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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: JATINTHAKKAR

Noorya,😊

Very Nice Update👏👏👏
Tears Rolled Down My Eyes Too to See TJ in Such a Condition.
God Plz Give Strength To Our TJ & Relieve Her From This Trouble.
Siddhanth-Riddhima/Siddhanth with Everyone........All The Scenes Were Just Above Perfect.
Siddhanth Getting Angry......He's Possessive For TJ & I understand His Actions.Anyone Would had Reacted the Same.
Sid Regrets To All His Friends & Riddhima Too the Next Day.....Thanks To Atul For This.
Last Scene b/w Siddhima......Oh My God......That Was Best.
The way Both Sid & Riddhima Caressed TJ's Hair.......They Should Adopt TJ after their Marriage.
God Plz Embrace TJ & Shower Your Blessings On Her.
Looking For Next Part.
Noorya,
This is The Closest Story To My Heart.Irrespective Of Real DMG's Outcome,Plz Continue Your FF.
You're Amazing Writer & Your Dialogue-Writing is Above Ecstacy
Just One Word.
This Is DIVINE CREATION.

Jatin🤗

i dont know what to say man!
sorry for tamana...i know hw much u like her
but all this will end soon...n about the FF
now im deffo not gonna stop it yaar...u guys posted such lovely n touchin
comments that endin it will be a crime for me😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mayuri.vet

noorya🤗🤗


amazing update👏👏

and i am so sorry for the late reply...actually my net conecction had gone for a toss....so sorry once again...hope you understand.😊

well superb update......i love the slow and steady love growing between siddhima.....it's amazing...i loved the sid and tammanna bonding....also i love ridz all caring for sid.....we want to see something like this is the serial.......hamara naseeb kahannnn

thanks so much for the pm.....and plzzzz continue asap.....waiting for the next part.....

agla update lamba hona chahiye...warna rotten eggs and tamatars flying to you.....dont tell me i didnt warn u😉😉

loads of love❤️❤️
mayuri❤️❤️

Mayuri🤗
yaar plz stop sayin sorry everytime i feel like Hitler😆😆😆
and dont worry meri jaan main hoon naa....i'll try my best
to give u somethin u were expectin from the show😉...
and yaar this part was quite long tho phir se dhamki kyun??😆😆
but still thanks for the warnin i'll keep it in mind
while writin the next update😉😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: payyal

brilliant update

very nice,plz continue

thanks dear😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
hi

well written, keep it up

do continue please

norzar
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Noorya awesome update, very emotional & beautifully written, feeling sad for the little angel Tammy 😭. Hope she'll get well soon.
I loved the way Sid realized his mistake & the whole Sanjeevani gangs support for him & the last Siddhima scene was too good.
Yup Dmg is ending but plz continue writing this beautiful FF, i love reading it.
Saher
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nikita_88

Nice update!

Cont soon!

thank u Niki😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: norzar

hi

well written, keep it up

do continue please

norzar

hey thanks Norzar😛

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Urstruly

Hey Noorya awesome update, very emotional & beautifully written, feeling sad for the little angel Tammy 😭. Hope she'll get well soon.

I loved the way Sid realized his mistake & the whole Sanjeevani gangs support for him & the last Siddhima scene was too good.
Yup Dmg is ending but plz continue writing this beautiful FF, i love reading it.
Saher

thanks Seher😳

im glad u liked the part

and u will soon know what will happen to Tam
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey guys

finaly the new part is done yaar😆
uff it took me ages i know
and im sorry for that lekin sachi
im tryin my best ti update it soon
but college naa
i dont even have a life anymore🤢
anyways thats not important
so here u go with the new part😳
~Tum Mile~

PART 12

All the interns were in locker room n talking about Sid n tam…they were worried for both of them n couldn't do anything.

Jp: bhagvaan kare tamana baby ko hosh aaye…agar usse kuch hua tho Sid bhaya tho bilkul tooth jaayenge

Jiggy: haan yaar…sid already tamana ko kho ne se itna sad tha aur agar ab tamana junior ko kuch hua tho pata nahin sid ka kya hoga…

Yuvi: don't worry guys…chahe kuch bhi ho hum sab sid ka saath denge (Raj entered the locker room n headed toward his locker to take his labcoat)

Raj: guys sid kaisa hai?

