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Posted: 19 years ago
kiran dear please post the next part soon.. 😭
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😭 😭 😭 plz cont soon
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continue sooooooooooon i cant wait to read teh next part!!!!!!! 😭



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Sorry sorry soryy!!!
Lagta hai tum log bhut taras gaye ho aur maine SK ko bhut tarpa bhi liya hai...iss liye mein story post ker rahi hoon...lolz....

To aissa kartay hain...keh hum straigght Day 7 per chaltey hain....kyunki but ho gaya...main itni zalim nahi hoon...
To in 6 days main....Sujal ne apne contacts use ker ke...Rishi ke ooper case kiya tha on forgery aur ghalat tareeqon se un ki property apne naam kerwana...aur saath hi main uss ne RnG bhi join ker liya tha....aur ahista ahista RnG ki reputation dobara behtar ho gyi thi...Veena ki tabiyat bhi behtar thi...aur ghar main sba theek tha....

Ab Kashish ki taraf dekhte hain....woh bilkul chup chap si seham si jati hai...na kuch khatti hai sahi se na kuch peeti hai...kisi se baat nahi kerti aur bass pooray din kamray main bethi rehti hai aur depression pills bhi khati rehti hai....Doc ke pass checkup ke liye jati hai to Doc uss ki hallat se kafi pareshan hotay hain cuz she is growing weaker day by day...and she just keeps either sleeping or crying...she duznt talk to Prerna at all....aur sirf Gunn aur Akshat se thori thori baat ker leti thi...aik din ussey aik call ati hai to woh kuch khush hoti hai....

Day 7:
Sujal subbah uthta hai...aur tayar ho jata hai...neechey hall mai ata hai kuch barri jaldi main hota hai
Veena: arey Sujal...itni subah subah kahan ja raha hai?
Sujal looks at her
Sujal: Mumma...aj main apni zindagi ke sab se ahem safar per ja raha hoon...umeed hai keh kamiyab ho ker lotoon ga...
Kasak: kahan ja rahay hain Big B????
Sujal gives her a look and smiles...then puts a hand on her head
Sujal: tum mujh se rozana poochti ho na Kasak keh tumhari Bhabhi wapis kab ayengi...bass.....tumhari Bhabhi ko hi lene ja raha hoon....
Veena and Kasak are all smiles
Kasak: sach Big B???
Sujal nods
Veena holds his hands
Veena: main bhut khsuh hoon keh Kashish aj wapis arahi hai...tu jaldi se ussey le aa...main uss ke liye yeh poora ghar sajaon gi...aj meri beti ghar wapis arahi hai!!!!
She is very excited...
Sujal juts smiles and goes out...sits in the car and travels towards Delhi....

