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Hi guys! thank u so much For ur love nd Support on my FF till nw nd a big hug to all of u for dat 🤗 i really enjoyed reading ur Comment. it feels so Gr8 that u all r liking my FF. Nw here's d Part 7 of my FF. hope u all will like it too. Pls feel free to criticise if u all dnt like it😊

Part 7:

After d lunch Geet is back to work. Her office is just next to Maan only a Glass divides it. She is working on d designs that Sasha has given to her. Maan notices her during work. He saw that her eyes were continuously on Computer. Her Coffee mug is next to computer but she didn't bother to have it. Unknowingly he smiles at her. He love d Passion dat Geet is having towards her work because somewhere he also had d same passion in him. Den he reminds of last night hw innocently did she asked him to be friends nd Maan singh Khurana who didn't have any friend except Armaan has agreed to it. But y? even he don't know. Then he thought that its better to left some questions unanswered.

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On the other Hand, shilpa has also adjusted well at Sanjeevani. She's working hard to not to get in Bad books of Dr. kirti. She has been scolded in her first day only nw only god knows dat how she'll mange her 2 yrs of internship but then she thought that she is Geet's sis. Then hw can she be so nervous. She can handle everything. Armaan tried hard to talk to her but she ignored him nd if she talks to him then its just about the patients nd medicines. Armaan knows that it'll not be an easy task to talk to her. Finally he caught her up in Canteen. She was sitting over dere wid her Coffee waiting for her friends to come. He goes nd sits next to her. As soon as she saw him she was about to leave from dere. Armaan stops her by holding her hand.

Armaan: Shilpa wait!

Shilpa said nothing

Armaan: Shilpa I knw u must be very angry on me but pls listen to me once. Pls.

Shilpa sits again to the chair.

Armaan: look shilpa I knw that I must have told u before that I m a senior doctor over here but.....

Shilpa: But wat Armaan, u want to say that u didn't got d chance to say. Armaan we knew each other from two months nd u can't say dat we didn't get chance to talk. First time wen u came to my I told u dat I wanted to do internship in sanjeevani den u said dat u knw many Senior doctors over here but didn't tell that u urself is a senior doctor over here.

Armaan: that's just because I wanted to see that whether u'll ask for any recommendation or not.

Shilpa: oh really! Nd from two months u were giving me tips for examinations nd u even told me that u r a medical student.

Armaan: ya because I wanted to see ur dedication moreover I wanted to knw hw brilliant u r? do u remember u corrected me many times wen I gave wrong answers

Shilpa: nd during Di's Engagement wen I asked u that which hospital did u got? What will u say for dat?

Armaan: arey I wanted to give u surprise.

Shilpa: Surprise? U knw wat armaan just stop giving dese stupid reasons.

Armaan: See if I would have told u that day that I m already a senior doctor over here den will u really treat me as ur friend till nw. moreover wen u come to sanjeevani u would not be able to handle things alone as u did until u saw me. Shilpa we were friends before also nd we'll always be friends. Nothing will change. Pls I m Sorry.

Shilpa said nothing.

Armaan: acha wat if I Say that I'll show u whole Mumbai during our day off.

Shilpa again said nothing nd started looking otherside. Armaan holds both of his ears.

Armaan: acha baba Kaan pakad ke sorry bol raha hoon. Ab to maan jao. Sanjeevani ki history me aaj tak kisi senior doctor ne apne intern se aise sorry nahi bola.

Nw shilpa couldn't help herself smiling he removes his hand from his ears.

Shilpa: kya Armaan tumse to koi naraaz bhi nahi reh sakta.

Armaan: because I m so innocent nd adorable.

Shilpa: o pls. dnt get too much misunderstanding for urself. Ye tumhari pehli galti thi isliye Maaf kiya. But next time no mistakes.

Armaan: promise no mistakes from next time. So frnds again?

Shilpa(gives her hand to meet his hand): ya Frnds. but dnt forget ur promise.

Armaan: which promise?

Shilpa: arey u forgot u have to show me whole Mumbai.

Armaan(teasing her): Did I said anything like dat?

Shilpa: Armaaaannn...

Armaan: acha baba sorry I was just kidding. Promise I'll show u d whole Mumbai.

And dey both smiles.

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It was 9:00 PM Maan just finished his work nd about to leave wen he notices that Geet is still in her cabin. He wonders that y she didn't gone home yet. He started moving towards her cabin. He walks into her cabin but Geet was so lost in her work that she didn't noticed. Maan looks at her hw she was tickling her pen left nd right, den she stops nd start making notes, hw she pulls back her hair strands back as they disturbs her, hw she hits herself on d head if she makes any mistake. He smiles on her those innocent things nd started moving towards her. He noticed dat her Coffee is still dere. "Pagal haven't drink her coffee yet" he thought. He saw that she didn't even noticed him standing beside her as both her eyes nd mind were on Computer. He tapped her shoulders to which she gestures to be quiet without seeing who it was, he again nd again tapped her shoulders by which she gets irritated

Geet: oho Mom! I told u na just 5 mins

Den she realizes something nd turned to see nd she saw Maan standing in front of her.

