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Posted: 14 years ago
srry yaar i could not commrnt earlier

awesome
Edited by -Destiny- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Muskan,
Great update! Thnx for PM.
I'm glad both of them are getting to same wavelength & realizing importance of each other.
-Sona
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Posted: 14 years ago
sry 4 commenting so late coll 's started it was lovely muski continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey ........finished all parts in one go.....................
huh .........................i was panicked ...!!!!
fantastic updates....
thank u so much ........................
janmashtami me kya hoga?
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Posted: 14 years ago
👏 👏 👏


wow musky this update was so lovely and amazing you have depict there emotions so beautifully 👍🏼

it was too cute and adorable wen geet told to maan
"itni jaldi picha nahi chodungi "

maan is to fast 😆

thnk you so much musky 🤗 for giving beautiful updates like this regularly 🤗

love you [L ]

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Posted: 14 years ago

maan - ur questioning Maan Singh Khurana?
geet - nahi nahi...I am just concerned

part 103

maan - will u be fine?
geet - main pichle 4 saal se kar rahi hoon...I am used to it now..
maan - mujhe bhi adaat ho jayaghi..(he smiles)
geet - it will be nice if u could come early
maan lifts his eye brows..suggesting..ur pushing ur luck...
geet - nahi I was just worried u may get tired (she rests her head on side of his arms)
maan - don't worry I will be fine..

maan droped geet home & went to the office..
first thing he arranged for 2 bodygaurds for geet..he called security agency
he was quite specific & particular..he insisted on interviwing them personally
now he wondered how is going to conveince geet to take them along
she would never agree..he wondered..just then geet called

geet - main geet bolo rahi hoon
maan - pata hain bolo ..geet
geet - woo..
maan - sab teehk hain na
geet - nahi..nahi mera matlab hain..haan ..sab teehk hain
I have send some fruits & milk with nakul aap please kaa lena
maan - umm
geet cuts the call..

she gets restless & worried..waits for little while
she called again
geet - ji wo
maan - ummm
geet - aap ne kaa liya
maan - geet nakul has not even reached office yet..
& u have already called me twice..
geet - does it take so long to reach ur office
I am sure he is gone some where else...main aaj uske chooti karthi hoon
maan - geet ..relax..he might be on his way..
geet - nahi ..u don't indersatand...& gets more worried now..
maan - geet...geet..
geet - aap ko bhoog laaghi hain na..ise liya aap gussa bhi ho rahe ho..(she starts weeping)
maan - nahi geet I am fine..I just had my coffee..
geet - wat? why did u have coffee?
maan - aab kya huwa geet
geet - empty stomach coffee peeyo ge tho acidity ho jayaghi..
babaji ..is nakul ko aaj me paka job se nikalunghi
maan - geet...geet ..nakul is here...
geet - thanx u babaji. aap paka kaa lena...& keeps the phone

maan smiles..& continues with his work..nakul stands there...
maan - rakhoo aur jaavoo
nakul - aap phehle kaa lijiya ...
maan - wanha rak do & leave
nakul - nahi shaab ..geet maam ne kaha hai ki I have to wait untill u finish
maan - I said u leave..now..
nakul continues to stand there as if he has not heard him
maan - Nakul(he shouts)..
nakul just stood there
maan - yeh geet bhi na...aacha train kar ke bechthi hain..
maan had few of them & moved on with his work...
nakul still stood there..
maan - aab kya hain?
nakul - pura finish karna hain
maan - nakul..just leave now...or I will fire u...
nakul - aap ko jo karna hain aap kar lijiya...
if u don't finish it ..I will any way get fired...

geet calls again
maan - aab kya hain?
geet - babaji he is still angry...I am sure he has not had his fruits...
kya karoon main inka?
maan - geeeeet..
geet - aap aise kyun karthe hain...why can't u have ur fruits in time..
jab dehko aapni man marzi..
geet continues to shout little longer...(maan waited for her to complete)
maan - geet maine fruits khaa liya..
geet - phir phele kyun nahi bola?
maan - tum kuch bolne do tab na...
geet - so every thing is my mistake now
maan - maine aise to nahi kaha..
geet - ek to main itne pareshan hoon aur aap hain ki..
maan - geet..I am fine..with fasting..please don't worry about me
geet - ok so I can't even worry about u now?
maan - what is wrong with u today...have u had ur fruits..
nakul - geet maam ka to nirjal vrat hain na..
maan looked at nakul..& noded..
geet - main rakthi hoon..& cuts the call

maan got worried about geets nirjal vrat..she has not yet recovered fully
it was not adviceable..but offcourse he knew ..he could'nt do much if she has
made up her mind ...

