(MG) FF~Jab Sparks Flew *Part 12,Page 40* - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
NT is maan's sis....wow girl u totally changed the script ...go ahead ...would love 2 read ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
DO cont loved the intro...
would b waiting for next part..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
Hi galz,I'm back...Sorry to have kept you waiting for such a long time.Sorry,as it was Eid yesterday...I was very excited for that ,even today I had guests at home so I couldn't update but now I'm free...
Okay,without further ado..let's begin the FIRST part...

Recap:''Maan, aap itna bhi nahi karsakte apni choti behen ke liye?NT ka dill toot jaye ga agar aap hamare saath Dev ke ghar nahi gayye...Aapko pata hai na,ki aapki behen ki Dev ke saath shaadi kitni mushkilon ke baad ho rahi hai?Usko kaisa lagega agar uske pyare bhaiyya uske saath nahi jayenge shagun leke!'' pleaded dadima.

Maan - Dadi!! Maine kaha na main nahi jaunga!Aap mujhpe hukum nahi chala sakte(shouting)
Dadi keeps quiet for some time and he realises that she is hurt...

He turns around and sees her,in tears.He realises his mistake and says sweetly(in a very non-MSK tone) ''Sorry,dadi...mujhe aise nahi kehna chahiye tha..Please mujhe MAAF kardo!Dekhiye,maine to kaan bhi pakad liye! ''

Dadi doesn't say anything just to tease him.She just turns around,making him think that she's really hurt.He gets easily fooled by his dadima's nautanki..He finally melts and says''Fine,I promise I'd go with you,to Dev's house(with a pang of bitterness in his cracking voice)

Dadi turns immediately,with a mischievous grin plastered on her face.She quickly said ''Pakka?'' and Maan agreed without looking at her face yet..She starts giggling''OMg!!Maan,hume nahi pata tha ki MSK ko manana itna aasaan tha!''She was just about to leave when Maan reacted after he recovered from his naughty dadi's new tactic.'Ddaaaddii!!!!!'he growled.

''Too bad,you've promised..''she smirked.
Maan was about to protest when dadi challenged''Oh,so the MSK is backing out from his promise?Am I getting it right?Maan Singh Khurana is being chicken?''.That comment just pushed the right buttons.

Maan,in full MSK attitude,''Aaj tak Maan Singh Khurana ne kabhi apna vaada nahi todha,aur aaj bhi nahi todega!''.Dadi took advantage of the spur of the moment and said,''Fine,so get ready,we're going NOW!!!''. Dadi was grinning mischievously again.

''But,dadi...NOW!!!You said it was for tmr!''Maan saw her grin and understood her plan instantly.''Theek hai,agar aap yeh chahti hain to main tayyar hoon..lekin main apse baat nahi karunga ab se!''With that,he opened his huge walk-in closet to grab appropriate clothes for the event.

Dadi realised that he was hurt by her little tactic.She could bear anything but her Maan's anger and more him ignoring her.She was on the verge of tears but she had to explain herself to Maan. She tried stopping him but he simply ignored her.She managed to stop him,she knew he was trying to ignore her and also that he was listening.

So she said,''Maan,dekho beta,hum kya karte?Aap hi hamein batayein?''Maan looked away.''Aap hamare liye sab kuch itna mushkil kyun kar rahe hain? Ek taraf NT hain,jinka dil toot jayega aur ek taraf aap hain,jo maanenge nahi!Ab hum kya karte? Aap toh hamari baat manenge nahi,kabhi shaadi nahi karenge lekin NT toh shaadi karna chahti hain na?Aapki shaadi ke saare armaan ab hume unhi ki shaadi mein pure karne honge na?Agar aap shaadi nahi karna chahte to kam se kam NT ki khushiyon mein unka saath dijiye!Aap itne khudgarz kaise ho sakte hain?Hume toh lagta hai ki hum aise hi dukhi aur akele bhagwaan ko pyare bhi ho jayenge!''Dadi sighed,in tears...She stood there,waiting for a response.

Maan felt bad that he hurt his dadi so much...Whatever she said was true...How he was being so selfish..Not once did he think about his dear sister...''Dadi,hum dono ek hi taraf pe hain,toh mushkil kaise hai?'' Dadi was confused. ''Haan,dadi.Main bohot khugarz ho gaya tha..Main apni hi zid par adha raha..Sorry!Chaliye aap bhi tayyar ho jayein..''He hugged her and smiled.

