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Posted: 14 years ago
hey gr8 ff update soon nd plzzz do add me to ur pm list
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Cause we Hate each other
part 8
by narrator>>>
"hey geet"someone said.

"hey lee" geet replied smiling.

Geet was in her institute.going to attend her class. She was about to enter the campus thn lee stopped her.

Lee: u never gave any boy a chance to go out with u. bt they had secretly hope tht u will give thm a chance someday. Bt alas u broke our hearts & hopes today.

Lee Making a sad face.

Geet was utterly confused about wht he was talking.

Geet: lee, whts u talking about? I'm not getting u. how did I broke ur hearts & hopes?

Lee: now don't try to deny it. We all know. Don't worry about us. I am glad tht u moved on ur life.

Btw, gotta go. See ya at duty.

Geet: but'.ok'see ya'

Geet was clueless. Such a confusing start of a day, she thought.

She was walking to the corridors. She realized every present girl is throwing daggers to her. Strange, she thot.

She ignored thm & continued towards her classroom. She entered the classroom & found everyone staring at her.

She smiled & waved at thm. Boys waved her back slightly sad. But to her utter dismay none of the girl waved her back nor said her hello. They were looking at her as she has snatched anything valuable frm them. She went upto pinky & pari her two best buddies. Now it was more shocking 4 geet. As neither of them utter a single word.they were looking at geet as geet was a culprit who hided something frm thm. That's it, geet thot.

Geet: "what the hell is happening?"

Pinky: "gud question. But ye humhe puchna chahiye tujhe nehi"

Pari: "true. Isiliye humhe tujhse koi baat nehi karni"

Geet looked at thm & rolled her eyes.thn she yelled,

Geet: "kya aap dono ye batane ki kast karenge ki maine kya kiya hai? Subha se sabb mujhe ajeeeb o gareeb nazro se dekh rahe hai. Koi mujh se siddhi mu baat v nehi kar rahi'ho kya gaya hai sabko? Aur ye girls, dekhto aise rahe hai jaise maine inse inka mr dreamy chin li ho."

Pari: "wohi toh hua hai. Mr dreamy abb humare na raha" pari sadly said.

Geet: "kya bak raha hai tu?"

Pinky: "kya geet naraz humhe hona chahiye aur ulta tu humhe gussa dikha rahi hai? Tune humse itni bari baat chupayi aur humhe bina bataye itna bara faisla le liya?..geet how could u do this?"

Pari: "yes geet'tumne itni bari decision le liya without informing us'we r ur best buddies geet."

Geet was really pissed today. Lo, subha subha khote se larayi..abb yaha main phas gayi, she thot.

Geet: "PP, nahi maine shaadi ki faisla liya hai nahi main bin bihaye maa bann ne wali hu'to aisa kya kiya maine tht u two..no whole inst is behaving strange with me? Will u two pls bother to inform me?"

Pari: " I don't believe tu abhi v deny kar rahi hai."

Pinky: geet, tu badal gayi hai yaar."

They both nodded at the same time. She grabbed thm both with her arms around their neck & said,

Geet: "jee nehi'main abhi v wahi geet hu..agar garden bachana chahti hai to jaldi bata. Start now"

Pari: "ok..bata ti hu" said pari while gasping 4 breath.

Geet: "gud gurl"

Pinky: "puri institute ko pata chal gaya hai kit u mr dreamy I mean maan ki GF hain" pinky said in one breath.

Geet: "kya!!!!!"

Geet roared. Everyone turned to her & stared at her.

Geet was silent trying to accept wht has her ear had heard.

Edited by _maan_ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
gr8 part thanx 4 pm nd update soon thanxxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
after so long you updated and I felt it to be short....

apart from complaints....it was just AWESOME UPDATE👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 loved the part they say that tum dreamy ki gf ho🤣that would be shock of her life...plzzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vinithaa

after so long you updated and I felt it to be short....

apart from complaints....it was just AWESOME UPDATE👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 loved the part they say that tum dreamy ki gf ho🤣that would be shock of her life...plzzzz update soon

next part is coming soon...i'm on it....& a surprise too😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Cause we Hate each other

part 9
by narrator>>>

Geet: "wht did u said?" geet at last managed something to speak.

