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Posted: 14 years ago
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the shiv mandir part was some what similar to kis desh mein hai mera dil. where prem and heer first met, am i right but any way nice ff.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ya u r rite but i felt that it'll suit here tatsy next time i'll make sure that none of my part will match to any serial. thanx anyways
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aakritisri1111



Dont worry dear she wont get pregnant at least dis i can assure u. thanx anyways



hehe i am happy now lol.... xxxx geet going through enough in real lol haha xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Every1 thank u so much for ur lovely Comments on My First Part. Now here's d Part 2. Hope u all like it too. Pls do leave ur comments nd criticism. hit d like button if u all like my FF.


PART 2:



Geet sitting on a wooden bench in d park nearby by closing her eyes again lost in her thoughts. The words of her Father still echoes in her ears "Geet there is no place for u in our house now. U r dead for all of us now" these r d last words dat her Dad has said to her nd after dat everything has changed. All d flashes of d conversation b/w them have started coming in front of her.

Geet: But dad y don't u understand. I m not wrong

Dad: But u r not right also geet. I don't know u r going to Ur uncle's Place nd dats Final.

Geet: No Dad, I'll not go. I'll not run away from d world. I cant spare dat person so easily.

Dad: So wat do u want to do? U Want to go in search of Him? To punish him? Did u ever imagined hw can dis decision of urs can affect ur life?

Geet: I thought a lot about it nd I Don't think dat I m doing anything wrong. And as far as my life is concerned its been already affected badly, Wat else has left to affect

Dad: And about ur Family? Ur Younger Sister? Don't u have any responsibility towards dem? Hw can u be so selfish Geet?

Geet: Dad m not being selfish nd wats d guarantee dat u people will not suffer after I go to uncle's place. No dad my decision will not change

Dad: Geet do u have any idea that d path in which u had decided to go is not easy

Geet: I knw dad. I knw tat its not easy. I'll face many obstacles in between. I have to fight from d whole world but I'll Fight because I know that I m Right.

Dad: Is this ur final decision?

Geet: Yes Dad

Dad: ok Fine. U want to fight from d whole world den ur fight starts from ur own home. Geet dere is no place for u in our home now. U r dead for all of us.

Geet's Younger Sis Lekha who was continuously listening to their conversation has to interfere in between when she heard her Dad's Decision. Geet was not only her Elder Sister but her Best friend also nd she knew dat her Sis is not wrong.

Lekha: No dad, U cant do dis to Di. Wats her Fault?

Dad: Her fault is dat she thinks dat she can fight d world alone den let her fight nd Lekha if u too want to support ur Di den u r also free to go wid her. We'll assume dat we had no children at all.

Lekha: but dad.....

Geet Gave her a look indicating her to be quite nd leave from dere. She don't want her sis to be in trouble because of her. Lekha stops arguing nd goes from dere. Den geet continues

Geet: Fine dad I'll go. I don't want to get all of u in trouble.

Her Dad said nothing to her nd goes from dere leaving Geet nd Her Mom alone in d room. Geet looks at her mother she is having Tears in her eyes. Geet understands that hw difficult was it for her Mother to choose b/w her Daughter nd Husband So she said nothing to her nd had started packing her clothes nd belonging. And den she gave a last look to all; Her room, Her Mom, Her Dad, Her Sis, Her Home nd den she left leaving everything behind her.

She was not sure where to go. She knows that none of her friend will help her because no one wants to be in trouble. Den suddenly she reminds of Pinki. Pinki was her Childhood Friend. She has shifted to Delhi after Schooling But dey were always in touch. She called her nd told her d whole incident, Pinki with no second thoughts asks her to come straight away to Delhi. She has full trust on Geet nd she knows dat Geet cant do anything wrong.

Since den she is living wid Pinki nd her Dad. Both of dem Accepts her as a part of her family.

