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Posted: 14 years ago

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aww dear thank u sooooo much i m really very touched by reading ur comment i couldn't even imagine dat someone can like dis FF to such extent. thank u so much nd ofcourse u r in my PM list
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great update
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Awesome update...lovely written...!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Luv Maan so caring n cencern...not realizing he is in luv...lol...😳😳😳😳😳😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

aakriti

and update
love maneet concern for eachother
and armaan and shilpa are v
update
waiting for more maneet scenes in office and armaan and shilpa's scene in hospital



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cute-aly

aakriti

and update
love maneet concern for eachother
and armaan and shilpa are v
update
waiting for more maneet scenes in office and armaan and shilpa's scene in hospital




aww dear thank u so much ur comment is really too cute just like ur name
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Loved the update 😊
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hi i read all parts it was really so gud an d can u plz add me in pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi guys thank u so much for ur Lovely comment nd overwhelming response so far. i m really feeling so glad to read ur comments. nw here's d part 6 of my FF. hope u all will like it too. pls feel free to criticise if u dnt like it. 😊

Part 6:


After d dinner Savitri Devi has headed towards her room nd Geet nd Shilpa has headed towards d outhouse. Before dey were leaving Savitri Devi has asked dem to call anyone from d mansion if dey have any kind of a problem over dere. Geet assured her dat she'll not hesitate to tell dem. Armaan wished Shilpa nd Geet good luck before he goes. As soon as dey both reached to outhouse Shilpa quickly gone to bed nd fell asleep but Geet couldn't able to sleep because it was a new place. She tried hard to sleep but the sleep r miles away from her. So she decided to go to Balcony nd listen to her Fav. Songs. She has taken her I-Pod nd headed towards Balcony. Wen she was at Balcony she heard some sound like someone is drippling d ball. She tried to see but couldn't able to notice she knews dat it'll nt be Armaan as he has left for his home as soon as dey left for outhouse den who could it be. Is it Maan? She decided to go down nd See.

On the other side Maan was at Basket ball court playing Basket Ball. This was his favourite time pass besides her Tai-chi exercises nd no points for guessing dat from where did he get dis habbit ofcourse from Armaan. While he was playing Basket ball all his concentration was at Geet. As he dripples d Ball he gets d flashes of Geet in front of him. When he first saw her Amritsar, den their Date (as said by Armaan), their Scooty ride nd during Engagement everything.

Y? y he couldn't able to get out from her thoughts? Wats so unusual about her dat makes her different? Was it her simplicity or her Selfless love? Nd nw she's going to stay over here nd even work wid him. Hw will he able to control his emotions wen even he don't know what kind of attraction is dis? He was lost in his thoughts wen he heard someone at d back saying "oh! So Maan Singh Khurana can play Basket ball also?" he turned to look back nd saw Geet standing over dere. She was wearing Pooh night suit instead of her salwar kameez nd her hair were not in plates dey were left open. Poor Maan got lost once again in her beauty. She was looking cute in her attire. He came back into his senses wen geet again begins to speak

Geet: Maan tum to bade chupe rustam nikle. I mean I was nt knowing dat u can play basket ball also.

Maan: y geet? Wats so unusual in dat?

Geet: ofcourse it is. I mean basket ball doesn't suits ur personality. I mean if dere is Armaan at ur place den I can understand but d person like u is d last one I expected to see over here.

Maan said nothing but smiles nd again started drippling d ball which make Geet irritated.

Geet: yaar Maan, tum apne aap se bore nahin ho jate.

Maan: Kyun?

Geet: I mean wenever I talk to u, use to say nothing except ur one-word answers like yes, no, why etc etc.

Maan: everyone is nt like Amritsar Express like u r?

Geet: whatever, atleast main bolti to hoon but in ur case it seems dat someone has fixed ur tongue from Fevicol.

Maan: Geeetttt....

Geet: acha baba I m sorry. But whats ur problem yaar? Y u can't u speak like me.

Maan: Geet I use to speak dat much only which is necessary, m not a chatter box like u nd Armaan.

Geet: u knw wat Maan, these r d signs of abnormality.

Maan(angrily): what did u just said?

Geet: Aur kya.. see me, Armaan, shilpa we all use to live our life to d fullest, but u it seems dat u have already lived ur life nd nw its time for u to go to himalyas nd take Sanayas over dere.