Sue: tumse matlab? (he just ignored her n looks at naina)

Raj: tamana ki tabyat mein kuch sudhar aayi hai kya?

Naina: nahin raj…tamana ab bhi behosh hai aur sid ussi ke pass hai…

Raj: poor sid yaar…I hope voh bachi jaldi theek ho jaaye…

Yuvi: tumhe kab se doosron ki fikar hone lagi hai?...jiss insaan ko apne elava kisi aur ke liye fikar karna tho door kisi aur ke bare mein sochta bhi nahin hai…voh aaj itna pareshan…? (raj closes his locker in anger)

Raj: dekh yuvi kisi ko galat samajhne mein bhi ek had hoti hai…aur tum apni limit cross kar rahe ho…(sayin this he left from there angry n naina looks at yuvi annoyed)

Naina: yuvi humesha raj se aisi baat karna zaroori hai kya?...kabhi tho bolne se pehle socho (n she runs after raj to see if he's fine) Raj…raj rukho

Raj: naina plzz tum wapis jao varna yuvi phir se sochega ki main koi naaya game khel raha hoon

Naina: raj plzz yuvi ki baaton ka bura mat maano…uski taraf se main maafi maangti hoon

Raj: plzz naina tum sorry mat bolo…dekho I know yuvi mujhe bilkul bhi like nahin karta…kyunki voh mujhe tab janta tha jab main ek galat ladka tha…galat kam karta tha aur main yeh baat manta bhi hoon…aur shayad aaj bhi mujhse galat kam hote hain par main badalne ki koshish tho kar raha hoon naa….aur yuvi khud bhi tho aisa tha naa…

Naina: I know raj…koi tum pe believe karna ya naa kare…main janti hoon ki tum badalne ki koshish kar rahe ho

Raj smiles: thanks……heu…tum jao mujhe…toda kam hai (n he leaves)

All their conversation was heard by Sue who now was feelin a lil guilty for her behaviour thinking that she really naver gave raj a chance to understand him or just talk normaly…

Sue: shayad main kuch ziada hi rude hoon raj ke saath…maybe he is not that bad actually…

***

Ridz was in the ICU with tamana waitin for sid to come back…she was thinking about sid n hw shattered he is n just hopes that everythin will be fine soon…she carreses tam's hair n talks to her

Ridz: tum bohut lucky ho jo sid tumse itna pyaar karta hai…aur main yeh bhi janti hoon ki tum bhi sid se…I mean apne BF se bohut pyaar karti ho…yaad hai jab lonavla mein tumne sid se kaha tha ki tum usse humesha khush dekhna chahti ho...usse smile karte hue dekhna chahti ho…ek secret bataoun?...mujhe bhi sid smile karte hue acha lagta hai…tho plzz beta kisi aur ke liye nahin par sid ke liye utho…uski khushi ke liye…voh bohut dukhi hai tumhe iss tarah dekh kar aur khud ko saza de raha hai…aur tumhare elava voh kisi aur ki baat maanega nahin…plz tamana…plzz utho

Sid: voh uthegi…(ridz surprised by the voice looks up n finds sid who comes toward her) tamana zaroor uthegi…(ridz stands up)

Ridz: heuu sid tum…I mean tum itne jaldi aa gaaye…toda aur rest karte tho acha hota

Sid smiles: main theek hoon…yahan tamana ke pass rahunga tho theek rahunga…

Ridz: ok…tho…main chalti hoon…mujhe toda kam hai (sid just nodded n sits back at his place n ridz leave from there)

Sid: main janta hoon tum mujhse naraaz ho tamana…kyunki main tumhari koi baat manta nahin tha naa…lekin I promise tum jo kahoge vaisa hoga jaise chahogi vaisa hoga…aur main janta hoon…tum mujhse ziada der tak naraaz nahin reh sakti…ek last time apne BF ko maaf karo aur main dobara koi galti nahin karun meri Love Guru…

And he continued talking to her for hours with this new hope that she will wake up soon n forgive him…

***

The day ended few people were still there at sanjeevaani…ridz was in her cabin ready to go home when atul entered her cabin.

Atul: hi ridzi…ghar jaa rahi ho?

Ridz : haan voh bas nikalne vaali thi…kyun ? koi baat hai kya ?

