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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
im still confused lol
but i wont tell u that😉
coz ur not liking it😭😉
but eagerly waiting for the next update
but hey my guess was right their boss was armaan after all😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
Hey Maha....!!!
The part though short bt was very nicely written....
I wonder wat ther real motive is behind kidnapping her.....
It doesn't seem tht she did something mayb family issue guess will have to wait for u to continue....
But poor Riddhima Rahul shldn't have hit her n Armaan well he's been slightly nice bt yet very violent with her....
waiting for ur next update.....thnk u for the Pm :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
awesome update
god the boys r so nasty
cant believe it
rahul slapped ridzy
so evil
why have they kidnapped her
cant wait 2 find out
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Edited by ARMAANKSGFAN - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
Jst read ur ff......lks like a romantic thrillr...waitmg for evnts to unfold d real story....contnu soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
Hey guys,
Read few Comments and thought of updating one more part so that you could understand the sotroy more better. Though i never wanted to update two parts in one day, but for all the Best readers i am doing it.
angelina_angel, You don't have to be sad, if you aren't getting my story... please do tell me what you are not getting so i could explain to you and others too who are not understanding... i am sorry if any of my words went in offense too you... you critize wen eva you found a fault.😊
This FF was A try From my side to Right it in Total Different manner from my OTHER Ffs... and let c, how much u guys appreciate it... !😃
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PART 3


Atul opened her hands and passed her the plate with a small – faint smile. "here, now eat this. Don't talk much." he spoke politely. "Tie her again once she is done" Rahul spoke and went out to attend his mobile as it buzz continuously.

Sniff Sniff …. she sobbed softly brushing her hand on cheek that burned with pain. She took the plate in hand and moved her hand in rice, plucking it in fingers she ate, hungrily. "you need water...?" Atul, who sat in front of her on floor asked. "uhmm" she nodded in yes with mouth full. He ran and brought a bottle. She looked at him suspiciously but gabbed the bottle. "Is she done?" Rahul asked. "no... let her eat in peace Rahul" Atul commanded and sat on the bed in front of her while she sat near his(Atul) feet on floor. "hmmm" Rahul mumbled and sat on the bed beside Atul.

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Next Morning.

Arman Walked in the room to see Rahul and Atul sleeping on bed and a tied Riddimaa on floor... he moved forward bending down close to her, he moved a strand of her face. She flinched and moved her face left right – Tried to think, who could it be? As her eyes and mouth were tied again. "uhmm.." she moved her face away from the hand "oh... angry haan" Arman bend his face down on her, his lips brushed her. She turned her face away in disgust. He chuckled and walk up to the 'Sleeping beauty's' "Get UP !" he kicked their legs that hang down loosely off the bed..

"haan kon kon? Kon maar gaya?" Atul shrieked. "Morning Sir..." Rahul gained conscious at once "Call me Arman" Arman told both of them. Both smiled. And Looked at the girl - Riddimaa, who moved her head all over the place, hearing them and trying to get up. "Bring her down – We Have got to do business." Arman announced gathering up his seriousness again.

Lounge,

"Open her up" Arman told, as she was settled on one of the couch, three seater couch. Arman sat right in front of her on wheel chair, pulled right infront of her.Arman's single wheel-chair was kept right in front of her just one feet away. "hands too Atul" Arman told. She twisted her arms, and rubbed her eyes like baby. Arman opened his mouth to speak when.....
"I want to go to toilet..." she announced interuppting Arman. Rahul and Atul, who sat right on the other side of her looked at her with open mouth "kyaa..?" Arman asked with the same shock.
"Hurry.... jaldi... Its emergency...! ahh... uhhmm" she made noise.... she got up.... just to be pulled back by Rahul and Atul who took hold of her wrist.

"Let... meee Goo" she whispered. "Take HER to washroom!!" Arman shouted. "Goo. !" Arman shouted at her. She got up and ran "Aree... Larkii idharr....." Atul pulled her on the right angle as she was rushing to Kitchen "how would I know... you havE TO tell me about where the wasroom is ! Pagal..." she rushed and close the door over their faces. "Did she just called me Pagal?" Atul looked at Rahul, who burst out.... while Arman shook his head as the 'most serious matter' change into 'most riduculus' moment... her ethics made him chuckle, atlas. But soon he wiped the smile off...

