MaanEet FF: Once Upon A Time... Chapter14-Page125 - Page 74

Originally posted by: Chotii

awwwwwwwwww meri-candy-coated-little-munchkin!
*bigggggg hug!*

i've missed u + ur updates sooo much!! I was busy the whole of last week due to uni and will have the same stupid problem the week coming :( so, i'll only be catching up with ur updates on the weekend!

-Can I kill your teachers?

Please!

and omg... WHAT delightful updates!! I cant tell u how much p.11 + 12 made me smile!!!!

ooo first thing I have to tell u is OMG arjun bijlani?? omg, I love him!! well mayank too! how cuuuute is he??!! it made me even more happy to see him in the ff!! wooh!! altho i dont watch MJHT, I've watched like the beginning epi's of the show + he's been my fav!! u used him perfectly in this jas!

-OMG!!

He was my favourite too!

That show used to be my favourite show

Before it got boring and GEET started!

I was sooo obsessed with MG that, i discontinued my two MayUr FFs cause I can't think about any1 but MaanEet!

lol

now coming to the parts.. jeez, they sure are Something!!! of course u write so well, and u include the most hilarious, the cutest and the sweetest scenarios!! love love love love LOVED both updates So much!!

-Thanks soooo much Saz Di!

You have no idea how much your compliments mean to me!

Makes me feel over the sky!

I couldn't believe Maan confessed like that, but I'm glad he did - there was no fuss, he just told her... and am sooo happy that although Geet may not have totally realised her feelings, atleast the little things she does indicates that yup, Kuri nu vi munde naal pyaar e!
-Lol... Ofcourse, kudi nu vi munde naal pyaar e!

Hehe...

LOVED the parts!!! cant wait for the next ones!!!

mwah!xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

-Will update sooooooon!

Thursday or Friday hopefully

Originally posted by: Ayesha_MSK

Any chance of an update? 😃

Originally posted by: *angel94*

-reserved-

Originally posted by: ansah

wow...that was awesome update...loved it....

geet's family is so adorable loved them....

totally rocking....and loved geet and mayank

they both are so cute as siblings....

it was so nice when geet stood up for maan.....

and geet being possessive bout maan.....😆😆

and how they select the ring for one another....

and how maan propose too geet....was just so out of world...

and the way the place his hand on her waist 😳😳😳😳

and the special teaser.....loved it......😃😃😃

thankuuuu for awesome update 🤗

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Reply for 3 update

Matlab 2 long n 1 short one😉

Preet was sho shweet

Three gfs yaar wah wah

He really isnt listening to Maan 😆😆😆

Liked that Maan got it that he loves her n said also

Acha zyada lamba time nahi liya

Geet ne resign kar diya

Man u scraed me i thought ur seprating them

Dono ka ego they didnt spoke or evn saw each other for whole 5 days baap re

Liked that atlast Maan found Geet n witout giving her any option took her to Dadi

Preet was real cutiepie here also

Geet ko itna saare kisses n hugs aur Maan ko kuch nahi😆😆😆

Geet sahi hai Chandighar me family hain aur araam se Maan ko le ke nikal gayi😆😆😆

That was real comic

I was actually missing Mayur n thought how u didnt got them but u got them as Geet bro n bhabhs😉

The questioning session was fab

Mayank was too protective n possessive towards Geet

Liked tehw ay Geet supported Maan

Their stay was fab n the way Maan was telling their imaginative luv stry was fab

Liked that atlast Maan thought he was forcing her

Geet's reply was shweet

She still dosent loves him or may be not accepting pata nahi ki hai

Their shopping was cool

Geet was possessive over Maan No new Sec oye hoye😆😆😆

Maan's purposal was sho cute😉😆😆

The way Maan was threatening her i thought he'll kiss her n say if u say those words agn ill do the same thg agn😉

Their engagement was itni si ya aage bhi hai

I though Armaan wuld say Mamu Muh toh band karo😆😆😆

Maan was really lost in Geet

Liked Geet's no so good Compliment

Fab update

Waise Missing Miss Touch Me Not romance

Update soon n Sorry for late reply

Originally posted by: dimpzz

awww..............thnxx sooo much
feels GREAT to noe tat my comments mean soooo much to u!
n can't wait to see their nakhre 😉
hehehehehe
hmmm...about starting a FF
i dun think i cn get enough time n m not tat gr8 a writer soo..........
but even if i end up writing 1 i will defo pm u
hehehehehe n will wait for ur LONG comments! 😆

luv
Navpreet

Originally posted by: .sireesha.

OMG OMG OMG thats Fabulous👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏Awesome👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏Fantastic👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏Amazing👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏Lovely👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏Marvelous👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏Hilarious🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣U made me laugh so much......

Loved it soooooooooo sooooooooooo soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much..❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️...

