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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Soumya,

How are you! seems very busy now-a-days!
chill out yaar!😃

acha, aapka uddate hamesha ki tarah, bohot pyaara tha,👏
very sentimental 😭 and very practical too,

Dadimaa toh bohot smart hai, sabko manaleti hai,😉
bechari Geet na, kisi aur ke ghalti ke wajah se, khud par taras kha rahi hai!

But phikar not Geet, jisne tumhari zindagi barbaad ki,
ab zindagi uska imtihaan lega aur sazaa bhi dega,😡
aur zindagi ne nahi di toh Soumya toh zaroor degi! kyun Soumya!😆
😉
Well, in short, good job, again,
busy ho, aur phir bhi itna acha update, aur jab free ho joagi, toh you will drive us crazy babes!

Look forward to your next update!

Love
Lakshmi
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Posted: 15 years ago
@kashndsel4eva: thanks a ton honey...!!!!



@muskanp: sorry sweets, u will have to wait a bit before the proposal...!!!!!


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@shaila: what is dev planning ot do??? as of now nothing. he's trying his level best to keep NT out of delhi, cos geet frequently visits maan in the outhouse..!!!


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@afsha: well, yes, maan is yet to get a lecture and some tips from daadima for proposal...!!!! 😆😆😆😆



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@koolio: thanks sweets...!!!yes, since daadi knows the entire truth, she knows wht exactly is troubling geet...!!!!


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Soumya
Edited by pickle6586 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hello everyone,

alright, to compensate for the last few short updates, i came up with a long one today...!!! hope u like it... it has only maneet and i hope you will enjoy it 😃😃😃😃😃😃

Part 66

"geet, aacha ek baat bataeye! Was Maan's proposal romantic enough?", said daadima winking.

"maa, agar propose kare tuo hi pata chalta hai na, romantic hai ya nahi!" said geet laughing.

"what? My dimwit grandson has not proposed to you yet?"

Geet shook her head and started laughing. Daadima joined in too.

"oh!that's interesting" said daadima.

She thought to herself,"probably he has some big plan cooking up, honey, don't worry!"

"geet, aur bataeye! So do you want to take the earrings? Or if it is going to give you pain, then don't bother honey!"

Geet held the earrings in her hand for sometime, "maa aapko bura nahi lagega na? agar maine yeh nahi liya tuo?"

"bilkul nahi beta. you have to take it after marriage for sure, because this belongs you!"

Geet hugged daadima and then they continued talking about maan and his likes and dislikes. Geet described how much she hated maan the first few times they met. Daadima listened to the entire story patiently.

Meanwhile, Maan was talking to Pinky.

"jeeju, geet ne sirf ek baar apne family ke bare mein baat ki thi, jab usne hume pregnancy ke bare mein bataeye. Uske baad maine use kabhi udhaas nahi dekhi, aur na hi kabhi apne parivaar ke bare mein baath karte hue suna" said pinky confused.

"Okay! I guess her past still haunts her. Well, its going to take her time, but I'm glad she's trying her best to get over it".

"kya hua?woh theek tuo hai?" asked pinky concerned.

"haan who theek hai! bas thoda stress mein gayi thi. Main baat karlunga".

"theek hai! agar aap chahye tuo main bhi baat karungi, geet wapas aane ke baad".

"that's a good idea.I'd appreciate that Pinky".

"okay! I'll try talking to her and let you know".

"thanks and please keep an eye of her. She will be a part of your responsibility too until she becomes Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana".

"acchha tuo kya Geet, Geet Maan Singh Khurana banne ke baad, hume uski tension lene ki zaroorat nahi hai, hume uski khayal rakhne ki zaroorat nahi hai? kya baat hai Mr. Khurana, aap relationships aur responsibilities ko bhi bilkul business ki tarah treat karte hai!" said pinky and giggled.

"nahi, mera who matlab nahi tha! Actually main yeh kehna …" and then he heard daadima and geet talking in the corridor.

"chaliye lets go out. Maan's blood pressure must be rising!" said daadima. They slowly walked when they heard maan was on phone.

