SR FF ~Tum Mile~(PART 26 p144)

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jyoti_wahian

@jyoti_wahian

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

This OS was jst amazing........👏👏👏

it wasn't boring at all.....plz update it soon.......

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Tasheen

@-DazlingAngel-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

Noorya,
it wasn't boring at all
wonderfully written
loved reading it
do update soon
and thanx 4 d pm

-Tasheen-

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#53

noorya.... 🤗 🤗........

amazing SR FF.......this is so typical SR.....it's just amazing!!!!!.......... 👏 👏.........and thanks so much for the pm........and please update asap........it's just too good!!!!!!!

and m really sorry for the late reply...actually college has started so have been inactive on forums.....hope u will forgive m for the late reply......

loads of love❤️ ❤️
mayuri❤️ ❤️

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JATIN THAKKAR

@JATINTHAKKAR

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#54

Noorya,😊

Interesting......Interesing........Very Interesting.

I Have Read Your OS,Watched Your VM's & Now It's FF.

You Included Yuna,JPJ & My Darling Sue.⭐️

Ohhhhhhhh Myyyyyyy Gawssshhhhhh,😊

This is a Brilliant Story.Siddhima Both are feeling the Heat But Yet Are so Calm & Subtle.😛

Lookin Fwd For Next Part.😛

Absolutely Awesome.👏👏👏

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malvika

@monty22

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#55

gr8 noorya.

i love it😛

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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

Let me start by, 👏👏👏

Like someone pointed out, everything was totally in character. The actions and the words were in sync. And the coordination was so perfect that you could imagine it happening in front of you. You could imagine SR fighting, R bandaging S, S holding R, and so on.

I louved the way the story is shaping up. Both of them know that the other has been through a lot in their life and the real 'them' is somewhere hidden beneath the layers of anger and hurt. Now, unknowingly, they would break the layers and help the real 'them' to surface. 😊

Great work. Loved it. Continue soon. 👍🏼

PS - Thanks for the link. I would watch it and comment on Youtube. 😃