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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

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nice intro..........will be waiting for the update............can u plz pm me?

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Aakriti Srivastava

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Posted: 14 years ago

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@aamirkhanfan definately i'll PM u nd rest of all thanx for d support i'll update d part soon

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:D thats amazing pls continu and add me to ur PM list xxxx

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Aakriti Srivastava

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hi every1 first of all thanx a lot for ur Support nd comments here's d Part 1 of my Story hope u all will like it. pls feel free to criticise if u dont like it.

Part 1:

Geet was standing near d window looking unseeingly outside, lost in her own thoughts that how will she manage her life in future, Destiny has closed every door for her. Why does this happen to her,she has never ever thought of doing anyone's wrong then Why her life has taken such a drastic change. By thinking, slowly some tearsrolled down from her eyes. Her thoughts wre distracted by Pinki's Voice

Pinki: Geet.. Geet where r u?
Geet(wiping her tears): Yes Pinki, I m here near d window.
Pinki goes to her
Pinki:Geet, What happen ? why r u standing alone here? nd R u Crying?
Geet: No Dear, I guess something has gone into my eyes thatsy they become red.
Pinki: Geet, Don't try to hide it from me. I know u from childhood, u were crying hai na
Geet: No Pinki, I am perfectly Fine acha u were saying something. wats dat?
Pinki knews that geet is trying to hide her emotions nd its useless to talk to her dis tym so she decided to change d topic.
Pinki: O ya, U haven't got ready yet ? U know na that we r going for a movie today
Geet: Pinki i dont think that i can go. I m not feeling well
Pinki: Geet stop being a spoilt sport. Its been two months since u came to Delhi nd u never been out of dis house, i dont care u r coming with me today
Geet: But Pinki, I.........
Pinki: No ifs, No buts. Geet see its my last day off from office nd i dnt want to spoil it please. But i guess u dont care for my happiness anymore now
Said pinki by making a Sad Face she knews that this trick will work even Geet knows it very well tat Pinki is trying to Blackmail her emotionally, But still she agreed to go wid her for her happiness.
Geet: Acha baba theek hain, Now dont start this old trick of urs. Give me 10 mins. nd i'll be ready
Pinki(chuckled): Thats like my Geet make it fast i m waiting in d hall.
She left
Geet(with smile): Pagal, But still i m glad tat she's my best frnd.
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"What the hell is dis? Is this u called a project Report?" Said Maan by throwing the file at d corner. Both Adi nd Sasha got scared from his anger.
Sasha: But MK.....,
Maan: Not a word Sasha. You know very well that i Cant bear mistakes, Den how can u do such a big mistake? ur father war our former employee nd a good friend of my father but that doesnt means that u got d right to do mistakes.
Sasha: I m sorry MK, I'll check d file again nd give u d accurate report.
Maan: make sure u did otherwise it can b harmful to u (turned to Adi) nd Adi wat about d Annual report?
Adi: y-y-yes sir, here it is
Maan checked d report nd was impressed wid his work.
Maan: Very Good Adi, I like it
Sasha gives a disguist look to Adi while he gives a victorious smile to her. she cant bear that she's getting scolded by MK that too in front of Adi. Suddenly her thoughts were distracted by Maan's Voice
Maan: Sasha, y r u still standing here, just go nd complete d project i want the report by dis evening
Sasha: Yes MK.
She left nd Maan again turned to Adi
Maan: and Adi wat about d interview for d post of my secretary
Adi: y-y-yes sir all d resumes have been submitted nd we have shortlisted 10 candidates nd their interview has been scheduled tomorrow
Maan: Good but make sure u choose d best one because u know i Hate mistakes.
Adi: y-y-yes sir. Can i leave now
Maan: ya sure
Adi also left nd Maan was going through d Annual Report wen he gets calls from his Dadi Maa
Maan: Yes Dadi........, No Dadi, i cant come home early today, I had lots of work in the office........, But......., Ok fine i'll come nw dont u dare to do that emotional blacmailing again. Said maan nd cuts d phone

