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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
loved it waiting 4 next update
thnx alot 4 pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: ar4evr

heyyy nyccc update...
bt raely d pre leap scene dat u described was vryy sad..
thnx 4 d pm n cont sooon


awww i know yaar
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73

Hey guys here is the fourth part of my FF

So as u know sayank had a fight yesterday

Now mayank is sitting alone

Mayank to himself:yeh maine kya kia'''maine samrat koh sab keh samne kyun danta'''who toh bas mera khayal rakh raha tha na'''who toh bas mujhe doctor keh paas le ke jaana chahta tha na kya ghalat soch raha tha woh'''..bachpan se who mera itna khayal rakhta hai'''..jab main bimar hota tha who poori poori raat mere liye jagta tha'''..aur maine kya kiya''us ski insult ki who bhi sab ke samne mujhe samrat se maafi mangni hogi.

Now cut to adhiraj's cabin

Nupur:who sir main'''pata nahi sir yeh ansoo kaise gir ''I have no idea sir

Adhiraj: Miss nupur bhushan'.

Nupur:kya kaha sir apne '''.nupur bhushan?

Adhiraj:han who'''.kuch nahi waise ap yahan kya kar rahi thi

Nupur:who sir''''..main bhool gayi

Suhani:ok no problem u can go

Nupur:thanks mam

Suhani:no problem

Nupur leaves

Now cut to a classroom where samrat is sitting alone

Mayank comes from backside and puts a hand on samrat's shoulder

Samrat:bhai ap yahan

Mayank:han who tujhe kuch kehna tha

Samrat:mujhe bhi

Both: I am sorry

Samrat:bhai ye ap

Mayank:no I am really sorry samrat mujhe poore college ke samne tujhse is tarah baaat nahi karni chahiye thi

Samrat:koi baat nahi bhai

Mayank:aise kya khada hai hug nahi dega

They both hug

Mayank:waise poore college keh samne muhe bhai na bulaya kar

Samrat:kyun bhai

Mayank:woh iss liye kyunke yahan par sab lakion koh lagta hai keh tu mera bada bhai hai

Samrat:acha toh yeh setting hai

Mayank:chod'setting toh bohoton se hain magar who hai na nupur who badi hot hai yaar''''..waise tujhe koi pasand nahi ayi

Samrat:bhai'''.

Mayank:acha gussa kyun ho raha hai 'main toh aise hi pooch raha tha keh shayad tujhe bhi koi hot na sahi khubsurat hi lag gayi ho

Samrat:waise bhai'''woh

Mayank:woh kon

Samrat:bhai who gunjan hai na benji ki behen who waise itni bhi buri nahi lagti

Mayank:wah''kya scene hai zara mujhe bhi toh bata

Samrat:chodo na bhai chalo

Mayank:kahan

Samrat:bhai abhi hamne iss college ki canteen nahi dekhi hai na

Mayank:han yaar wahan larkian toh hogi na

Samrat:uff bhai ap kabhi nahi sudher sakte na

Mayank:joh sudher jaye woh mayank khana nahi

Now cut to canteen

Guys cheenoo is still here

He is too missing the gang

Now he sees mayank and samrat entering canteen

Cheeno:samrat aur mayank baba

He now goes to them

Cheeno:samrat baba aur mayank baba ap dono ''.ap dono

mayank:aik minute apko hamare naam kaise pata

cheeno:kya baat kar rahe hain baba

mayank now sees the place where they died

mayank:yeh jaga.......................bandh kyun hai

cheenoo:yeh jaga toh bais saal pehle ki bandh hai

samrat:kyun

cheenoo:yahan aik bohot bada hadsa hua tha

samrat:oh.......

mayank:acha

now benji uday dia gunjan and nupur too enter the canteen

samrat and mayank are sitting on the table

everyone comes to the table

everyone:may we

mayank:han han kyun nahi

benji is about to sit with mayank

mayank says:arre tum yahan na baitho

benji:kyun

mayank:ab.......woh mujhe viral fever hai tumhe lag sakta hai

samrat:acha....

mayank winks

samrat:han han

benji:ok

he sits on the other side

mayank:nupur tum yahan baitho

uday:kyun usse nahi lag sakta viral fever

mayank:nahi yeh zara special type ka viral fever hai joh sirf larkon koh lagta hai

nupur comes and sits with mayank

mayank:ufffff...........ab better feel kar raha hoon..........ab..........gunjan tum samrat ke saath kyun nahi baithte

nupur:acha......guys ab jab hammein aik saath hi parhna hai poore panch saal toh kyun na ham introduction kar lein

mayank:ok...........toh main hoon the cute handsome charming sweet hot😆.......mayank khana

samrat:hi i am samrat khana

mayank:mera bada bhai😆

nupur:main nupur khurana

dia:mein dia khurana

mayank is seeing nupur

uday:yeh dono meri behenein hain mayank!!!!!!

mayank:acha yaar...toh kya hua........pata hai nupur tujh par bilkul nahi gayi bohot sweet hai

nupur:oh really............better luck next time😆

benji:hi i am benjamin vardhan

gunjan: i am gunjan vardhan

nupur:toh theek hai aj se ham sab aik group

mayank:ok..........yeh best rahe ga















guys hope u like it

that was it for today

thanks for reading

precap:samrat has a fever

mayank tells to everyone just to see is gunjan falling for him




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Edited by annie98 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74

wow nice updates

oh no samrat has fever maybe sajan story has started progresing anyway continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: ardhana

wow nice updates

oh no samrat has fever maybe sajan story has started progresing anyway continue soon


bas dekh lo yaar
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
awesomeee updt loved it finally they r one gang again plzz continue soon n thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
so sorry for the late reply dear......it was a great update dear...................................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: achoose

so sorry for the late reply dear......it was a great update dear...................................


chal koi baat nahi der aye durust aye
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
hey nice ff
read all parts in one go
really loved it
plzzzzz add me to your pm list
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
annie amazing update thanks dear 4 d pm

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