You made me read it again and again...😃....I should comment fast and read it again..😃😃...

Loved every single word and every single line...❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️....

Loved the way Maan spoke with Geet's family....😃😃😃.....

Loved the way Maan answered all their questions...😃.....

Maan can win anyone's Heart.....😳😳😳.....So finally he won all their Hearts..😃😃...

Loved the way Maaneet narrated their so called Love Story......🤣........Thats the most Hilarious Part..🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣....

Loved it soooooooooo much when Geet said Maan that she is happy with marriage because she knows Maan will always keep her Happy...😳😳😳😳❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️...

Loved the way Geet shooed away all the girls and few guys there for the job and she reapplied for the Job and got the appointment signed by Maan....🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣...

wow Geet got a ring for Maan from her own Money...😳😳😳❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️...

Loved it sooooooooooo much when Geet pulled Maan's cheecks and said that he is so Cute..❤️❤️❤️❤️...

I know Im quoting almost all the lines but I can't help it I Love these Lines soooooooooooo much.....❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️.......

"I asked her for coffee and then I saw her for the first time. I didn't find her special at that time. But, she! Oh my god! She wouldn't stop staring at me! She had that dreamy look in her eyes! The one she has when she watches Drashti Hui Sabse Parai"🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣LOL U got our Drashti Hui Sabse Paraayi back.....wow......

'What the hell is he saying? Me? Looking at HIM dreamily?' 🤣🤣🤣🤣

"I yelled at her and told her to stop ogling," 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣wow I never thought Maan can cook up such a lovely story

"The next day, she was being all clumsy and fell five times in front of me! She thought I would run and catch her but, I didn't. All girls do that in front of me...The trick was getting really old!" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

"Too many TV Shows Geet!" 🤣🤣🤣🤣Not too many only Drashti Hui Sabse Paraayi is her Favourite.....🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

"Exactly! Too much Drashti Hui Sabse Parai!" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

"She thought I'd be like Gurmeet Chaudhary! Always saving her!"🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣Ofcourse this part is True.....Maan Ur always Geet's Saviour......

"Why don't you tell them the other parts? Like how you kept calling me for coffee or dictations just so you could see me! And how you, proposed to me in front of the whole office! And, you got me so many flowers! And, how you tried to be like Gurmeet Chaudhary to impress me!" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣wow Geet is now ready with her Story now........🤣🤣🤣🤣

'Propose? Flowers? Impress? My foot!' 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣Geet can also cook up good stories but not better than U Maan.......

"And then, you told me that you were waiting for me to say that since the day you met me!"🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣Thats might be True which Geet herself is unaware of it till now.......

"Excuse me? You need a psychiatrist! Me? Following you? In your dreams! It was you who followed me saying sorry!" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

"What the hell! Get your memory checked! Why would I run after you when I have like hundred cars?" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣Ya thats right Maan will only chase in a Car instead of running behind.......

"Because, you needed excercise because you missed your workouts cause you were too busy thinking about me!" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣Point to be Noted.....

"Geet. I'm taking you to a good Dimag Ka Doctor tomorrow! Okay?" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣Ya better both should have a checkup they are making Good stories which is an Extraordinary Talent........🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

"Apna bhi checkup karwa lena!" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

"Because I know you'll keep me happy," 😳😳😳😳The Lovliest line........

"Only I am your secretary! Got it!"🤣🤣🤣wow she is Possessive........

"You are never hiring a new secretary! Samjhe?" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣Aapka Hukum Saalakhon Par

"I did something so unlike me! And all you say is Huh?" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣You gave her a Shock Maan let her come to normal state first.......

"Well, then you're such a SweetAdorableCandyCoatedLittleMunchkin!" 😳😳🤣🤣🤣Its really True......

Ur Just Amazing Dear.....⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.......

I Love the way U write....❤️❤️❤️❤️......Thats so Beautifully Written....❤️❤️❤️❤️....

Hats Off to U...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️...

Thanq soooooooooo much for the Lovely FF.....🤗🤗🤗.....

Im Very Eagerly and Very Greedily waiting for the next part....😍😍😍😍😍....

so Pls Pls Pls Pls Pls Pls Pls Update Sooooooon Dear....😒......

Originally posted by: shreya satish

Loved it....

Waiting for engagement & marriage

Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

Awwwwwiiieeee!!!

I missed you soooooo much! missed u tons tooooooooo!!

I wish you luck for your school work! thank u!! the cutest thing about that goodluck is that u say for school, when i'm at Uni hehehe but dont worry, even i stupidly refer to it as school sometimes.. 😕 😆 *big hug!*

-Jassi ji... *ishmile!* hehe xxxxxxxxxxxx

Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

Hey! Thanks soooo much Afsha! Love that you always write me such great long comments! Always makes me smile!😃 -Jassi