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Posted: 14 years ago
For Part 27

superb update
Savi entry is fab
finally Geet is returning back wid Maan

Luv u
Naina
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Posted: 14 years ago
For Part 28

amazing update
Loved it soooooooooooooo mauch
OMGGGGGGGG Maan sang a song
u know its one of my fav one from old ones
Loved Maaneet moments
thnx Astha for posting d update

Luv u
Naina
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Posted: 14 years ago
just caught up wid ur ff...its gr8..
add me to ur pm list...........
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Guys! Ok This Tym its Aakriti only nd Not Aastha. Yes I m Back!!!. Ah it Feels so Good coming to IF. Last few days were really very hard for me nd u all know the reason behind dat thanx to my crazy Sis who had made me Popular in d Whole IF. She didn't even told me that she has send PM to u all nd wen I came to know about dis I literally scolded her for her foolishness but den she has shown me all of ur Replies nd I don't have words to express that Hw much Touched I was After Reading ur PM's. I m really very much overwhelmed wen I saw that u guys care so much for me. Everyone of u has wished so much for me. Nd dat Cards nd Wishes I got made me feel like Celebrity😆😆. Not even on IF but my own Room was full of Get Well Soon Cards, Flowers nd Chocolates from all my friends nd again thanks goes to my Stupid sis Aastha. She was so much attached to me that she don't wanted me to take stress nd she bothers u all.

A Big thank u to everyone who has send me PMs for my Good health nd Commented on d FF too with beautiful cards nd msgs. first i decided to post a thank u Post in dis FF to all of u but den i thought that u all will get bored after reading my Bak Bak so i Dropped my Idea

Ok I Think I have Done lots of Bak-Bak nw. coming to the point I m feeling very much better nw thanx to the care of my sis nd family nd all ur wishes. My fever has already gone but still I have a bit weakness but dnt worry its not dat much that I couldn't type d update nd Doctor has also permitted me to spend not all but some tym on PC so may be my next 2-3 updates would be late but soon I'll be back to my original avatar of updating Daily. So nw i m putting full stop to my Speech of thank u nd posting d Part 29 of my FF. hope u all like it. pls feel free to criticise if u all dnt like it. nd ya once again thanx for ur Love nd Support. nd ya one important thing i had Completed 200 episodes😆😆 i mean to say 200 Pages of my Writing. all Credit goes to u all. thanx once again

Part 29:

Next Morning it was 11 am at Khurana's Constructions. Get was at Maan's Cabin discussing some designs. She decided to stay Professionally with Maan nd wont bring their Personal Issues in between Work. Maan was loving d moment wen Geet is with him. He knows that Geet is still angry but on d same tym he knows that very soon her anger will over infact it had been over also but it was Geet who was not ready to accept it.

Geet: Maan, I think dis would be perfect. Wat do u think?

Maan didn't answered. Geet shoved her hand in front of his eyes

Geet: Maan, r u listening to me?

Maan(coming into senses): ummm…. Ya. Sorry I was thinking about something?

Geet: u nd thinking about anything else except Work? That too at office? Sounds strange. Anyways wat makes u distract ur thoughts from work to somewhere else.

Maan: Savera!

Geet(Shocked): Savera?

Maan: ummm I mean Savy is Here. See.

He pointed towards d door. Geet turned back to look at the Direction where he has showing nd saw Savera coming towards the Cabin. She looked back at Maan. She hated d glow that came at Maan's Face wen he saw Savy.

Geet: oh I thought….

Maan: wat u thought?

Geet: nothing

Meanwhile Savy entered in d Cabin.

Savera: Hey Geet! Hey Shona

Maan: Hey Princess wats up? (Maan says while getting up from his chair nd hugging her)

Geet gets irritated wen she saw all dis. she don't know wat bothering her more, Maan addressing Savera Princess or Savera Addressing Maan Shona or Maan hugged her . her thoughts were distracted by Savy's voice

Savy: Geet, I said Hi to u too

Geet: oh… I m sorry I was thinking something else. Hi Savy hws u?

