MaanEet FF: Once Upon A Time... Chapter14-Page125 - Page 39

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Starry_night

That was super-fabulous! What an apt use of that dialogue from the show...."wear it or else I will make you wear it!".....lolz.....Maan is always trying to find ways of getting close to Geet and TOUCH her.....lolz....and he is "not interested" in doing that......lolz.....nice joke! Hehe! Maan again could not control his feelings and they kissed yet again.....and this time Geet learned how to do it and kissed him back.....lolz.....I must say......this kurri is learning a lot from her boss.....lolz....what an ideal boss-secretary relationship! Lolz. They again started to fight on the kiss and touch me not stuff.....ahaha.....just so Maan and Geet! Geet driving at a speed of 160.....me loves fast driving.....except am yet to learn how to drive....lolz. That Garewal baap-bete were ghooring Maan's Geet.....how dare they! Loved the words you used there....lolz.....really funny! Uh-oh....Maan cancelled the deal and they decided to leave......but won't be able to as the precap suggests......all in all a superb update! Me is in love with the FF! Do continue soon.

Awwww!
Thanks sooooooooo much!!
Ideal Boss-Secretary Relationship!!!!!!! ROFL!!!!
hAhaHaa
Thanks for telling me that your in love with my FF!
Makes me feel good
😳😳😳
I'm in love with your comments!
-Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago
Np anytimee ;))
yeahh I was waiting for ur updates..
Yup please try to updt by tonight ;D
I m gonna post my first FF!!
will Start with tht scene...the one I just posted..
I wanna see a confession in ur stylee ;)
I lovee your style of writing..
You cud take the scene I suggested rite now..
Or make up ur own..
Becuz I m gunna use the scene I gav you in my IF...
;))

I see a confession sooonn ;d
and then their engagment and then marriage...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dimpzz


hehe...yea
v r alike except d watching punjabi movies part
i stay in jalandhar
umm...i hav now settled here in punjab...earlier i used to keep travelling all over india....basically south india
so now u cn call me punjabi sis LOL
n i asked my frndz about tat movie......ek kudi punjab di...they said it wasn't gud.....
n since u don't lyk d actor....so dun watch it :P
n i don't really listen to punjabi songs.......juz lyk sum of them
so u noe how to speak punjabi?!
n canada!u lyk it there?
or prefer punjab...but since u came here only twice so i think u wud obviously prefer canada naa

luv
Navpreet

Wow!!! You stay in Jalandhar? I remember going to the Wonderland there! Oh...I didn't expect it to be good either Ya, I loveeeee Punjabi songs, and I know how to speak Punjabi Mostly...Okay, actually I don't know it properly hehe Yes! I love it here in Canada! Even though, in wonter it's freeeeezzzing cold!!! like -30 sumtimes!! and it snows like sooooo mcuh! I still luvv it! In the summer it's pretty hot still But, is till love Punjab! But, i face many problems there! it's hard to adjust! Like, sum places have those other toilets which I don't know how to use lolzz and many ppl stare at me and my siblings a lot!! It gets freaky, they look at us like we're aliens! lol But, I love it cause everyone treats us sooooo nicely! i love the ppl there! There all very nice, except for sum gossipers lol -Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dimpzz

awesome update!
it wz rockin
n d nite in d cottage!
amazing!
he kissed her n SHE KISSED HIM BAK!!!
woooooohooo!!awesome!
n then when he sayz now don't sjout at me u kissed me bak
n she goes lyk...did i get angry!no...did i say anyhting...hahahahaha
tat wz funny!
i luved d update!
it wz juz soooo awesome!
n d meeting...lol both of them staring at geet
hehhe....buddha!lol tat wz funny!
n when he says geet n maan look much bttr together.........OMG! i luved it!
n d precap!
landslide!
awesome....so now they hav to stay together for some moret ime..................yipee!
m luving landslides now.......they shud happen more frequent! :P
hehehe
newayz update soooon!
lyk real soon!

luv
Navpreet

Awww!!! Thank you sooo mcuh!! I loev you for always taking ur time to write such sweet comments! They encourage me to update!!! Thanks sooo mcuh! I really appreciate you! -Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nehara

i loved the update....

it was so awesome..... and i really like the name... ms. touch me not... he he...
cnt wait to read the next update..
pls update soon... 😃

Hey!! Thank a ton! -Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Nice update

Maan atlast lost his control n did wat he wanetd to
Thank God they controlled at rght tim warna in the mrng we wuld hav seen World War 3😆😆
Geet learnt how to kiss oye hoye😆😆😆😆
Maan was naughty irritating n sadu also
Loved the way he was blabbering anythg after the passionate moment😆😆😆
Bunty n buddha as per Maan
They were fab
Loved his jealousy
He actually blurted his feelings to her n our innocent Geet culdnt get it
Errrrrrrrrrrrhhhhhhhhhhh😡Sumtimes i dnt lik her innocence😆😆😆
Landslide n phr they are struck
Looks lik jo tabhi nahi hua wo ab hoga
Wat say😉

Aww!
Thanks a ton for your great comments!
-Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

woooooooooooooow loved da update

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue

Thanks a ton! -Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ansah

that was just aweesome...really loved it

u are awesome writer..keep writing..
i loved it 👏👏👏

Thanks a ton! -Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

nice part.loved it.
maan feels jealous .
continue soon.

Thanks a ton! -Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi dear pm me too loved it

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