Maan: Geeeeetttttttt.....

Geet: acha leave it! So u were playing basket ball huh? Do u really know how to play?

Maan: ya. Y any doubts?

Geet: ya I had. Because I m noticing u from couple of mins. Nd u haven't basket a single ball.

Maan: dats just because I dnt want to moreover today I m alone usually Armaan use to play wid me.

Geet: hey who said u r alone? I m here na.

Maan looked at Geet with surprise.

Maan: u? do u knw how to play Basket ball?

Geet: Ofcourse. The Basket ball champ is standing in front of u.

Maan started to smile at her

Geet(irritated): Y r u smiling?

Maan: nothing. actually I was nt knowing dat u can crack some good jokes also.

This frustrated geet he goes to him nd turned him towards herself.

Geet: who says dat I m cracking a joke over here?

Maan: ofcourse it's a joke. Girls nd Basket ball?

Geet: y not?

Maan: geet I think u r really sleepy dats y u r dreaming wid ur eyes open. U should go nd sleep nw.

Geet: no. I'll nt. Nd if u had so much confidence on urself den y don't we have a match. Wat say a one-on-one game?

Maan(smiling): let it be Geet. U won't be able to win from Maan Singh Khurana.

Geet: Mr. Maan Singh Khurana till nw u haven't faced Geet Malhotra. It's a challenge that it's only me who will win dis game.

Maan: Nice Dream. Good for u.

Geet: y r u getting Afraid of me.

Maan: afraid of u? y?

Geet: because first time u'll lose from a girl that too from me.

Maan: ofcourse not. I told u before also dat Maan Khurana never gets afraid of anything.

Geet: so y he's getting Afraid from challenge.

Maan: Allrite lets play. I would love to clear doubts u have for urself Ms. Geet Malhotra.

Geet: We'll se Mr. Maan Khurana.

And d game begins. Initially d ball was in Maan's hand nd he begins to dripple it gesturing Geet to try to catch it. Geet is trying her best to catch it before he put it in d basket but she gets failed dis tym Maan has already done a Basket. Maan looks at her with a victorious smile.

Maan: I told u Geet. Its nt easy. U still have time. Just Back out.

Geet: not so easily Maan the game has not yet over.

Maan: k den fine. Don't say afterwards dat I didn't warn u.

Again d Game begins nd once again Maan had d control on Ball but dis tym Geet got succeeded to take Ball from him nd she started drippling Maan has tried hard to distract her but nothing Seems to work out nd finally Geet has done a basket.

Geet: So nw who needs to be back out Mr. Khurana.

Maan: dnt get too much over confident Ms. Malhotra.

And game again begins none of dem were ready to give up. Sometimes it was Maan who makes a basket nd sometimes it was Geet. Both were sweating badly but dey continued playing. It seems dat dey were not tired at all due to their hectic schedule nd all dat.

The only thing in their mind is to win d game. Time was about to end nd both of their scores were at equal. Nw only one basket is left to decide about d winner. The ball is again at Maan's hand nd Geet was trying to take away from him. While drippling Maan's eyes went to Geet's Face nd he again seems to be lost. D drops of sweat was all over her face nd it seems like Dew drops on a fresh flower. She ws becoming tired but she didn't give up. Maan loses his concentration nd lost d ball from his hand nd as soon as he realizes it Ball is already at Geet's Hand he tried hard to get it but Finally Geet Makes d Basket.

Geet: yes! I won. I tld u Maan Geet Malhotra never loses. Nw who's d best?

She says it while jumping in joy. Maan looks at her innocence nd thought that Vindhya Di is rite. Geet is still a Kid from heart. He stood dere watching her wid a smile on his face. Dis girl is really crazy. Suddenly he notices dat Geet has lost her Balance. He quickly runs to her as she was about to fall. Geet closed her eyes in terror but den he realizes dat someone is holding her by waist. She slowly opens her Eyes nd Saw that it was Maan who is having d Grip of his strong Hand around her waist. There was again an Eyelock moment for few seconds. Both r looking Deeply in each other's eyes. Maan again found himself drowning in her eyes but den he realizes what he was doing. He slowly lifts her upwards. Geet stands nd tries to adjust her Hairs den she noticed d dat Maan is feeling uncomfortable so she decided to make the environment light.