Savy: Well I am Fine, but I guess u r not fine or should I say u too having MSK affect on u (she winks while saying it)

Geet(blushes): umm No nothing like dat

Savy: so u want to say that u r not having Maan's effect in ur life?

Geet(Muffled): no… I mean…..

Maan(intervenes): Let it be Savy u r scaring Geet nw

Savy: Did I? I m so sorry Geet

Geet: No its ok I m fine.

Maan: Anyways! By the way Savy wat makes u come so early in d morning that too at my Office.

Savy: Early? Maan! Its 11:30 nw. u r calling it early

Maan: I knw its 11:30 but for u its early na. I mean ur morning starts at 12 o clock

Savy: Very Funny Maan. But for ur Kind information I m a fashion designer nw so I have to get up early nd now my Morning starts at 7 not 12.

Maan: Ok Ms. Fashion Designer wat makes u to come at my office today

Savy: Actually I need ur help?

Maan: Regarding wat?

Savy: Maan, u knw that my Fashion show is there within few days but still I m not having enough organizers for it. So I thought that may be u can help me.

Maan: ofcourse Savy anything for u. I knw many people nd dey will definitely organize ur Show.

Savy(happily): thanx Maan I knw only u can get me out of dis Situation. So we r meeting at coffee ok

Maan(amuzed): coffee?

Savy: ya I need to give u some details of my show which will help u.

Maan: ok

Savy: so hw about 4 in d evening at ur Fav coffee Shop?

Maan: ya sure I'll be there

Geet(intervenes): But Maan u had ur meeting with Mr. sharma at 4. u cant miss dat

Maan: oh that's not a big deal Geet. Ask Tasha to postpone that meeting.

Geet: But Maan…. Hws that

Savy(intervenes): Ummm… Maan I think u should not postpone ur meeting because of me.

Maan: Don't be Silly Savy. Meeting is not much important den my Princess.

Savy: but Maan…

Maan: anything for u Princess.

Savy: Aww that's really so sweet of u

Den both looks at geet who was standing restless but tries her best to control her emotions nd den dey smiled at each other indicating that their plan is working.

Savy: ok Den. See u at 4. Bye Geet! Bye shona

Maan: Bye Princess

Geet(faintly): bye Savy!

After Savy left Geet gives an angry look to Maan

Maan: What?

Geet: Princess?

Maan: ya So?

Geet: u calling her Princess? Y?

Maan: Well I dnt think that u need any reason to know that y am I calling her princess?

Geet: Maan Stop talking in Riddles

Maan: ok Well she's beautiful, lovable, innocent nd sweet (he said while adding a dreamy look into his eyes) so she is Princess na

Geet felt irritated to the core as she heards someone else' praise from Maan who usually use to praise her

Geet: Lovable? Nd wat u said beautiful? Remember Maan I m ur Fiance (she said while pointing her finger towards herself) hw can u praise any other girl in front of ur Fiance. No one can take my place got it. Don't u dare to look any other girl

Maan: so u r admitting that u r my fianc (he said with a smile nd coming closer to her)

Geet got freezed. She realizes wat did she just said. She has outbursted all her emotions in front of him. She started moving backwards nd soon stuck between Table nd Maan. She looked deep into his eyes which were questioning her.

Maan(softly): bolo na Geet, u accepts that u r my fianc? But u said I mean nothing to u den y my closeness to Savy affects u? y don't u like me calling her Princess? Y don't u like wen I praise her infront of u? Bolo?

Geet looked into his eyes. She don't know wat she has to do now? How to reply him back? She has been trapped in her own words. She looked away from his eyes nd slowly moves away from him.

Maan: u didn't answer me Geet?

Geet: Wo… I mean to say that officially I m ur fiance (it took her lot of courage to control herself) nd wen Dadimaa come to know about ur looking towards any other girl she'll not like it.

Maan smiles after hearing her nd thought that she'll not give up so easily nd now using dadimaa's name to cover her insecurities.