Geet: Maan! U?

Maan: ya geet who else?

Geet: nothing.

Maan: Geet y u haven't gone home yet?

Geet: oh wo I was going through these designs.

Maan: Geet Did u saw d clock its 9:15 of nite.

Geet: oh! I didn't realize.

Maan: hw can u realize wen all ur concentration was at Computer. Geet u haven't drink ur Coffee also yet.

Geet: Sorry Maan! But I have a strange Habbit. jab tak main apna saara kaam khatam nahi kar leti I can't take rest. Aur ghar jake pareshan hone se acha hai ki main saara kaam khatam karke ghr jayun.

Maan(smiles): u knw wat Geet we may Differ in many aspects but dere r few things common b/w us.

Geet: wat r dey?

Maan: see we both like Black coffee nd like u I m also dedicated towards my work.

Geet: Ab frnds bane hai to itni similarities to hongi na.

Maan: ya, But abhi ke liye itna kaafi hai. I m sure u must be feeling hungry nw.

Geet: ya Damn Hungry!

Maan: To chalo Today we'll have dinner outside nd on d way we can discuss about d designs also.

Geet: but Shilpa.....

Maan: dnt worry about her. I'll make call to Dadi nd she'll have her dinner at Mansion.

Geet: ok.

Maan: so wat r u waiting for lets go.

Geet: ya chalo.

Geet collected her bag from dere nd dey both started headed towards Parking Lot. He opened d door for geet nd himself Seated at d driver's seat nd dey both started their journey towards restaurant. While driving Maan noticed many times that Geet is lost somewhere. Inspite of her Normal Bak-Bak she was sitting quiet. He couldn't understand wat's bothering her den he realizes that geet has mentioned her mother's name in d cabin nd he understands dat Geet is missing her Mom. He decides to talk about dis to her later. He stops his Car in front of an Indian Restaurant. He knows that Geet loves Indian. Geet gets distracted from her Thoughts wen Maan called her.

Maan: Geet!

Geet: ya.

Maan: hum pahunch gaye.

Geet: oh! (den she noticed that it was an Indian restaurant) But Maan its an indian restaurant.

Maan: ya So?

Geet: but u like Italian Food.

Maan: but u love Indian na.

Geet looks at Maan nd thought hw much concern he had for her. Maan get out of d car nd opened d door for her Geet slowly got down nd dey started heading towards Restaurant. They have taken their seats nd Maan asked Geet to order. Geet looked at the menu card nd ordered Paalak Paneer nd rice. Maan also ordered d same for himself. Geet looked at him surprisingly.

Maan: wat? Mujhe paalak paneer pasand nahi ho sakta.

Geet said nothing but smiles.

Maan: thank god atleast u smiled. Wats wrong Geet y u were so lost.

Geet: nothing Maan I guess because of work pressure.

Maan: oh really I dnt think so.

Geet: seriously Maan. Nthing to worry.

Maan(with soft voice): Geet, u were missing ur Mom na.

Geet again looks at him nd thought hw would he came to know den she realizes that in d cabin wen Maan was disturbing her she mentioned her Mom's name.

Geet: yes, actually I never lived away from her till nw. moreover today wen u were continuously tapping me it reminds me of her. She also use to do the same wen I get lost in my work. (she said almost in tears)

Maan: geet Relax! Why r u feeling so low nd moreover I m sure that aunty is also missing u, but she decided to be strong so that u nd shilpa can fulfill their dreams nd if she cames to know that u r feeling so low over here then she couldn't be able to live over dere peacefully. Do u want that?

Geet nodded her head in no.

Maan: So stop being sad nd smile nw. waise bhi dis expression doesn't suits to ur face.

Geet: Like smiling expression doesn't suits urs?

Maan: Geeettttt.....

Geet: arey baba I was kidding... u really look good wen u smile. Keep smiling always

Maan smiles at her. Suddenly waiter brings their orders nd dey started having their dinner. After d dinner they waited for d valet to get their car nd as soon as d car arrives dey started heading towards home. Suddenly Geet noticed something nd she asked Maan to stop d car.

Geet: Maan, Pls stop d car.

Maan: wat happen Geet?

Geet pointed her finger towards an ice cream parlour.

Geet: Maan I wanted to eat Ice-cream.

Maan: Geet, Ice cream? (den looks at his watch) dat too dis tym. Geet its about to be 11 nd see it was quite cold outside too. U'll fell ill.

Geet: oho Maan! Nothing will happen. U know sardi me ice-cream khane ka maza hi aur hota hai.

Maan: from which film have u stolen dis dialogue?

Geet: Maan dnt change d topic. Pls lets go nd have ice-cream. Otherwise I'll nt talk to u (making a face like a kid)

Maan smiles at her while shaking his head.

Maan: Nautanki ho poori tum.

Geet: job hi ho, I want to eat ice-cream.

Maan: acha baba, chalo. Which flavour? Let me guess.... mmmm Chocolate rite?

Geet: no Butterscotch.

Maan: Butterscotch!

Geet: ya I love Butterscotch flavour. Butterscotch icecream, Butterscotch cake, butterscotch Pastries etc etc

Maan:But usually girls use to like Chocolate or strawberry.

