~IBAADAT~ New FF. Part 2 Pg. 17

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Maria

@JRia

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#131

Hey nice part

"Geet gave a curt nod and left the place. Her nerves were too strained and her grey cells were feeling exploited. She didn't like the idea of being dumped. If they had to end their relationship...She would be the one to do it."

This showed how strong Geet is...........

Loved Maan's part where he said abt the criminal wid conscience" , his character seems to be a positive one

Continue soon............

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Maria

@JRia

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#132

Aur haan

jald se jald Maan aur Geet ko mila dena

Edited by JRia - 15 years ago

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Anum

@anufa

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#133

awsssuuummmm!!!!

but no maneet interactioN!!!!

update soON!!!

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deejagi

@deejagi

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#134

wow, nice piece of work. So the big boss is her father since he planned for her future so much after came back after dropping the loot @ maan's place. Her father noticed her came back without Duppatta and he also knew that she is not into charity. So he has calculated 1+1 and decided to keep her away from the gang as he wanted her to get married. The other reason could be that he didn't want her to be linked with Adi the robber. Any father however bad he might be wants a decent husband for his daughter. And yet again, it could be Maan himself and since he noticed her duppatta (leaving back the nishana) @ his place, he doubted her credibility, so would have decided to get rid of her @ the earliest.
Anyways, nice update.
Jaya

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ansah

@SahSah

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#135

oh that was so cute....so different characterization.....me so loving it...

full of suspence.....it was so nice....

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lallulal2010

@lallulal2010

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#136

wow pallo this is one suspense thriller............. 😉

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Antares

@Antares

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#137

Heya Pallo!

Whoa! That was one suspenseful update! Amazing! Adi is her BF......seems a jerk to me.....lolz.....Geet was floored by Maan's body......great! Maan was amused.....lolz......Viren and Sam's convo about Geet......too funny.....lolz......oooo...Geet's dad already has someone in mind for her.....interesting! Who is the person talking to Adi.....what's with the ROBIN HOOD society......am so excited.....lolz....do continue real soon.

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Pickachu

@pickachu

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 15 years ago

#138

Gr888888 update.
continue soon.
Thanxxx for the pm.

fatima

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#139

too good... waiting for more...

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DreamerReality

@DreamerReality

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#140

hey pallo......
nice part yar!!
definitely different!!
nd robin hood community!! omg!!
i luv the dogz name "GOOGLE"
plsss do update soon!!
nd thnx a ton fr the PM

-kin