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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Mina H

OMG THAT WAS AWSUMMM

heyyy jas, i nw im commenting after a long time... i missed ur updates... but as you now, i was flying(airplane) ahahaha nways, i just loved your two parts they were toooooooooooooooooooooooo goood but plz plz plzzz cmake a reali reali reali reali long update 😃 and yea i will also update my ff today... so u beta comment 😳
love yaa😳

Thanks Mina Dear!! I'm soo happy u liked them!
I had already guessed the reason for u not
commenting was that ur probably in airplane!
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Sorry for not updating!!
I'll make sure I update today!
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Update coming in 15-30 minutes!
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Once Upon A Time


Chapter 9:

Maan and Geet are stuck in traffic since 15 minutes. There car has moved less than a metre. Geet's head is hurting.
"Maan sir! What's wrong! I don't feel good, I feel suffocated here..." she said restlessly.
"Wait here. I'm gonna go ahead and check what has happened." he said getting out of the car. Geet waited patiently.
"Geet, aage lanslide hui hain." said Maan coming back into the car.
"What!?" she asked.
"Ya...They said it will take time to clear it all up and they said to stay in a nearby hotel." said Maan making a U-Turn. Geet sighed.

They entered the closest hotel.
"Can we get two rooms?" asked Maan.
"I'm sorry sir, but all the hotels around the landslide area can only let you book one room, because everyone is going to have to stay in these hotels." explained the receptionist.
"Okay...Give us one room." said Maan turning to look at Geet who was toatally pissed.

"Oh my god! I can't believe I'm gonna have to share the room with you!!" she whined while Maan used the key to open the door.
"Excuse Me!?? Mujhe bhi koi shaunk nahi hain tumhare saath room share karne ka!" he retorted. As soon as the door opened, Geet ran in and jumped on to the bed. She made herself comfortable and took her iPhone out.
"What is wrong with you?" he asked.
"What do you mean what's wrong with me!? I'm catching up on my favourite show, that has Gurmeet Chaudhary! Because of this trip, I missed two episodes." she said as she plugged in her earphones. Maan looked at her wierdly.
"You girls are so wierd! What the hell is the point of watching these TV Soaps? It's all fake! Such time waste!" he said setting down their bags beside the bed. Geet looked at him furiously.
"How dare you call my Gurmeet Chaudhary time waste!?" she yelled. She was very offended by what he said.
"Woah! Calm down Geet!" he said when he saw her furious face.
"You called my show time waste!!??" she yelled. She carefully set her iPhone down and took out the earphones. She picked up the pillow and threw it at Maan. It hit right at his face because he wasn't ready for it. He gaped at her.
"Did you just throw the pillow at me!?" he asked angrily.
"Ya...I did!" she said proudly. He took the pillow and threw it back at her face. She threw it at him picking up the other pillow, and throwing it as well. He caught both pillows and threw one at Geet and walked towards her. They had a huge pillow fight. The fought like kids. They stood up on the bed still fighting.
"Stop Geet! That's enough!" he said/
"You threw the pillow at me! How dare you?" she said and continued hitting him with the pillow. He did the same. They fought for five whole minutes before Maan got really angry, because Geet just slammed the pillow on his face again and this time it hurt. He took hold of her wrists making both of them fall onto the bed. Maan was on top of Geet, pinning her wrists down at both sides. There faces were extremely close. Geet turned her face to the side a bit.
"How dare you hit your boss with the pillow!?" he asked angrily.
"How dare you call mine and Dadi's favourite show time waste!? And ya...Why the hell are you touching me again!?" she yelled, struggling in his grip. He tightened his grip on her wrists. Her eyes met his. He stared into her innocent eyes. His eyes went down to her lips. How he wished he could kiss them.
"Geet...What would you do if I kissed you?" he asked huskily. Geet's eyes widened.
"Kill you!" she shot back. 'Okay...Bad Idea!' thought Maan in his head. He looked at her again.
"Let go of me! You're such a Dush-" before she could continue Maan had the urge to kiss her. He pressed his lips against her before she could say anything else. Geet was too shocked to react. Her eyes widened. She realized he was kissing her. She struggled to free her wrists. He kissed her harder wanting her to kiss him back but she controlled herself. She finally freed one hand and slapped him. Maan immediately stopped kissing her and got up. She got up too. She slapped him again.
"What the hell is wrong with you!?" she asked angrily. He reached forward but she slapped his hand away.
"Don't touch me! Stupid! Idiot! Khote! Gadhe!" she said angrily. She turned around fiercely smashing her long ponytail in his face, and then left the room banging the door behind her. Maan sighed and decided to take a shower to cool himself down. He was also really angry. 'I know I kissed her and I shouldn't have but that doesn't mean she slaps me TWICE and insults me like that!' he thought in his head furiously.
"Pagal Jungli Billi!" he yelled before walking into the bathroom.