Atul : nahin bas poochne aaya tha ki kya tum sid se mili ?

Ridz : haan voh aaj subah tamana se milne gaayi aur sid vahan tha…

Atul : i hope voh ziada gusse mein nahin tha…kyunki kal jo hua uske baad sid kuch theek nahin hai

Ridz: nahin atul aisa kuch bhi nahin hua…infact sid ne mujhse maafi maang liya…bohut guity feel kar raha tha

Atul: acha?......mujhe pata tha voh zaroor maafi maang lega…he is a very nice guy dil ka bohut acha hai

Ridz: ur right…aaj kal aise log milte kahan hai…I mean tamana ko voh janta hi kitna hai aur uss se itna pyaar karta hai jaise voh uski apni ho

Atul: yahin baat mujhe bohut achi lagti hai sid mein…khud ko bhool ke doosron ke bare mein sochta hai unki life mein jo problems hain apna samajh kar unhe solve karta hai…and u know ridzi jiske saath voh dosti karta hai naa tho uss rishtey ko voh apni life se bhi ziada samhale ke rakhta hai…pata hai do din se usne kuch khaya nahin hai iss tension ko le kar (ridz is shocked to hear that he didn't ate for past 2 days)

Ridz: kya??...sid ne do din se kuch khaya nahin hai……main ek kam karti hoon…ghar jaa ke uske liye khana laati hoon

Atul : that's a good idea ridzi…shayad tumhari baat ko voh maan hi le kyunki hum sab ne bohut koshish ki lekin usne humari ek bhi nahin maan li…….

***

Sid did not moved from the ICU once…he was like glued to his chair waitin for tamana to open her eyes…he was not losin hope coz it was the last thing left…his eyes used to get moist when she wasn't reactin but he kept talking to her non stop…riddhima entered the ICU n sid was surprised to see her still at the hospital

Sid: tum…? ghar nahin gaayi abhi tak?

Ridz: gaayi thi…par tumhare liye khana laayi hoon…(showin him the tiffin)

Sid: thanks par…par mujhe bhook nahin hai…

Ridz: sid plzz toda kha lo…do din se tumne kuch khaya nahin hai…kya tamana yeh jaan kar khush ho jaayegi ki uski waje se tum khana nahin kha rahe ho?...plzz tamana ke liye toda kha lo…

Ridz was right n sid knew it so agreed only for tam's sake. They sit in the waitin room n ridz opened the tiffin n served the dishes in plate for sid. She was waitin for him to eat but he was not even lookin at the food…he was lookin down with his teary eyes thinking that tam was uncouncious for the past 2 days n did not eat anythin so hw could he…ridz clearly saw the pain in his eyes n it pinched her heart to see him like that…but controlin her tears she smiled the best way she could n makin a morsel she approach it to his mouth…sid looks at her n his heart ached even more seein hw much ridz cares for him…hw much his love cares for him…he was soo close to her but yet so far n that was a torture for him…unware of this pain ridz make him eat it smiling and make another morsel n he eat it too…then sid realized that she was not eatin…

Sid: tum nahin kha rahi ho?

Ridz: nahin…voh main ghar se kha ke aayi hoon (sid smiles n his turn makes a morsel n propose it to her)

Sid: jab tumhe jooth bolna aata nahin hai tho tum koshish kyun karti ho? (ridz smiles n eat it) tumhe kya lagta hai…itna saara khana main akela khaounga?

Ridz: maine tho sirf dinner nahin kiya hai sid…par tum tho 2 din se yahin ho bina kuch khaaye peeye…aur jab koi tumhare liye khana laata hai tho tum maana karte ho…aur agar meri baat bhi maana karte naa tho…(sid cuts her)

Sid: tho?......dhamki de rahi ho kya ?...listen…main sanjeevaani mein zaroor hoon magar tumhari dadaghiri ka time kal tak khatam ho gaaya hai Hitler! (ridz looks at sid in disbelieve with her mouth open)

Ridz: hw dare you callin me Hitler agian!?...main yahan tumhare liye itna late rukhi hui hoon…khanna laayi hoon taaki bhook ke mare tum behosh naa ho jao aur tum thanks kehne ke jagah mujhe Hitler bula rahe ho!...sid tum naa…tum bohut…

Sid: cute hoon I know….

