MAYUR: The Beauty & The Nerd (upd part12, pg59) - Page 24

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Recap: Mayank, to get back at Nupur, tells everyone that he likes Nupur and that she is his girlfriend. The gang is shell-shocked and suspects something is up. In class, Professor Sinha pairs up his students for a project. Nupur's supposed partner left the college, so Nupur joins Mayank and Sheena since the project is too difficult to be done alone. Meanwhile, Samrat misses Gunjan and is confused about his feelings for her. A few weeks pass, and Mayank, Sheena, Nupur are really into their projects. Nupur comes over to Mayank's home almost everyday to work on the project, as well as talk to Shilpa Aunty during the free time. Shilpa Aunty tries to match-make Mayank and Nupur but fails when they deny their feelings. Shilpa Aunty then gets a heart attack and is admitted to the hospital, where she gives Mayank and Nupur an oath to stay together always. Little does anyone know that this was all actually Shilpa Aunty's plan, and she faked the heart attack. But for her, Mayank and Nupur actually do stop fighting and start behaving in a more civil manner with each other, making the gang suspect even more.

Part 7: Aaya Mausam Dosti Ka

Benji and Uday try their hardest to find out the truth behind the whole Mayank-Nupur matter, but are unable to. Mayank and Nupur are now working on the project together, without Sheena who quit college to join an acting school. Nupur is over at Mayank's house again, working on the project, and she shares some idea with him.

Mayank: Great idea Nupur.

Nupur: Wow! Kya baat hai?! Aaj Mayank Sharma ne pehli baar Nupur Bhushan ki tareef ki.

Mayank: (smirks) Aur maine kabhi socha nahin tha ki Nupur Bhushan itna idea degi.

Nupur: (smiles) I know, right. (after some time') Erm' Mayank, hum Aunty ko apne rishte ki sachchayi kab batayenge?

Mayank: Ki hum ek doosre se pyar nahin karte, aur sirf dost hain?

Nupur: Ooh, toh ab hum dost hain?

Mayank: Well, ab toh hum dushman bhi nahin. Aur is project mein saath kaam kar rahe hai toh dosti se aur bhi faayda hoga. Toh'

Nupur: Toh kya?...

Mayank: Toh kya tum mujhse dosti karogi?

Nupur: Dekhoongi, sochoongi, kal parso kuch kahoongi'

Mayank: Yeh film ka dialogue tha?

Nupur: Haan, sorry. I have always wanted to use this dialogue on someone. But in answer to your question, yes.

Mayank: Toh friends?

Nupur: Forever'

Shilpa overhears this and smiles to herself. "Mera plan sach mein kaam kar raha hai. Paanch hafte mein Mayank aur Nupur itne achche dost bane. Ab unhein apne pyar ka ikraar karne mein der nahin lagegi'"

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Samrat is in college, playing basketball, thinking of Gunjan. "Main ab bhi apne feelings ko kyun nahin samajh paa raha hoon? Nupur se toh pehle baat ki, lekin uski baaton ne mujhe aur confuse kar diya. Phir se baat karni padhegi. Jo main Chashmish ke liye feel karta hoon'"

Just as Samrat says this, Gunjan comes out of the canteen area, where she was studying with some friends, after college had ended. Samrat sees her and misses the basket, and the ball bounces over to Gunjan.

Gunjan picks up the balls, and holding it, comes over to Samrat, smiling. Gunjan's hair is getting blown by the wind, mesmerizing Samrat all over again. Gunjan just hands over the ball to Samrat, and with their hands touching, both feel some current passing through them.

Gunjan turns around, away from Samrat, and blushes. Samrat is also blushing on his side.

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Nupur and Mayank are done with the project work for the day, and Nupur bids Mayank and Shilpa Aunty goodbye. As Mayank looks at Nupur's back, he thinks about her. Nupur feels something so also turns back to smile once again at Mayank, before walking out the door. Shilpa sees this and smiles to herself.

Mayank (thinking): Nupur itni bhi buri nahin hai. Achchi dikhti hai. Intelligent hai, aur apne kaam mein itna effort daalti hai ki woh kaam perfect nikle aur koi kami dhoondne ka mauka bhi nahin miley.

Nupur (thinking): Mayank kaafi achcha insaan hai. Dikhta handsome hai. Agar itna sadu aur padaaku nahin hota na, toh main ab tak ussey pyar kar hi baithti. Lekin bohot intelligent hai, aur ek achcha dost. Is project mein uske saath kaam karne mein bohot mazaa aayega.