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It was a dark rainy night nd dere was a strange silence on d road nd Geet was running as fast as she can nd he's running after her she cried a lot for help but no one listen to her. Finally he caught her she tried to get herself Free from His grip but failed.
Geet: Dont come closer to me Dev otherwise i'll scream
Dev: Scream as much u want no one will hear u. Miss Geet Handa U have to pay for Slapping Dev in front of d whole college.
Geet: Dev no........ Dont come close to me nooooo
Nooooooo Geet woke up screaming Her whole body is sweating nd she's breathing heavily. Her scream made Pinki awake from her sleep.
Pinki:Geet what happen? R u ok?(She quickly switch on d lite nd gives Geet a Glass of Water) Wat happen Geet did u watched d same Nightmare again?
Geet: That Nightmare is d reality of my life Pinki.
Pinki: Geet y dont u forget about that incidence it was not ur fault.
Geet: How can i forget Pinki. That incidence has changed my life forever. I cant
Den she turned to search something in d drawer
Pinki: Geet what r u searching?
Geet: My sleeping Pills
Pinki: Geet dont u dare to take dat pill again u know how much u got addicted to that. U were not like dat?
Geet: I know Pinki. But i cant able to sleep without it.
Pinki: u have to Geet. I cant see u like dis. Tujhe meri kasam agar tune dobara Sleeping pills lee.
Geet: But Pinki.....
Pinki: no geet
Geet: Ok
Geet gets up from d Bed nd starts changing from her night dress to suit. Pinki looks at her amused but didnt ask her. wen she was about to leave then pinki asks her
Pinki:Geet, Where r u going?
Geet: To d place where i can get some mental piece. Dont worry Pinki i'll take care of myself nd return home soon but for nw i need to b alone.
Pinki nodded nd Geet left. She understands well That to which stage Geet is Suffering But she'll not let her suffer like dat.
Pinki(To Herself): I have to do something to get u back to ur life Geet.
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Maan was in his outside leaned on his chair with his eyes closed seems he's in deep thoughts. His face remained upturned towards d roof. He has Great argument with his Dadi Today regarding shifting to mansion nd his marriage. His dadi wants him to get married nd shift to mansion but maan is not ready for either of dat. He dont want to hurt his Dadi but on d same time he cant fulfill her wish. He made a own world of his own in which he dont want anyone.

He gets up from d chair nd start wailking restlessly in d room. "Y dont dadi understand i cant fulfill her wish. I dont want anyone in my life" he muttered to himself.

Suddenly he remember something He quickly opened his Drawer nd took out something. It was an anklet which he found two months before. The flashes has started coming in front of his eyes.

He was coming back from Ambala to Delhi wen his car broke down in Between. His driver has gone in search of d mechanic nd d weather was also not very good .the wind started to blow very fast nd lightening started like dey r trying to indicate something. Suddenly he heard d bells ringing from a temple nearby. It was a Shiv Mandir. He dont know y nd wen he started moving towards dat temple nd wen he entered dat temple he saw a girl satting in front of d idol complaining to God Y did he do this to her? Y did her life had been ruined? Y he plays such a cruel game wid her? She was crying badly. Something ached Maan nd he started walking towards her direction. Wen dat girl realizes dat someone is standing behind her she quickly covered her face wid her dupatta nd turned around. Maan couldnt able to see her face but he had seen her Eyes in Which dere is lots of Pain wid tears. He dont know y but he feels an attachement towards her pain. The girl stands for few minutes in front of him looking him in amuzing way den suddenly start running from dere. Maan tried to stop her he caled her also from back but she didnt listen nd got disappeared in d darkness of nite left Maan alone nd amuzed over dere. Suddenly something catches his Mind. He found an Anklet on d floor. He picked it up nd watched to it carefully. "It must be of dat girl nd had fallen while she was running" he muttered. and he kept it wid himself.

Since den dis Anklet was wid him. He dont know what connection he had wid dis anklet. y he was not able to detach himself from dis many times he decided to throw dis away but he failed. He hates Girls but den y he was thinking about dat girl? Who was She nd Y dere is so much pain in her eyes? nd y did he feels himself attached to her pain? He had asked these questions to himself many times but has never got d answers which make himIrritate even more.

He kept dat anklet back to d drawer nd taken his Car keys nd get outside d home. He started his Car nd starts driving endlessly. He dont know where to go but he wanted to go away from her thoughts. To some place where he can get himself away from d thought of dat Girl. "MAAN SINGH KHURANA Didnt had place for any girl in his life not even her" He said to himself.

Hey guys hope u like d Part 1 of my story. Pls do leave comment nd press d like button if u like it.

Luv Aakriti 😊😊

Edited by aakritisri1111 - 14 years ago