Maan: Wat did u said Officially? But Geet it was u only na who has break this Engagement remember?

Geet could say nothing as she remembered her fight wid Maan

Maan: nd Dadimaa ki chinta tum mat karo unhe koi problem nahi hogi.

Geet: Matlab?

Maan: ab dekho tum to mujhse Shaadi karogi nahi I mean tumhi ne to mana kiya tha na nd u don't love me also so ek na ek din to dadimaa ko sab batana hi hai den again she'll start looking another girl for me So y not Savy?

Geet: Savy?

Maan(teasing): ya. She's smart, intelligent, beautiful.

Geet: but Dadimaa will not select her (believing on Maan's lie)

Maan: ofcourse she'll select her she knows her from childhood nd has always consider as her own Grand daughter. To unhe koi problem nahi hogi.

Geet(anxiously): So u mean to say u r going to Marry Savy?

Maan: Wen did I said dat?

Geet: Abhi abhi to tumne kaha ki Dadimaa ko koi problem nahi hogi

Geet's answer brought a grin on Maan's Face. He knew that his Arrow has hit at the right place. Geet had started feeling of Fear of losing him.

Maan: oh That! Wo to tumne jaise kaha maine uske answer de diya. Waise I m getting a smell of burning.

Geet(amuzed): Burning? (den she looked around) But Maan everything is fine. There is no fire anywhere.

Maan(smiles): but I m getting smell. (Den leaned towards her) From ur Heart

Geet (try to cover up her jealousy): wat Rubbish?

Maan: its not Rubbish. Its true u r getting jealous of Savy

Geet: ofcourse not. Y should I get jealous of her?

Maan: u know she's smart, beautiful nd stunning too so may be u want to be like her but u cant so u feel jealous.

Geet: Listen Mr. Maan Singh Khurana Just because she wears small dresses that doesn't mean that she's stunning nd as far as my jealousy is concerned well neither I m jealous of her nor I want to be like her. I m happy in d way I m. nd I can be like her wenever I want but she cant be like me if she wants, got it (she said while pointing her finger towards him)

Maan: dnt talk Rubbish Geet, u cant

Geet: I can

Maan: no u cant

Geet: yes I can

Their conversation has been interrupted by the knock at the cabin. It was Tasha

Maan: wats it Tasha

Tasha: Wo MK… oh silly me…. I mean sir I have came to remind u about ur meeting wid sharma's

Maan: ya Tasha I need to tell u about that only. Postpone that meeting. I have something important to do today (he said while looking at Geet who was making faces)

Tasha: But sir….

Maan: u may leave

Tasha: ok sir

She left. After Tasha left Geet was also about to move outside but coudnt as her wrist has been hold By Maan. He pulls her towards him. Their faces were mere inches. Maan's touch was giving Goosebumps to Geet. She closed her eyes as she felt him coming closer to her. slowly Maan whispered

Maan: u cant geet

Geet(coming back to senses): I can Maan

She said nd left d Cabin Angrily leaving Maan Behind Smiling.

Maan(to himself): Sorry Geet, but this is important so that u can pour out ur inner feelings. Lets see hw long will u hide it.

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In Sanjeevani Shilpa was in Locker room smiling a lot wen Armaan came to her. he loved d smile on her face.

Armaan: Kya Baat hai? aaj kafi smile kar rahi ho?

Shilpa: yes I m very Happy today

Armaan: Y?

Shilpa: Armaan, di is back after 1 week. Oh I m so happy that I cant tell u. my half life is back

Den she looked at Armaan who was staring at her. she felt nervous

Shilpa: wat r u seeing?

Armaan: u. u look so good wen Smile nd Today I m seeing my old Shilpa Back whom I m missing from so many days.

The Word "my Shilpa" has given goosebumps to Shilpa. She looked straight to his eyes which were looking hers nd dere was an eyelock session between dem. But it was interrupted by someone's voice

"Ahem Ahem! M I disturbing u Dr. Armaan" A girl said

Both looked at the direction of d Voice nd Saw Savy standing over dere. Shilpa dnt know who was she. She thought her as Armaan's Girlfriend nd dis thought made him even more uncomfortable wen she hugged him.

