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Nanthini

@Nanthini9

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

nice start - do pm me when u update :)

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Anisha

@.anishaa.

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Nanthini9
nice start - do pm me when u update :)

Thanks! For sure 😊

Whoever wants me to PM them when I update, send me a buddy request so I can PM everyone at once instead of doing it individually. It's a little hard to do that and I can PM everyone together much faster and have more time to write.

Hope you like the future scenes too 😊

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charlie1950

@charlie1950

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

i read all the parts in one go, one word for u ur ff is just awesome.pls pm me

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Neetu2825

@Neetu2825

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#54

Thanks for the pm yaar...it was a lovely update. I'm looking forward to your next update, so don't keep me waiting to long.😉

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Noor Fatima

@NoorFatima

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#55

thanx for the PM

really liked ur idea.

and do add me in ur PM list

cont. soon

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Meli/Melz/Aahanaa

@Aahaana

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+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#56

Done with all of the parts in one go...so fare the story is good and went with the flow👍🏼

I think you are changing between "I" perspective and 3rd person perspective..its started with I and now its Geet, not sure whether its done with intension😳

Punch on his weakest spot....*LOL*

I loved the Maan vs Briji face off, It just brought me back to HP days when I badly wanted Maan to knock off Birji which he did *ROLF*

I would love to see if possible Geet meeting Channis mother, Maan slowly get to know about her past on his own, typical Maaneet fight at the guest house, Maan getting hurt and Geet take care of him etc😳

You have done a good job, continue soon=)

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Anisha

@.anishaa.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Aahaana

Done with all of the parts in one go...so fare the story is good and went with the flow👍🏼

I think you are changing between "I" perspective and 3rd person perspective..its started with I and now its Geet, not sure whether its done with intension😳

Punch on his weakest spot....*LOL*

I loved the Maan vs Briji face off, It just brought me back to HP days when I badly wanted Maan to knock off Birji which he did *ROLF*

I would love to see if possible Geet meeting Channis mother, Maan slowly get to know about her past on his own, typical Maaneet fight at the guest house, Maan getting hurt and Geet take care of him etc😳

You have done a good job, continue soon=)

Thanks! LOL at first it wasn't intentional, but then I realized I changed perspective and decided to go with it 😊

Sure, thanks for the suggestions! And thanks for reading! Will def. update soon, planning on tomorrow after a good night's sleep. Be ready for a longggg update LOL 😆

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Muniza Riaz

@Infinitedreams

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#58

@ Anisha - Yes only weekends, not weekdays....

I added you in my buddy list, so please email me whenever you will update...

Muniza

Edited by muniza75 - 15 years ago

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Anisha

@.anishaa.

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#59

^^ And thanks sooo much Neetu, Fatima, and Sapna! Will definitely PM you guys, glad you liked it! 😊

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lody

@lody

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Posted: 15 years ago

#60

Omg I realy realy love u thanks for making my day happy and thanks alot for pm and am wating for the next part not wating but daying for it plzzz pm plzzz