'The Innocence' -FF -updated(7) pg 27

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Tasneem

@kooLgrl786

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#71

@aabz hehe yeah kabab mei haddi!! :D
hope u lyk d nxt part :)

P.S. missed u on paradise :(

@nimmy, arshi n gunji .....thnku guys!🤗

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GUNJAN

@gunji

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#72

thanx for the pm....i wud hv really hated to miss the 3rd part....coz its really good👍🏼

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Tasneem

@kooLgrl786

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: gunji
thanx for the pm....i wud hv really hated to miss the 3rd part....coz its really good👍🏼

hehe....yeah i jst had a doubt!!

nyways thnx agn😳

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Mehak

@Mehak_Luvs_Rani

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#74

Hey...I really liked your FF...Its very good!!!
Great job.🤗

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Tasneem

@kooLgrl786

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#75

@mehak.....thnx alot sweetz!!
hope u read all 3 parts....bcoz i jst updated on my 1st page......abt which page diff parts r!!!

thnx 4 liking it!!

xxx

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Mini17

@Mini17

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#76

thank u so much for d pm........ its really nice........ hope to read d next part soon😊

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unknown

@Autumn_Bliss

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#77

Thanks for the PM dear..its an interesting story..good work..keep it up..😃..<3..

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Crazyy_Fan

@Crazyy_Fan

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#78

Hi ur ff iz really nice. 😊The way u hv setup the whole thing is gud. Aur jo personalities create ki hai woh bhi achi hai. Anji mast hai! 😛 😛!!!!!Ye serina type ki ladkiyan mujhe bahut gandi lagti hai, but it will create twists in ur ff😊Are koi jhakkas naye ladke ki entry karo na jisse Vikram jealous ho...d J factor can do miracles😉 Jus kidding, write it d way u want to😆

Acha waise i'd like to give u a suggestion😳 u can change d name of d characters n form it on some show(preferably Dmg) As it is u hv given a character sketch, so there wont be any prob. Moreover, we will be able to connect faces to d story........ Its jus a suggestion😳

Luv_Sakshi

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nandita singh

@nanditasingh

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#79

cool.....loved reading your FF..so now i 'm permitted to say you are talented...right!
fresh..already in love with Tina..and the whole gang, its so much like us ..regular school kids with our nity-bity story to tell
looking forward to your next update
love
Nandita

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Tasneem

@kooLgrl786

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#80

@ padminir n divz thnx alot guyz!!

@crazyfan.....aww np u can gimme ny suggestions! but do u think it wud luk gud to change d names inbtw??

@nadita.....thnx a lot sweetz!!! 🤗