Udhar Kashish 7 dinnon main pehli baar khushi khushi uthati hai...uss en pehle hi saarra samaan pack ker lia hota hai...woh uthati hai aur aik khubsurat si green sarri pehanti hai....bhut dinnon baad tayar hoti hai...sindoor lagati hai....mangalsutar pehanti hai aur tayar ho ker kamray se bahir nikalti hai....
She comes into the hall jahan Pammi, Gunn aur Akshat bethe hotay hain
Pammi looks at her all tayar
Pammi: arey Kashish....itni subah kahiin ja rahi ho kia?
Kashish: haan....
Gunn: kahan ja rahi hain Di????
Kashish: aj Sujal ne ana hai...
Gunn and Akshat share a look....
Kashish: kia hua??? tum log khsuh nhai ho???
Akshat stands up, comes near her and puts his arms on her shoulders
Akshat: ap ko khush dekh ker hum kaisay khush nahi hongay Di??
Kashish smiles....
Gunn: aj bhut dinnon baad apko hanstay huay dekh rahay hain...
Pammi: (thinks) yeh to sba ghalat ho raha hai...Sujal ko to ana hi nahi chahiye tha....
Pammi: tumhain Sujal ne call ker ke kaha keh woh araha hai???
Kashish: Sujal apne waday ka bhut pakka hai...woh aj zarur ayega...
Just then Prerna comes in...
Prerna: arey wah...Kashish...aj to bhut achi lag rhai ho...
Kashish glances at her
Prerna: achi baat hai....waisay bhi aj tere Papa arahay hain...
Kashish: Pappa?????
Prerna: haan...lo agaye...
Just ten the door bell rings...Kashish is surprised...
Bajjaj is standing outside...he had gone to Palanpur for some work...
He hugs Pammi n Gunn n Akshat..then sees Kashish standing there
Bajjaj: arey Kashish...tum yahan....abhi takk yahiin ho...mujhe laga tum chali gayi wapis....
He hugs Kashish...Kashish uss ke gallay lag ke apne ap ko qabu nahi ker pati aur ronnay lagti hai
Bajjaj: arey beta....yeh kia...tum ro kyun rahi ho????
Kashish is getting hysterical with crying...
Kashish: Paaapppaaa!!!!!!! main....main....mera Sujal....Papa....
Bajjaj: kia hua Sujal ko? beta....kahan hai Sujal???
Kashish: chor ker chala gaya Papaaaa....mujhe mera Sujal...chor ke....
Bajjaj looks at evry1 to see what she is talking about.....he decides to talk to her....
He leaves everyone behind and takes Kashish to a room...calms her down and then asks her...
Kashish tells her the whole tale...abt how Prerna stopped her from going and what she said to Sujal....Bajjaj ki ankhon main ghussa....
Bajjaj ghussay main kamray se bahir nikalta hai
Bajjaj: PRERNNAA!!!!!!!
Prerna looks at him...
Prerna: jee....
Bajjaj: mujhe tumse koi baat kerni hai kamre main ao....
He goes inside a room....Prerna looks at evry1...bechari ko darr lag raha tha....hehehe....
SHe goes in the room and closes the door..
Prerna: jee boliye Mr.Bajjaj...
Bajjaj: yeh main kia sun raha hoon Prerna...????
Prerna: kya hua Mr.Bajjaj...ap pareshan lag rhaay hain???
Bajjaj: haan Prerna pareshani ki hi to baat hai...pareshani hoti hai aik baap ko jab uss ki beti apne susral ko chor ker maikay reh rahi htoi hai.....
Prerna: ap kia keh rahe....