Pari: "the truth"

Geet stared at her.

Geet: " tera naam pari hai na..iska matlab ye nehi kit u utpatang batein sochta rahein...who the bloody hell tell u this?"

Pinky: " geet ye saab kehna nehi parta samajhni parti hai. Humne samajh lee"

Geet: "haan..haan..madam pinky ne apni samajhdari ki kya missal kayem ki hai'tum log sayed vul gayee ho ki babajee ne tum logo ko dimaag nehi diya hai'khali khopri..gobar se vara hua."

Pari: "ya humari dimaag to tujhe virast mein mill gayi."

Both pari & pinky laughed.

Geet: "itne acche dant v nehi hai kid ant dikha rahe ho'sidhe sidhe batao ki aisa kisne kaha hai?"

Geet threatened thm with her look.

Pinky: "kya geet ek to tu chori chori maan ki liye b'day bask ki taiyari kar rahi hai aur uparse humpe baras rahi hai"

Pari: "ulta chor kotwal ko dante"

Geet: "nahi main chor hu, nahi tum log kotwal. Aur tum logo ne iss baat ko apni moti buddhi se char char panch bana diya !! hadh hai yaar."

Pinky: "pari dekha maine kaha tha na ki ye aise hi kahegi'"

Pinky & pari rolled their eyes.

Geet: " for u & everyone's most kind information, I'm not his GF. Suna. & pinky madam, I was helping ur BF, adi..who is unfortunately HIS best frnd. Adi asked fr help to arrange a b'day bash fr him. & I couldn't deny him as he is UR BF.."

Every girl presented there released a breath. Means they have chance to win him. Stupid gurls..:D

Pari & pinky: "oops srry geet'humhe laga ki.."

Geet: "humhe laga ki geet badal gayi hai'right..thnx guys..u really made my day.."

Geet turned to leave thn again turned to PP..

"BTW, 10 baje se pehle sea beach pohoch jaana'tum logo ki DD urf dreamy ka party wohi hai"

Saying so she left. & bumped to sa-me-ra with her chela's Tasha-sasha.

Samera: "look who's here'ms geet'who's dreams have shatterd.."

Sasha: " who toh hona hi tha'MK se jurne ki kosish kar rahi thi'"

Tasha: "

silly girl'thinks ki who DD ko samera se chura lega"

Samera waved her hand to thm & stand infront of geet.

Chalo, abb isi ki kami thi'geet cursed her ill-luck.

Samera: "geet, tumhe kya laaga kit um maan ko itni asani se phasa loge kyuki tum usee jante ho aur dance partner ho to isiliye kareeb jaa sakte ho'silly u, maan is only mine & u better stay out of his life"

Bas, mera sabar tut gaya'geet closed her eyes thn looked at samera & said,

"mujhe na tumhari who sara hua kaddu chahiye v nehi'rakhlo meri amma aur baksh do'aur vaise v jab who tumhare hai toh tumhe mujhse itni insecurities kyu hai?? Jao aur aapne darling maan ko haseel karlo."

Geet gave a last look at thm & walked away. Tasha-sasha was standing there with their mouth wide open.

Samera stumped her foot & walked towards the drama class.

___________

precap: the drama begins...😉
Edited by _maan_ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hahahaha wen i read all of part 8 - i thought - ohhh soo maan ne upna thank u gift aise diya...then i read part 9 :( hahahaha
oh wells the party is yet to come :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update.👏👏👏👏👏....so sameera loves maan 😡anyways waiting for the drama......i know my maans heart would beat for geet 😊and not for that stupid sameera....anyways plzzzzzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Cause we Hate each other
part 10
by narrator>>>
Geet entered the drama room…aah, abb sukun aa raha hai..she smiled…dancing & singing were her jaan…she could left anything bt not this two…

As soon she entered the room, jihun handed her the micro to put it on her ear, handed her the lyrics as she will sing today.

