M&G:.FF:.Unconvential Love:.Pt.19 pg.61!!! - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
loved how were covering up for each other
lovely update
cont.soon
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#42
loved how they were covering up for each other
nice update
cont. soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great update, thanks for the PM! 😊 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@pickachu ur added and thanks a ton!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great!!
Looking for nxt part now 😊
Edited by Passionaire - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice ff..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part3:

"So Geet tell me,which dress is better? This pink strapless one or this black one."Pari asked Geet for for her suggestion.,while holding the two dresses in her hand.

"they both are great"she replied nonchantly

"thats what you said for the last six ones."Pari retorted matter of factly

The two girls were in Geet's room and Pari had bought a bag full of dresses to Geet.So Geet could help her pick out a dress for her dinner date.To Geet she thought it was just plain torture,but helped anyway.She was sitting on the bed crossed leg with a teddy bear in her lap.

"Look Pari i'm sorry,I've never wore a dress before in my life and all the dresses you showed me are pretty.So you should go with you own choice and not mine."Geet advised

Pari sighed and plopped down on the bed net to her.After a brief silence between them and idea popped into her mind.

"hey why don't you just tell me what color Maan likes?"she inquired

"um....I don't know his favorite color but from what I see he wears alot of black.So I think black is his favorite color"she answered unsurely

"great now I just have to choose now between two black dresses that I have."Pari told her as she took the second dress out.

When she took the dress out she instantly liked it.It was a knee length dress with a big gold belt in the middle.

"you know Pari you should wear this"she said to her as she took the dress from her.

"really! I never wore this dress before since I bought it like a month ago in Mumbai."she stated as she looked at the dress observingly.

Geet nodded her head yeah and sighed in relief that the dress picking was over.

"thanks!"she hugged Geet"I'll go get ready"

She got up and raced to the bathroom.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

"so how do I look?"Pari asked Maan, they stood downstairs in the hall including Geet.

Maan checked Pari from top to bottom flirtously;just to make Geet jealous.Geet who stood behind Pari tried not to show nay affection to it.

"Gorgeous!"he complimented seductively

"Dreamy..."she said as she was about to pass out any minute after hearing his compliment.Even though it was only one word,that made her day.

"come on let's go,we don't want to be late"he said to Pari as he exteneded his hand toward her and looked at Geet who was frowning but quickly covered it with a forced smile.

~*~*~*~*~*~**~*

Geet sat in her room sitting for about 2 hours since Maan and Pari left.Pari had left the bag of dress in her room.

"what kind of a girl is Pari?"she asked the teddy bear in her lap"just because she can wear short dresses doesn't mean she can be all over Maan sir."

"you know Maan sir is an idiot too,he encourages her more when he compliments her flirtlousy.He's such a doofus"she added

"Your jealous of Pari"she hears a small voice from inside her brain.

"no I'm not"she snapped at the voice

"yes"

"no"

"yes"

"No"

"yes"

"shut up leave me alone"

When she didn't hear the annoying voice she sighed in relief.Then her eyes landed on the bag of Pari's dress that was left open.

"should I try them?"she questioned the bear

"just once"she said as she put the bear down.

She got the bag and took all the dresses out.One by one she tried them on and checked herself out in front of the mirror.She kept herself occupied for an hour and the last one was left.It was a dark blue halter top dress that came just above her knees.She wore it and it looked like it was made for her.

Suddenly the her room got dark!

"nice the lights had to go now"she muttered to herself

Thankfull she had candles and a match in the drawer of her side table.She went over to her side table and there was a little light coming in from the moon light.She got the candles out and lit them,Then placed them on her dresser and her side table.

She wanted to change back into her regular clothing, as she turned she bumped into something or was it someone?

"who is it?"she asked

"its me Maan"he answered

Her heart began to race because she was wearing a dress and he couldn't let him see in it.

"what are you doing here?"she questioned nervously

"I just returned and I saw the lights off here so I cam to check."he retorted

She backed away toward the window,she forgot the moon light was coming in through the window.She stood where the whole light was now on her.Maan saw her and was mesmerized by her beauty.

"she looks like an angel fallen from the sky"he said in his mind.

(Mahi playing in the BG)

He advanced toward her and stood in front of her just few feet of distance between them.She felt uncomfortable in front of his gaze on her.He saw her uncomfortableness and didn't see anything to cover her.So he took his shirt off and covered her with it.He was left in a black tanktop(looked hot!! LOL!),suddenly the loud sound of thunder came and scared Geet.She went into Maan's arms and hugged him closing her eyes.It had started to rain and Maan wrapped his arms around her.She felt safe in his arms,she felt like no harm could come near her when she was in his arms.She wanted to stay forever in his arms.

Finally she broke the hug and looked at him,they kept gazing in eac other's eyes.The wind that was coming through the window was making blow her hiar into her face.Maan slowly moved his hand up to her face and gently removed her hair from her face behind her ear.From the rain, there were rain droplets on Geet's face, he came close to her until there was no space between them.He slowly kissed away the droplets away from her slowly and last one was on her bottom lip.Geet heart rate was increasing by the minute.He leaned forward her lips and kissed away the droplet.Now Geet's heart rate was 10 times than before,she just stood there in front of him.

Maan lost control of himself and then kissed her right smack on her lip.At first Geet didn't know how to react but finally kissed him back.He then kissed the corner of her lips and slowly moved down to her jawline then to her neck and shoulder.Realization hit Geet and she pushed away him,Maan stumbled back a bit but regained his posture.Geet's eyes were widened and covered her mouth in shock.

"I...I'm...sorry"he choked out when he came back to his senses and knew what he was doing.

The minute he said sorry, Geet slapped him across the face.But regretted the second she slapped his face.It was like someone had stabbed a knife through her heart cause the pain he felt on his cheek hurt her inside tremendously.She never thought she would ever do that,Maan stood there with his hand on his cheek.

The pain and hurt was clearly evident in his eyes,her eyes started to get stingy and burned.Tear slowly rolled down her cheeks,she was too astounded to do anything.But one thing for sure was that she wished she never had done it.
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Edited by Maneetforever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
jealousy is really bubbling up in here...lolz
did geet purposely choose the knee lenght one coz she doesnt want pari to show too much exposure to her maan?
lol
whatever it is
please update soon

love you

omg read the edited part....she slapped him???????????
WHAT THE HELL!!!!!!
Is she crazy...now he'll be so hurt....what the hell????????*hitting my head against the wall*
She is totally crazy...

Please update soon
Edited by desigurl953 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: desigurl953

jealousy is really bubbling up in here...lolz
did geet purposely choose the knee lenght one coz she doesnt want pari to show too much exposure to her maan?
lol
whatever it is
please update soon

love you

omg read the edited part....she slapped him???????????
WHAT THE HELL!!!!!!
Is she crazy...now he'll be so hurt....what the hell????????*hitting my head against the wall*
She is totally crazy...

Please update soon

i thought of the her slapping him at 5:30am so my mind wasnt working but i liked it i knew geet woudn't slap him in the show so why not here.anyway the confession scene isnt near yet! so there will be alot of stuff going on!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
Geet slapped Maan she shuldnt hav done that
She did a big mistake
Both jus got carried away wit the moment but Geet took it seriously b she was angry also that he forgot all thgs of previous nght
Liked Pari n Geet's bond
Maneet's romance was also fab par slap
Lets c wat Maan does
She slapped Maan Singh Khurana if he lost his temper pata nahi wat he will do

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