Bajjaj: Kashish abhi takk wapis kyun nahi ggayii?????
Prerna: Mr.Bajjaj!!! Yeh uss ka apna ghar hai...woh jab takk chahay yahan reh sakti hai...(not meeting his gaze)
Bajjaj: haan Prerna...reh sakti hai..lekin jab takk chahay tab tak...zabardasti nahi...
Prerna: hum ne Kashish ke saath koi zabardasti nahi ki...woh apni khushi se yahan...
Bajjaj comes and holds her from her shoulders
Bajjaj: agar aissa hai to tumne ussay kyun roka jab Sujal ussey leney aya tha??? kyun nahi jannay dia uss ko Sujal ke saath???
Prerna looks at him...
Prerna: kyunki woh Sujal ke saath kabhi khsuh nahi reh sakti....
Bajjaj: ho kia gaya hai tumhain Prerna...tumhain nazar nahi ata keh Kashish ki khushi sirf aur sirf Sujal ke saath hai...uss se alag rehne main nahi...
Prerna: apko kia lagta hai??? mujhe kuch dikhayi nahi deta....main maa hoon usski....usska bhalla hi sochon gi....
Bajjaj: itni hi parwah hai tumhain Kashish ki bhallayi ki to ussay bhej do Sujal ke pass....
Prerna: kabhi nhai...main apni beti ki tabahi nahi dekh sakti....
Bajjaj: tabahi nahi dekh sakti??? lekin tabah to tum kar rahi ho ussay Prerna....ussay Sujal se door rakh ker...dekho...ankhain kholo Prerna...kia yeh wohi Kashish hai jiss ke annay se poora gahr mehek uthta tha....kia yeh wohi Kashish hai jiss ke chehray per harr damm muskarahat hoti thi???.....
Prerna: main yeh sab nahi janti...agar janti hoon to yeh keh meri beti uss insan ke saat khush nahi hai...
Bajjaj: tumhain kia ho gyaa hai Prerna...tum kyun samajh nahi pa rahi..
Prerna: NAHI SAMAJHNA MUJHE KUCH!!!! mujhe meri beti ki khushiyan dkehne se koi nahi rok sakta....ap bhi nahi...aur agar koi mere raaste main aya to main usey nahi chorungi...chahye woh ap hi kyun na ho mr.Bajjaj...
Bajjaj: PRERNA!!! Tissssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssshhhhhhhhh!!!! (this was a slap...hehhee...Prerna ko parri Bajjaj se)(sur ab khush???)
Prerna loooks at him shocked
Prerna: Mr.Bajjaj...ap....
Bajjaj: (holds her) smajho Prerna.....tum kaisi maa ho??? maa to apni bachi ka ghar bassa dekh ker khsuh hoti hai...tum kyun apni hi beti ka bassa basaya ghar barbaad ker rahi ho???
Prerna ke anssoo giraay...
Bajjaj: hum ne beti vidda ker di hai Prerna...ab uss ki khushi kiss ke saath hai yeh janna humara nahi...uss ka kaam hai...humain to uss ki khsuhi mein khsuh rehna hai...aur uss ki khushi Sujal ke saath hai...mera bharosa kero...Kashish ko janney do..woh khush rahay gi uss ke saath...
Prerna look at him and cries
Bajjaj: bhool jao iss sab ko...bass Kashish ka haath Sujal ke haath main do aur donon ko apni zindagi jeene do..humne apni zindgai to jee li hai Prerna...ab humari beti ko khushion se door na rakho!!!
Prerna: mujhse...mujhse bhut barri ghalti ho gayi....mainn...main....(oye itni der se realize hua???)
Bajjaj: bass Prerna...tum Kashish ko jannay do...
Prerna cries and hugs Bajjaj...and he hugs her back....
Awww...chalo Prerna ki aqal to thikanay per ayi...