She asked her drama teacher thn who will reherse with maan…he answered u'll see…

Music started…lights deemed. Teacher indicated geet to b prepared.

Thn she looked behing whr a spot light was pointing on two people…so close…

Thn she saw their faces…they were none other thn Maan & sameera….geet stared at thm…she felt like someone has banged her head….somehow she felt something deep in her heart seeing thm 2gether…maan was grinning…samera giving her look as if saying see-he-is-mine…

Pinky jerked her & pointed to sing…she started singing…walking towards thm..

Meri pehli mohabbat hai
Meri pehli yeh chaahat hai
Meri itni si hasrat hai
Gale lag ja na jaa

Singing so she looked at maan thn samera who was clinging to him as the last line..she turned her face..

Teri baahon mein rahat hai
Teri zulfhon mein jannat hai
Meri itni si hasrat hai
Gale lag ja na jaa

Maan sang looking at geet…enjoying her uneasiness…as geet turned he hold samera closely…and looked at her.

Sulge sulge badan hai
Uljhe uljhe se maan hai
looks at maan…saw he was looking at her..

Badhti jaati hai tan ki pyaas

Geet sang giving disgusted look at samera…who was now showing her harpick se dhula hua 32 dant…

Bheki bheki hai raatein
Mehki mehki hai saansein
Rehna rehna tu dil ke paas

Geet singing behind maan…who looks at her while dancing with samera…

*music* slowly everybody joins thm with their partner….enjoying this romantic music…

Oh tu agar samne ho
Kaise main khud ko rakh pao hosh mein

Maan sang…twirling samera around geet..

Darta hai dil khata yeh kar baithe na
Mohabaat ke josh mein

Geet saw thm & turned her face..makes a pouting face as if complaining to babaji…

Badla badla hai mausam
Pighla pighla hai youvan
Jaage jaage hai ab eshaas

Geet singing remembering her dance with him…now samera has taken her place…& thts not happening…

Bheki bheki hai raatein
Mehki mehki hai saansein
Rehna rehna tu dil ke paas

Suddenly she felt as she cant bear it more..she turned to left but maan was quick to held her hand…

*music*

Pulled geet closer to him…samera was now nowhere to be seen…maan put a hand on geet's waist another caressing her face…(dance step hain baba)

Meri jazbon ki jo bhi halat hai
Wo samjh lo na bin kahe

Geet sang lost in his deep chocolate eyes….feeling maan so close to her she felt complete…

Oh in labon se kahon
Jo armaan hai
Barso yeh honth chup rahe

Maan sang dancing close to her….moveng his face one side to another…his breath touching geets face…

Thandi thandi agan hain
Meethi meethi chubhan hai
Jhudti jhudti hai tujhse aas

Maan held geet frm her back lifted her…she rested her head on his shoulder…

Bheki bheki hai raatein
Mehki mehki hai saansein
Rehna rehna tu dil ke paas

Maan moved her away thn again pulled her closer tht made her crush on his chest…

Teri baahon mein rahat hai
Teri zulfhon mein jannat hai
Meri itni si hasrat hai
Gale lag na na jaa

He lifted her….singing these…thn put her on the floor….both having an eyelock….intense gaze…geet's arm around maan's neck…maan's hand circled around geet's waist….so close….barely a inch left…

Everyone clapped & they broke their eyelock.

"bravo…there is no better partner 4 u thn geet…u both hav tht chemistry which makes anyone go gaga about" drama teacher praised, clapping.

Geet & maan looked at each other. Thn thnks their teacher.

_____ precap: 1st kiss😉😉 in maan's style...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome updates!!!
Can't wait for the next part!!
Pls cont.soon & thanks for the PM

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