"yeh lo, hume laga ki yeh pareshaan hote honge, aur yaha inhone phone leke bait gaye" said geet.

"haan , maan khurana hai na!" said daadima smirking.

"Pinky I'll talk to you later, geet and daadima are coming" said maan.

"theek hai, we'll talk after I talk to geet tonight or tomorrow morning" said pinky, "bye, jeej"

"Bye!", he said hanging up.

He got up to face the two most important women in his life.

"kisse baat kar rahe the aap maan" asked daadima seriously.

"ek client se" lied maan confidently.

"hmm" said daadima. "lets have dinner and then drop geet home", she ordered.

He agreed and all of them went to the dining table. They had dinner and maan walked geet to the car. Geet was about to get into the car but maan held her back and pinned her against the car door.

He looked back at the mansion to see if daadima was still there. he did not find her outside so turned towards geet. he gently caressed her cheek and kissed her lips gently.

"geet, kya hua tumhe?Tum theek tuo ho na?" asked maan pushing a strand of her curls behind her ear and kissing her ear.

"main theek hoon, maan!", she said smiling.

"no geet, there's something bothering you, but you don't want to tell me!" said maan whispering in her ears.

"maan, maine daadima se baat ki. Ab main theek hoon", she said looking into his eyes confidently.

She rested her head on his chest and put her hand on his back. He pulled her closer and said, "geet, theek hai. tumne daadima se baat ki, aur agar tum theek ho, tuo phir main tumhe pareshaan nahi karunga".

She kissed his throat and said, "thanks maan. Mujhe kushi hai ki aapne yeh maamla yahi chod diya".

They remained in each other arms for sometime and geet reached up to his lips. They kissed passionately, as though they could not get enough of each other. They pulled away for sometime and maan said, "after almost a month!"

"hmmm!" she said blushing.

"ready for another round?" he asked her in a husky voice.

She lowered her eyes and nodded her head. After what seemed like ages, threy broke apart panting heavily.

Maan said, "geet tumhe kisi bhi baat ko lekar pareshaan hone ki zaroorat nahi hai. please geet!"

"main jaanti hoon maan! Aap koi aanch nahi aane denge", said geet with poise.

"tumne earrings nahi li?" asked maan

"no, shaadi ke baad loongi maan!"

"proposal ke time bhi nahi?" asked maan holding her by her waist.

"no! I want surprises you know . is mein koi surprise nahi hain. Aur haan, daadima was asking about the proposal!"

"what?"

"haan!"

"tumne kya kaha?"

"maine kaha ki ab tak nahi kiya aapne?"

"geet!"

"maan, koi nahi! Maa ne kuch nahi kaha".

"haan, who tumhe thodi na kuch bolenge, lagta hai kal breakfast mein taane aur daandt milenge"/

"nahi maan!" said geet running her hand through his hair.

Maan looked at her lovingly. How much he had missed looking into those beautiful eyes because of various tensions and issues for the last one month. Geet covered his eyes with her hand.

"Maan, ghar chale"

Maan took her hand away from his eyes and said," geet tumhe dekhne ke liye aankhon ki kjya zaroorat hai? Main apne aankehin bandh karke bhi, tumhe dekh sakta hoon, aur tumhe hi dekhunga".

"Maan!" said geet shyly.

"hmmm, bolo!" said maan romantically.

"ghar drop kijiye" said geet

"kyun? Badi jaldi mein ho aaj!"

"hmmm, aise hi! Aur thoda kaam bhi hai, have little course work to do and Adi will come home tomorrow to explain certain things. Plus I also told him that I would help him in certain accounting work so that it could be a practice for me too".

"hmm, mujhse na milne ki poori planning karke rakhi hai tumne?"

"nahi, aisi baat nahi hai! main aapse sham ko milungi".

"nahi, sham ko I have to go to Bangalore, have some meetings on Monday there".

"Bangalore? Maan, yeh kaha se aa gayi beech mein?"

"geet, yeh plan pehle bhi thi".

