'The Innocence' -FF -updated(7) pg 27

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Tasneem

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Posted: 15 years ago

#131

@nimmy thnx alot sweetz!

@aabz.....awww thnk god u here....i tot u r bzy wid eid prparation!
nyways.....hona toh wohi he jo mene socha hei hehe.....but sumtyms i can make changes 4 my readers....minute ones ofc :D
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megha

@megz.10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#132

awsum update...luvd it!!!!

gr8 wrk.....upd8 soon!!!😃

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asmara

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Posted: 15 years ago

#133

hey pls add me to ur pm list i loved ur ff wen i read it

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Tasneem

@kooLgrl786

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Posted: 15 years ago

#134

thnku !!!

n @asma.....will surely pm u!!!

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sravani899

@sravani899

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Posted: 15 years ago

#135

hey tats
wow another nice and awsome update dear

loved it dear

eps the vik role total flirt

really nice and waitng for the update dear

sravs

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Tasneem

@kooLgrl786

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Posted: 15 years ago

#136

1st of all sorry 4 such a late post!!
but was bzy wid Ramadan as it was d last days....n thn Eid!!
not a very long update but atlast im bak😃

n if ny1 has 4gtn as it has been long a quick recap....

Tina, Anji, Nat n Azra r best high skool buddies havin distinctive personalties.
Nat is into a complicated relationship wid Tarun, hu is bieng chased by Serina.
Vikram is new entrant n also Nat's far cousin......Tina has got feelings 4 him since d tym she has seen him. Manoj is another new entrant hu has a soft corner for Tina.
Suhani is Anji's younger sister n a yr junior at the school. Vikram is completely mesmerized by her beauty n has strtd to feel 4 her n Anji is having sum doubts abt.....
n up nxt......if Anji finds out sumthin !!😊

Part 5

Scene 1 - At school

The day gets ova n evrybody rushes out, whr Tina n Nat r walkin 2gthr cumin out d last.

Nat: I completely doubt on Tarun, he never cals me, always i hv 2 cl him n v hardly get
chance 2 meet alone. Its always at skool or tutz.*sadly*
Tina: oh sweetz, u knw na he got family issues othrwise he wud hv met u evry nw n den.
Nat: i dnt knw yaar, i cnt take it nymore n u always suprt him.*sadly*
Tina: its nthIn lyk tat, im jst telin u hIs sitUatioN.

As dey r reaching d main gate, dey c Tarun n Sarina takin.

Nat: did u c tat? He always got tym 4 her n nt 4 me.:(
Tina: hmm..he mst b takin abt sumthn imp. Nyways dnt bothr much yaar n plz dnt bash into dm,
i dnt want a fuss ova hr.
Nat: arri8 arri8! M nt evn intrstd! *furiously*
U jst keep suportin him!

Tina doesnt react as she seez Vikram is waitin wid rest of her frnz at main gate.

Nat: r u evn lisnin 2 me? Or r u going undr ur doll act agn? Taps on Tinaz shouldr..
Tina: huh! Did u say sumthn Nat?
By d tym Nat cud reply...
Anji: welcum, tum doNo ka hI intazar tha!
Tina: ya...wassup?
Anji: is dis d tym 2 ask wassup? *laughs*
Nat: shez gone crazy sumthn has struck her mind hehe.
Anji: ahha i c dat.
Vikram: ok peepz i gtg nw, will cya 2mrw.
Manoj: ok guys evn im leaving wid Vikram. Cya. Bye.

Vikram n manoj r shaking hands wid evry1, wen Vikram tells bye 2 Suhani he winks at her, Suhani smiles n strts
blushin n ofc its noticed by Anji n she umdrstnds tat kuch toh gadbad he.
Later wen dey left..

Nat: did ny1 noticed or my eyes r playin wid me? U saw Tina is always admiring Viks n is so quite wen hez around.
Anju: me too! me too! Ofc, m d 1st one 2 nOtice such things..hehe
Nat: wats hapnin ova hr do v c sum sParks btw Tina n Viks?

Suhani's expressions changd as she also strtd liking Viks n shez expectin d same frm him.

Tina: no yaar u crazY nthn lyk tat, y do u guys always has 2 get such a topic.
Anji: chIll maar yaAr. Nyways nw Suha n me r gona make a mOve, bye all
*hugs alL*

In fractioNs of mins alL of em leave.

Scene 2 - Anjis house

Anji n Suhani reaches hoMe N dn hav dr lunch. Later in d aftrnOnN in dr roOm wich dy share...

Anji: so Suha hw was ur day?
Suhani: it was gud di. Aapka kesa tha?
Anji: acha hi Tha...hmmm... Toh aAj vikram aya tha teri clas me tjhse milne haA?
Suhani: haa woh aisehI WOh aya tha...usne apko bAtaya tha?
Anji to herself-mjhe pata tha woh SUHA se mila tha, jhoot bola humse...
SUhani: aApne kuch kaha?
Anji: haA usne hume bataya...
Suhani: aChaa....
Anji: toh...phis hws he towards u?
Suhani: ammm...acha hi jesa sabke saath he..hez so frnly n sweEt na?
Anji: ya sure he is...so wat did u guys tak abt?
Suhani: ammm kuch khas nai bas yaha waha ki bAtien, nyWAys he was dr 4 sumtym dn it was tym 4 d class.
Anji: aHa k...

Anji was jst thinkin aat wat viks wud hav told he n Suhani coNfusd abt telin her sis tat she gav hIm her num...
Jst den... Suhani's phn rings,Anji's eyes pops ouT 2 chek hu it is, It was a unknown numbr.. Suhani was abt 2 pik wen Anji piks it up

Anji: hello...!!
Boy: hey Gorgeous its Vikram hr ;)

Edited by kooLgrl786 - 15 years ago