Geet: ya but I m different.

Maan(wid a smile): wo to tum ho.

Geet: did u said something?

Maan(muffled): ummm.... no.

Geet: but by d way hw do u knw that usually girls like Strawberry or chocolate. U said that u have never been out wid any girl.

Maan(muffled again): ya, dats rite.Actually I heard it from Armaan.... he used to go out wid many girls.

Geet: nw dnt use Armaan's name to hide urself.

Maan: Geet, we can argue later also. Pehle chal ke ice cream kha le.

Geet: ya lets go. Tumhi kabse bolte ja rahe ho.

He again shakes his head nd Dey headed towards d parlour. Maan ordered 1 butterscotch large cup for her to which geet asked to make it 2. maan looked at her amuzed.

Maan: Geet 2 cups?

Geet: ya, u won't eat?

Maan: no thanx. I m nt mad like u.

Geet: c'mon Maan kabhi to meri baat mana karo.

Maan: geet I love my health nd I dnt want to fall ill.

Geet: u'll nt fall ill nd dats my promise ha if u want any other flavour u can say it.

Maan: Geet no one can argue wid u na. ur Vansh bhaiya is rite.

Geet: nw dnt drag my Bhai into it. If u dnt want to eat ice-cream den let it be.

Maan: acha baba I'll also have ice-cream. Happy nw.

Geet: Very Happy.

Den dey took their ice-cream nd headed towards d car. Geet was enjoying her Ice-cream inside d car while Maan was watching her that hw innocently she's enjoying her Ice-cream just like a kid nd den he began to smile. Geet Notices him smiling.

Geet: Maan, ur Ice-cream is melting. C'mon Have it.

Maan: Oh ya.

Geet: by d way y were u laughing?

Maan: nothing. Aise hi.

Geet: Chalo kaise bhi atleast u smiled. Warna I was thinking dat u dnt know hw to smile.

Maan: Geeetttt....

He was about to say something wen he noticed something at end of her Lips. It was d drop of ice-cream. He gestured her to wipe away but she couldn't able to understand so he came closer to her started wiping it from his fingers for d first time he was touching her cheeks nd lips nd it felt so soft. He caressed his fingers over dere for few seconds den he realizes what he was doing he quickly snaps back. He noticed that Geet is Feeling uncomfortable due to this.

Maan: Sorry wo..... Ice-cream....

Geet(slowly): its ok Maan. I understand. Have ur Ice-cream fast nd lets go to home. Its really getting late nw.

Maan nodded his head den he haves his ice-cream as fast as he can nd drives towards d home. Dey Didn't speak to each other during d whole journey. After dat he drops Geet at Outhouse nd he droves back towards d Mansion.

Den he gets changed himself into his tracks nd black Vest nd laid down on his Bed but couldn't able to sleep. He is remembering d moment dat has been just passed away den he realizes dat he has gone much closer to geet.

Maan(to himself): Maan wat do u think u were doing? Wat if she didn't like dat? She treats u as ur friend nd u gets so close to her. Oh God! She was Feeling so uncomfortable. I must apologise to her.

Den he takes out his Cell nd starts Dialing Geet's No.

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In d outhouse Geet has also changed to her Night Suit nd as usual waiting for her Di's Call wen she heard her Cell phone ringing nd she didn't got surprise to See Maan's name over dere. She knews Y Maan had called her dis tym.

Geet: Hello!

Maan: Geet!

Geet: haan Maan.

Maan: u are still awake? Waiting for Di's call?

Geet: ya who else? But y did u called? anything important?

Maan: ya, Actually I want to say Sorry to u.

Geet: Sorry, For wat?

Maan: wo At car.. I had came so close to u....

Geet: omg Maan! U were still thinking about that. Main to sab Bhool bhi gayi.

Maan: really?

Geet: ya Maan. U were just wiping away my Ice-cream only na. Ya I was a bit uncomfortable at dat tym. But nw I m f9..

Maan: R u sure?

Geet: stamp Paper pe likh ke doon.

Maan: No need. Acha one more thing. We're still friends na.

Geet: Maan! Nw u r irritating me.

Maan: acha Baba Sorry. I guess I m spoiling in ur company.

Geet: Hhmmm. Kuch din aur hamare sath raho fir dekho kya kya hota hai?

Maan: wat?

Geet: nothing. (den notices dat one call is being waiting) acha maan I'll hang up nw. Di ka call aa raha hai.

Maan: ok Bye Gud nite.

Geet: gud nite.

Geet disconnects d call nd start chatting wid her Di on d other hand Maan also disconnects nd started smiling.

Maan(to Himself): thank god! She didn't mind (den he realized dat he's smiling) But Maan wats wrong wid u y r u smiling. C'mon Maan Focus on ur work. She's just ur Friend.

And den he also goes to sleep.

Precap:

Maaneet Discussing on a project

Hey guys hope u all like dis Part of my FF. Sorry for d abrupt ending actually i have to prepare for my Exam tomorrow. Pls hit d Like button if u all like it nd do leave ur comment/criticism

Luv Aakriti
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