Geet: So nw Wat Say Maan? Who's d best?

Maan(wid a smirk): Just because u won dis Game it doesn't means that u r a champion. It was ur luck.

Geet: o my God! D gr8 Maan Singh Khurana will never leave his Ego.

Maan: its not Ego.

Geet: it is.

Maan: its not

Geet: I said na It is.

Maan: I said na its not.

Geet: it is.

Maan(irritated): ok f9. think wat u want? Waise bhi who had a courage to fight wid u.

Geet: Hey Maan dnt get upset. I was only kidding. Acha I wanna ask u something.

Maan: Wat?

Geet: wat is d relationship b/w us?

Nw Maan got confused wid her question. He couldn't able to understand wat Geet wants to say.

Maan: Geet wat kind of a question is Dis? Everyone knows dat u r my Fiance.

Geet: I knw Maan nd I m not denying it. I m ur fiance but officially. In reality we both know dat dis engagement is just for a name sake.

Maan: wat do u want to say?

Geet: See Maan, nw I m going to be around u 24 hrs. u can't address me evrytime by saying me ur Fiance. So y not we become friends.

Maan: Friends?

Geet: ya. See one day everyone will come to knw about d truth den I'll nt be ur Fiance anymore but atleast we'll be good friends. (directing her hand towards him). So wat say? Friends?

Maan was nt sure wat to do. Is geet just asked him to be her friend. Could he able to be her friend.

Geet: dnt think too much Maan. I assure u u'll never be at loss wid my friendship.

Maan smiles at her nd gives his hand to meet hers.

Maan: Friends.

Geet said nothing but smiles.

Maan: but that doesn't mean I'll let u win next time or u'll get spare from my scoldings at office.

Geet: oh! So d gr8 Maan Khurana is back. Dnt worry Maan I'll nt ask u a favour nd next time also it'll be me who'll win.

Maan: oh really?

Geet: ya.

Maan: ok den we'll see who'll win tomorrow.

Geet: oh so tomorrow again! Ache se practice karke aana. Kaho to main tips de doon.

Maan: no need.

Geet: as u wish. Baad me mat kehna ki maine poocha nahin.

Maan looks at his watch nd realizes dat its becoming late.

Maan: Geet, its becoming late nw. I think u should go to sleep nw. tomorrow is ur first day at d office.

Geet: oh ya! I think u r rite. Good nite Maan.

Maan: good nite Geet.

Geet started heading towards outhouse nd Maan stood dere watching her going. Suddenly Geet stops nd turned back.

Geet: Maan!

Maan: yes geet.

Geet: thanx!

Maan: For wat?

Geet: for everything.

By saying dis she has again started moving towards Outhouse. Maan couldn't understand wat does she trying to say. Y did she say thanx to him. Because he helped her or he saves her from falling or he has agreed to be her friend.

Maan(to himself): dis girl is really crazy nd nw she's making me crazy. But I guess after being her friend I'll be able to get out from dis weird feeling.

Nd after dat he also headed towards Mansion.

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It was First day of Geet in Khurana's Constructions. Everyone knows her as an intern architect over here because it was Geet's request to not to tell anyone dat she's Maan's Fiance. Otherwise nobody will treat her as a normal employee nd she doesn't want an extra ordinary treatment over dere. Maan has told her that she'll work under Sasha. Who was a senior architect over dere. Geet knows dat Working under Sasha is nothing more den a challenge for her because she has noticed during interview that Sasha has left no stones unturned to reject her. But afterall She's Geet Malhotra nd she loves challenges.

Geet(to Herself): Dnt worry Geet! U'll handle her. If u can Agree Maan to be ur Friend den Sasha will nt be a difficult task.

Geet was quick in making friends infact during her first day only she became friends wid Pinki the Receptionist nd Adi who was accountant over dere. During lunch dey were sitting at canteen nd Geet was telling her about her experience in Khurana's. Pinki nd Adi has adviced her to be careful from Sasha nd her assistant Tasha as dey will nt let her survive in dis office.

Geet: dnt worry Pinki she can't do anything.

Pinki: no Geet u dnt know. Being Sasha's enemy is not a good thing. I m sure she'll definitely do something nd u have to leave dis office before ur Internship gets over.