Kashish apne kamre main bethi hoti hai jab Bajjaj aur Prerna uss ke kamray main attay hain,.....Woh donon uss ke pass aker bethte hain lekin Kashish react nahi kerti...ajb usse siskiyon ki awaz ati hai to woh dekhti hai Prerna crying
Kashish: Mumma...ap...ro rahi hain??
Prerna uss ke aggay haath jorti ai
Prerna: mujhe mauf ker do Kashish...maine tumhain tumhari khsuhion se door rkaha..tumhare Sujal se door rakha...mujhe mauf...
Kashish: MUMMA!!! (holds her hands)
Kashish then wipes Prerna's tears and smiles
Kashish: ap kyun mujhe sharminda ker rahi hain?? apko ehsaas ho gaya yehi bhut hai...
Prerna looks at her then both hug while Bajjaj smiles...

In the meantime...ghar per ghanti hoti hai....
Gunn uth ker darwaza kholti hai to Sujal hota hai....(shukar hai pohanch gaya)
Gunn: Sujal Bhaiya...appp????
Sujal smiles
Sujal: kyun mujhe nahi ana chahiye tha???
Gunn: nahi nahi...aiye....ap hi ka to ghar hai....
Sujal: nahi main..yahiin theek hoon...tum Kashish ko bulla do....
Akshat: Bhaiya....plz...andar aiye na...
Sujal looks at them both...but doesnt come in...
Bajjaj comes to see....its Sujal....
He hugs him...and Sujal takes his ashirwad
Sujal: kaisay hain ap Uncle???
Bajjaj: main theek hoon...ao na andar...
Sujal: nahi Uncle...main theek hoon...
Bajjaj: jab ghar main beta ata hai to ussay darwazay per nahi miltay...ao na beta!!!
He makes Sujal come in and sit down...
Sujal: ap Kashish ko bulla dijiye...main ussay lene aya hoon....
Bajjaj smiles
Bajjaj: haan Kashish arahi hai...
Sujal looks at him: (thinks) yeh log itni jaldi kaisay maan gaye....
He looks down again..phir payal ki awaz ati hai to he sees Kashish coming towards him...looking dazzling in a green sarri...all smiles...and walking wth Prerna who has an arm around her...
Sujal: (thinks) yeh Kashish....Aunty ke saath...???
Kashish comes and stands in front of him...hes also standing...both wanna hug but barron ka lihaaz ker lete hain....
Kashish: kaisay ho tum??? (smiles)
Sujal: AB theek hoon...(also smiles)
They both are communicating thru their eyes....cuz they couldn't do anything else..hehehe....
Prerna: Sujal....
Sujal looks at her...all stiff...
Sujal: jee???
Prerna: beta...mujhe...mujhe mauf ker do...maine tumhare saath bhut burra kia....lekin mujhe meri ghalti ka ehsaas ho gaya hai...i am sory...(jorofies her hands)
Sujal gets horrified and holds her hands
Sujal: yeh kia ker rahi hain ap Aunty...plz....
Prerna bends down...paon parna...(sur khush/???? heheh)
Sujal: AUNTY!!! yeh kia....
He holds her up...
Sujal: plz plz...ap..yeh sba...rehne dey...mere saath emri Kashish hai...mere liye yehi kafi hai...
Prerna hugs him...like a son...
Phir Kashish ka haath pakar ker Sujal ke haath main deti hai....
Prerna: maine apni beti hamesha hamesha ke liye tumhare hawalay ker di....aj jo ghalti hui woh dbara nahi hogi...bass tum issay khsuh rakhna...
Kashish's eyes are moist..Prerna n Gunn r crying...Akshat Sujal n Bajjaj are trying to control...heheh....
Sujal: ap fikar matt kerein Aunty....yeh meri amanat hai...isse kuch nahi honnay doonga....chaltay hain....
They take Prerna and Bajjaj's ashirwad...and...meet Gunn and Akshat...
Sab unhain darwazay per chorne attay hain...Sujal puts an arm around Kashish....and takes her towards the car......everyone waving...donon garri main bethte hain....aur peechey murr ker wave kerte hain...and then the car goes off!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey i am the first one to comment 😆 😆
tht was a gr8 actullllly SUPERB part i think our wait was worth it 😆 😆 but itna wait mat karwaya karo bauhat wait karwaya tha😭 anyways me happpy tht prerna ki akal toh tikhanay lagi 😆

CONTINUE SOOOOOOOOOON i am waiting to read the next part as always 😆



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Edited by rajeev_eijaz - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
A new reader and simply love dis story!!! continue
Edited by smartncute - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
gr8 actullllly SUPERB part finally together i am so happyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy wowwwwwwwwwwwww 😉
now don't run way and post next part soon as u can ok
thanks so mauch love u sujal and kashish 😛 i can't wait for babys 😳
~love
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part
thank god prerna ko akal to agi
👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
kiran toooooooo goodddddddddddddd.........very wonderful part....me very khush that sujal ,kashish saath aa gaye hain.... yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ee....
sach mein bohat achcha part tha... i loved it...👏
ab please agli part jaldi se post karna...me will waiting for the next part eagerly zyada intezaar na karwana... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey Kiran toh finally aapne post kar diya....
well very nice part 👏 after all S-K ki saza khatam ho hi gayi... 😛
yaar ek baat samaj nahi aayi Prerna pahele against thi par kyun? 😳 aur Bajaj ka ek Thappad khaya to dimag sidha ho gaya..... 😉
nywys do cont soon.... 😊

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