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A few more weeks pass by, Mayank and Nupur have submitted their projects along with the rest of the class, and now are waiting for the project results to be out. When they read the results on the notice board, and find out that they have topped the class for this project, they jump in joy and hug each other.

Suddenly realising that they are in an embrace, and their whole gang of friends are watching, Mayank and Nupur part, embarrassed. Mayank hurries to the library, while Nupur retreats nervously smiling at her friends.

Diya: How cute!! Mayank aur Nupur huh' (Diya glances from Mayank to Nupur to keep trying to catch glimpses of the others' retreating back when he/she thinks the other is not looking)

Benji: Ya Diya, tum bilkul theek keh rahi ho. Mayank aur Nupur look really cute together. (coming up beside Diya and putting his hand around her shoulder)

Uday: Ekdum made for each other. (being the typical, sometimes over-protective brother and removing Benji's arm from Diya's shoulder and standing in-between them)

Gunjan: Haan. Lekin di aur Mayank yeh kab realise karenge ki jo unke beech hai, woh pyaar hi hai. Mayank toh hai padaaku, serious aur thoda sadu jaise di kehti hai. Aur di toh Mayank ke bilkul opposite hai ' chulbuli, aur thodi si nautanki. (Gunjan walks up to stand on the other side of Diya)

Samrat : Lekin kehte hai na, ki opposites attract.

Samrat comes up next to Gunjan, where no one is. And when no one is looking, Samrat holds Gunjan's hand. As Gunjan looks up at Samrat in surprise, he winks at her, indicating that what he said about opposites attracting just moments earlier might have meant to be for them as well. Gunjan understands and blushes.

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Mayank and Nupur are sitting beside one another in class, and so are Gunjan-Samrat and Diya-Benji. Poor Uday is sitting with some girl, trying to flirt with her, but she is completely ignoring him. The gang imagines the song "Aaya Mausam Dosti Ka" from Maine Pyar Kiya playing in the background as the class and the rest of the day passes.


(Mayank looks at Nupur sitting beside him and smiles at her, when she is not looking at him that is)

Tum ladki ho, main ladka hoon
Tum aayi ho sach kehta hoon
Aaya mausam dosti ka.., ki aaya mausam dosti ka

(Mayank turns back to the front to do copy notes the teacher has written, making it Nupur's turn to look at Mayank secretely)

Main ladki hoon, tum ladke ho
Yun lagta hai jab milte ho
Aaya mausam dosti ka...ki aaya mausam dosti ka
La la la la...la la la...


(Samrat looks at Gunjan and smiles. He imagines that their friendship is something more, something that was there long before, just that he never realised it.)

Jaane kyun lagta hai..meri tumhari pehle se pehchaan hai...(2)
(Gunjan silently thanks Samrat for being there for her always.)

Tum maan itna jo de rahe ho, mujhpe yeh ehsaan hai

(Samrat imagines himself proposing to Gunjan. Mayank on the other hand, also thinks about Nupur, but then shakes his head, telling himself to "Concentrate yaar Mayank!! Concentrate!!!")
Ehsaanon ki baatein choddo..
Aao humse naata jodo
Aaya mausam dosti ka...ki aaya mausam dosti ka

Tara...ru ru ru ru...hey hey...ho hoho...

(Nupur looks at Mayank once again, andwonders what is the relationship between them. They are not enemies, but are newly friends. Moreover, they have to pretend to be a couple in front of Shilpa Aunty. So many relations in so few moments. What makes it all the more confusing is that there is some unknown, unseen thread connecting them')
Rishta nahi hai dono ko phir bhi baandhe koi dor hai...(2)

(Gunjan thinks about Samrat and their friendship, and also her feelings for him which extend beyond that.)
Is dosti ko kya naam de hum yeh baat kuch aur hai
(Diya and Benji, both very much in love with each other, imagine their deep love as a sort of madness that they feel ' the madness that keeps their hearts beating. Ironically, this is in answer to Nupur-Mayank's and Gunjan-Samrat's questions about what their relationships with the other actually means.)

Deewanapan keh sakte ho, dil ki dhadkan keh sakte ho

(All the couples imagine themselves, again, with their respective partners or future-partners. Uday on the other hand, just looks at the rest of them with a sad look on his face, wondering when his dream girl will come along')
Aaya mausam dosti ka...ki aaya mausam dosti ka...

