KMH as well, so it could've just been in the back of my mind or something lol 😃

and just to clarify, the first part of the prologue was geet's past, and the second part was maan's. so i hope it makes more sense 😃

Shreya

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Shreya

@shrezzj

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Posted: 14 years ago

#307

Originally posted by: Dhara_s
Wowwwwww....She's mine....that was super cool....!!!!! This Rahul guy should have understood it the moment Geet started walking with Maan....hmph..duffer....😆😆😆😆

All the best for your exams...do well and come back with another superb part....!!!😃

awww thanks so much!!!!!! i'll definitely try to come back with a good part!!! 😃

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio
just read all the parts!...

amazing parts!...

plzzzz add me 2 ur pm list!...

continue soon!

thanks! im glad you like it!!!! i'll definitely add you 😃

Originally posted by: abi2010
Great updated..............pls update soon............... 😉

thankyouuu!!!!!

Originally posted by: swetha10
wow wonderful update.. maan is adorable.. do continue soon..

thanks!!!!!!!

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Shreya

@shrezzj

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Posted: 14 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: shivangi783
Hi Shreya😊
Happy Navratri to you too😊
All the best for your mid term exams😊

I loved this update!
I read it thrice😳 I really look forward to your updates and get super-excited when you update😳
Loved the way Maan said, ''She's mine''!!!👏
Iss line ne poore update mein char-chaand laga diye😳👏
Continue soon....

thanks!! i need all the luck haha 😆

and im glad you liked the update!!!! you're so sweet 😃

Originally posted by: nilu710
Niceeeeeeeee
i wonder what's gonn happen next to Rahul!!!!!!!!!
plzzzzzz update soon!

thanks!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: ansah
gawd that was awesome...really loved it..
so adorable...so not liking rahul...
maan is such a darling...
and she is mine is just so 😍
keep writing...ur awesome

awww thankyouu!!!!! im so glad you like it 😊

Originally posted by: lody
Omg she is main woow this word get out for maan worth 1000000 time very lovely thanks for pm

thankyouuu!!!!!

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Shreya

@shrezzj

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Posted: 14 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag
superb n awesome update.....

and she's mine is ultimate....

loved that to core.....

awww thanks!!!!!

Originally posted by: beautifulhenna1
Hey
I've just read your FF from the start and I have to say I love your concept
Can't wait for the next update x
Could you please add me to you PM list
Thanks
x😆

hey thanks so much!!!!! im glad you like it 😃

Originally posted by: nithi07
superb superb superb superb superb superb superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wow thankyouuu!!!!!!! 😃

Originally posted by: Arshi_sahni
awsome...part....luvd it😃😃

thanks!!!!!!!!!

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Shreya

@shrezzj

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Posted: 14 years ago

#310

Originally posted by: charmed ones
Hey Shreya...!!! 😉
Mindblowing n fablous update...!!!!👏⭐️👏⭐️⭐️👏⭐️⭐️👏👏⭐️👏
I reali cant understand ma own feeling 2wards this piece of works...!!!😳
its quite diff 4rom others...!!! I guess its it...!! which 4 open arms accepted...!!!😛
Maan is different...!!!😊! I luv em...!!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
He understood sumthing is wrong wiv Geet...!!!😊😊😊😊
understand her feelings lol....!!!!!😃😃😃😃😃
She is mine...!!! I luv this line...!!!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
wat wrong wiv Rahul...!!!! 🤢 *rolling eyes*
Geet hav self respect n she is independent then...y she is feeling shy and nt showing confident approach 2 others collegues n all...!!!!
updateing 4 next shot...!!!😃
Best of Luck wiv studies...!!!!👍🏼

heyy thanks so much!!!!!! im sooooo happy you like it!!

hmm she's not exactly shy, its just that she hates being the "new girl" lol

and thankyouu! i really need the luck hahahaha

Originally posted by: shreya satish
Woooowwww
"She is Mine" What an Answer........ Loved it.....

Awesome Update....
Waiting for next

haha thanks sooo much!!!!!!

Originally posted by: komlika
hey......nice work.......add me to PM list........Soooo cute of maan😳..........She is all ur's maan dont worry😉.........lol...........hate this rahul😡

thankyouuu!!!!!! i'll def add you 😃

Originally posted by: Starry_night
Wonderful update! Lolz......Geet is kinda funny.....lolz.....and Maan was worried for her......that's so cute! Ooo.....Maan was being protective of her....and Geet too accorded......great! Ugh...that Rahul.....but Maan got back at him fabulously...."She's mine!".....that was cutely possessive......all in all a great update! Do continue soon.

awww thanks so much!!!!! im glad you liked it!!! 😃