"lekin aapne bataya nahi. Main aapki secretary nahi hoon, isiliye aapne mujhe aapke schedule ke bare mein batana chod di?"

"nahi geet!Sasha ne appointment fix ki hai. Aur Wednesday ko yaha ke staff meetings ke liye mujhe wapas aana padega".

"kya Sasha? who kyun appointments fix karti hai?woh bhi aa rahi hai kya? Aur pinky ko ya tasha ko kyun nahi kehte aap appointment dhoondne ke liye? Maan, us Sasha se door rahiye. Aur ek nayi secretary dhoond lijiye. Us Sasha ki koi zaroorat nahi hai aapko".

Maan looked at geet talking and questioning non-stop. He watched her carefully and she did not seem to stop. She kept ranting about Sasha on and off and maan did not feel like stopping her. Was it because he was accustomed to it? He did not know, but today, he did not feel like stopping her. He could sense love, concern and possession in her voice. He kissed her hard on her cheek and that's when she stopped.

"Maan, app mujhe distract mat karo".

"hmmm, theek hai, tumhe jo bolna hai bolo and I'll do what I have to"

"theek hai!" she said angrily and continued, "dekhiye maan, us sasha ne aapko ek message.." and heard maan whisper in her ear.

"suno, tum bhi distract mat ho, mujhe jo karna hai karne do!"

"main nahi, aap batak jaate hai".

"theek hai, dekhte hai!"

Geet continued her garrulous talk about Sasha and Maan slowly traced his finger on her lips. She did not stop. He then moved his finger down to her chin and below to her throat. She did get affected, but she did not want to lose to him.

He grinned and began to slowly move his finger from her throat to a little below her shoulders. Geet stopped and caught his finger, "maan!" she yelled.

"bolo geet!" he said slowly running his lips on her collar bone, "tum haar gayi!"

"yeh cheating hai!"

"nahi geet!" he said challengingly.

Geet looked at his intense eyes and did not question him further. She knew it would be dangerous.

"aap Bangalore se wapas kab ayenge?"

"tumhe bhi jaana hai?"

"nahi, job aur classes! Aur main aapke saath kaise?"

"kyun darte ho mujhse?"

"nahi!, aap akele jaa rahe hai na?"

"haan, btw sasha kuch dino ke liye out of country jaa rahi hai. woh Singapore project ke maamle mein Kapil ke saath jaa rahi hai".

"hmmm" said geet taking a deep breath. Maan noticed it and said,"geet chalna hai mere saath?"

"kaha?"

"Bangalore"

"nahi maan! main waha karungi kya? Aap office ke maamlo mein busy rahoge aur main bore ho jaungi".

"hmm, theek hai. next weekend free rakho. Kahi jayenge".

"lekin aapko itne achanak mere saath kyon jaana hai".

"taaki humne jo kaam adhoora chod diya, who poora kar sakte hai".

"kaunsa kaam?"

Maan moved closer to her lips. She could feel his breath tickle her face. she held onto his shoulders tight.

"Maan, please!"

"tumne poocha nahi, kaunsa kaam!"

"haan bataeye".

"wahi, jo daadima ne beech mein interrupt kiya".

"kya?" she said shocked, opening her mouth in surprise.

"geet are you giving me more access to start the adhoora kaam abhi?"

Geet shut her mouth and put her hands on her mouth and nooded her head in disapproval.

She stood there with one hand on her mouth and signaled with the other hand, to drop her home.

"itni kya jaldi hai, geet".

"agar main yahi rahu, tuo aap pagal ho jayenge aur mujhe bhi pagal kar denge" she said with her hand still on her mouth.

"geet, main tuo kab ka paagal ho chukka hoon!"

"Maan, please mujhe daraeye mat!chaliye"

Geet pushed him a little, and opened the car door. Maan held her shoulders from behind and gently pulled her back, "what's my baby been saying all thses days?"

"Complaining"

"why?", he said kissing her shoulder.

" Papa has no time for the baby. He's always putting mama into stress, sometimes because of his anger, sometimes because of his huge female fan following and sometimes because of his love and romance".

