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Posted: 15 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: yokosona

great start! thanku!! now sid n ridhima r gonna be friends!!! yayyyyyy

thanks a lot😳

ya they will soon be friends
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: jasangel

plz update soon cant wait................

will post the next part by tomorow

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Posted: 15 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: kw09

Gr8 VM

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thanks😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: nikita_92

hey! so far it is really amazing! i can't wait till your next updatee!

thanks a lot😳

will post the next part tomorow
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
AWesome...LOVEDDDDDDDDDDD ITTTTTTTT..

u are truly talented I lok 4ward to ys vms and ff...Awesome Dearie..We srians are blessed with writers like u..

U r aā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøā­ļø and this is also 4 ušŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: uppaas

AWesome...LOVEDDDDDDDDDDD ITTTTTTTT..

u are truly talented I lok 4ward to ys vms and ff...Awesome Dearie..We srians are blessed with writers like u..

U r aā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøā­ļø and this is also 4 ušŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘

aww thanks a lot Uppaas

im really gald u like readin my FF😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
Very nice post. Thanks a lot
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: papia

Very nice post. Thanks a lot

thank u very much😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
#79

Hello guys😳

so im here with the second part of teh FF
this one is seriously
quite borin but this part
was really needed but dont worry
the next part is less borin and its full of
SR scenesšŸ˜†šŸ˜‰...
and btw i made a PM List at page 1
so plzz just check that ur name is mentioned
and if not just let knowšŸ˜‰
~Tum Mile~

PART 2

Days passes but sid and riddhima were still tryin to find out something about one another.

Sid was at sanjeevani's terrace thinking about riddhima with doctor kirti's words ringgin in his ears…

Sid: kya hua hoga hai riddhima ke saath?....dr kirti ne kaha ki humari halaat bilkul ek jaisi hain…usne tamana ki bhi baat ki……kya riddhima bhi kissi se…? aur usne usse chor diya hoga…dude agar aisa hai tho tumne riddhima ko bohut hi galat samjha….par reason kuch aur ho tho?.....aur koi mujhe kuch bataana bhi nahin chahta…Atul ne bhi maana kiya….dr nikkita..?……no dude voh bhi tho Hitler se kuch kam nahin hai…..(lookin up at the sky) dude yeh sab naa apke waje se ho raha hai…riddhima ke bare mein soch soch kar pagaal ho raha hoon….ab apne mujhe uss se milvaaya hai naa tho uski life mein kya hua yeh jaan ne ke liye mujhe hint ya solution bhi do varna main sach mein pagaal ho jaounga…(he hears a voice and gets shocked)

Voice: sid…

Sid surprised: Godji??

Voice: arre idiot main hoon! (sid recognized the voice n turns his face to find abhi) pagaalon ki tarah kiss se baat kar rahe ho?

Sid: bhai aap….voh main….(suddenly something strokes his mind seein abhi n he smiles lookin at the sky again) thanks dude apne mujhe mera solution de diya! (abhi looks at the sky confused then back at sid)

Abhi: sid…have u gone mad? (sid looks at him with a big smile on his face n slowly walks toward him n abhi gets a lil scared due to his behaviour n adjust his shirt) oye tujhe kya hua hai?...aise mere pass kyun aa rahe ho? Tum…(sid jumps on him and hugged him kissin him on his cheeks)

Sid: bhai I love u! apne mujhe pagaal hone se bachaaya!

Abhi: chi! abbe chor! Sid! Choro mujhe

Sid: no way bhai! Agar apko chor diya tho meri baat kaun sunega…bhai u have to help me

Abhi: u idiot! Agar abhi nahin chora tho bhool jaounga ki tu mera bhai hai (sid broke the hug n abhi gave him a killin look)

Sid: sorry…

Abhi: tujhe hua kya hai?

Sid: bhai…apko meri madat karni padegi varna main sach mein pagaal ho jaounga soch soch kar….