Armaan: Wat r u doing over here?

Savy: Bus tumse milne ka mann kiya to chali aayi. Kuch galat kiya?

Armaan: nahi tum kuch galat karti kaha ho

Savy: I know dat. Tell me something which I don't know.

Armaan: Whatever (den looked at shilpa who was standing confused) Ah! Sorry I didn't introduced u both. Umm Savera she's…….

Savy(intervenes): Shilpa rite?

Shilpa: umm ya.

Savy: hi! Savera Armaan's Sweet younger sis. But u can call me Savy

Shilpa: Sis (den she smiled of relief) but hw u came to know that my name is Shilpa

Savy: well Good Question. Actually Bro use to talk a lot about u wenever I speak to him nd today seeing u both together I m confirmed that u r Shilpa.

Shilpa Blushes wen she heard dat Armaan use to talk about her.

Shilpa: umm u Guys carry on I need to go for an emergency. Catch u later Savy

Savy: ok Bye.

Shilpa left from dere

Savy: Hhmm nice choice Bro.

Armaan: Wat was all dat?

Savy: wat?

Armaan: y u told her that I use to talk about her?

Savy: I think I didn't said a lie?

Armaan: ya. But y u told her?

Savy: Bro it was her right to know about ur feelings. Nd I wonder y didn't u told her yet? Did u still feel anything for Riddhima?

Armaan: Ofcourse not Savy. U know Riddhima is my past nd Shilpa is my present nd Future too nd I had really stopped thinking about Riddhima anymore

Savy: den wats d Problem Bro. see u told her everything about ur past nd u have also said that she likes u too den were's d Problem

Armaan: I don't know but I m Afraid

Savy: Wait! Wait! Wat m I Listening? Armaan Malik no The Great Armaan Malik is afraid that too from proposing a girl. Wats wrong wid u?

Armaan: leave it u wont understand

Savy: y?

Armaan: because u have never been in love before

Savy(seriously): Bro. may be I havent been in love before but that doesn't mean I don't know how it feels wen u love someone, hw it feels wen u wait for the person to whom u love to say those 3 special words to u. (den looks at Armaan who was looking at her confused. She quickly changed her mood) I mean to say u know ur sis rite. I had solved many love problems u know so i know he it feels.

Armaan: oh I thought something else

Savy: don't think too much for me bro just go nd propose her before its too late.

Armaan: ok baba I'll try to do it soon

Savy(roles her eyes): tumse kuch nahi hoga. Maan ke sath rahe rahe tum bhi usi ke jaise ho gaye ho. Mujhe hi kuch karma padega

Armaan: wat r u planning to do?

Savy: u'll come to know soon

Armaan: Savy, dnt do any mischief

Savy: dnt worry Bro. I wont do any mischief

Armaan: better nd ya next tym wen u come to hospital dnt wear these Short dresses

Savy: y? these r so cool.

Armaan: whatever! But I don't like guys looking at u like dey have seen something from museam

Savy(laughs): Oh my Possesive Bro! wat should I do with u. Bro. I m big enough to handle all dis

Armaan: I knw dat but still dnt come like dis. nd i m ur Elder Brother nd u have to listen to me

Savy: ya Just 5 mins. Elder.

Armaan: Watever! but still i m elder nd i know wat is right or wrong for u. ok

Savy: Acha baba fine. I wont.

Armaan: Good. Ok I have to go for rounds catch u at home bye

Savy: Bye!

Armaan left nd savy smiles at her

Savy(To himself): omg My Sweet bro! lagta hai Maan ke sath sath mujhe tumhari love story bhi set karke jana padega. Chal Savy Lag ja Kaam pe. Tere Friend aur tere Bro dono ko teri zaroorat hai.

