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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
wow great ff. the concept sounds interesting. i cant believe armaan kidnapped ridhimma. i cant wait to read ahead and find out why he kidnapped her.
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
First few things,
You guys are hell Impatient ! every single comment was like, the Kidnapper is Arman? why did he did that - lol😆😆, you ppl are sooo interogative... read on too know.
and second, i found one comment - saying he/she is confused about PART 1? now Really? it was simple i guess, but if you were i am sure this part will help you a bit...
and third, I loved ALL the comments🤗... Happy to know that you all were eager to find out whats next soo... come on read !!!
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PART 2

"we have dropped her in your room... now?" Rahul, whose hair were chopped and stood up like an army officer, he wore a cream jeans with a white – pure white shirt tucked in his jeans,neatly. On the other hand Atul, whose hair were a little goofy style, but it looked good at him only, loose shirt tuck out – with a fair jeans. Both stood in front of the chief head.

He, the so called Master – Sir wore a simple dark denim jeans with a black shirt, properly tucked in, holding his black leather jacket on his shoulder and a cigarette lit in his hand. "I am too tired – too look up to this operation today... you both." Pointing his cigarette at them "duty over night – outside that room, I am going to take up your room Rahul. I hope its clean and if its not then rush and clean it up for me...before 8" He spoke, while placing the cigarette near his lips and sucking it in with a pleasure. "Am I clear" he announced with a strict voice. "Yes..." Rahul said, in angry manner, he wish to pull Arman on floor and beat the bash out of him for taking up His(Rahul) room, both turned and went away, obvious that they only had an hour in their clock for striking at 8.


"What does he think of himself? Are we his servant?" Atul winced while walking in Rahul's room. "Yes we are Atul.... As per Are real boss we are" Pause "As for the time, Only." Rahul picked up his cloth. "why don't he – sit and do the "chokidari" outside her room? I mean? Why did HE gave His room to her? He never did that? Strange?" Atul sat over a couch, throwing a shirt at Rahul which was pile on couch.

"yea strange, I mean Arman Malik.... never did that. HE gave his room to that girl? Haven't 'we' planned to keep her in that.... that rabbit cage ?" Rahul stop and looked Atul, strangely."Exactly...! thats what I am saying." pause "isn't this any of his prank over us? Just to annoy us?' Atul spoke scratching his chin "Does he has a soft corner for her now?" Atul let another idea

"Nahh... Arman Malik don't have any sort of Soft Corners in him" Rahul chuckled after stuffing all his cloths in the cupboard, they both looked at the room with appreciation. Rahul went up to His so called Sir, while Atul decline to do his 'Jee hazuuri(bowing his head infront of Him)... any more' and left for his duty outside the girls room.


"You can go in the room now. I cleaned it up" Rahul stood by his chair. As he sat on a large comfy chair with another cigarette lit up in his finger "Arman." Rahul called again which broke His trance. "yea?" Pause "did you gave the girl food?" He asked "No, do you want us too?" Rahul asked with cock eye brows. "yes... yyes until she is alive." he replied in grave voice. "Ok..." Rahul went away.


'Why do I am being so kind to her?' He thought. 'I am NOT Going to forget my Work... NO... NOT even for a girl – I don't give a damn if she leaving any trance of effect on me... I am over with girls… remember that Arman Malik' he thought again, when a loud shriek made him turn his head to see the voice of girl shouting, touching his ear. He huffed "MAKE HER QUITE !" Arman shouted and lit another cigarette. "aahhhhhhhhh LEAVE ME.........." Riddimaa shouted. "Urgh" Arman smashed his cigarette in ash tray and walked up stairs to His room where She stayed, with heavy foots.


"WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON? YOU BOTH? CAN'T EVEN HANDLE A GIRL." HE shouted hitting the door with his palm. "Arman – WE ARE TRYING TO... !" Atul blasted Back. "Don't FORGET – I AM THE chief OF THIS CASE MR. JOSHI.. !" Arman stepped up to Atul with a finger.

They use to be buddies way back but now they stood up like enemies any saw them would think of them beign NOT a good friend, from quite few years they are just fighting and maintaining a distance.

"SO ..? WHAT DO YOU WANT... TO give YOU A BOW Every Time YOU CROSS US? DON'T FORGET ARMAN... WE ARE INTO THIS TOGETHER... WE BOTH DON'T LIKE YOU, NOW DOESNOT mean, You can Take the ADVANTAGE OF YOUR Power. And Bring the PRESONAL Issue in WORK." Atul blasted


"SHUT UP ATUL" Rahul spoke, Throwing Riddimaa on floor with a thud, who cried in pain – he pushed Atul off ground from his chest. "Don't Forget we Are NOT doing this For Arman... its Are Job! He Got Promotion in his field... and WE DID NOT … DON'T FORGET THAT ….!" Rahul made it clear by pointing his finger at Atul. "He is Much more deserving then we are... so follow as he says" Rahul added. "Sorry Arman" pause "Sir" Rahul stood with a bow head.

