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Posted: 14 years ago
hey muskan...along with being a maaneetian i am also an arjun punjj fan...you introduced his character with a bang but now he is missing.
I know it is too much to ask of u, but can u elaborate his track a bit. You are doing a gr8 job already...but i couldn't resist this plea. Do indulge me!
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Posted: 14 years ago
👏 oh wow this was so sweet ,cute, amazing and lovely update .............it was so adorable ..........i loved it fantastic update 👍🏼
thnk you love you 🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

febinyusuff - glad u did now...thanxs

smiliey - thanxs..dear..shy is coming

loveangle_4ever - thanxs priya..chatting shal keep in mind

susana - ur welcome dear

sireesha. - thanxs a lot

muskaan_22285 - glad u liked those parts

JRia - thanxs..

JULIEL - glad u liked it

vinithaa - yah..just tried a new angle of romance

Dhara_s - thanxs sweety

sona - thanxs yaar

sweet scorpio - shy geet cute na..me too like it..

rituka7 - thanxs

nilu710 - thanxs thanxs yet again...

fatima - thanxs yaar

shivangi783 - glad u liked both the parts

raisa159 - me too..actually first did'nt write wat they were doing..it was just there mailing..
then thought of describing how mailing was casual while they were doing other things..but not
casual!!!!

kirannaryani - glad u liked it

MjhtFan_Mahima - sorry if I kept u waiting

sweet cherry - more romance...

Amrutha - offcourse Arjun Punj is all there..don't worry

charmed ones - me too...so bad of Maan..yet again

shaaranya - thanxs..

cute-aly - thanxs again..dear..juts loved it

SakshiGarg - I know..geet turning naughty...or is it see opening up!!!

Sigma - me too..we shall kill that person soon

Starry_night - thanxs a lot ..

Destiny- thanxs dear

zubi123 - nice na..thanxs

ansah - thanxs..something about maan does'nt seem to change

JYOTESNA - thanxs dear

reva - thanxs yaar

tama - glad u commented thanxs a lot

jennifer1993 - thanxs dear

Navpreet - maan is maan..will never change

afsha- hope maan shares it soon..before it is too late

Uzma - glad it was a mahram

annu - thanxs darling..where are u..missed u
thanxs guys for all ur support & love
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Muski... love u lots...
Awesome job dear... Geet is so caring & forgiving... actually loving...
Her true love for Maan has redefined love for me...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Give us the next update please 😊
Weekend doesn't seem to end 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Di

update was superb,awesome...................just loved it👏👏👏
Maaneet chat convo is so sweet n cute😊😊
loved office romance n their lunch date😳😳
plzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
thnx for pm

Luv
Naina


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Posted: 14 years ago
heyy muskan
i just finished reading ur entire ff and omggg its awesome!!!...and very romantic😉....this update was justt adorablee!!😳....i lovee how geet teased maan and made him say he missed her😆...just like a geet thing to do!!....and their texts were just awwww!!....omgg precap looks interesting!!😉.....can't wait!!....can u pls add me to the pm list?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: .sireesha.

Thats Awesome..............👏........................
Loved it
Loved their mails
Even though they are just in a single line they are soooooooooooooo Lovely😳
Loved the way they kept on waiting for the reply😳
Every single line is soooooooooooooo beautifully written👍🏼
Ur Amazing Dear⭐️
The pics are just awesome
Thanq so much for the Lovely Update
Eagerly waiting for the next part

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Posted: 14 years ago

geet - aap aaj kal aapna khayal nahi rakthe
maan - tum jo ho...uske liya...

part 112

geet - mujhe aap se job ke bare main kuch kahna hain...
maan - umm
his lips moves over her cheeks..caresing lower to her jaw line
geet - suniyai na...
further down to her neck...maan wispers...kahoo na
geet - ji woo..their gaze locks..his hands finds their way around her
& maan bites her lower lips & touches her upper lips with tip of his nose
geet hands move behind him..snaking its way up his hair..
love u a lot he says & passionately kisses her again..
he lifts her & makes her lie on the couch..his kisses were turning wild


moving lower & lower..into her valley..geet holds his hair & moans maaaan
she barely could voice it..aap ka meeting hain

mujhe nahi jaana...he replies.. beginning to undress her..
geet - maaaaan...office hain..
maan - shh...ek to tum mera paas aathi hoo..aur phir mujh pyar bhi nahi karnedethi
geet - teek hai aab se paas nahi aaoonghi...
maan - tumhe door jane doongha to paas nahi aaoonghi na..presses closer into her
geet - maan chodoo mujhe..aap ka office hain..ghar nahi

maan pulls out unwillingly
geet - chod diya she says..disheartened ..questioning???
maan looks at her naughtly..she fixes her dress qucikly & get up..
geet turned to tell her about job maan was already looking into his mails..