Arman began as she got back, "Riddimaa right?" Arman asked, after getting her back in the same position "haan." "We going to make a call at your home and you going to tell your dad – that he has to come at the place we call him or else we will kill you. Am I clear." Arman spoke calmly. "no..." she spoke boldly. "Listen..." Arman moved his finger with the same anger.
She moved back in her seat, biting her lips as she sat in the middle of three boys. "what do you want from my father.? We are very poor people, pure middle class. Why have you abduct me? You won't get any money from my family... I am the single owner" she cried. Pulling her small petite hand up to her face joining them in misery.
"huh? Middle class? Poor? Single owner? Stop lying, Bitch" Arman moved forward, pulling her hair again in his fist. He almost spat those last word with disgust. "i am not lying please believe me... let me go" she flinched and joined her hands together infront of him

"believe? Believe Guptas? you all are involved so just Shut up … and do as I say... !" And pushed her face away and sat back on his seat. Atul and Rahul had moved away from her sides and let alone Arman deal with her. "i will do as you say..." She cried "But just …. tell me what have we done?"she bend in front of him, lowering her head till it touched her knee caps and cried till he yanked her back with force to look at her straight.

"your father! Your family.... you all are big Mafia – and do think we 'police agent' would never come to know? Haan? If you want to live for few more hours than call your father and tell him to meet us... !" he ended to see her shock 'another act...' Rahul thought.

"Mafia? My Family...? HAVE YOU LOST IT" she got up and shouted him with her finger right near his nose 'O-o...' Atul thought. Arman's nostrils fumes with immense angry. He pushed her away getting up on his feet – he slapped her across her face while she fall on back on couch and fainted. "THROW SOME WATER ON HER FACE – I WANT HER ALIVE... SHE WILL DIE NOT SOO eASILY... she just SHOUTED AT ME... !! DOESN't SHE KNOW I HATE CRIMINALS trying to fool me with her innocent face - bloody Criminals !!" he huffed angrily while Rahul took a jug near him and poured cold water over her head.

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I know the parts are sad, but its required...
IF you don't get my Story line -- please inform me. 😊
Love Maha😳

Edited by Hello_01 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
Haiiii






Sorry yaa ... I'm a bit busy today ..thatswhy not edited my previous reserved one .. but see .. as a good girl I'm .. editing my post for two updates




NOTE

Stop writing like .. hope u understanding the story guys .. hope I'm clear with my story .. lolzz whenever I'm reading that lines .. its feel like I'm doing some Maths solutions .. rather than reading my Armaan's ff .





N about ff : : : Sweety .. such a dramatic turn of Armaan being a Kidnapper to Police officer .. hmm hmmm ... see .. there only U GOT THE POINTS like 9/10




n the remaining point .. u will get ONLY when u show Armaan starts treating Riddhima in a nice way .. I know it will take much time for that .. N 'M ALSO NOT FORCING U TO WRITE Armaaan saying " I LOVE U 2 Riddhima " ... 'm jsut n just waiitng for some unfoldness in the story .



Its great to see such interesting ffs yaa .. But sweety .. it really hurts to see Riddhima like that .. Poor Soul ... pleasee dnt be soo much rude to her



Maha .. 'm loving this speed updates of u yaar ..KEEP IT UP



n hey listen .. do update Soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon Ohk .. want to know how this story unfolds.

Takecare jaan .. LoVe U



Edited by k_anjali12 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
nyc ff
plzz continue soon
nd do pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
nice part
now story line is totally clear. good job
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
Maha superb parts continue soon...and thanx for teh PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
Hey Maha...!!!
Now tht was some update....so thy are actually police agents wow tht's something i never thought abt...
n the Gupta's are mafia now seriously damn good thinking....
But aren't thy a little too hard on her....poor girl seems to know nothing abt his father's actual deed i guess...
thnk for the part, waiting already for ur next update... :)

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