"I am sorry too, i guess this time it went over board..." Arman mumbled, knowing that this was a bit far "I am sorry Atul, i should not mix personal in professional life – But I Am The Boss. Like it or Not. !" Arman added, he was like this – arrogant, angry fellow. His eyes moved on the Girl on floor as she tried to get up but her hands were still tied up along with her eyes.

"Konn... hou tum log? What do you want? Please let me go..." her voice boomed in middle of the three voices. Arman walked up to her. Opened the cloth from her eyes. She shed her eye lids down when she felt the light sparkling at once in her eyes. "ah" she let out a bit, squeezing her eyes. She felt a hand moving pass her shoulder and grabbing her hair in his fist, he pulled it out. "Ahhh..." she cried "Let you go? Listen – you are turning a pain for me...! one word and I will kill you !" he pulled her hair more. While her eyes shed tears with massive pain in her vessel. "Why?? WHAT HAVE I DONE?" She shouted over his face. To see his burning eyes – burning her eyes – veins... she got weak, with the look she got from him, he looked harmful – dangerous evil.


He pushed her on ground. "Feed Her... if she doesn't eat Stuff in her mouth... I Want HER ALIVE ! YOU GOT THAT" Arman shouted at both Rahul and Atul and went away. "Magar...." before she could speak Rahul move forward and slap her hard across her face. Which not only stunned Atul but Arman also. Arman stood damn-rooted turning around, he saw Riddimaa laid on floor and her hair scattered over her face "Not A Word !"Rahul took hold of her head, making her look up at him. "Now EAT !" he ordered while she flinched in pain. Her head had began to hurt with all the pulling,seeing another face walk up to her. 'He shouldn't have hit her... he shouldn't have....' Arman thought. 'Control Yourself Arman – she isn't worth it – let her die.' pause 'yea she deserve that may be she deserve more !' he thought and went away.

---------------------------------------------- Ok, thats it for today.
Don't kill me for this please.... i know, the part was bit sad... or more than a bit sad... 🥱
Do comment and tell me how was it ??😲
Do press the like Button, right below this - it like the post 😃
Love Maha😳
AFTER PART (edited),
OK On seeing soo many of you sad, i HAVE decided To give one More PART after 1 Hour, soo please all of you don't be sad... ! ok... its just the start... everything will be OK... as the ff goes on !!😃
Edited by Hello_01 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

reserveeeddddd

Edit:
Short part :'(((
acha chaddoo
it wasss GREAATT
paar im like thatt right now 😕😲😲😡😡😭😭
WHYY?!! is he beeing soo mean toward her she havent done anything and now that she saw them she doesnt even know them :'(
poor her i want to slap Rahul haarrddddddd 😡😡😡
that was really sad
but im loving the effect she's having on armaan i mean he is beeing "nice" , i mean he start feeling something and all he gave her his room , but why did he pull her hair 😡😭😭
Cant waiit for the next update its greaaattttt
plz plz plzzz udpate sooonn jana *jhappiizzz*
Love, Nina ^^
Edited by -Nina- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
wow. that was a sad part :((
cant wait for the next part..hopefully not so depressing lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
Hey Maha😃

That's a short part yaar😕
but really nice as usual😃
ans it's a Saddy part too
waiting for the next update
Thanks for the PM😳

love
prinz

Edited by Prinnia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
Mahaaaaaaaaaa
The thing u have written in ur siggi box will now be applied by me to you!
I might seriously kill you!!!!!!!!
You left us hanging in mid air!
What are we supposed to make out of it?
N Rahul slapped Riddhima? 😲
Update soooooooooooooooon
N thanks for the PM
Take care
Love,
Ashu
Edited by Sweet_Ashum - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
Hey meri Abla Nari
How r yew??

waise na just read the part
Awesome Tossom
But stop being So violent
U r hurting Ridz yaar
dun b so Cruel

anyways best of luck :-)
n thnx 4 pm

love ya
PAGAL :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
Araaayy Wah man.. well unique.. not sumfink i read b4!.. good one buh im eager to knw wat happens next!.. do pm me yeah cheers!.. good one!.. ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
ummmmm yes maha this part was sad.... but i m liking it yaar..... its different story ...... loving it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
Hey maha!
I am so curious 2 no wat arman wants from ridhima!
Thanks 4 the pm!
Continue soon!

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