she smiled & left..maan looking into his laptop says..job ke bare main raat ko batana..
geet - ji..

geet goes home & prepares for the meeting she has in the evening..at PM Media house
maan messages...just finished my meeting...(2.30pm)
geet - stepping out now (2.45pm)
maan - have another meeting at 4.00pm (3.06pm)
geet - then??(3.07pm)
maan - next meeting 6pm(3.08pm)
geet does'nt reply

geet reaches PM media house..
Arjun - this is your first client meeting..are u nervous..
geet - no..actually I am excited..
Arjun - good...client will be here by 4.00pm..
today is just the briefing round they will tell us about their requirents
and formal introduction...from our side
geet - I can do the formal introduction
Arjun - that will great...let me know if u need any help
geet - thanxs
she discusses with the creative team just to know a brief of thier feel & prepares for the
presentation..

it was 4.00pm..geet gets a call from Arjun ..
Arjun - they are here...
geet opens the conference room door & steps in..
& quickly runs out..(babaji..yeh kya kar rahe hoo aap...mera first client
inhe hi banana tha..pata nahi kun sa jawala mukhi phata ga)
maan could feel her ..he said geet & lifted his eyebrows..without looking back
a hand cares his..wat did u say..my wife..he said..I thought ur wifes name was priya..
no..he looked lost...he was not sure ..if it was geet & he just not over..with the
afternoon lunch..he smiled...& takes his phone & send a mail to geet...i can still smell u(4.05pm)
pari - u look nice smiling..sir..(he pulled his hand away)
Arjun - hellow Mr.Khurana (they shake hands)
Pari promptly says hi to Arjun..he bluntly ignores her..& says..wat ever..
Maan noticed his rudeness..but he knew Arjun always hated girls..
so getting pari along was a bad idea
maan still could feel geet around ..he looked around ..

geet noticed his restless..she was loving it...
geet replies - are u sure it is not the person sitting next to u(4.06pm)

maan saw the mail & moved little away..from pari
she send the pion with coffee..
maan sipped the coffee & knew it was made by her..
maan - i am going crazy?? (4.10pm)
geet mails again - is it me or the coffee???(4.11pm)

he excused himself & rushed out the pantry..
geet stood there mummering..main unke samne kaise jaavoo...
kabhi kisi ki baat sunthe todhi na hain...aaj hi mera court marshal kardenghe
maan - tumhara aapne aap se baat karna hogaya ho to mujh se bhi baat kar loo
..he stood there with his arms crossed over his chest..
geet smiled..- main woo aap ko...
maan moved closer kya..he spat..in anger..geet turned her face..
mujhe aap se baat nahi karni..she tried running away
he turned her arms..& said..tum yanha kya kar rahi ho?
geet - u said u miss me...
maan - geeeeet
geet - Mr.Khurana yeh aap ka bedroom nahi hain..
maan - aacha..!! he turns it harder..
maine pucha tum yanha kya kar rahi ho..
geet - maan mera haat dard kar raha hain...he leaves her & still keeps her
locked in his gaze..
Arjun - geet mera presentation wala CD kanha hain...
(they move little apart & maan slips his hand in his pocket)
Oh! Mr. Khurana..u might be knowing her..she did her project with u guys
thats why I wanted Ms.Geet...(he pauses confused with her sir name)
Ms. Geet Handa he says...to handle ur project(he comes closer to geet
resting his hand behind her protectively ..seeing maan being so close to her..Arjun
knew maan's temper...maan looks at his hands geet moves closer to maan)
maan glares at geet...(geet first tries to explain then plays along..ignoring his looks)
Geet - sir the CD is in ur laptop bag..
Arjun - thanxs..

after arjun leaves..maan walks still closer ..to geet..tries to walk away..maan traps
her between his hands...
Maan - woh tumhe Geet Handa kyun kah raha tha?
Geet - pari na bhi to aap ki wife ka naam priya kaha..(lifting her eyebrow)
maan - Geeeeet...
she breaks out his hand & walks away...
maan - pari has just joined instead of Sasha..
geet - main ne to kuch nahi poocha...

precap

some more office romance

PARI IS JUST ANOTHER TWIST!!!! hope u all like it...😉
hope u all like this update..thanxs for all ur comments..really love it
please do comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yay! 😊
I am the first one to comment 😊 🥳
Had waited this moment since a long time! Finally, it has arrived today 😊 😊 😊

Update was fabulous 😊 😊
Maan ne romance karna office mein hi shuru kar diya 😆 😆

Geet and Maan for the same meeting 😉 😆
Loved the text conversation part again 😊
Lets see how Geet explains him about the job thing 😊

Pari's entry? Have you mentioned it before? I mean, am I missing something? 😲
Sasha has left the office? 😲


Thanks for the update 😊 😊
Continue soon 😊
Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago

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