Ridz: cute my foot! Tumse tho meri sandal ziada achi dikhti hai! (they look at each other with anger n realizin that they were again behaving like kids they burst into laughing)

Sid smiling: wow…aur log hume doctors kehte hain (ridz smile grows even more) vaise riddhima…jab maine tumhe khana khaane ke liye kaha…tho voh sirf polite baan ne ke liye tha…tumne tho poora khaana kha liya…kitna khati ho tum!

Ridz: sid tumhe meri maar khani hai naa (n she starts hittin him)

While this entire scene took place Atul was watchin everything. A smile spreads on his face seeing riddhima happy. Her smile…after so many months he felt like the old riddhima was back…and all this was because of Sid…their friendship…

Atul: kitne waqt ke baad aaj ridzi ko aise dekh raha hoon…aur yeh sab sirf aur sirf sid ke waje se hai…bhagvaan inki rishtey ko aise hi kaayem rakhe aur sid humesha ridzi ke pass rahe taaki voh issi tarah apni zindagi khushi se jee sake…

***

Atul was walkin through the corridors rememberin what he saw yesterday…hw ridz was herself with sid n hw their bondin was special and soo strong…he headed toward doctor Shashank's cabin who was quite happy to see him

Dr Shashank: aah doctor atul…adaar aaye

Atul: good morning sir

Dr shashank: baithiye…(he obeys) sab se pehle tho songratulations…aap senior doctor jo baan gaaye

Atul: thank u sir

Dr Shashank: tho bataaye…kaise hain aap? Aur wapis sanjeevaani mein senior ke hessiyet se aa kar kaisa lag raha hai?

Atul: bohut acha lagta hai sir…maine sanjeevaani ko aur yahan ki logon ko bohut miss kiya…yahan aa kar aisa lagta hai ki apne ghar wapis aaya hoon

Dr Shashank: dr atul apka yahan hona hume bhi bohut acha lagta hai and we are proud to have u as a senior…aur ab riddhima bhi akeli nahin rahegi…im sure apke saath hogi tho theek hi hogi…

Atul: mujhe bhi aisa laga sir ki main yahan aa kar ridzi ki parehsanyan door karunga…lekin mujhse pehle yeh zimidari kisi aur ne utha li hai…

Dr Shashank: aap kis ke baat kar rahe hain dr atul?

Atul: Sid……apko pata hai sir kal maine uss ridzi ko dekha jisse hum kuch mahinon pehle kho chuke the…jis tarah voh baat kar rahi thi…has rahi thi…aisa laga…jaise ridzi ke life mein jo kuch bhi hua hai voh bas ek bura sapna tha…aur yeh sab sid ne kiya hai…voh bohut hi ek acha ladka hai…

Dr Shashank: janta hoon dr atul….dr siddhant jab pehle yahan aaye the tho tode bheegde hue the…par waqt ke saath saath voh ek bohut hi kabil doctor aur zimedar insaan baane hain……dr siddhant ne mujhse vaada kiya tha ki voh riddhima ki madat karenge apna dukh bhoola ne mein…zindagi mein aage badne mein…(atul looks at him confused) haan dr atul…dr siddhant ko riddhima ke ateet ke bare mein sab pata hai…aur yeh baat khud riddhima ne unhe bataaya hai…aur abhi jo kuch apne kaha hai uss se yeh sabit hota hai ki dr siddhant ne mujhse kiya hua vaada poora kiya…

Atul: jee sir…aur agar ridzi aur sid ki dosti aisi rahi naa…tho im sure ridzi bohut hi jald saare poora baatein bhoola kar apni life phir se jeeyegi (both smile to each other)

Dr Shashank: vaise…dr siddhant ke patient kaise hain?

Atul: tamana abhi bhi behosh hai sir…aur iss baat ko le kar sid bohut pareshan hai…sir main soch raha tha agar aap ek baar sid se baat kare tho acha hoga (dr shashank nodded)

Dr Shashank: theek hai dr atul…main aaj dr siddhant se ek baar milta hoon…

Love and Luck to All

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Posted: 14 years ago
Noorya * hugs *

Awesome update dear
Loved d cute SR scene & d convoys B/w Atul & Shanky
I really luv ur story
Plzzz continue soon....

B/w thanx 4 d PM

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