"Dusht Dhanav! How dare he!?" she said as she walked in the garden of the hotel angrily. She sat on the bench and inhaled a deep breath and then exhaled. She repeated the steps a few times.
"Calm down Geet...Just relax!" she said to herself. She bought herself an Iced Cappuccino to cool herself down. She felt kind of guilty now. She slapped him twice. And the first one was hard! She brushed off the guiltiness and finished her Iced Capp. She went back to the room to get her dose of Gurmeet Chaudhary, and her favourite onscreen couple GurTi. She sat on the bed setting her iPhone on her lap, plugging in her earphones. She started watching the episode. She smiled looking at Gurmeet. Maan came out of the bathroom, with towel around his neck, wearing a black vest, and jeans. He noticed Geet was there. He didn't think she'd come so soon. He noticed that she was too lost in whatever she was watching to notice that he was there. She was just smiling. Maan walked over to his suitcase beside the bed shaking his head. Some water got onto the screen of her iPhone. She paused the video to turn. She saw Maan taking a shirt from his suitcase. Geet glared at him shooting daggers.
"Oh My God! You did not!" she said angrily.
"Did not what?" he asked confused.
"You just threw water on Gurmeet Chaudhary!!" she yelled. He went close to her and started shaking his head like a childish idiotic maniac.
"Hawww!! Stop it!" she shrieked using her hand to block her face.
"Argh!!! You're soooo annoying!" she said angrily when he finally stopped. He chuckled, and used the towel to dry his hair, while Geet gave him an angry look.
"Why are you being such a moron!? Poor Gurmeet! You made him wet!" she said pouting. Maan rolled his eyes. 'Poor Gurmeet! You made him wet?? What is wrong with her!? All she cares about is this Gurmeet dude!' thought Maan in his head. Geet went back to watching 'Drashti Hui Sabse Parai'.
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It was evening and Geet went to take a shower. She came out in her 'Tom N Jerry' pyjamas. Her hair was wet. Maan was on his laptop working on some project. Maan looked up as he heard the door open. Maan saw her pyjamas and smiled to himself. He looked back at his laptop instantly before she could catch him staring at her. Geet was drying her hair with the towel. Maan tried not to get distracted but, had to look at her once in a while. She was such a heavenly sight that Maan was finding it hard to look away. He looked away and didn't dare to look again. Maan was sitting on one side of the king-sized bed. Geet sat down on the other side and started doing a french manicure on her fingernails. While doing the manicure she started talking.
"Maan sir...Who's in your family?" she asked out of the blue.
"Why do you wanna know?" asked Maan a bit confused at her sudden question.
"Just asking, you don't have to tell me." she said focussing on her nails.
"It's just Dadi and me..." he said after a while looking onto his laptop screen.
"I loved my mom...But, she cheated on my dad." he said with pain in his voice. Geet looked up at him. He was still looking at his screen.
"They both died in a plane crash when I was 14." he completed. She looked at him for a while.
"I'm sorry..." said Geet.
"It's alright...You don't need to say sorry." said Maan. Geet was done one hand. She didn't dare ask Maan to do her right hand. She did the best she could. After a while Maan spoke up.
"Who's in your family?" he asked.
"My mom, dad, Brij, my brother, chacha chachi, Rajji, Tito, my cousins, and my daarji." she answered happily.
"Wow...Big family." said Maan.
"Ya...I love them! And I really miss them too..." said Geet.
"By the way...Who's Naintara, I thought she was your sister or something." said Geet. Maan straight away started laughing away.
"Naintara...my sister?? In her dreams!! She's just all about money!" said Maan. Geet looked at him confused.
"Actually I have a step brother Dev, who married her. She completely changed by brother...For the worse. They live in Canada and all they care about is pocket money." said Maan.
"Oh..." said Geet.
"I still can't believe you thought that Naintara was my sister!" said Maan chuckling. He continued on with his work.
"Did you eat?" asked Maan after a while.
"Yes." replied Geet.
"Okay...I'm going for a walk, I'll be back soon." said Maan leaving.
"Okay." said Geet.
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After about half an hour Maan came back to the room flinching in pain. Geet gasped and ran to him.
"What happened?" asked Geet concerned.
"I was walking and one of the waiters accidentially dropped a glass and it broke and a piece hit me at the back of my shoulder. It's really painful right now. Can you find a First-Aid kit?" said Maan. Geet went and got it immediately. He tried taking his shirt off.
"Oww!" he said, he couldn't use the shoulder, because it hurt so much. Geet gasped. He was hurt and it was paining her.
"Wait! I'll do it!" she said. She shyly took her hands to his tie, untying it. He jerked forward in the process. She looked up and saw him dangerously close to her. She opened the buttons of his shirt with shaking hands. She looked downwards. She walked around him so that his back was facing her and she got some cotton to clean the wound made from the glass. She closed her eyes looking at it. She carefully cleaned it.
"Oww!" said Maan in pain. Geet flinched.
"SorrySorrySorry!! I'm not an expert at this!" she said. She hesitated, then slowly started to apply the ointment very softly, because she knew it stings. Maan didn't feel the sting. All he could feel was the soothing feeling of her cold hands.
"Is it hurting?" she asked concerned.
"Yes." he lied. It wasn't stinging at all.
"Sorry!" said Geet. Maan smiled at her concern. She was done dressing the wound. She helped him put the shirt on trying not to get caught staring at his eight pack abs! She buttoned his shirt for him looking downwards. Maan loved the way her fingers brushed his bare torso while she buttoned his shirt. Next, she picked up the tie. She stood on her tippytoes, putting it around his neck and then adjusting it with the collar. Geet cheek brushed against his rough cheek while she was putting the tie around him giving them both butterflies in their stomachs. She started to tie it, and Maan jerked forward. Geet didn't notice. She was done tying the tie. She looked up to see Maan just inches away staring at her intently. She was moving back when Maan caught her waist bringing her closer. Geet hand went around his neck. She lowered her eyes. His nose brushed against her nose and then her cheek.
"Aren't you gonna say 'Don't Touch Me!', Miss Touch Me Not!" asked Maan mischieviously.
"And why are you touching me Geet?" asked Maan. Geet regained her senses and let go of Maan, pushing his hands away. She turned around and went to the bathroom. Maan just stood and smiled.
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It was 9:00 PM. Maan was working on some project again, and Geet was reading a GurTi FF on her phone called 'Just Do As I Say' by a really sweet forum member Saz. After an hour Geet put her phone away and coincidentially Maan put his laptop away. Geet went to brush her teeth before she sleeps. When she came back Maan was ready to sleep, wearing a black vest.
"Geet...You sleep on the bed, and I'll sleep on the couch." said Maan. Geet was so surprised. She was thinking that she'll have to fight for it.
"Are you serious!?" she asked cheerfully.
"No!" he said and then collapsed on the bed chuckling. Geet's jaw dropped.
"Haww!! Oh my god! I hate you!" said Geet angrily.
"Get off! I'm sleeping there!" she said angrily.
"I'm not gonna budge from here! If you want you can sleep beside me!" he said laughing inwardly. She narrowed her eyes at him.
"Oh just shut up!" she said. She tried pulling him off but he was too much for her. Maan just lay there inwardly laughing at her futile attempts, while closing his eyes and pretending he was asleep. She stood on the bed and tried to kick him off. In the process, she slipped and fell on top of Maan. Maan opened his eyes to see Geet on top of him, with her hand on his chest. Her hair tickled his shoulder. They had a two minute eyelock.
"Can you please get off, otherwise I'm gonna have to touch you, Miss Touch Me Not, to make you get off. You know you're not as light as you appear to be." said Maan teasingly. She got off instantly.
"Argh!!" she groaned and took the other blanket and pillow walking over to the couch. She lied down and fell asleep after a while. Maan opened his eyes and got up. He walked over to the sofa and lifted up his sleeping beauty and lied her down on the bed. he covered her with the blanket. He kissed her cheek and went over to the sofa to sleep.
"Why do i think I'm falling in love with Geet?" Maan asked himself as he settled himself on the sofa.
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Precap:

