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Posted: 14 years ago
Cause we hate each other
part 12
by narrator>>>
"hey maan. Kaha tha yaar tu? BTW, happy b'day dude." Adi said while hugging maan.

"thnx dude." Maan replied hugging him back.

All wished him. Girls were dying to be close to him & wish. But they had poor luck. Maan maintained sufficient distance with thm.

Geet was standing a little far & glaring at those stupid girls. She wanted to kick thm. Why, she is unaware.

"nangi phungi larkiya. Kaise dost hain maan ki..neckline kuch jyada hi bara hai to niche se kapre utne hi chote. Aa gaye bas uski saath sdhak dhak karne." Geet cursed thm under her breath.

Pari: "maan abb jaldi se cake kato."

Pinky: "par cake hain kaha?"

Adi: "geet, come here. Cake ki arrangement to tum dekhne wale the."

Geet went upto thm dully.

"haan, there it is'"

Said pointing at a waiter coming with a large chocolate cake.

Everyone clapped & told maan to cut the cake.

"chocolate cake!! Kisne order ki hain? I hate chocolate cake. Adi tujhe pata hain na."

Maan suddenly barked maan.

Adi: "maan..woh geet ne'" but adi couldn't finished.

Maan: "oo ya'geet hi ho sakti hai'garbar to uyehi kar sakti hai'" pointing at geet.

Geet: "woh ya'mujhe to akashbani ayegi na ki mr maan singh kankhachure ko chocolate hazam nehi hoti'.vaise v tumhare liye toh karela ka cake lana chahiye tha'chocolate tumhari liye kuch jyada hi mitha hai." Snapped geet.

Maan: "kya kaha tumne?" taking a step closer to her.

Geet: "sunai nehi diya? Jor se bolu"

Both were ready to kill each other but yuvi burged in.

Yuvi: "ok..ok'stop'its ok..fine..maan tu cake katle phir baki sab kha lenge. Tujhe koi nehi khilega. Thik hai?"

Maan slowly cut the cake. Everyone clapped. Geet just rolled her eyes. Pinky poked her to clap. She gave a stare to pinky thn clapped a bit.she was furious with maan.

"happy b'day maan" someone said loudly pushing geet aside.

She went upto maan & hugged him from back.

Maan turned & saw samera. He then looked at geet who was fuming with anger & glaring at samera.

"thnx samera" maan looking from geet to samera.

Suddenly samera placed a kiss on maan's cheek without giving maan a chance to stop her.

Geet furrowed her brows. She turned her face taking out her tounge as she saw some disgusting.

Sasha & tasha joined samera & wished him. Maan thanked thm & saw geet was peeping from yuvi's back.

Maan hit upon a plan. He said to samera whn samera was trying to feed him a piece of cake.

"I'm so sorry samera. Main tumhe cake nehi khila sakta & kha v nehi sakta. Ek stupid ne without my permission chocolate cake le aaya."

Thts it. She thot. She stormed to them.

Samera saw her & gave her a look as she was some dirty things out.

Samera: "yes kuch log hote hi aise hai jo khud to kaam ki nehi hote but dikhawa jarur karte hai. " indirectly saying to geet.

"party mein dress ki standerd maintain karma v nehi aata'& u r right chocolate cake sirf nerds hi khate hai, kyu geet"

Maan knew geet will brust in few moments. If looks could kill, geet would have killed her by now.

"phir to tumse bara nerd aur koi nehi hai? Remember last week john ki party mein, tumne almost 1 pound cake khaya tha who v chocolate cake. I think u r feeling shy here. Lemme feed u" geet snapped at her & took a piece of cake. She moved forward to her & instead of feeding her, she smashed it on her face.

All presented there stood still & gaped at geet.

"now thts better" geet beamed. "mazaa aaya? U want more?"

Maan never thot she would do something like this. Kya larki hai, he thot.

"geet..you" samera gasped.

"yes me..oh I've another thing for u."geet said.