After an hour or so...
''NT,dadi!!!Chalo,jaldi karo...Der ho jaye gi!!!!!''bellowed Maan.
Maan was annoyed.Dadi was ready but NT was still applying make-up.Maan was too annoyed so he charged to her room but lost all his senses upon sight of the angel sitting in front of the dressing table.
He broke out of his reverie.''NT,tum bohot khoobsurat lag rahi ho...Ab chalo bhi!!''

Soon,they reach the Handas' residence.Yes,Dev was Geet's brother..(I know most of you must be rolling on the floor already)

Upon their grand arrival,they were bombarded with greetings.After 15 long mins,they were finally seated comfortably. They had finally been introduced with the million billion relatives of the Handas',even people like Mrs Handa's aunty's son-in-law's aunty's grandson's would-to-be wife.Can you imagine?Maan was SUPER-DUPER annoyed.

They went on with the rasam(Okay,I don't really know about the rasam,so i won't elaborate)

After the rasam had ended,Maan tried to excuse himself but dadi stopped him every time.Soon,Mrs Handa entered the hall from the kitchen where all the girls were giggling away(I think the shagun scene is usually done amongst the family members only but since they were the Handas' and Khuranas' they wanted it to be a grand affair.)

''Kudiyon,itna shor mat karo! Woh kya sochenge!''chided Rano,Dev's mom.
''Lekin chayijee,aap khud hi dekho parjaai ji ke bhai kitne HOT hain!''said Rajji
''Aye kudiye,zara to sharam kar...Wo tujhse umar mein kitne bade hain!Chal Geet kam se kam tu to samajhdari ki baat kar,tu bhi!Zaroor tune hi shuru kiya hoga ye sab!''Geet tried to protest but was cut off,''Chal ab tu unke baith kar baatein karegi,tab hi yeh sab chup hongi!''.Before Geet could react,she was dragged into the hall.

'Par Maa! Woh Rajji ne kaha tha ki Dev ka saala bada HOT hai!''she shouted,and to her disappointment,all eyes were on her face which had turned into a deep shade of red,matching her crimson red outfit.

''OH NO!!!Yeh maine kya keh diya!''thought the innocent soul,covering her face.

To be continued...Wow..I am really tired,it is 3.45 in the morning here and I am doing this..LOL..okayz m going to sleep now
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
sorry guys..really tired..will pm tmr...till then those of ou who find it should comment...
Better leave long comments or I'll kill you all
tHANKS
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Plzz add me to ur PM List!
-Jassi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
wowow! awesome update :) hehe love how geet bursts our...hmm wonder if maan heard😆😆
and hehe it was funny how maan was tricked by dadi😆😆

can't wait for the next part :)

~Naina
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
oh geet u are too naive
that statement about maan was awesome hope maan LISTENED TO IT
SURE THERE ARE GOING TO sparks
thanks for making nt and dev their siblings now no more confusion
do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
loved the first part 😊

Your FF seems to be full of surprises 😉
First NT and maan as sis-bro and now geet and dev too 😆 😆

Dadi-Maan dialogues were too good😊

Continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
Thanks for the encouragement...really lifted my spirits..Thanks again

Originally posted by: shivangi783

loved the first part 😊

Your FF seems to be full of surprises 😉
First NT and maan as sis-bro and now geet and dev too 😆 😆

Dadi-Maan dialogues were too good😊

Continue soon... 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
Yaar Thats Awesome
Loved it
Yaar Daadi always wins............
Yaar thats Really Shocking..................😲Geet is Dev's Sister.................🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Yaar ur Amazing. Pehle to NT ko Maan ka sister banadiya🤣 aur ab
Geet ko Dev ka Sister Banadiya🤣. Thats Lovely Yaar
This Line is Lovely
"Par Maa! Woh Rajji ne kaha tha ki Dev ka saala bada HOT hai!'🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
OMG now what will be Maan's reaction?😲😆
Im eagerly waiting for the next part
Pls Update Soon
Thanq sooooooooooooo much for the PM

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