smriti's family invited geet over to thank her personally..
smriti's mom - it will be nice if u could join for lunch
geet - nahi aaj mera vrat hain..but I will come & meet u all
smriti - when are u coming
geet - i will be there at 3.30pm..
smriti - wat is this with ur timings..we really don't understand
geet - no I am just held up..
smriti - ok listen kavya & pooja will be joining us for lunch
ranbhir personally wanted to thanx u..but he will not be able to come today
geet - don't be so formal yaar..shall see u at 3.30 then

maan got held up in the meeting..it was 3.30pm when maan finshed his meetings
he closed his eyes in disgust..he knew she would have waited..
he felt he should have atleast called her & told her he is not coming
he also knew that would upset her further..he decided to do rest of the work
from home..he reached home..at around 4pm...without her the house felt lifeless to him..
maan - nakul ..where is geet?
nakul - she is gone out..
maan went to the study & continued working from home

geet reached smriti's place..it was a big gathering..
pooja & kavya's parents had joined them ..
all of them were really thankfull to geet..
finally four of them went to smriti's room & started their chit chat
smriti - guys..u won't belive wat happned yesterday..
pooja - wat..happened tell us fast
kavya - why are u building up so much of suspense
smriti - ranbhir kissed me
pooja - where? smriti gave a wicked smile
geet gulped some water & looked away..she could say much it was her deewar
they were talking about..smriti went describing her first kiss...
he actually got worried hearing about the blast & came looking for me..
the moment he saw me..he hugged me tight...there was this perfect silence for few mins..
I could barely breath..his strong hands were around me every where..
I did'nt know how to respond..I was too scared & nervous..
this was the first time we actually hugged..& stood so close..actually we were one..
then his hug slowly turned wild..he passionately kissed me..taking my lips
into his..I struggled to breath..he broke apart to catch our breath & kissed again..
this time his tongue exploring my mouth & we stood kissing for I don't know how long..
pooja & kavya..where looking at her with their mouth open
& geet was little embarressed..she wondered how is she even going to face ranbhir again
geet - bus kar yaar...let it be..we got the scene
pooja - yaar tujhe..sanyasani bana hain to ban ..humara maza kyun kharab kar rahi hain
kavya - smriti ..please continue..
geet - stood up..ok ..I am leaving now..
smriti - ok ok..I will show u the dress I am planning to wear for the dinner..
pooja passed a dirty look to geet,..
geet ignored her looks..
smriti - I am wearing this sari..I just hope the blouse gets stiched in time
geet - u have almost 3 weeks for the family dinner right.. I am sure it will be done by then
kavya - guys ..I want u all to meet Ajay before I finally say yes to him
I am really getting confused about him
pooja - why wat happened..
kavya - I need time to discuss all that..can we meet up some time this weekend
geet - yah sure..
pooja - wat yah sure...U never have time for us...pata nahi kiske chakar main padi hain
geet - nahi woh main..Maa..smriti's mother interupts..
beta why don't u guys have some coffee..
all of them move to the hall..geet excuses herself ..tells smriti she needs to arrange for
evening pooja..she says bye to every one & leaves


precap
geet crying ..

thanxs guys..for all the lovely replies & hope u like this one too...plz plz plz..do comment
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update continue soon
cant wait to read da nxt part
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update muskan. so today nakul job was really good and i was laughing
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Posted: 14 years ago
amaxing omg i cant wait for the next lot pls pls pls i wan see all of them sock heheh
special maans wife haha
xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
i hope geet tells her fds that maan is her husband...i ahve a feeling that geet will get hurt because their fds might be angry on her for not telling them anyways i dont know its just a guess...


Apart from that musky its a lovely update...

Love you,
Vinithaa

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