But how long? Thought geet opening her eyes she realized that tears were rolling down from her eyes. How long will I Depend on Her? Its my Fight nd I had to fight alone I cant live wid Pinki Forever. I had to stood up on my Feet. I don't want to be Burden on dem. She stood up from d bench wipes her tears. Put her hand on Babaji's Locket she wears nd Said to herself "No Geet u cant be weak. U have to b Strong. U have to fight from d world. Don't forget that u r a fighter nd u cant give up. Don't forget d promise dat u have done to urself dat u'll expose that person in front of every1." She didn't realize wen in lost in her thoughts she came from park to the middle of d road. She's Still Thinking that her mom always use to Say that wen destiny Closes all d doors for u den God will send some1 for ur help. God will send some1 to her life also.

In these thoughts she didn't realize that a Car is coming to her from far Behind. The driver is continuously pressing Horn but she didn't noticed nd by the time she noticed the car came close to her. She close her terror in fear thinking that this is d end of her life. At that very second d driver puts d break. Geet slowly opens her eyes wondering that she's still alive. She saw a Man Coming out from d car. She observed that he was a young guy or should she say a Handsome Hunk coming towards her. He had anger on his face yet his face look nice. She came into senses by his voice

"R u Blind or Deaf dat u cant see car coming towards u not even u bother to hear d horn? Did u get Maan Singh Khurana's Car only for ur suicide attempt?"

Geet (Muffled): No, Actually.... I....

Maan: No Actually what? Do u have any Idea wat u was going to do? Wat if I haven't put d brakes?

Geet: Sorry... I mean Thanx for saving me but I was not going to suicide actually I was so lost in my thoughts dat I didn't realize that wen I came in between of d road and.....

Maan (interrupts): U know what dis is d problem of u girls. U thinks so much nd I wont be surprised if u r thinking of any plan

Geet (amused): Wat do u mean?

Maan: I mean it can be ur plan also, u know walking alone on d road that too in dark nite, try to come under a car, showing urself helpless nd by chance if d guy is rich, Smart nd Handsome den u can trap him through ur innocence. Right?

Geet: Do u have any Idea dat wat u r talking?

Maan: I don't think dat I m saying anything wrong. I m saying d same thing which r in mentality of u girls

Geet now can't tolerate dis Anymore nw. d guy to whom he's thinking to be nice few moments back is now getting on her nerves. She can't tolerate anyone to point out on her character. Finally she burst out

Geet: Enough. What d hell do u think about urself? U saved me by coming under ur car but that doesn't gives u d right to say anything about me. Wat do u know about me or my life? Nothing na. u don't know even my name nd u said lots of thing about me nd u expect me to listen quietly.

The attitude of dis girl makes maan even more angry no one has dared to talk to him like dis nd dis girl'

Maan: Listen u.....

Geet: No, u listen to me Mr. Maan Singh Khurana if u think dat u r some kind of a prince nd I m dying to be wid u den u r wrong? I don't know what kind of d girls u r being around but as far as I m concerned I m not like dat. But y m I telling u all dis

Maan: Listen no one has dared to talk to me like dat.

Geet: Oh why I m not surprised because if someone has talked to u before like dat den ur mind must be in d right place nd u know how to talk to a girl especially to an unknown girl. But dnt worry Mr. Khurana because after dis wenever u meet any girl u remember dis meeting of ours nd atleast u know how to behave wid a girl.

By saying dis she started walking towards her home den suddenly stops gives a look at Maan like something has left to say

Geet: And one more thing I really wish dat our Paths would never cross in future because i dont to meet a Jerk like u in future.

Maan: even me wish d same because I also dnt have any interest to talk to a selfish girl like u.

And den dey part from each other. Geet headed towards her Home While Maan towards his Car. While entering to his Car Maan gives a look to geet who is going alone.

Maan(to himself): Selfish Girl! I saved her Life nd she said all dis about me. Its useless to do anything for dese girls nd even more useless to trust dem.

Den he stars his car nd gone from dere. When geet turns to look back she saw him going

Geet(To herself): Jerk! He thinks that he saves my life then he can say anything about me like he's a god. But from now onwards he Won't dare to speak any girl like dat.

Then dey both leave in their respective directions.