"Accha?" he asked smiling.

"hmmm!kya kiya jaaye"

"ghar drop kiya jaaye"

"nahi! Woh main nahi kar sakta. Aaj tumse door jaane ka mann nahi kar raha hai".

"maan, kya hua?"

"pyaar hua!" he said.

"Maan aap sach mein pagal ho gaye kya? Hamesha main apne control mein nahi rehti hoon aur aaj ka yeh haal hai".

"geet I've never been in control ever since I fell for you".

"oh really?"

"hmmm!" he said, "anyways chalo, tumhe aaram karna hai".

"hmmm, ab chod ne ka mann kar raha hai?"

"nahi, lekin tumhe aaram ki zaroorat hai na. warna phir complain karte ho ki mera pyaar bhi tumhare liye stressful hai".

Geet smiled and turned to face him, "Maan aap Bangalore se wapas kab ayenge?"

"Monday night, honey".

"theek hai, aur Tuesday, aap mujhe milne ayenge, farmhouse mein, the first thing in the moning".

"why? Are you scared of meeting me on Monday night?"

"yes, you seem to be losing control these days!" she said smirking.

"geet, don't instigate me to do things right away".

"no I wont", she said rubbing her nose slightly to his.

Geet sat in the car and signaled Maan to follow. Maan sat in the car and looked at her.

"start kijiye maan" she said.

He started the car and turned to look at her again.

"Maan, what are you waiting for?move!"

"accha ek baat batao, tumhe driving aati hai kya?"

"nahi, aur mujhe agle paanch mahino ke liye seekna bhi nahi"

"hmm, who main jaanta hoon".

"aap seekhayenge uske baad?"

"nahi, the driver will! It requires a lot of patience and ofcourse focus. Agar main tumhe dekhta rahunga tuo seekhaunga kab?aur waise is traffic mein road pe focus karna bahut zaroori hai. tum paas ho tuo mera focus tum pe hoga, road pe thodi na hoga".

"tuo kya is waqt aapka focus mujhpe hai?"

"haan, abhi car thodi na chala raha hoon?", he said winking.

"maan, you confuse me. Whenever I think I have understood you, you do something or say something that brings me back to square one- confusion".

"So, I am an enigma to you, haan?" he said switching off the engine.

"Maan, aap start kijiye aur chaliye, chalte chalte bhi tuo baat kar sakte hai na?"

"nahi!"

"Maan, ho kya gaya hai aapko?"

"geet, I don't know. I just feel like irritating you today".

"oh! For a change, otherwise its always me".

"Hmmm", he said finally igniting the engine and driving out of the Mansion.

"you should get a new secretary, maan".

"no, geet!I'm okay, I'm actually thinking of assigning the task to Pinky, I hope she can manage both the reception and the task of a secretary. What do you think?"

"mushkil hai" she said hiding her laugh.

"kyun?"

"Maan Khurana secretary banna aasaan nahi hai. Sab mere jaise thodi na honge?"

The car came to a screeching halt. "what do you mean?" he said angrily.

"yahi, ki mujhe tuo special haq hai, jab bhi aapko gussa aata hai, tuo I can kiss it away. Par who kaise handle karegi?"

"who bhi wahin karegi" he said looking away from her, outside the window.

"thaange thod dungi" she screamed.

"Pinky ke?" he asked looking at her.

"Nahi, Mr. Khurana, aapke thaange thod dungi".😆😆😆


So, did I make up for the last few small updates?? hopefully!!!


Now, your turn to do some work. Leave your comments and hit the LIKe button...!!!!


Soumya




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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG! loved the update, it was such tooo good! brilliant work! 👏 👏 👏
Edited by lil_desi_goddes - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Veryyyy sweetttt update.
Loveee the last lines.
Plzz continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.


Fatima
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great part di
plz continue soon
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😆LOVE IT!!! love this romantic soft loving MSK 😍
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loved the update
awwww geet and maan are too funny
plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
cant wait to read da nxt part

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