Abhi: lekin baat tho batao..problem kya hai teri?

Sid: yahan nahin…hum apke cabin mein chalein?

****

Riddhima was lookin for naina in whole sanjeevaani coz she she knew she was the only person who can help her. So after searchin her for quite a long she finaly find her at the cafeteria with the rest of interns. Suvarna smiles seein her n Riddhima goes toward the table.

Ridz: hello everyone (all of them greet her)…Dr naina…kya main apse baat kar sakti hoon?

Naina: jee…(and they both move to the side)

Ridz: naina….mujhe tumhari madat ki zaroorat hai….

Naina: boliye didi kya baat hai?

Ridz: siddhant ke bare mein hai…

Naina: kya hua? Usne phirse apse jagda kiya naa

Ridz: nahin…aisi koi baat nahin hai…..naina main…main siddhant ki past ke bare mein jaan na chahti hoon…yeh jaan na chahti hoon ki…tamnana kaun thi uski life mein…(naina gets shocked by all her questions)

Naina: didi aap yeh…? I mean aap yeh sab kyun jaan na chahti hai?

Ridz: dekho naina main janti hoon ki tum siddhant ki bohut hi achi dost ho issi liye main tumse pooch rahi hoon…tho main tumse kuch chupana bhi nahin chahti…(n she tell her all her convo with kirti)…dekho main chahti hoon ki siddhant aur mere beech jo misunderstandings hain voh sab clear ho jaaye…lekin jab bhi main uss se baat karti hoon meri koi naa koi baat usse buri lagti hai aur voh gussa ho jaata hai….tho tamana ke bare mein jaan kar main koshish tho kar sakti hoon naa?

Naina: haan lekin didi main apko kaise bata sakti hoon?

Ridz: main janti hoon ki siddhant ne tumhe maana kiya hai…lekin naina sirf tum hi meri help kar sakti ho siddhant ko samajh ne mein…(naina hesitated first but seein ridz helpless she agrees)

Naina: chaliye mere saath….

****

Abhi: No way!

Sid: bhai plzz yaar….sirf aap hi meri help kar sakte hain

Abhi: maine kaha naa…main tumhe riddhima ki bare mein kuch nahin bataounga…aur btw mujhe laga tum uss se nafraat karte ho…tho suddenly uske liye pareshan hona aur uski life ke bare mein jaan na kyun chahte ho?

Sid: ok fine…(n he tell abhi his convo with kirti n her request) ab aap riddhima ko jante hain naa tho sirf aap hi meri help kar sakte ho plzz bhai

Abhi: sid I can understand lekin…..yeh riddhima ka personnel life hain main kaise bata sakta hoon…

Sid: I can understand bhai par…voh khud tho mujhe kuch bataayegi nahin naa…plzz bhai…I promise main kisi ko yeh baat nahin bataounga…par agar aap bhi nahin bataayenge tho soch soch kar mera dimaag kharab ho jayega…(abhi runs his hand on his hair n sighs)

Abhi: sit…

Sid smiles n obey. And Abhi starts riddhima's story….her intership, her meetin a guy named Armaan Malik, hw they fell in love, hw deeply they loved each other, hw everyone came to know wbout their relationship, with time ridz dad accepted armaan, the rokha then armaan's accident n his memory lost. Finaly about the "terrorism attack" in sanjeevaani…Sid was completely shocked hearin all this…he couldn't believe all the pain ridz went through n he felt guily for behaving soo badly with her…

****

Here naina was telling tamana n sid's story to riddhima who had tears in her eyes. Sid was completely the opposite of what she was thinking…his anger his attitude was just an armor to hide his pain…and she understood why Dr kirti said that they are alike…she was right. Not listenin naina anymore she remembered all those mean things she told him n closed her eyes in guilt….