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Geet returns Home. She's Extremely angry. Pinki saw her but she couldn't able to figure out wats wrong wid her because wen she left she was sad nd wen she came back she's is extremely angry

Pinki: Geet, Wats Wrong? Y u r so angry?

Geet: Ye tumhare Delhi k Ladke? Dimaag Saatvein aasmaan pe hota hai. Jaise k ye kahin ke raja jo

Pinki(Puzzled): Wat? Geet will u please tell me wat exactly happened. And kiski shamat aa gayi jisne tujhse panga le liya?

Geet Narrates her d whole incident but forget to mention d name. Pinki listens to den started laughing.

Geet: I don't believe dis. U r laughing. I haven't cracked a joke over here.

Pinki (trying to control her laugh): I m sorry but I m imagining d face of dat poor person to whom u have said all dis.

Geet: Don't call him a poor person. He was nothing more den a Jerk.

Pinki: Acha baba fine. Leave it nw. u r not going to meet him again. Acha geet I wanna tell u something.

Geet: Ya wat?

Pinki: tomorrow u had an interview

Geet: Interview? Where?

Pinki: Khurana Constructions. The place where I work. Actually dere is a post for our MD's Secretary nd I had submitted ur resume over dere nd guess wat u have been shortlisted nd I m sure dat u'll get dis job.

Geet: Pinki I hope u haven'tdone any recommendation for me

Pinki: ofcourse not geet I know Ms. Geet Handa is very "Khuddar". I m sure because d resumes which have been shortlisted in dat ur resume is d best.

Geet: hhmmm Thanx pinki. I'll never forget dis help of urs.

Pinki: Stop being formal geet I m ur friend. Acha now u go to sleep so that u can get up early tomorrow.

Geet: Ya. Gudnite.

Geet fell asleep. Pinki looks at her nd smiles

Pinki(To herself): Geet I dnt know about u But I must thank dat guy because of whom I get a glimpse of my Old geet back.

By saying dis Pinki also fell asleep

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On d other hand Maan also came home in an angry mood. He bangs d door nd Notices dat his Dadimaa is sitting on d couch waiting for him.

Maan: Dadi wat r u doing here? U must have gone to sleep by now. U know it can affect ur health.

Dadi: Forget about me Maan. U r saying like u r so much concern about me.

Maan: Dadi Pls dnt start it all again. I m already angry.

Dadi: Wo to hamesha hi rehte hai. there's nothing new in dat but I want to know what unusual happened dis time.

Maan: Dese Girls I tell u. its useless to help dem

Nd he tells d whole story to dadi

Maan: U wont believe it dadi but dat selfish girl has forgotten so easily that I saved her.

Dadi: Maan dat girl is not wrong. Just because u saved her that doesn't mean u can say anything about her. Infact wat I think is that this girl has got good learnings from her parents datsy he can't tolerate anyone pointing to her character.

Maan: Dadi pls nw u dnt start talking like dat girl. U r taking her side like she is ur daughter.

Dadi: But maan.....

Maan: Dadi pls. I think u should go to sleep now. Its very late nd I also wanted to sleep.

Dadi knews dat this time its useless to argue him so she left from dere but something is going in her mind

Dadi(To herself): For d first time any girl has dared to talk to Maan like dat. There must be something in dat girl. I really wish to god dat this can only be d girl who comes to ur life in future.

Precap:

Geet's Interview......


hey Guys hope u like Part 2 of my FF. Pls feel free to Criticise if u dnt like it.

Luv aakriti 😊😊

Edited by aakritisri1111 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow...this wonderful....liked how geet stood up for herself...don't tell me!!!Geet is pregnant here too?
Damn....anyways please update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
omg thats so cool
cant wait till they meet again!!!!
hey is geet pregnant?
good work aakriti
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was nice..n kinda funny!!1..i liked it..ur pace is goood!like i can picture the incident really good..update sooon its really enjoaybel to read!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATE LOVED IT...

UPDATE SOONNNN
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Aakriti

loved ur ff.........it seems interesting
plz add me in ur pm list

Luv
Naina



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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow....

maneet 1st meeting was brillianT!!!

update sooN!!!

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