ff(maneet)Cause we Hate each other updt 48 note 54 - Page 13

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey add me to ur list and continue soon precap is sizzzzzling
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey...
Awesome ff.....
Nice one...i loved it...
Continue soon......
And plzzz add me to u r pm list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Cause we Hate each other
part 11
by narrator>>
"geet, uth na.." pinky yelled.

"uffo ..pinky. chilla matt. Varna tera gala kharab ho gaya toh adi tujhe ves samajhke vag jayega." Geet said, covering her face with comforter.

Pari: "geet, uthna. Hum late ho jayenge." While trying a jewelery.

"to rukne ko kaun keh raha hai'jaa na..main nehi jaane wali bas" geet said.

Pinky: "par kyu geet? Maan ka b'day hain yaar.."

Geet: "toh main kya karu? Nachu." Annoyed.

Pari: "tu dreamy ki party mein kyu nehi jana chahti. Saare arrangements to tune ki hai'to kyu sarr dard ka bahana kar rahi hai?"

Geet: "oo hello main koi bahana nehi kar rahi. Meri sarr mein sachmuch dard hai" ajeeb ajeeb khayalat ata hai, geet thot.

Pinky: "rehne de pari, ye darr rahi hai" laughed pinky.

"excuse me what? Darr?" geet threw the comforter aside facing thm.

Pari: "aree haan..main toh vul hi gayi. Geet darr rahi hogi. Akhair sa-me-ra v jo anee wale hain"

Geet: "darr aur geet handa. Main kisise nehi darta."

Pinky: "Dogs"

Geet: "not the puppy ones"

Pari: "spiders"

Geet: "not the little ones"

Pinky: "snakes"

Geet: "only the big ones"

Pari: "rats"
Geet: "not the small ones."

"ok stop. I'll go. Fine? But mind it, mujhe uss samera namak special specimen se darr nehi lagta. Aur rahi sawal jane kit oh tere dreamy ka kuch udhar chukta karma hai. Now, get ready in 10 minutes. Fast"

Both pinky & pari gave each other a winning smile.

Geet turned & saw thm smiling

"kya dant dikhane ka competition chal raha hai yaha? Get ready varna badme mujhe matt kehna kit ere baje se ye who"

Pinky & pari: "vagera vagera"

Geet: "haan. U have only 7 minutes remaining"

geet was ready. waiting 4 PP's. she was looking beautifull. wearing this dress.
she was as simple yet gorgeous.

PP joined her.

"ho gayi maharanis?" she teased thm.

Pari: "kya geet'acche se taiyar hone v nehi diya"

Geet: "aur kya taiyar hogi? B'day party pe jaa rahe hai shaadi pe nehi"

Pinky: "tujhse baat hi karma bekar hai"

Geet: "waah, kitni jaldi samajh gayi"

They headed to the party.

Beach was glowing with lights. Dj was playing rocking music.doing dhak dhak.

Means the party has already started. Kya nazara hai, geet thot annoying

"see hum kitni late aaye hai, sab teri baje se." pinky groaned.

"hold on. Meri bajese? 1 ghante se make-up ka dubba tum dono khali kar rahe the aur kasoor mera?" geet replied.

Pari: "abb andar chale ya yaha se bida hona hai"

Geet: "teri per mein beriya dali hai maine? Nehi na. to jaa na."

Pinky: "tu kaha jaa rahi hai?"

Geet: "aati hu meri amma. Chal"

They went inside. All were enjoying, dancing, laughing, drinking.

Adi & pinky got invisible. Soon pari was gone too. Kya dost hai meri, geet mused. Bt b'day boy hain kaha? She wondered

She didn't like the crowd. She excused herself & started walking besides the sea.

It was almost heheard everyone counting & wishing him.

So, he is there. Geet, bhagle yaha se varna phir tujhe khech k waha le jayegi, she smiled at her idea & turned to run. But collided with a strong chest. She lost her balance & was falling. She closed her eyes & thot geet tera kamar aaj gaya.

But at her surprise she felt nothing except a strong arm around her waist & another one holding her wrist. Mera mr right inni jaldi aa gaya, she felt happy yet amused.

Slowly she opened her eyes & her jaw dropped.

"tum!!"he retorted.

She saw maan staring at her. Holding her close to him. He seemed lost.he was wearing jeans with a white shirt. All buttons opened revealing his bare torso. He looked hot. Melt any girl on her knee.

Maan was lost looking at her. Her face was glowing. The moonlight caressing her face. She looked like an ethereal beauty. Whn she opened her eyes, her

jaw dropped.

"tum!!"he retorted.

She saw maan staring at her. Holding her close to him. He seemed lost.he was wearing jeans with a white shirt. All buttons opened revealing his bare torso. He looked hot. Melt any girl on her knee.

Maan was lost looking at her. Her face was glowing. The moonlight caressing her face. She looked like an ethereal beauty. Whn she opened her eyes, her shining hazel eyes. He was lost in her eyes, he was lost in her.

Her voice broked his trance. He took off his hands 4m her. & steadied her on her feet.

"who..woh main'tehel raha tha" maan replied looking anywhere but not on her.

"tum agar vul gaye ho toh batadu, waha tumhari b'day party chal raha hai.. its almost 12. so go & cut the cake. Ur frnds r waiting" geet said darkly.

Maan looked at her 4 a moment thn headed to the party. But wanting tht she might stop him & wish him.

He felt bad as she still didn't stop him. But suddenly he felt a hand on his shoulder. He felt annoyed thot tht must b someone else.

Geet felt tht she should at least wish him. She went near him & tapped hin on his shoulder. He stopped but didn't turned. She again tapped him.

This time he turned & geet accidently knocked on his face.

"ouch" he retorted.

"sorry'I was just.." said geet quickly.

He glared at her.

"kya ghoor kya rahe ho? Tumhe maarne ka irada nehi tha'just wanted to wish u. happy b'day maan khurana." Said geet softly. Saying so she left for the party leaving maan dumbfounded. There were fireworks on the sky. Geet stopped & looked at it. Maan looked at geet. Adi's voice declared tht its 12 & requesting maan to join thm. Geet looked at maan & saw him looking at her. She gave him a small smile & left.

Maan was beaming with joy. So, geet handa wished him 1st like always, he thot.

_______
precap: he falls on her & smashes cake on her face accidenlty.😉😆
Edited by _maan_ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hmmm yesterday precap u said kiss but there was no kiss.......😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 i am so sad........anyways apart from that it was awesome update.....it was slow and romantic...waiting for next part....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Really nice part!!
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing update!!
Can't wait for the next part!!
Pls cont.soon & thnks for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thats Awesome Dear👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Loved it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much❤️❤️❤️
wow so Geet wished Maan first on his B'day.😃...........
Thats Lovely
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Pls Update Soooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Next part seems funny😆...Still looking forward to their first kiss😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey in the previous update u said kiss where is that ?????
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg..can't wait for the next update...hope it is sameera..lolz..dekhne layak hoga

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