Naina: didi….? (ridz looks at her) sid ek bohut acha insaan hai…lekin zindagi ne uske saath ek bohut hi bura khel khela hai…but im sure waqt ke saath saath humara pehle wala sid waspis laut aayega……par didi ek request hai apse…aap plzz sid ko mat bataaye ki maine…

Ridz: don't worry naina…main siddhant ko kuch nahin batoungi….(naina smiles).

****

Sid came back at his fav place of sanjeevaani…the terrace. Ususaly this place give him peace when he's tensed but today even this place did not gave him support….thinkin about riddhima…her pain..her anger…hw life can be cruel sometimes…hw destiny plays with heart n feelings without thinking once about the consequences…

Sid thinking: maine riddhima ko bohut galat samjha…apne pyaar ko kho kar main itna selfish baan gaaya tha ki doosron ka dard dekh nahin paaya…..itni umar mein kitna seh chuki hai voh….hum ek jaise tho nahin…par haan hum ek hi halat se guzaar rahe hain….ek hi dard….pyaar…..lekin riddhima ka dard mujhse kahin ziada hai…kyunki uski tho shaadi hone vaali thi Armaan se…ek hi pal mein sab kuch kho diya usne…apna pyaar apni zindagi apni jeene ki waje……pyaar hota kyun hai? Jiss se hume itni takleef milti hai voh hum karte kyun hai?.....(he was lost in his questions when he heard footsteps…lookin up he saw riddhima who got surprise to find sid there…she didn't knew what to say or do so she was standin at her place like a statue)

Ridz thinks: siddhant? Yahan kya kar raha hai?...i think mujhe uss se baat karni chahiye

Sid think: no dude…I don't think mujhe kuch kehna chahiye abhi…(for the first time they feel akward instead of angry)

Ridz: voh…main…..heuu…main baad mein aati hoon….

Sid: nahin….i mean…tum yahan reh sakti ho….i think yahan kafi jagah hai do log ke liye…(ridz smiles a lil n sits on the bench there….again the silence came back…so exept givin each other akward smiles n avoidin each other's eyes they didn't knew what to say or do…so ridz decide to broke the ice)

Ridz: tum….kafi aate ho yahan pe…..i mean…maine notice kiya hai ki tum humesha yahin pe aate ho…

Sid: mujh pe nazaar rakh rahi ho?

Ridz: nahin….main bas…(Sid smiles n sites beside her leavin enough distance between them)

Sid: mazaak kar raha hoon…..but yeah sanjeevaani mein yeh jagah kafi acha lagta hai…yahan pe araam se soch sakta hoon…par sanjeevaani se bhi ek achi jagah hai mere pass

Ridz: kahan?...

Sid: beach….vahan pe jitna tension problems hain naa sab se azaadi milti hai…vahan jaa ke sab bhool jaata hoon…(ridz just smiles) vaise….im…im sorry…

Ridz: kyun?

Sid: mere behaviour ke liye…..main kuch ziada hi bolta hoon humesha tumse…I mean naraazgi kisi aur se hai aur gussa tumpe nikalta rehta hoon…

Ridz: janti hoon….(sid looks at her surprised)

Sid: kya?

Ridz: voh….i mean…tumhari behaviour ko….vaise im sorry too…main bhi tho kuch kam nahin bol gaayi tumse naa…(sid smiles n their pagers ineterrup them)

Sid: bhai?

Ridz: abhi?

And they look at each other confused to see that that Abhi paged both of them.

Sid: heuum…shayad koi duty saath mein ho….

Ridz: ya…shayad….

Sid: tho chalein? (ridz nood n they went to abhi's cabin)

Hope it was not that badšŸ˜†
will post the next part soon
Love and Luck to All
šŸ¤—
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
WOW , Noorya , WOW !! šŸ‘

Loved it. Simply beautiful. Sid and Riddhima understanding each other's pain; trying to make each other feel comfortable. Awesome. I wish that's the way it happened in DMG. 😊

Loved it. Great work. And, thanks for the PM. šŸ‘šŸ¼



Edited by Akanksha0701 - 15 years ago

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