Saying so she turned & switched on the table fan. It was facing samera . geet held the colored papers plate. All flew & clunged to samera's face.

"off it" samera somehow managed.

"on it?? Okey" geet laughed & increased the level.

All papers were now kissing samera.

"ooww'off it. Aah, silly me" geet retorted. "chocolate is gud for health & samera u need it"

Geet laughed .

"geet, what is it?" maan asked hastily.

"oh, again my mistake." She said & picked some cream & put it on maan's face.

"happy birthday once again" she said sweetly thn walked from there.

Geet u r too gud, she patted on her own shoulder.

"geet, vaag" pinky shreinked.

Geet looked back & saw maan was coming towards him dangerously. He looked as he has some evil planned on his brain. Geet saw cake on his hand.

Geet, run'she told herself & run.

Edited by _maan_ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow it was funny update....loved it when she put cake on sameera face.....hope we can have a romantic scene between geet and maan in the next update....plzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣..This was jst FANTASTIC!!!!!.....Paper plates stuck to Sameera face...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Plz updte soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago

MaCause we hate each other

part 13
by narrator>>>
an really had some evil plans. Geet, tumhari hisab chukta karma hi parega, maan grinned. He saw her running. He ran behind her.

Geet kept running. Now she was very far from the party place. She thot maan might have lost her sight. She stopped to have a breath.

Suddenly she felt someones gaze on her neck. She turned but saw noone. There was nothing except a camp tent & sea.

She went to the sea & felt the shore beating her feets softly. She again felt someones present. She turned & went to the tent. She saw nothing. But as she turned found herself face to face with maan. She stepped back but lost her balance. She grabbed maan arms but maan wasn't ready for this. So geet crushed on the sand. Maan fell on her & accidently smashes the cake on geet's face.

Geet screamed & maan stood up. He was at loss wht to do.

Geet was screaming in anger. Her face was full with chocolate. Mostly her mouth.

Maan thot uska vaagna hi thek hoga varna marr dalegi. But he gave her a hand & she shoot a dragger at him.

He withdrowed his hand & turned to leave. But geet kicked on his feet making him fall on her again.

This time maan's face touched geet's accidently. His lips brushed on her lips making her shiver. She closed her eyes on his touch. Maan was blessed with her touch. Her lips were now decorated with chocolate. Maan couldn't resist himself. He placed a gentle kiss on her lips. They tasted chocolaty. he came more close to her, traced the outline of her lips with his tongue. He licked the chocolate. He gently locked her lip. Geet parted her lips in shock & sensation. It gave maan a chance to explore her mouth. Maan took the chance he explored her mouth. Geet was responding also. He sucked her lip. Maan traced her neck while kissing her passionately. He played with her open hair. Geet was lost enjoying every moment. His kiss expressed desire, passion, love, longing, intense need, care and affection for her. He sucker her bottom lip thn gently bite down on her lower lip.

This made geet come to her sense. She flung her eyes open.

Edited by _maan_ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
O=M=G!!! That was intense! *faints* opens 1 eye in hpe to c a maan like saviour bt no only the near by cat. >_<
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Posted: 14 years ago
at last my kiss scene i was waiting for 😆 hmmm i cant tell u how awesome it was imagining😉 anyways loved it....it was dead romantic.....waiting for some more romantic scenes....plzzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing Parts Dear👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Loved both the parts
Loved this Line sooooooooooooo much
"woh ya'mujhe to akashbani ayegi na ki mr maan singh kankhachure ko chocolate hazam nehi hoti'.vaise v tumhare liye toh karela ka cake lana chahiye tha'chocolate tumhari liye kuch jyada hi mitha hai." 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Part 12 is Just Fabulous
OMG now how r they going to react when they come back to senses
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Pls Update Soon Dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
added me to ur pm list
awww
so adorable
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg..such a violent cake fight...the kiss was sure blissful..thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
how romantic....
loved it...
continue soon.... 😳

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