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At Khurana's constructions it was about 3:15 of d afternoon nd geet was sitting restless in her cabin. Maan is going to meet Savy that too during office hours. She was looking at tym again nd again nd watching At Maan's cabin through d glass who was completing his work as soon as possible.

On the other hand Maan too noticing Geet from his Cabin from d corner of his Eyes. he loves d way Geet getting restless. It indicates that geet will soon confess her feelings to him but for nw he should not stop. He quickly get up from his chair.

As soon as he gets up from her chair Geet saw him nd thought that he's going to meet Savy she too comes out from her cabin nd headed towards his cabin. As soon as she entered in his cabin She bumped into him as he was also coming towards door. Bumping wid him make her lose her balance nd she was about to Fall wen She felt a grip of Strong hands around her waist. She looked at his face nd once again lost in his Brown almond eyes which was full of love nd care. Hw can she believe that Maan is having interest in any other girl wen all she could she in his eyes was only her nd no one else. Maan too lost in her deep eyes. Both don't know that for how long they were lost in each other. After some moment they both came back to their Senses nd broke d Gaze. Maan pulls her upwards nd Geet adjusted herself

Maan: tumne kya Girne me PhD kari hui hai? jab dekho tab girti rehti ho.

Geet: Wo………. Sorry. Actually main……..

Maan: Its ok Geet, but y r u in so much hurry?

Geet: Wo….. Actually I thought that u were leaving

Maan: Ya So?

Geet: So I thought can I also come with u.

Maan: u? y?

Geet: I too wanted to meet Savy

Maan: but Geet u met her in d Morning only. Den y again?

Geet: but u r also going to meet her na. if u can go to meet her den y cant i?

Maan looked at her with a smirk on his face. Geet realizes that wat did she just said

Geet: I mean may be I can help. Moreover I don't have much work also So I thought to accompany u. Do u have any problem?

Maan: I don't have any problem. Afterall u r going to help me only not for any other reason rite?

Geet(Trapped): ya Rite.

Maan: So c'mon lets Go. Otherwise Savy has to wait for us.

Geet: ya sure. Hw should u make Savy wait (she said irritatedly)

Maan: ya. Afterall she's my Princess (Maan said pretended like he didn't notice Geet's Irritation)

Geet: ya Ofcourse

She said nd headed outside d cabin furiously. Nd Maan was still standing there smiling.

Maan(To himself): Ms. Geet Malhotra did is just d beginning. Nd dis game continues until u wont come out from ur own shell. Nd I promise that day is not Far away.

He smiles nd headed towards outside.

Precap:

Coffee with Savy nd Geet takes advice from Shilpa😲

ok so guys hope u all like dis Part. Hit d like button if u all like it nd Do leave ur Comment/Criticism. its necessary

Luv Aakriti😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Aky🤗

n now update was awesome, fantastic dear👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
loved it sooooooooooo much ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
loved Maaneet moments❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Maan n Savy plan works😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
loved Geet's jealousy
😆
eagerly w8ng for next part
do cont soon

Luv u
Naina🤗

Edited by Kool_Naina - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ah perfect come back aakriti loved ur update was smiling wile reading the update loved it so much Maan and Savy r going to drve Geet mad i think..
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Posted: 14 years ago
kitne din baad update and it was worth the wait, thanks, abb kya hoga, hopefully geet admits her love, thanks once again
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Posted: 14 years ago
thx for the update. how are you feeling now
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,

Glad to hear that you are doing well......
the credit goes to your sister....................

Well, update was really cool,
i loved Geet's jealousy.........
Hey I feel Savy would have liked Maan, hmmm may be her love interest.............

Take care

Love
lakshmi
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Posted: 14 years ago
welcome back dear.............. i'm really happy to know that ur recover completely n take rest dear.........

i missed u n ur FF..........
this part was superbbbbbbbbbb n
maan n savy plan was nice n really works na.........
poor geet😆 ..............very soooooooon she gonna admit her feeling towards maan, i hope soooo...............

n i love savy too........... such an angle for helping maaneet..................

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