'The Innocence' -FF -updated(7) pg 27 - Page 20

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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG....deena u will live 100 years hehe!
i sent pm....n thn cheked wthr u read or no......n thn i was lyk whr hav she been....n thr u r !!
thnx 4 readin sweetz!!!
dnt worry .......wont let u down ;)

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Posted: 14 years ago
good job. 😊. its very nice nd colloquial. 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey tats
wow nice and lovely update😃
tina thinks she is in love with vicky 🤔
anyways nice and please update it asap😉
with hugs
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Posted: 14 years ago
wwatz that? arrrree why did it end? tassss cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 7

Scene 1

Vikram: I really luv u Suhani......plz say sumthin.
Suhani: amm........*long pause*
Vikram: plz Suhani dnt b so quiet temme sumthin.....plz
Suhani: hmm.....im so....i relly dnno wat to say..... *feeling shy n lost*
Vikram: Jst say nythin....nythin wats in ur heart.....jst say it....ill take it wateva it may b
Suhani: actually Vikram.....even i lyk u but i dnno abt gettin into a realtionship......isnt it too fast....i mean d trust factor cums inbtw. I've never been in a relationship b4 n i dnno hw to trust u so fast.....i dnt wanna get hurt ......n i dnt want my sis havin ny bad impression abt u or me.....
Vikram: Its ok Suhani...u can take ur own tym....ill wait.....wenever u feel lyk u trust me or u srsly wanna b wid me jst temme..... i promise u ill never break ur trust....i hav relly fallen 4 u.......jst gimme a chance.
Suhani: ok Vikram ill think......n will tell u asap..... :)

Suhani n Vikram get out of d coffee shop aftr a long convo.
Vikram drops her at her place n goes bak home.
Suhani reaches home.....n gets on her bed widout talkin to ny1 smilin to herself.
Vikram does d same....n is jst thinkin abt Suhani.


Suhani: Oh My God!!! Vikram loves me !!!! *blushes*
*takes d blanket on covers her face wid a big smile on her face n sleeps*

Vikram: I Love Suhani....i only Love you
*goes to sleep*

Scen 2

Tina is lieing on her bed.....

Tina: I Love You, Vikram, only u!!

Jst wen she was abt to take d blanket n sleep her phone rang...
wen she saw d name it was Tarun....

Tina: hey Tarun!
Tarun: hie, how u doing?
Tina: im gud! hw cum u called me 2ni8 huh?
Tarun: actually Tina, I wanted to tlk to u abt sumthin important.
Tina: hmm......arri8 go ahead.
Tarun: Its abt Natelie..... Iam gonna break up wid her 2mmrw morning !!
Tina: WHAT???!!!! r u crazy?? wat r u tlkin abt ?? u cnt do dis :(
Tarun: Tina calm down.....plz i gotto do dis, our relationship is not workin our at all, she doubts on me n v rarely meet or tlk. othr thn tat thrz no spark in our relationship.....its so dead! n i dnt think i feel 4 her dat strong, its jst not goin d way it shud b goin....
Tina: Tarun no plzz.....Nat will b broken.....she wont b able to take dis, she relly luvs u....u can still work it out dnt lose hope.
Tarun: no Tina its impossible nw.....Tina u r her gud frn n mine too....n i knw no1 els can understand bettr thn u, plz u gotto let me do it dis tym......everytym u try to make things better btw us but its not workin out, trust me Tina thrz no use of pulling dis relationship 4 no reason whr thrz no love, no trus, no romance nothing! plz Tina u gotto understnd!
Tina: but Tarun.... :( im so confused nw!
Tarun: Tina, u dnt need to b confused, i jst told u b4hand so tat u can b wid Nat n make her understnd d whole scenario. Plz Tinz Plz.
Tina: arri8 Tarun, I wont stop u, a relationship cnt work wen its one sided......Nat will b sad but hopefully ill try to make her feel arri8.
Tarun: thnx Tina. will cya 2mmrw. tc, byee
Tina: byee.

Tina is very confused, sad, happy, all mixed emotions flowing thru. she is glad dat she is in love but she cnt c her frn gettin torn apart.
she jst goes to sleep wid all confusion.

Scene 3

Early in d morning at school, students r entering n chit chatting.
Tina, Anji, Azra n Nat standing 2gthr near thr classroom. All of thm r tlkin axcept 4 Tina, Huz worried abt Nat n doesnt knw how to console Nat wen Tarun will break her heart.


Anji: oyee tum logo ne koi nai muvi dekhi?
Azra: nhi yaar, abhi kaha, gotto concentrate on studies its jst the beggnin of the year.
Anji: abbey yaar.....phirse shuru hogai!! gosh ever get ova ur studies n hav fun my frn!
Nat: leave it yaar......she is too studious, she got her schedule fixed 4 everythin !!
btw im goin 4 muvi dis weekend wid family.
Anji: ohh tats gr8......which one anjana anjani?
Nat: yeah tat one only....y dnt u guys also join, v will hav fun yeah??!!
Anji: yeaah sure y not.....lets go 2gthr nyways ur family is lyk our family only ;)
Azra: ahha...lets c, depends on hw much hw v get dis weekend will let you knw.
Anji: no probz Azra, *taps Tina* Tinz tu kaha kho gai?? will u cum wid us?
Tina: huh?! kaha??
Anji: yeh le.....khotti! sunti nhi he.....v r plannin to go 4 anjana anjani dis weekend u will cum?

Tina is lukin across the lot whr Tarun is walking towards thm.

Tina: haa haa theek he.
Anji: ok gr8 thn its gonna b fun !!!
Nat: haa yaar.... :)

Tarun approaches Nat.

Tarun: Hi Nat.
Nat: hiiee Tarun!! hw u doing sweetz??
Tarun: im gud, can v tlk 4 sumtym plz.
Nat: ahhmm.... yeah sure.

Dey move aside 2 a corner.

Tarun: Nat v need to tlk sumthin srs.
Nat: wat is it Tarun?....u r scaring me !!
Tarun: luk Nat i dnt wanna hurt u but dis relationship is jst not workin 4 either of us, i think v shud break up....!!
Nat: WHAT THE HELL??!! no Tarun dis is not happening, hw much ever v fi8 or argue but v cnt hav a break up *tears flowing*
Tarun: plzz Nat dnt cry, u knw it very well thrz not romance or luv btw us, thrz nothin left btw us, its always arguement n fi8s n v rarely meet or get to tlk. you need to understnd plz...forgive me jst let me go plz...!!
Nat: but Tarun plzzzz :'(
Tarun: im sorry Nat its jst over.....

Tarun leaves......n Nat filled wid tear she jst runs outta skool...Tina follows her....

Tina: Nat .....Nat....


P.S. Plzz do click like 😊
Edited by kooLgrl786 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oye ek update kilye tune itna din lagaayee....but overall okey....plz sad ending math karna..!....okey..i hate sad ending..!...
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Posted: 14 years ago
thnku Farzana, meet n mari!!!

@mari...dnt worry even i dnt lyk sad endings....ups n downs toh hote rehte he! n srry 4 bieng late 2 bzy wid stuffs!! :)

xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
omgg betaaaaa dat was awesum!!
so many emotions happening love is blooming and heartbreakins happening
awww cnt wait for moree
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow.... Vick n Suhani.. finally happening...confessing... so happy n oh oh.. Tarun broke up wit Nat 🥺 that so sad...!!

Great work girl..!! Luvd it... cant wait for the next update..😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiiiii
awesome update yaar
loved it
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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