Edited by NehAditya8791 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey guys.. so i finally got around to updating my fan-fic, after months of being busy in university and projects and all that.. but here is a part.. it has got a song sequence, plus a new development in mayank and nupur's relationship.. please do not forget to comment, as there will definitely be more excitement coming up...
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice do pm me when u update it
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Posted: 14 years ago
after so long! i almost forgot the story.
so mayur are friends. thats great. but as you know a boy and a girl can never be friends if one of them is not engaged with some one else.
cute update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Neha glad ur back with the updates i haven't seenur friends Note b4 2day but i thought u forget to update 😕 the update was rocking mayur becoming freinds
n nups using filmy dilougue for mayu was sweet
n the song couples stolen glances each other was verry cute
wonderful n rocking update
hope to see u with more updates
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rajat_luvr91

I am not active on India-Forums that much but since Neha is my friend and old classmate and she called me up on phone asked me to post here saying she is so very sorry for not updating for so long she had some serious personal matters as well as lots of university projects to attend to and complete and moreover she has her final exams for this semester which is her end of her first year coming up in two weeks so has to study hard she did not post for a very long time but

she will try her best to post at least one part by the end of this week and then continue regularly after when her exams finish and she says she hopes you guys will understand especially her dear friend fari who she knows is a bit angry and upset with her for not updating for so long but she says she will make up for it somehow and now I will say bye to everyone but just remember that if you have any questions you can pm me or pm or email Neha also although she may not be able to reply that quickly



neha i was really angry on u...
u were not updating this ff and i was eagerly waiting for ur update
but now i m very happy- finally u updated it...

@rajat - thank u so much for posting this msg dear

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Posted: 14 years ago
Nehaaa

thank u so much for updating this ff...🤗🤗🤗
after so longgg u've updated this FF.

wow-mayur become friends... great yaar...😃
hahahaha so frm enemy they turned to bbest frnd----- wah wah Shipla aunty's plan is working--- within 5 weeks dey becme frnd...😆😃😃
mayu was praising nupur-wah baat kya hai bhai...

kahi kush hua tou nehi...??????😆😉😆😉

and what is this- dey were thinking abt each other

maynk- upur itna buri bhi nehi hai, intelligent hai
and nuur- mayank kafi accha inssan hai-...😆😆😆------itna taarif...😆😆😆
something is really very wrong...😆😆😆

loved d filmy dialogue of nups- it was totally nuurish style...
wow so they have topped the project and in excitement they hugged each other------ awww so cute...😃😃😃

the song with mayur and sajan r really awesome
loved it so much...

wonderful update dear but too short
anyway its ok- u've promised to update longer part next time- isliye isbar maaf kar diya

so plz update next part soon dear
eagerly waiting for it

take are
love ya...❤️❤️❤️❤️


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mahakmev

nice do pm me when u update it


thanks yaar so much for ur comment... keep commenting..
and, ur added on my pm-list already btw..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SamiraARTiMAYUR

Neha glad ur back with the updates i haven't seenur friends Note b4 2day but i thought u forget to update 😕 i didnt forget to update yaar.. was too busy wit lotsa different stuff, including sch work, studies, project and student council events that i hardly had any time to rest/relax/sleep for myself even..the update was rocking thanks..mayur becoming freinds

n nups using filmy dilougue for mayu was sweet glad u liked it.. this part was to show the development between the characters..
n the song couples stolen glances each other was verry cute thanks.. that was my 2nd fave part in this update actually.. the part which i enjoyed typing the most was the one where all the gang came up, stood in a line and commented on mayur one-by-one..
wonderful n rocking update
hope to see u with more updates that will surely happen.. i mean, i will really update more regularly from now on.. like, at least once a week or so, with longgg parts.. more free time, plus less projects.. plus, the modules i'm taking this semester for summer are quite easy.. yeah!! haha
thanks for the pm ur welcome

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Faria-



neha i was really angry on u... i know yaar.. i was angry wit me too😡😆 but kya karein? was extremely busy wit lots stuff.. i can try and number them for u, but the list itself is quite long.. but now i'm back, and will update regularly.. at least once a week or so.. and i've devised a plan to take less time in typing out the updates, but giving long parts as well..
u were not updating this ff and i was eagerly waiting for ur update
but now i m very happy- finally u updated it... glad to hear this.. hope i've helped dissipate ur anger at least a bit..and more good news to make u happy.. in the next few parts or so, (dunno exactly how many, but maybe 3-5) u'll be making a cameo in the fic.. haha.

@rajat - thank u so much for posting this msg dear yeah.. i thanked her too.. her name is sanam btw. my old classmate and bff since we were in our short-short skirts.. (hahaha. actually, since 3rd grade.)..

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