Engangement Decision


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owsme update

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OMGG! haha! I LOVE thiss update! soo so cutee! :D
haah! they are living in one room & she watching Gurmeet on her Ipod! haha! its ok! I m always doing that too..
Pillow fight was hilarious! haah! OMG! I can't believe they just had a pillow fight! ahah wow! soo cuteee.
the kiss scene was funnnyy..but soo cutee. Maan just WANTS to kiss Geet everytimee! haah! soo naughty! but I love him!
"You just threw water on Gurmeet Chaudhary!!" she yelled. He went close to her and started shaking his head like a childish idiotic maniac
^hahah! OMGG! that part was just hilariouss! haha!! this character seems alot like mee..hah! I would do that too! haha!
Poor Maan..must be wondering who is GURMEET? and why is she all overr himm? haha! ;p haha!
Family talk was nice..but I can't believe Geet thought that NT was Maan's sis! haha! IMPOSSIBLEE!!! hah!
Wound scene was wow! I wouldd loveee to bee Geet in that sceneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!! they weree soo closee.
HAAH! reading FF by Saz..haha! thats soo mee. ;))
Last scene was wow! :D 'Don't Touch Me!', Miss Touch Me Not!"
How he took geet in his arms...the last scene..haye! he is soo in love with her! <33
PRECAP LOOKS FAB! I m soo waitin for their marriagee! can't wait! :D
UPDATEEE TOMM OK? ur precap is makingg me wanna read moreee.
Goodjobbbb. LOVEED IT AS ALWAYS!
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awwwwwwwwwww
that was a great part Jassi
just amazingly awesome
i loved it toooo much
thanks a ton for the pm

love
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pls do yu mind to cont soonnnnnn next part brilliant super thanks see soonnnnnn
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Loveeeeeeeeeeeee the update.
Maneet scenes r toooo cuteeeeeee.
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.




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Wow Jassi great one yaar ......enjoyed reading it ...plz update soon....

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