Geet: nd I promise dat I'll leave dis office only after completing my internship.

Adi: Geet, r u not getting over-confident.

Geet: No adi sir, its not over-confidence, its my faith on myself. I have taken shasha's attitude towards me as a challenge nd wen Geet Malhotra takes any challenge she never loses it.

Adi: well geet I really wish u all d best for dat.

Geet: thanx sir.

Suddenly Pinki notices her engagement ring

Pinki: oye Geet, wat a beautiful ring u r wearing.

Geet: thanx.

Pinki: gifted by Boyfriend?

Geet: no.

Pinki: den?

Geet: actually I got engaged 2 days before only.

Pinki: wat r u saying? U r engaged?

Geet: yes.

Pinki: I think nw Sasha dnt have to worry.

Geet: y?

Pinki: actually Sasha can't bear anyone near DD. But as nw u r already engaged she couldn't be had any problem wid u.

Geet smiles at dis. Poor girl she didn't know dat the person to whom she's engaged is Maan himself. But wait! Wat did she just said? DD

Geet: Pinki, wat did u mean by DD?

Pinki: u dnt know in office every girl use to call MK sir DD. Means Dhak Dhak.

Geet: what?

Pinki: ya sabki heartbeats badh jati hai na unhe dekh ke. Isiliye

Geet couldn't stop herself laughing. Omg Maan is been called DD at office. She wonders hw many secrets r left to be found about Maan. Both Adi nd Pinki looks at her amused.

Adi: wat happen Geet? Y r u laughing?

Geet: nothing Adi Sir.. just like dat (she looks at d watch). I guess we have to go nw lunch time is about to over. (den looking to pinki) otherwise ur DD will fire me on d first day only.

Pinki: o ya lets go.

Dey all headed towards their respective seats.

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On d other hand It was Shilpa's First day at sanjeevani. And like geet she was also quick in making friends. She was at d conference hall with other interns wen she saw a familiar face over dere. It was Armaan. Shilpa quickly goes to him.

Shilpa: Armaan! Wat r u doing here?

Armaan: well wat do u expect a person wearing lab coat with stethoscope in d hospital?

Shilpa: u mean to say dat u r also an intern over here.

Armaan: Shilpa....

Shilpa: then y didn't u tell me before. Nd dat day also wen I asked u, u haven't said anything.

Armaan: Shilpa, listen to me.... I m.....

Shilpa: shut up, dnt say anything, u say that I m ur friend den y did u hide dis dat u have also got internship in sanjeevani.

Armaan was about to say something wen their conversation got distracted by Dr. Kirti's Voice.

Dr. Kirti: Dr. Shilpa..

Shilpa turned around to look.

Dr. Kirti: Dr. Shilpa, Dr. Armaan may is may be ur friend but outside sanjeevani, here he's ur Senior Doctor nd u have to learn how to talk to ur Seniors.

Shilpa couldn't believe on her ears. Armaan is her senior nd he didn't tell her before. She looked at him. Armaan try to save Shilpa from d scoldings.

Armaan: Dr. Kirti, shilpa was not knowing about dis, its not her fault.

Dr. Kirti: Dr. Armaan, u r a senior doctor nd if u'll be so linient to ur interns den u'll not able to handle dem. I hope its clear to u.

Armaan: yes Dr. Kirti.

Dr. Kirti(turning to shilpa): Nd Dr. Shilpa, if ur conversation has been over wid Dr. Armaan den pls go back to ur seat. Dr. Shashank will be here at any moment.

Dr. Kirti left from dere. Shilpa gives a look to Armaan nd den she also left.

Armaan: Shilpa..... suno to (to himself) arey yaar, dude ye tune kya kiya? Nw hw will I make her understand dat I wanted to give her surprise.

He shrugged his shoulders nd den move towards Conference hall.

Precap:

Maan takes Geet out for Dinner.

hey guys hope u all like d part 6. As i said it was unexpected for Maaneet i tried to keep my words for those who didn't find anything unexpected then I m really Very Sorry For ur disappointment. Pls let me knw whether i was able to succeed or not. hit d like button if u all like dis part nd do leave ur Comment/criticism

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Edited by aakritisri1111 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh...it was awesome....
mee loved it...
it was really good
maan and geet totally adorable
keep writing 👏👏👏👏

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